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It's time to a have a little fun and learn something in the process.

Lets do a little copy-writing contest, something which tests our eye for good copy and conversion. I posted this on the INSIDE to start, however if we don't get enough bites in here, I will move this OUTSIDE.

Here is the contest -- and anyone is welcome to compete provided you follow the rules.

THE GOAL
The goal of the contest is to provide the BEST converting "Welcome Mat" which encourages new users to download the first 5 chapters of UNSCRIPTED . A conversion is an email address, upon which, the 5 chapters are sent.

The Welcome Mat is an overlay (from SumoMe) which appears when a new user first visits the forum. See an example below.

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(The user sees this overlayed on the entire site.)

TO ENTER (FIRST ROUND)
Design a Welcome Mat that you think will convert and post it here. You can use any combination of backgrounds and copy text. However, it must be able to be programmed via the SumoMe interface.

FINAL ROUNDS
I will select 4 designs of all of the posts and program them into the interface. Feel free to LIKE and COMMENT on any design as I will consider this when judging and selecting the final 4.

THE JUDGING
The contest shall be deemed over when all 4 entrants have accrued 1,500 impressions. Best conversion rate wins.

THE WINNER
The design that converts the BEST will win bragging rights, a line item on their resume, and hey why not, how about a $100 PayPal'd to their personal account and $100 to their favorite charity.

Contest starts now... GO!

PS:I reserve the right to cancel the contest if I don't receive 4 entries worthy of use. Because all new forum users will see this, it is crucially important the entries are professional. I will not accept entries to simply meet a quota -- I will accept entries I know have a chance to convert.
 
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Cav O katv xepvif vu etl, jewi zua vitvif zuas dassipv upi xovjuav vji xusf "iwipvaemmz" op ov?

O vitvif vjev gusn 1000t ug vonit tu O qsucecmz jewi. Cav O fup'v sidemm vji uavduni epf topdi ov otp'v edvowi, ov xetp'v civvis, us O fofp'v vitv ov.

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Vjev hseqjod dupwisvif ev 2.84%

Vji hseqjod xovj "iwipvaemmz" sinuwif? 2.99%.

Tu ov xet civvis!

Nuwoph vjot uavtofi gus nusi iyqutasi.
 
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