Hristo
Contributor
I'm writing this as a practice exercise. This is a lead I would have qualified myself by checking out their online presence. I would change up that first paragraph for each customer, but the rest would be the same. I would change the lead number based on the Industry too (e.g. 20 leads for towing is nothing, but construction it's a huge deal).
Dear Donald,
Your company impresses me. Based on reviews left online, your customers love you. You seem to be doing well and your work on the Italizone Coffee store was one of my favourites.
However, your company’s website is lacking and you don’t seem to be doing any effective online marketing.
It’s understandable for a business owner to not be improving on these areas. I myself find I have very little time for anything other than work. Nevertheless, it’s still a missed opportunity.
By not having a strategy in this area you are effectively leaving large bank bags filled with cash on the table. It might sound like I’m being dramatic, but I’m not.
How much would 20 leads (potential customers) be worth to you? I have seen many owners like yourself change their entire perspective of online marketing in a single day. All it takes is a single campaign to change your business.
And that’s all I ask of you. Hire us for a single campaign. If we don’t reach your expectations, then you don’t have to pay for our service. No restrictive contracts, just an opportunity to grow your business.
I would love to discuss this further with you. Call me xxx-xxx-xxx for a 5 minute phone call to find out our ideas to grow your business.
Kind Regards,
Durty-Use Dcarsalesmen
Let me know what can be improved on here? Is it trash? Would you email me back (even if to tell me to F*ck off)?
Dear Donald,
Your company impresses me. Based on reviews left online, your customers love you. You seem to be doing well and your work on the Italizone Coffee store was one of my favourites.
However, your company’s website is lacking and you don’t seem to be doing any effective online marketing.
It’s understandable for a business owner to not be improving on these areas. I myself find I have very little time for anything other than work. Nevertheless, it’s still a missed opportunity.
By not having a strategy in this area you are effectively leaving large bank bags filled with cash on the table. It might sound like I’m being dramatic, but I’m not.
How much would 20 leads (potential customers) be worth to you? I have seen many owners like yourself change their entire perspective of online marketing in a single day. All it takes is a single campaign to change your business.
And that’s all I ask of you. Hire us for a single campaign. If we don’t reach your expectations, then you don’t have to pay for our service. No restrictive contracts, just an opportunity to grow your business.
I would love to discuss this further with you. Call me xxx-xxx-xxx for a 5 minute phone call to find out our ideas to grow your business.
Kind Regards,
Durty-Use Dcarsalesmen
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