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Your Copy Needed for my Summit talk - Submit Here

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Bekit

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Hey everyone!

I’m getting ready for my talk at the Summit, and I need copy submissions!


Who is this for?
Anyone who has a piece of writing that's meant to persuade.

You do NOT have to be a Summit Attendee in order to participate in this.
Your product does NOT have to be live yet for you to participate in this.

My presentation will be a live copy critique of 5-7 pieces of copy. YOURS could be one of them.

This is a chance for you to…
  • Get a FREE copywriting critique on your ad, offer, or promotion
  • Improve your own copywriting skills
  • Get some new ideas for how to talk about your offer
  • Identify your highest-leverage areas of improvement
  • Launch a new product with stronger copy
  • Increase sales on an existing product or service
The best part?

If I pick your copy to incorporate into my talk, you won’t have to wait till the summit to know what I think about it. I’ll send you my feedback in video format right away. That way, if you want to make immediate changes, you can. After all, there's no need for you to wait several weeks to get an improvement if I've already identified an adjustment that you can make.

Here's the deal:
  • You can send in more than one piece of copy if you want. Please submit each one separately (submit the form again for each one).
  • You have to be willing for your copy to be viewed and discussed publicly at the Summit.
  • I won't share who you are if you don't want me to. I'll just say "A forum member who wants to remain anonymous sent me this." They'll still see your site and your copy in my talk, but they won't know whose it is. Just let me know if you prefer your copy NOT to be connected with you.
  • I do NOT guarantee that I will use every piece of copy that I receive. I am hoping to get 20-25 submissions, out of which I will pick 5-7 that are the best ones. "Best" in my book means that they will be the most effective at demonstrating the widest gamut of copywriting principles and be applicable to the widest possible swath of people in the audience. So if three people send me a piece of copy with the same issue, I'll pick the one that most clearly demonstrates the principle of how to improve it.
  • If I decide not to use your copy, I will let you know. If I decide to use your copy, I will also let you know.
I'd like people to send me a variety of types of copy so that the Summit attendees can see real-life examples of multiple types and formats of copy in place.

For example, you can send me...
  • Your homepage
  • Your lead magnet page
  • A landing page that you're driving Google Ads traffic to
  • Your Google Ad itself
  • Your Facebook Ad
  • A print ad
  • A marketing email (or series of emails)
  • A long-form sales page
  • Any other persuasive communication
My goal is to make this entertaining and instructive. But I need your copy to do it.

Please note: The deadline to submit your copy is November 27. That way, I can use the Thanksgiving break to send people their reviews.

Cool? Let's do this!

Submit your copy here:

 
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Wow, no one? You're essentially getting a copywriting analysis for FREE. It's worth several hundred dollars, perhaps thousands.

If no one wants to submit, I'll submit my Amazon listings for either of my two books, Unscripted or TMF . The copy is decent, but it definitely could be improved.
 

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Wow, no one? You're essentially getting a copywriting analysis for FREE. It's worth several hundred dollars, perhaps thousands.
This is true. I typically charge $100 for the copy review and hundreds to thousands for actually writing any copy (depending on the project). I'm giving the forum the "friend price" of $0 for this.

MJ, totally - I'd be happy to look at the copy on your Amazon listings!

Two notes -
  1. If you don't have any copy, write some up and send it over to me before the deadline!
  2. Don't be intimidated. My copy review will be kind and constructive. I'm not gonna cut anybody down or embarrass anyone.
 

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Don't be intimidated. My copy review will be kind and constructive. I'm not gonna cut anybody down or embarrass anyone.

Feel free to embarrass me.

I'd rather be embarrassed in front of 200 people than to have no one buy my product.
 

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Going to submit one of my direct mail letters-- thank you in advance for even the possibility of looking at my stuff.
 
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Will see what I can come up with. Our product isn’t out yet, but we feel like Kickstarter or similar would be something we’d do in the future.

I’ll see if I can come up with something.
 

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I’ll submit my marketplace ad for my course...

EDIT: Done. Let me know if you need any more info @Bekit.
 
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Wow - great offer!

Hopefully, you still got space - I will send you the main sales page for Fox Web School when it is ready (this week).

Thanks.
 

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I just see this! Me me me me me !

I have nothing to send because of I don't know where to start, but it would be AWESOMESAUCE if you helped me create or tell me what to write to give constructive criticism to start presenting my social entrepreneurship business to the public!!

Product: Hygiene product line (shampoo/conditioner/body wash/lotion)
Mission: Proceeds go to a fund to buy property destined to be rest-stop places where homeless can go take a hot shower, get clean clothes and go on.

Maybe the elevator pitch for retailers to carry my product? Or the first copy you would see on the landing page? What would you encourage me to submit??? (if you still have room) :D Thanks for the offer! <3
 
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Black Friday/Cyber Monday is coming up. Anybody have anything you're going to run for BFCM that you want to send through ahead of time for some advance feedback?
 
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Moved outside at @Bekit ’s request.
 

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