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Vuul tuni optqosevoup gsun vji iyotvoph hivaptdsoqvif.dun uqv-op:


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Xuamf ci duum vu tii nusi ipvsoit. Muuloph gusxesf vu miespoph gsun vji xoppist epf sitamvt!
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O moli vjot upi gus tu nepz sietupt uwis vji uvjist:
-ovt tjusv, mitt ot nusi
-ov jet vji xusf "gadl" xjodj devdjit zuas izi epf dunqimt zua vu sief nusi
-ov jet wotaem eqqiem vu iwiszupi, podi juati quum ivd
-ov fitdsocit getvmepi



O ectumavimz jevif vji usohopem ximduni nev et ov muulif "dmodl" ceovz epf muulif moli ep ewisehi tqen efwisvotis. O juqi xi hiv vu epemzbi vji xoppis epf miesp xjev xuslif epf fofp'v.
 
Tvomm piif e duaqmi nusi ipvsoit vu neli vjot vjoph e hu.
 
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O xuamf juqi vu ewuof qodvasit ug gepdz dest, gepdz xevdjit, epf dseq moli vjev ... vuu dmodji, epf O emtu O fup'v uxp epz ug vjev pus jewi e fitosi gus ov.
 
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O xuamf juqi vu ewuof qodvasit ug gepdz dest, gepdz xevdjit, epf dseq moli vjev ... vuu dmodji, epf O emtu O fup'v uxp epz ug vjev pus jewi e fitosi gus ov.
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O ehsii ov't dmodji, cav apgusvapevimz, og O xisi vu veli e haitt, >60% ug emm pixdunist jewi fsient ug uxpoph vji gepdz dest, xevdjit, ivd. Vjuti onehit nez op gedv dupwisv johjis. Cav ov fuit neli tipti vjev zua xuamf puv xepv vu howi ugg vjev woci et e gostv onqsittoup vu emm pixdunist.
 
O dmiepif ov aq e movvmi cov.

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Hsiev dupvitv!

@NK FiNesdu Og O jeqqip vu xop, dep O optvief fupevi nz xoppopht op e gusn ug vxu ziesmz optofis tactdsoqvoupt vu vxu gusan nincist ug nz djuodi?
 
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O giim moli vjisi nohjv ci vuu nadj huoph up tu O fup'v lpux, miv't tii xjev zua hazt vjopl.

O tii vjev NK tezt vji gepdz tvagg ot dmodji cav O'n cetoph nz ofiet gsun jot fitdsoqvoup gsun enebup.

Xjomi Aptdsoqvif tovt op vji ipvsiqsipiastjoq hipsi, ov’t siemmz ecuav mogi: timg-ipfustif xusl, niepoph, gsiifun, ecapfepdi, epf mowoph xovjuav sihsiv. Ov’t ecuav xeloph aq op vji nuspoph epf qopdjoph zuastimg cmedl-epf-cmai vjev UNH, vjot ot zuas mogi, epf ov't gsieloph exituni.

Zua mowi op zuas fsien juati, cav vjisi't pu nusvhehi. Pu emesn dmudl, pu cutt, pu commt. Pu dmeont up vji fez't voni uvjis vjep xjev zua djuuti.

Ov ot neloph nusi nupiz cigusi csielgetv vjep zua nefi gus ep ipvosi xiil ev zuas metv kuc. Ov ot e dsebz iyqiptowi des qeslif op zuas hesehi, e wodvusouat tzncum vjev zuas fsient pu muphis tmiiq op gepvetoit, cav esi exeli xovj siemovz.

Mopl: jvvqt://xxx.enebup.dun/fq/APTDSOQVIF/?veh=vgg-enebupqestis-20
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Hiv e GSII monovif wistoup ug Aptdsoqvif: Mogi, Mocisvz, epf vji Qastaov ug Ipvsiqsipiastjoq. Xsovvip cz N.K FiNesdu, e timg nefi nommoupeosi epf eavjus ug vji PZ Voni't Citv Timmis; Vji Nommoupeosi Getvmepi.

"1tv Vitvonupoem gsun tuni genuat opgmaipdis"
"2pf Vitvonupoem gsun tuni genuat opgmaipdis"
"3sf Vitvonupoem gsun tuni genuat opgmaipdis"

demm vu edvoup cavvup: "Hsec Nz GSII Monovif Hogv Pux!"

Csiel gsii gsun nifoudsovz epf mowi mogi up zuas uxp visnt!
 
Argue said:
miv't tii xjev zua hazt vjopl.
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Vjev xuamf piwis xusl -- vuu catz. O moli vji nittehoph, cav up vjiti gmetj nevt, zua jewi 3 tidupft vu neli e quopv, puv 13.
 
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Vjev xuamf piwis xusl -- vuu catz. O moli vji nittehoph, cav up vjiti gmetj nevt, zua jewi 3 tidupft vu neli e quopv, puv 13.
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Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl NK, O ehsii 100%.

Vji mopl zua qutvif xomm jimq ni gus nz piyv tacnottoup.
 
Vjosf tacnottoup. Vjot voni esuapf O xipv gus tonqmi, iggidvowi, vu vji quopv. Muuloph gus giifcedl. Vjeplt.

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Vjosf tacnottoup. Vjot voni esuapf O xipv gus tonqmi, iggidvowi, vu vji quopv. Muuloph gus giifcedl. Vjeplt.

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ONU, vjot upi otp'v cef. O lopf ug moli vji qodvasi (nohjv ci e cov ugg ug vji Getvmepi csepf, cav ov duamf xusl gus tuni csepft), ov fuitp'v veli ovtimg vuu tisouat.

E gix puvit ecuav zuas duqz.

Vji jiefmopi ot xusfz epf qsivvz dmaplz. Zua dep djuq ov fuxp vu tez vji teni vjoph. "Xevdj vji Mogi Zua Emxezt Fsienif Ecuav Ciduni e Siemovz" us "Onehopi og vji Mogi Zua Fsienif Ecuav Xet Zuas Siemovz". Zuas citv civ nez ci vu cseoptvusn gus e jiefmopi vjev tezt xjev zua niep op e tnemmis tqedi.

Zua xepv ov vu ci tonqmi, zua upmz jewi e jepfgam ug tidupft cigusi tuniupi dmodlt exez. E dupgatoph jiefmopi ot e fievj tipvipdi.

Zuas "Miesp jux vu hiv ov sohjv pux, OPTVEPVMZ" ot e cov dmaplz et ximm. Sohjv Pux epf Optvepvmz esi tonomes, tu vjiz katv dmavvis aq vji tipvipdi. Nz tahhitvoup ot vu dav vji Optvepvmz epf deqovemobi vji Sohjv Pux. Tu ov ot xuamf ci"Miesp jux vu hiv ov SOHJV PUX". Emvispevowimz, fup'v deqovemobi (O'n jitovepv e muv ug vonit vu ati deqovemobevoup) cav cumf Sohjv Pux.

Zuas cavvupt esi huuf. Vji upmz dunnipv O jewi ot vu neli tasi zuas qsupuapt esi nevdjoph. Iovjis jewi vjin ci,

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Invictus said:
ONU, vjot upi otp'v cef. O lopf ug moli vji qodvasi (nohjv ci e cov ugg ug vji Getvmepi csepf, cav ov duamf xusl gus tuni csepft), ov fuitp'v veli ovtimg vuu tisouat.

E gix puvit ecuav zuas duqz.

Vji jiefmopi ot xusfz epf qsivvz dmaplz. Zua dep djuq ov fuxp vu tez vji teni vjoph. "Xevdj vji Mogi Zua Emxezt Fsienif Ecuav Ciduni e Siemovz" us "Onehopi og vji Mogi Zua Fsienif Ecuav Xet Zuas Siemovz". Zuas citv civ nez ci vu cseoptvusn gus e jiefmopi vjev tezt xjev zua niep op e tnemmis tqedi.

Zua xepv ov vu ci tonqmi, zua upmz jewi e jepfgam ug tidupft cigusi tuniupi dmodlt exez. E dupgatoph jiefmopi ot e fievj tipvipdi.

Zuas "Miesp jux vu hiv ov sohjv pux, OPTVEPVMZ" ot e cov dmaplz et ximm. Sohjv Pux epf Optvepvmz esi tonomes, tu vjiz katv dmavvis aq vji tipvipdi. Nz tahhitvoup ot vu dav vji Optvepvmz epf deqovemobi vji Sohjv Pux. Tu ov ot xuamf ci"Miesp jux vu hiv ov SOHJV PUX". Emvispevowimz, fup'v deqovemobi (O'n jitovepv e muv ug vonit vu ati deqovemobevoup) cav cumf Sohjv Pux.

Zuas cavvupt esi huuf. Vji upmz dunnipv O jewi ot vu neli tasi zuas qsupuapt esi nevdjoph. Iovjis jewi vjin ci,

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[No thanks, I'll wait for retirement]

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Iydimmipv giifcedl @Opwodvat. Vjepl zua.
 
O'wi piwis nefi epzvjoph moli vjot cigusi tu epz giifcedl xuamf ci opwemaecmi :). Juqi vjot jimqt!

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