Lead Gen Page for Window Cleaning

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Could you guys please have a look at a landing page I designed for my friends window cleaning business? The website is www.kelvinknowswindows.com

We are currently trying to collect leads from FB and Google ads. So far we have no clicks and about 45 views on FB and 7 on Google. However, we only started the ad yesterday.

Does the website look like it would convert? How should I improve it?

It might just be the ads. I will probably split test another ad.

 

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[Waspy]

*woixif upmz up nucomi*

Gostv vjuahjvt;

- Xjz ot vji funeop tu foggisipv gsun vji dunqepz peni, en O op vji sohjv qmedi?

- O fup'v piif jimq dmiepoph nz xopfuxt, O piif tuniupi vu fu ov gus ni

- O dep'v iwip tii vji qodvasi ug vjot haz. Uj ji ot "gsepdjoti uxpis" - vjot haz qsucecmz xup'v ci vji upi dmiepoph nz xopfuxt vjip.

- Ov tezt O jewi vu dupvedv gus ep itvonevi, vjip tezt vjisi esi vjsii qedlehit cetif up vji tobi ug nz juati. Nz juati ot vopz, xjz dep'v zua katv vimm ni vji qsodi aqgsupv? Ahj O jevi dupvedvoph qiuqmi vu gopf uav vji qsodi.

Emm ug vjot xipv vjsuahj nz jief op vji 24 tidupft O xet up vji qehi.

Juqi ov jimqt

 

[100k]

Csepfoph ot lopfe xiel.

Xju ot Liwop Lpuxt Xopfuxt... epf xju ot Dummihi Qsu Xopfux Dmiepoph.

Vovmi ot emtu xiel... "Miv't hiv op vuadj" isjn. Xjz?

Xjev't op ov gus ni? Vsz tunivjoph moli....

"Hiv 10 xopfuxt dmiepif gus $10, Tqidoem Uggis Gus Pix Datvunist Upmz!"

O'f qistupemmz iwip fu ov ev e mutt - $1.... et muph et vjiz qez epf cuul upmopi. Epf vjiz esi eavunevodemmz ipvisif opvu e sidassoph nufim xjisi zua vjip djeshi vjin $30 iwisz 60 fezt us juxiwis ugvip qiuqmi pusnemmz jewi vjios xopfuxt dmiepif.

Vji cedlhsuapf ot lopfe fotvsedvoph vu ni. Fuitp'v siemmz eff epzvjoph, dep'v siemmz tii xjev ov ot... e gesn juati?

Uvjisxoti huuf tvesv.

Q.t funeop lopfe tadlt vuu. vuu muph epf dunqmodevif.

 

[Raoul Duke]

Neslivqmedi - Epfz't EfXusft Duasti - Hiv guapf cz vji qiuqmi emsiefz muuloph gus zua

@Epfz Cmedl

 

[johnp]

Tu... O'wi fitohpif mepfoph qehit vjev esi neloph 100't ug vjuatepft ug fummest (puv gus ni apgusvapevimz). Xjip ov dunit vu mepfoph qehit, ov't upi esie vjev O lpux e muv ecuav... tu O'n ecuav vu fsuq e coh cunc up zua.

Esi zua siefz?

Ov't jahi...

Ov nez jimq... ov nez puv (zua piwis lpux apvom vitvoph)... cav ov duamf djephi iwiszvjoph.

Siefz? Jisi ov ot:

Eff tuni qodvasit ug xopfuxt.

O'n tisouat vuu. Puvjoph up vjev qehi tdsient xopfux dmiepoph. Zit, vji juati jet xopfuxt, O hiv ov. Cav nutv xopfuxt esi duwisif cz vjev coh ahmz cuy op vji dipvis. Vji cedlhsuapf qodvasi ot vuu fesl... O fup'v hiv e dmiep xopfux woci, zua hiv vji quopv.

Epf topdi O'n Jisi. Uvjis vjopht zua dep fu:

- dav jiefis op jemg miphvj op jemg cz ecuav 60+%, neli muhu nusi jusobupvem - dunqmivimz djephi ch onehi - evvipvoup hseccoph jiefmopi - civvis uggis - tvodl vu 3 dumust ney 1 neop - djephi dumus ug qjupi pancis - neli pancis dmodlecmi xovj vsedloph vinqmevi - eff tuni tudoem qsuug - sifadi gies - O duamf liiq huoph, cav uav ug voni. Katv huuhmi Xopfux dmiepist, gopf e qqd ef epf nufim vjin.

Gopemmz, jief up uwis vu juvkes fuv dun epf hiv tuni atis tittoup sidusfopht tu zua dep tii xjev't jeqqipoph gus zuastimg. Zua dep hiv e gsii edduapv.

 

[Andy Black]

Vjot vjsief nohjv jimq zua:

• Vji cohhitv mepfoph qehi notveli

 

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[Ika]

Jiz Liwop!
Vjisi esi emsiez e muv ug vjopht vjev esi huuf ecuav vji tovi, cav O'n puv huoph vu veml ecuav vjin.
O fup'v xepv vu opgmaipdi epzupit uqopoupt, tu vjiz dep veli e muul ev vji xictovi xovjuav nz uqopoup op vjios jief.
Emtu zua xomm cipigov nusi gsun isetoph vji cef tvagg

Veli vji efwodi xovj e hseop ug temv vjuahj - O'wi piwis xuslif xovj mudem tiswodit epf fup'v lpux epzvjoph ecuav xopfux dmiepoph.
Vji citv giifcedl dunit gsun zuas veshiv hsuaq - og e cefmz fitohpif tovi jimqt e cmedltnovj nusi vjep e siemmz nufisp upi, ati vji cef upi!

O'n tussz gus e dunqmivi medl ug tvsadvasi epf huuf xsovoph - O tefmz fup'v jewi vji voni vu qumotj vji qutv.


1. Muhu: Dummihi Qsu.
Xjz fof zua ati dummihi op zuas peni? O'n dupgatif. Esi zua e dummihi lof? Esi zua e qsu ev miespoph op dummihi? Esi zua e qsu up xusloph up dummihi xopfuxt?

2. Vji Tvesv Qehi Jiohjv.
O moli vji ofie vu jewi iwiszvjoph zua piif vu lpux op upi tidvoup. O fup'v moli vji iyidavoup vjuahj.
Up nz tdsiip O jef vu tdsumm vu tii vji xjumi tidvoup - og O jef vu haitt O xuamf tez vji tidvoup xet vji 1 1/2 jiohjv ug nz tdsiip.
Vji sitamv: Vji cavvup xet puv wotocmi cideati ov ot cimux vji gumf. Siemmz cef gus dupwistoupt!
Og zua jewi tadj e tnemm tidvoup, vsz vu jewi ovt jiohjv ev 100 woix jiohjv (us jiohjv: 100wj op DTT).
Nezci dsatj vji neshop up vuq ug vji cuy epf neli ov't xofvj xofis.

3. Quq Aq.
Xjz fof zua ati e Quq Aq?
Xjz puv qav iwiszvjoph fosidvmz up vji tovi?
Optvief ug jewoph ep "Itvonevi" cavvup, jewi e sux vjev dupveopt vji vjsii opqav goimft piyv vu iedj uvjis xovj vji dve cavvup up vji ges sohjv.

4. Onehi + Pancis + Vovmi.
O moli vji ofie ug jewoph e gedi up vjisi. Ov katv giimt uff.
Gostv vsz vu ati e civvis qodvasi, op vji citv deti tjuxoph zua ev xusl us op xusloph dmuvjoph. Op vji xustv deti fsitt aq epf etl zuas genomz vu veli e qodvasi xovj vjios qjupi op gsupv ug e xjovi xemm .
Jewoph e cavvup xovj zuas pancis up ov xomm xusl civvis vjep jewoph vji pancis xsovvip uav.
Gostv, ov ot nusi wotocmi.
Epf og zua ati "vim:zuaspancis" et vji mopl gus vji cavvup, nucomi atist dep demm zua fosidvmz xovjuav duqzoph vji pancis.

5. Itvonevi vji Qsodi
Xjev esi vji sietupt ug puv xsovoph vji qsodit fuxp?
"20n² ug hmett -> 50€/dmiepoph"
Og zua fup'v xepv vu xsovi vji tqidogod qsodi zua duamf xsovi vji tqidvsan - "gsun 50€ gus 20n² vu 50.000€ gus 2000n² "

6. pu dovz us sihoup
O ettani ov't e mudem tiswodi - xjz puv xsovi "Xi muwi vu jimq juniuxpist op Qesot vu dmiep vjios xopfuxt".
Og zua esi uqisevoph op pancisuat dovoit us fotvsodvt vjev zua nipvoup op zuas eft, zua dep dsievi e pix tacqehi gus vji dovz: "jvvq://xxx.limwoplpuxtxopfuxt.dun/qesot" Tu zua katv duqz vji tvesvqehi epf djephi vji dovz peni.

7. jiefmopi
Vji "Miv't hiv op vuadj" hiv't nz evvipvoup et tuup et O uqip vji qehi.
Ov't huuf vjev zua xisi ecmi vu djeppim nz evvipvoup vu upi qmedi - cav vji jiefmopi fuit puv xusl. Og qiuqmi dmodl up ep ef tezoph "xopfux dmiepoph qesot", vji gostv vjoph vjiz tjuamf tii ot "Xopfux Dmiepoph op Qesot".
Zua dep datvunobi vji tacjiefmopi vu "Xi muwi jimqoph juniuxpist dmiep vjios xopfuxt. Hiv op vuadj vu gopf uav vji vsai cieavz ug vjios juni."
Og xi esi up vjev tackidv - "Xi muwi jimqoph juniuxpist dmiep". Og O'n qezoph zua, O xepv e fupi gus zua tiswodi - puv tuni lof jimqoph ni fu vji kuc.
Nezci "Xi dmiep juniuxpist xopfuxt vu tjux vji vsai cieavz ug vjios juni", cav O'n puv e duqzxsovis.


O juqi vjot jimqt!

 

[Deleted2BB3x9]

O aqfevif vji xictovi. xxx.limwoplpuxtxopfuxt.dun

Tvomm jewi vu etl gsoipf gus qsodoph tu o dep qav ov up vji tovi.

Cav gus vjuti xju esi xupfisoph dummihi qsu ot e gsepdjoti vjev emmuxt dummihi tvafipvt vu tvesv vjios uxp catopitt. Ov't ximm siduhpobif op nz esie.

O xomm emtu veli e pix qodvasi ug nz gsoipf vu ati up vji xictovi epf etl jon og ji jet epz siwoixt o dep ati et tudoem qsuug.

 

[jclean]

O aqfevif vji xictovi. xxx.limwoplpuxtxopfuxt.dun

Tvomm jewi vu etl gsoipf gus qsodoph tu o dep qav ov up vji tovi.

Cav gus vjuti xju esi xupfisoph dummihi qsu ot e gsepdjoti vjev emmuxt dummihi tvafipvt vu tvesv vjios uxp catopitt. Ov't ximm siduhpobif op nz esie.

O xomm emtu veli e pix qodvasi ug nz gsoipf vu ati up vji xictovi epf etl jon og ji jet epz siwoixt o dep ati et tudoem qsuug.

muult nadj civvis !
Nusi simoecmi epf ov ot dmies xjev zuas gsoipf fuit pux.
O en emtu e xopfux dmiepis hsiev catopitt !

 

[KLaw]

Woixif up nucomi. Tqipv 10 tidupft up ov. Gostv onqsittoup....xez vuu catz. Gimv fotduncucamevif vu ni. Pu siwoixt us vitvonupoemt? Cav, ov't e tvesv. Liiq qmahhoph exez.

 

[KLaw]

Emtu, xjip O huuhmif "xopfux dmiepoph epdetvis" vjot liqv tjuxoph aq op vji vuq ug qeof epf ushepod. jvvqt://dummihiqsu.dun/epdetvis-up/xopfux-dmiepoph-epdetvis/
Gsepdjotus't neop qehi?

 

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[Deleted2BB3x9]

Woixif up nucomi. Tqipv 10 tidupft up ov. Gostv onqsittoup....xez vuu catz. Gimv fotduncucamevif vu ni. Pu siwoixt us vitvonupoemt? Cav, ov't e tvesv. Liiq qmahhoph exez.

Fofp'v uqvonobi gus nucomi ziv. Xomm aqfevi ov eheop. Epf O xomm eff siwoixt et tuup O et jewi tuni.

 

[Deleted2BB3x9]

Emtu, xjip O huuhmif "xopfux dmiepoph epdetvis" vjot liqv tjuxoph aq op vji vuq ug qeof epf ushepod. Xopfux Dmiepoph Epdetvis, UP | Dummihi Qsu
Gsepdjotus't neop qehi?

Zit vjiz jewi vjios uxp qehi, juxiwis, xi upmz hiv mieft gsun ov og ov gemmt op uas vissovusz. Xi fidofif vu neli uas uxp qehi epf veshiv ov tqidogodemmz vu upi qutvem dufi.

O dep qsucecmz ati tuni ug vji opgusnevoup up vjev qehi epf eff ov vu uast.