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Hi XXX,<br />
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My name is XXX, I've recently started a Web Development agency and one of our focuses is set to be construction and construction management. In researching top companies in the space, I came across your company - XXX. I reach out solely to quality businesses that I believe in and that I know I can help.<br />
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I'm interested in revamping and updating your website (domain name here) to improve your online sales/lead generation, increase user experience, and improve your company's online image. Here are some examples of things that I believe can be improved:<br />
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1. Complete revamp and modernizing of the design and look<br />
2. Dramatically improve user "flow"<br />
3. Bring to life your amazing experience across $XXX+ million in projects including the XXX project<br />
4. Include customer testimonials where we can to boost site credibility even further!<br />
5. Cut unnecessary information where we can<br />
6. Higher quality and better blending of logo into site background<br />
7. More seemingly minor tweaks that make a large difference.<br />
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This whole revamp can be done in less than 2 weeks. As I am looking to build a portfolio of website development projects done for high quality businesses for my new agency, I would enjoy the opportunity to work on this project for <b>free</b>.<br />
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I'd like to set up a consultation phone call to discuss your business further and work through what you'd really like to see in your website design. Does this XXXX, 12/X, at 8:00am, 12:30pm or 6:00pm work for you?<br />
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Looking forward to speaking soon. Feel free to call my number below at any time.
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My name is XXX, I do web design and work with a lot of similar companies to yours in the construction management space.<br />
All are past clients have gone from having an average, out of date website to something that is now brining in new sales daily.<br />
Have a quick look at...<br />
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<a href="http://www.example.com" target="_blank" class="link link--external" rel="noopener">www.example.com</a><br />
<a href="http://www.example.com" target="_blank" class="link link--external" rel="noopener">www.example.com</a><br />
<a href="http://www.example.com" target="_blank" class="link link--external" rel="noopener">www.example.com</a><br />
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I came across your business by search ___________ and noticed its number 5 on the results. A little research has shown me that this kind of search is getting around XXXX search per month. I really think some very simple changes to your website would see a huge difference in results.<br />
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Here are some examples of things that I believe can be improved:<br />
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1. Complete revamp and modernizing of the design and look<br />
2. Dramatically improve user "flow"<br />
3. Bring to life your amazing experience across $XXX+ million in projects including the XXX project<br />
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Also X is not working great, and Y doesn't even show on a mobile device. <br />
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Let me know when is a good time to call or you can always ring me at XXXXXXXXX. I would love a quick chat and even if you don't hire me I would enjoy showing you some simple things to get fast results. <br />
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- Rob<br />
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(If no call or response within a few days - call).</div>
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