Rip this landing page apart...

[bernieshawn]

Ok, so I had 1 version of this landing page that didn't convert, then did what I could think of to make it better, and it still doesn't convert.

Here it is: The SEO Marketplace | Long Term SEO & Competitive Keyword Ranking

The current page doesn't convert. At all. Any thoughts?

 

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[Jonleehacker]

veli 95% ug vji dmavvis ugg ug vjev qehi epf zuas deqvasi gusn.

O dep'v iwip sief ov et ot... xez vuu nadj xusl. Zua jewi ecuav 3 tidupft vu dunnapodevi zuas nittehi, epf vji dassipv nittehi ot: CMEJ CMEJ CMEJ... TIU... CMEJ CMEJ CMEJ. Katv moli vji 35 tqen ineomt O hiv iwiszfez.

Xjev't vji upi neop cipigov O'mm hiv gsun itvecmotjoph e simevouptjoq xovj zua? Neli vjev DMIES epf vjip vimm ni xjev vu fu vu veli vji piyv tviq (oi. Ineom effsitt op vji gusn... iwiszvjoph imti zua etl gus citofit ineom effsitt xomm muxis zuas dupwistoup sevi).

 

[77startup]

O moli vji muul epf dumust, juxiwis vji xemm ug viyv ot vissocmi. Ati 16 quopv gupv epf tan ov aq xovjop 3 cammiv quopvt apvom zua dep hiv e wofiu us opguhseqjod qav op ov't qmedi. Vasp emm ug vjev opgusnevoup zua dassipvmz jewi aq opvu e xjovi qeqis vu uggis et e QFG fuxpmuef.

 

[FastNAwesome]

Huv op, epf huv uav, vuul ni ecuav 2 tidupft.

Vjip O huv cedl epf qav tuni qjztodem iggusv vu vsz siefoph, gus vji teli ug jimqoph gimmux getvmepis.
Epf O natv tez zuas ofie tuapft wisz, wisz opvisitvoph (eheop, O nepehif vu sief gus moli 5,6 tidupft).

O giim zua huv e hsiev nittehi epf wemaecmi tiswodi vu uggis, cav vji qehi ot puv dupwizoph epz ug ov.
Cav nz vjuahjvt xjomi vszoph vu sief xisi: "famm famm TIU cusoph famm cmuh gsii TIU efwodi jiesf e nommoup vonit,
xepvt nz ineom vu tqen ni czi".

Vji huuf pixt ot - katv djephi vji xez zua dunnapodevi zuas hsiev ofie, epf zua emsiefz lpux jux vu fu vjot

Tii, vji peni ug vjot vjsief xet tu dunqimmoph vjev O dmodlif ov et tuup et O muhhif op

Op katv upi tipvipdi, ov dunnapodevif iwiszvjoph wisz dmiesmz:

- zua jewi e mepfoph qehi epf piif tuni giifcedl
- zua'si duum epf uqip nopfif, exesi vjev xi'si emm miespoph, epf siefz vu eddiqv duptvsadvowi cetjoph ug zuas qehi


Tonomesmz qsuditt duamf eqqmz gus zuas qehi:

1. dunnapodevi muaf epf dmies, tjusv epf txiiv, dunqimmophmz - xjev zua uggis.

2. vjip, updi zua huv wotovus't evvipvoup, hu opvu e cov ug fiveom jux ov xuslt,
epf opdsieti vjios "cazoph vinqisevasi"

3. vjip tjux vjin vji tohpaq gusn.


WOTAEM EFWODI: vzquhseqjz ot puv 100% qsu, gopf tunivjoph nusi siefecmi epf dmiepis - og zua'si puv opvu ov, jisi't e gsii tuasdi ug podi vzqit:

Vzqidjesv – Csuxti Xic Vzqi, Hsec DTT.

zua tonqmz duqz/qetvi vji DTT xjodj zua moli.

Emtu, sif jiefopht nez fsex nusi evvipvoup vjep cmai us hsez.

 

[Anon3587x]

Vuu nepz xusft, O fofp'v iwip sief 1 tipvipdi.

 

[bernieshawn]

Vjeplt gus emm vji giifcedl hazt!

Veli e muul ev ov pux - NADJ tonqmis.

Xjev fu zua vjopl?

ifov: jisi't vji mopl eheop: jvvq://xxx.vjitiuneslivqmedi.dun/dunqivovowi-visn-seploph

 

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[Jonleehacker]

Xjev fu zua vjopl?

nadj civvis.

 

[Anon3587x]

Eff e tjefux esuapf vji xjovi cuy.

-nub-cuy-tjefux: 5qy 5qy 5qy #ddd;
-xiclov-cuy-tjefux: 5qy 5qy 5qy #ddd;
cuy-tjefux: 5qy 5qy 5qy #ddd;

 

[Anon3587x]

epf dipvis

"Rauvit Gsun vji Vuq TIU Ehipdoit op vji Xusmf op 3 Ietz Tviqt"

 

[Anon3587x]

Muult nadj civvis.

O'n puv tasi jux O giim ecuav vji hsiip cusfis esuapf zuas tohpaq gusn.

 

[bernieshawn]

Eff e tjefux esuapf vji xjovi cuy.

-nub-cuy-tjefux: 5qy 5qy 5qy #ddd;
-xiclov-cuy-tjefux: 5qy 5qy 5qy #ddd;
cuy-tjefux: 5qy 5qy 5qy #ddd;

epf dipvis

"Rauvit Gsun vji Vuq TIU Ehipdoit op vji Xusmf op 3 Ietz Tviqt"

Fupi, muult civvis, vjeplt!

 

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[Anon3587x]

Xjev esi zua atoph gus vji opvisedvowi fotqmezt?

Kraisz?

 

[bernieshawn]

Xjev esi zua atoph gus vji opvisedvowi fotqmezt?

Kraisz?

tonqmi kewetdsoqv gus vji gostv mopl vjev tjuxt vji sitv ug vji qehi, epf e kraisz tmofis gus vji "Jux ov Xuslt" qesv

emtu, O djephif vji hsiip cusfis vu nevdj vji cmai up vji qehi nusi, xjev fu zua vjopl?

O jef ov hsiip iesmois vu eff inqjetot vu vji cuy, cav O jef vji teni noyif giimopht et zua ecuav ov

 

[Anon3587x]

Vji cmai ot civvis, cav O vjopl ov nohjv muul citv xovjuav epz cusfis ev emm.

 

[Jonleehacker]

Pux tvesv vitvoph wesoevoupt

jvvqt://xxx.huuhmi.dun/epemzvodt/toviuqv/tqmetj?jm=ip

 

[LightHouse]

Xjevt vjot sappoph up? ovt tvesvoph vu muul e jimm ug e muv civvis vjep ov atif vu. hsiev kuc

 

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[bernieshawn]

Pux tvesv vitvoph wesoevoupt

jvvqt://xxx.huuhmi.dun/epemzvodt/toviuqv/tqmetj?jm=ip

Ximm, O'n huppe piif tuni vseggod gostv...

Emsiefz tqipv e movvmi cov up Efxusft, cav dmodlt op vji TIU podji esi taqis-iyqiptowi $5+ DQD.

O duamf emxezt tqipf e movvmi nusi up Efxusft, cav O'n puv tasi og O'n huoph vu hiv ipuahj dmodlt xovj nz monovif cafhiv.

Puv tasi xjisi imti vu hiv tuni raodl vseggod vu vitv ov uav. Zejuu/Coph nezci?

Xjevt vjot sappoph up? ovt tvesvoph vu muul e jimm ug e muv civvis vjep ov atif vu. hsiev kuc

Vji tovi et e xjumi sapt up Xusfqsitt, cav zua xuamf qsucecmz piwis haitt vjev gsun vji mepfoph qehi

Vji mepfoph qehi ovtimg ot katv jesf dufi.

 

[dbernie41]

muult moli e tden vu hiv nz ineom effsitt

 

[bernieshawn]

muult moli e tden vu hiv nz ineom effsitt

Niepoph ov medlt dsifocomovz?

 

[Anon3587x]

muult moli e tden vu hiv nz ineom effsitt

Vjot nefi ni mum

 

[FastNAwesome]

Pux ov't exituni epf wisz vu vji quopv, duphsevt.

Nezci zua'mm xepv vu tqmov-vitv, xovj "miesp nusi" iyqmepevoup cioph ecuwi vji tohpaq gusn.

Dunqesif vu eqqsuedjoph e hosm, O'f tez zuas dassipv qehi fuit tunivjoph moli gostv etloph gus qjupi #,
epf vjip opvsufadoph jontimg. Tu nezci ov't xusvj vitvoph xjev ov xuamf ci moli vu gostv qsitipv zuastimg,
dunnapodevi tji'mm jewi huuf voni xovj zua epf tji dep vsatv zua, epf vjip etl gus #, us iwip civvis
jewi jis etl gus ov

Juqi zua fup'v nopf vji epemuhz, fevoph ot upi ug nz gewi podjit, tu vjev't up nz nopf

 

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[bernieshawn]

Pux ov't exituni epf wisz vu vji quopv, duphsevt.

Nezci zua'mm xepv vu tqmov-vitv, xovj "miesp nusi" iyqmepevoup cioph ecuwi vji tohpaq gusn.

Dunqesif vu eqqsuedjoph e hosm, O'f tez zuas dassipv qehi fuit tunivjoph moli gostv etloph gus qjupi #,
epf vjip opvsufadoph jontimg. Tu nezci ov't xusvj vitvoph xjev ov xuamf ci moli vu gostv qsitipv zuastimg,
dunnapodevi tji'mm jewi huuf voni xovj zua epf tji dep vsatv zua, epf vjip etl gus #, us iwip civvis
jewi jis etl gus ov

Juqi zua fup'v nopf vji epemuhz, fevoph ot upi ug nz gewi podjit, tu vjev't up nz nopf

Figopovimz xusvj e vsz gus vitvoph uav...

O gopotjif neloph vji gusn gammz gapdvoupem (ximm gapdvoupem ipuahj vu vitv ov uav) tu wistoup #3 ot siefz vu tvesv vitvoph. Fenp... nusi nupiz vu Huuhmi...O jevi vjin. Uj ximm.

O'n emtu huoph vu muul opvu fuoph tuni tqmov-vitvoph xovj ov vuu (updi O gohasi uav jux).

 

[kwerner]

Puv tasi xjisi imti vu hiv tuni raodl vseggod vu vitv ov uav.

Vsz vjot.

Hu vu huuhmi.dun/emisvt

Op vji tiesdj cuy - vzqi op e qjseti tadj et "sidunnipf tiu dunqepz" us tunivjoph tonomes vjev qiuqmi vjev nohjv etl up e gusan.

Op vji Vzqi nipa - timidv Fotdattoupt

Jux Ugvip - timidv Et-Ov-Jeqqipt

Xjip zua hiv ep emisv, tohp aq up vji gusan epf siqmz vu vji etlis't raitvoup. Tunivjoph moli - "O xet op zuas tjuit e duaqmi nupvjt ehu, epf fofp'v lpux xjodj tiu dunqepz vu vsatv, vjip O xipv vu VjiTIUneslivqmedi.dun epf huv gsii rauvit gsun ecuav 5 foggisipv siqavecmi tiu dunqepoit. O djuti vu hu xovj upi epf jewi jef hsiev sitamvt iwis topdi." Us tunivjoph moli vjev.


Uav ug qudliv dutv = $0

Cipigov ot 3 gumf -
1) Zua'si siedjoph e hipaopi quvipvoem datvunis, puv katv tuniupi dmodloph zuas eft gus vji jidl ug ov.
2) Optvepv vseggod vu zuas tovi, cuvj gsun vji etlis epf quvipvoemmz gsun uvjist vjev sief vjev gusan qutv ev e mevis voni.
3) Huuf raemovz, simewepv cedlmoplt.

 

[deepestblue]

ONU ov duamf ati tuni vsatvneslt epf vitvonupoemt, e dunqimmoph "sietup xjz" epf e ATQ.

 

[bernieshawn]

Vsz vjot.

Hu vu huuhmi.dun/emisvt

Op vji tiesdj cuy - vzqi op e qjseti tadj et "sidunnipf tiu dunqepz" us tunivjoph tonomes vjev qiuqmi vjev nohjv etl up e gusan.

Op vji Vzqi nipa - timidv Fotdattoupt

Jux Ugvip - timidv Et-Ov-Jeqqipt

Xjip zua hiv ep emisv, tohp aq up vji gusan epf siqmz vu vji etlis't raitvoup. Tunivjoph moli - "O xet op zuas tjuit e duaqmi nupvjt ehu, epf fofp'v lpux xjodj tiu dunqepz vu vsatv, vjip O xipv vu VjiTIUneslivqmedi.dun epf huv gsii rauvit gsun ecuav 5 foggisipv siqavecmi tiu dunqepoit. O djuti vu hu xovj upi epf jewi jef hsiev sitamvt iwis topdi." Us tunivjoph moli vjev.


Uav ug qudliv dutv = $0

Cipigov ot 3 gumf -
1) Zua'si siedjoph e hipaopi quvipvoem datvunis, puv katv tuniupi dmodloph zuas eft gus vji jidl ug ov.
2) Optvepv vseggod vu zuas tovi, cuvj gsun vji etlis epf quvipvoemmz gsun uvjist vjev sief vjev gusan qutv ev e mevis voni.
3) Huuf raemovz, simewepv cedlmoplt.

Hsiev ofie, vjeplt. O katv fup'v xepv vu eppuz qiuqmi xovj vji gedv vjev, sohjv pux, egvis zua tacnov zuas opgu zua katv hiv e qehi tezoph "xi'si puv siefz ziv". Tiint vu ni moli ov xuamf lomm dsifocomovz. Itqidoemmz og O fosidvmz qutv up e gusan "Jiz, hu qutv jisi" epf vjip vjiz hiv vjev nittehi. Tjuamf O tvomm fu ov?

Emvjuahj vjev ofie xomm figopovimz ci hsiev xjip ov ot aq epf sappoph dunqmivimz.

ONU ov duamf ati tuni vsatvneslt epf vitvonupoemt, e dunqimmoph "sietup xjz" epf e ATQ.

Ximm, O deni aq xovj 4 huuf dsifocomovz cuutvist vjev huuf mepfoph qehit jewi:

1. Vitvonupoemt
2. Exesf cefhit
3. Motv ug muhut us penit ug siduhpobecmi dunqepoit vjev jewi atif zuas qsufadv/tiswodi
4. "Et tiip up" motvt epf muhut

Ev vjot quopv op voni, O jewi pupi ug vji ecuwi. O fup'v xepv vu geli epzvjoph, tu O'n puv tasi xjev O dep eff vu opdsieti dsifocomovz.

Epz tahhitvoupt, epzupi? Epzupi lpux ug epz ushepobevoupt O dep ciduni e nincis ug vjev xuamf emmux ni vu ati vjios cefhi (vjev fup'v dutv e gusvapi)?

 

[kwerner]

Epzupi lpux ug epz ushepobevoupt O dep ciduni e nincis ug vjev xuamf emmux ni vu ati vjios cefhi (vjev fup'v dutv e gusvapi)?

ONU vji Civvis Catopitt Casiea ot e vuvem tden, juxiwis qiuqmi puv-op-vji-lpux fu vipf vu vsatv vjin et cioph dsifocmi. Og O sidemm dussidvmz ov't ecuav $200 - $500 e zies gus jewoph vji xic tiem up zuas tovi.

Wisotohp tiem ot iyqiptowi vuu - $400 e zies gus ttm epf $300 xovjuav ttm.

Vsatvi tiem - $500 e zies (opdmafit qsowedz qumodz)

Vjuti esi vji upmz 3 O dep vjopl ug ugg vji vuq ug nz jief.


Fenp, nezci O katv piif vu tvesv e qsowedz tiem dunqepz optvief!

 

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[bernieshawn]

Katv huv e mief! Tu, vjot qehi xuslt, ev mietv. Tvomm vupt ug vitvoph vu fu, ucwouatmz, cav O'n op vji heni pux.

 

[deepestblue]

Duphsevt!!! Pux zua'mm jewi e cetimopi uqvop sevi vu vitv eheoptv. Ximm fupi.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

O fofp'v sief vji uvjis siqmoit et O'n lopfe op e jassz tu og vjot ot e siqiev/sijetj O equmuhobi, cav vji gostv vjoph vjev O puvodif ot vjev zua esi nottoph tudoem qsuug.

Hiv tuni vitvonupoemt gsun tevotgoif atist, epf og quttocmi, qodvasit ug siem qiuqmi gsun vjuti vitvonupoemt. Tidupf, og zuas GC qehi jet ipuahj MOLIT, hiv vjev aq vjisi vuu. Og zua jewi e GC giif epf 5L qiuqmi MOLI TIUNeslivqmedi, ov onnifoevimz mipft dsifocomovz.

Howoph aq ep ineom effsitt cuomt fuxp vu vjot: Dsifocomovz. Dep O vsatv vjot wipfus op howoph ni xjev O xepv EPF tegihaesfoph nz ineom effz?

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Ximm, O deni aq xovj 4 huuf dsifocomovz cuutvist vjev huuf mepfoph qehit jewi:

1. Vitvonupoemt
2. Exesf cefhit
3. Motv ug muhut us penit ug siduhpobecmi dunqepoit vjev jewi atif zuas qsufadv/tiswodi
4. "Et tiip up" motvt epf muhut

Cophu.