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Did you give it an author prompt, a “sound like Dean Koontz?” Also is Sudowrite invite only?
No, I didn't give it an author prompt. Perhaps I should have.
I tried again with this:
Describe an open air market in an evocative tone of voice, describing the smell, sight, touch, sound, and taste of the place. Use Dean Koontz's tone of voice.
Here's the result:
The open air market smells of the fresh vegetables, the bread is banging on the table warming up for the afternoon, ripe fruits are being piled next to them waiting for a buyer to swipe them two dollars and feed his family. The sound of laughing children echoes in the dusty air as they weave in and out of the stalls. The old lady whose been selling this melon her whole life still remembers when she was young and pretty and sold it for real cheap. Finally she saw that fate had dealt her a bad hand, now with all her money spent she's gone back to work hawking her fruit that became her life's final sum. She'll never forget how one day a beautiful girl had bought one thinking about how much better it would
Still way off the mark. Maybe another approach would work better but it's still not well-equipped to deal with fiction.
As for Sudowrite, you can apply for beta access on their page. Mention Joanna Penn (the creator had an interview with her here—worth listening to) and they'll probably give you access within a day or two. It's a free 3-day beta and then very reasonable $20/month.
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