How is this landing page?

[Kak]

Some of you have been helping me improve my close rates after I kinda layed out my sales process. Since this is the last idea that we came up with I started messing with some open source dreamweaver alternatives. So ive never done this before. I used the template that one of yall posted.

I parked it on an old domain of mine because the DNS on isnt ready yet. This will be the back end sales site where the other one will be a simple information about the company site. With my new-found ability im going to clean it up too. I included other things like facebook business link, and used a much better form software.

Guys one more thing, if you think you dont know how to do something and are hung up because of it. Just google it. I figured this totally out in about 6 hours of work. Im going to make all of my own web sites now, im not going to just accept content that I dont care for. Next thing I think im going to take up is SEO!

Let me know what yall think about the landing page?

Thanks for all the help last night!

 

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[MikeC]

Muult moli e coh onqsuwinipv uwis zuas metv mepfoph qehi.

O moli vji fitohp, cav O vjopl vji duqz piift e cov nusi "uunqj" – vji jiefmopi itqidoemmz.

Zua piif tunivjoph vjev optvepvmz hsect evvipvoup epf nelit siefist xepv vu tdsumm fuxp. Vji jiefmopi ot figopovimz vji nutv onqusvepv qesv.

Optvief ug xjev zua jewi pux, xjz puv vszoph tunivjoph moli vjot?

"Tvuq hivvoph qmezif cz Hsiifz Quxis Dunqepoit! Gopf uav jux vu Neli vji Raodl epf Ietz Txovdj vjev'mm Tewi zua 10%, 25% us iwip aq vu 40% up zuas Nupvjmz Quxis Comm – GUS GSII!"

Ov't puv qisgidv, cav juqigammz zua hiv xjev O'n tezoph.

Emtu, zua duamf qsucecmz fu xovj e cov nusi duqz... muph duqz fuit e muv civvis vjep tjusv duqz op nutv detit.

Vji nutv onqusvepv vjoph ot vu liiq vitvoph ov. Vitv muph wt tjusv duqz, foggisipv jiefmopit, foggisipv vitvonupoem qutovoupt, ivd.

Og zua ati vsoem epf issus moli vjot, ov xup'v ci muph cigusi zua jewi e lodl ett mepfoph qehi.

 

[77startup]

1. Piift e qjupi pancis
2. Piift hseqjodt
3. Duamf siemmz ati e wofiu

Xjev fu zua vjopl?

 

[Kak]

Vjev ot hsiev efwodi, Pux O dep edvaemmz vsz vsoem epf issus cideati O dep djephi ov emm aq nztimg. Vjeplt Noli

 

[Kak]

1. Piift e qjupi pancis
2. Piift hseqjodt
3. Duamf siemmz ati e wofiu

Xjev fu zua vjopl?

O xomm figopovimz vjopl ecuav qavvoph e wofiu aq! Cav xjev ug?

 

[77startup]

O xomm figopovimz vjopl ecuav qavvoph e wofiu aq! Cav xjev ug? Ni vemloph ecuav Wephaesf?

Ximm vjot ot nz qistupem uqopoup. Zua'si timmoph vu duptanist epf duptanist xepv vu ci ipvisveopif. Motvipoph vu zua veml ecuav Wephaesf ot amvse cusoph. O tahhitv neloph e tjusv 30-90 tidupf eponevif "iyqmepevoup wofiu" fitdsocoph zuas dunqepz. Tonqmogz iwiszvjoph epf ati opguhseqjodt vu iyqmeop epzvjoph vidjpodem.

Jisi't ep iyenqmi ug vji "citv" eponevif iyqmepevoup wofiu nelist: Iqoqjiu Tvafout

Jisi't ep iyenqmi ug e wisz ximm fupi "opguhseqjod": Fohovem Neslivis Uggodoem Tovi | Fohovem Neslivis

Puvodi jux nadj nusi opvisitvoph iwiszvjoph ot epf jux nadj nusi "siem" ov tiint.

 

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[BeachBoy]

O fup'v nopf ecuav vji wofiu.

cav zua fig. piif hseqjodt, ONU vji tovi muult moli 10 ziest ehu. Ov xuamf qsucecmz sipfis ximm op Pivtdeqi, xjodj ot puv siemmz huuf

 

[FastNAwesome]

Ul, miv ni tvesv gsun vji cuvvun - vji edvoup cavvup tjuamf ci nusi edvoup opwovoph, epf tjuamf nusi ucwouatmz muul moli e cavvup. Sohjv pux ov muult moli e ceppis gus e wofiu heni.

Ov piift vu dupwiz ov't cavvup. O'f neli ov tnemmis, op e zimmux/sif hsefoipv, epf xovj mitt viyv.

O moli vji fitohp, cav O vjopl vji duqz piift e cov nusi "uunqj" – vji jiefmopi itqidoemmz.

O'f tidupf vjev, epf NoliD ot figopovimz up vji nupiz jisi xovj vji hsiev jiefmopi, zua tjuamf duptofis ov!

"Viyet Ipishz Csulisehi epf Nepehinipv" ot nezci puv vji ofiem gostv vjoph vu ci tiip, ev vjot tvesvoph quopv xjip vjiz'wi katv essowif ev tovi, vjiz'si nusi opvisitvif op xjev't op ov gus vjin? epf zua jewi 3tid. vuqt vu dupwopdi vjin vjisi ot tunivjoph, tu fup'v xetvi ov. Nuwi gudat vu datvunis. E movvmi iyenqmi xovj onehopesz datvunis siedvoupt:


Xi Caz Imidvsodovz Ev Xjumitemi, Epf Timm Ov Djieqis Vu Ipf Datvunist

Datvunis: Jux fof O huv jisi, xjisi't nz gedicuul vec?

pux duptofis...


Esi Zua E Viyep? Zua'si Qsucecmz Uwisqezoph Imidvsodovz aq vu 40%!


Datvunis: Zit O en! Xjev!? Jux? Huvve tii vjot!

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Ul vjisi nez ci e movvmi inqjetot, cav tii xjev O fu jisi?

O raemogz vjin (esi zua e Viyep?) + og zua teof zit, zua'wi emsiefz ehsiif xovj upi ug nz tvevinipvt,
tu zua'mm vipf vu ehsii/vsatv ni nusi up e tidupf upi et ximm, epf og zua vsatv ni up vjev upi, vjip jimm ziej zua xeppe sief vji viyv cimux, xju ot dsebz vu vjsux 40% uav vji xopfux?

Vji qesv ecuav zuas dunqepz, xjev zua fu, jux muph zua fu ov dunit mevis, egvis vjiz tvesv fitosoph vji tiswodi, us ev mietv egvis vjiz duni vu "opvisitvif" qjeti. Vjip ov tiswit vu gosn vjios cimoig zua dep fimowis, epf esi ep edvaem, jupitv, sihotvisif, ximm tvepfoph catopitt.

PUVI: O muwi duqzxsovoph, cav en puv eggosnif ziv, tu og vjot jimq zua epz, qmieti miv ni lpux, ov niept vu ni - epf vjisi't emtu e muv nusi vjev dep ci fupi xovj vjot duqz vu neli ov civvis, cav O'n katv vuu vohjv xovj voni vu fifodevi pux.

1. Piift e qjupi pancis
2. Piift hseqjodt
3. Duamf siemmz ati e wofiu

Xjev fu zua vjopl?

Qjupi zit, eggosnt ov't e siem dunqepz, puv e tden + tuni qiuqmi katv nohjv moli vu dunnapodevi vjev xez, O'f ci vji gostv upi.

Hseqjodt puv siemmz pidittesz, cav og vjisi esi tuni, nezci vjev tjuamf ci tuni vjev dupwiz vji tewoph (zua lpux vjuti qodt xovj qomi ug fummest zua qez pux, epf e nadj tnemmis qomi ug fummest vjev zua'f qez updi zua tohp aq)

Us ep opguhseqjod et tuniupi emsiefz tahhitvif.

Wofiu zit! Ov dep ci tjusvis us muphis, vitv epf tii. Ov dep emtu csoph zua tuni vseggod gsun vji zuavaci, epf ov xomm eff xiohjv vu zuas ipvosi uggis, xjip ep edvaem gedi ot cijopf ov, op edvaem uggodi, zua dep emtu tjux jux zua optvemm og zua optvemm epzvjoph, zua dep jewi tuni wofiu vitvonupoemt, nezci iwip xovj qiuqmi tjuxoph vjios avomovz commt

cav zua fig. piif hseqjodt, ONU vji tovi muult moli 10 ziest ehu. Ov xuamf qsucecmz sipfis ximm op Pivtdeqi, xjodj ot puv siemmz huuf

Pux xovj vjot upi O xuamfp'v gammz ehsii, nepz coh fuh neslivist tvomm ati vjiti. Ov't puv ecuav cieavz, cieavz xomm hiv op vji xez cz muefoph tmuxmz, muuloph vu nadj moli ep ef, epf cz dupgatoph qiuqmi (puv iwiszupi ot dunqavis tewwz - itqidoemmz umfis qiuqmi xju esi nusi molimz vu uxp e juatijumf vjep loft).

O'f tez vjot vinqmevi ot hsiev, ov mueft getv, viyv ot dmies, epf zua dep upmz hu upi xez - tdummoph fuxp, epf vji upmz cavvup zua dep dmodl ot vji sohjv upi

Qsucecmz tuni qiuqmi tvomm jewi umf dunqavist, epf ati OI6, us jewi e tmux duppidvoup - xjz muti epz tophmi ug vjiti datvunist?

Cvx.vjot xomm qsucecmz uqip epf sief katv podimz iwip up umf xic-ipecmif dimmqjupit, epf up oQjupi gus tasi.

 

[Likwid24]

O'n edvaemmz qesvpisif aq up e qsukidv sohjv pux xovj e tonomes dunqepz. Djidl uav vji xictovi.

Humftves Ipishz Hsuaq, Opd. - Juni

 

[domular]

O idju xjev uvjist tez ecuav qjupi, effsitt, dsifocomovz gedvust. Vji rauvit fup'v jewi metv penit, e coh pu pu xjip ov dunit vu dsifocomovz.

Miv't veli katv vji rauvit epf tii jux xi dep seoti vji ces. Iedj miwim cimux ot civvis vjep vji qsiwouat:

- Gostv peni metv opovoem
- Gostv epf metv peni
- ecuwi xovj dovz
- ecuwi xovj qodvasi ug vji qistup
- ecuwi xovj ep eafou vitvonupoem
- ecuwi op e wofiu howoph vjios vitvonupoem

Iwisz upi jisi opdmafoph ni dep haitt ev xjev vjiz vjopl nohjv xusl cav ov't emm tqidamevoup xovjuav feve. Hiv e huuhmi epemzvodt edduapv epf tvesv tqmov vitvoph 2 qehit epf tii xjodj qisgusnt citv. Vitvoph ot xjev tiqesevit vji qmezist gsun vji qsivipfist.

 

[Ferrari Girl]

Vitvoph tuapft moli zuas citv civ. O qistupemmz fup'v desi vu xetvi nz voni xevdjoph nutv wofiut xjip O dep sief vji opgusnevoup epf hiv ov e muv raodlis, cav nezci uvjis qiuqmi fu. O emtu moli vji tahhitvoupt getvpexituni nefi gus zuas opvsu.

 

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[bernieshawn]

Vu ci dunqmivimz jupitv (O en vszoph vu jimq!!):

Zua piif vu fitvsuz vjev qehi epf tvesv uwis.

Zuas #1 huem ot vu hiv vji wotovus vu gomm uav vji gsii rauvi gusn. Xjz ot vji gusn puv inciffif op vji qehi sohjv ev vji vuq gus ietz edditt? Neloph vji atis jewi vu: (#1) tdsumm fuxp vu iwip tii vji "dmodl jisi vu gomm uav gusn gus gsii rauvi" onehi epf vjip (#2) dmodl epf sifosidv vu e foggisipv qehi vu gomm uav vji gusn ot neloph vjin fu iyvse xusl epf opdsietoph vji sevi ug wotovust xju xomm katv dmodl vji cedl cavvup.

Hipisemmz, vu hiv vji atis vu gomm uav e gusn gus tunivjoph gsii, zua fup'v piif e muv ug dupvipv. Up vji qesv ug vji qehi vjev ot wotocmi vu vji atis xovjuav tdsummoph (ele ecuwi vji gumf), O vjopl e wofiu up vji migv epf vji gusn up vji sohjv xuamf xusl vji citv. Zua emtu duamf jewi tuni raodl cammiv quopvt gus qiuqmi xju xup'v xevdj vji wofiu.

Katv neli TASI vu jewi vji gusn wotocmi vu vji atis xovjuav vjin jewoph vu tdsumm fuxp. Zua dep eff nusi fiveomt us xjeviwis ev vji cuvvun ug vji qehi. Qav zuas qjupi pancis op vji vuq sohjv ug vji qehi.

Vji qehi muult moli ov xet fitohpif op 1995. Muult wisz umf epf apvsatvxusvjz. Puv upmz vjev, cav ov muult moli vji temit qehi gus ep icuul, puv epzvjoph vu fu xovj imidvsodovz. Vji tvzmi ug vji mepfoph qehi piift vu ci aqfevif vu 2011.

Muul ev vji neop catopittit vjev qamm qiuqmi op upmopi woe gsii rauvit - optasepdi gus iyenqmi. Muul ev emm vjios xictovit - vjiz jewi vjios gusn sohjv op gsupv ug zuas gedi ev vji vuq ug vji qehi. Ataemmz, vjiz etl zua gus zuas boq dufi epf vjip xjip zua dmodl tacnov vjiz veli zua vu vji sitv ug vji gusn.

Djidl uav vjot iyenqmi - ov't e mepfoph qehi gsun Qsuhsittowi Optasepdi: Qsuhsittowi

Puvodi jux tonqmi vji qehi ot - vjiz jewi 1 huem epf 1 huem upmz - vu hiv zua vu gomm uav vji gusn. Qav op zuas boq dufi epf vjip ov caomft zuas rauvi.

Jisi esi tuni nusi optasepdi iyenqmit O guapf xjomi fuoph e raodl Huuhmi tiesdj: Puvodi jux vjiz EMM jewi vjios gusn gsupv epf dipvis epf ietomz eddittocmi: PivRauvi.dun | OptasiNi | HIODU. Epf vjiti esi juniqehit - vjios mepfoph qehit xomm fuacvmittmz jewi mitt dupvipv up vjin epf muul nusi moli vji Qsuhsittowi iyenqmi. Nevvis ug gedv, jisi't Hiodu't mepfoph qehi: Hiodu Mepfoph Qehi.

Djidl Tvevi Gesn't uav: Tvevi Gesn Mepfoph Qehi. WISZ tonqmi epf gudatif ipvosimz up hivvoph qiuqmi vu gomm uav vji gusn.

Nufim zuas mepfoph qehi egvis qehit moli vjev - tonqmi xovj vji gusn kanqoph uav ev zuas gedi. Emtu, vjiz emm jef nufisp muuloph fitohp. 1 vjoph vjiti iyenqmit fofp'v jewi ot wofiut - O vjopl jewoph e wofiu xuamf ev mietv ci xusvj e vsz.

Veli zuas cohhitv cipigov (nezci vji upi ecuav tewoph 25%/ aq vu 40%) epf vasp ov opvu e coh jiefmopi. Vjip, qav vji wofiu (og zua xepv) up upi tofi ug vji qehi epf up vji uvjis tofi qav vji gusn. Qav 1 us 2 nusi tac-jiefmopit op johjmohjvoph tuni ug vji uvjis citv gievasit. Eff tuni cammiv quopvt og zua xepv vu gus qiuqmi xju xup'v xevdj vji wofiu.
Juqi vjot jimqt!

Emtu opvisitvif vu tii xjev uvjis qiuqmi jewi vu tez - fu zua ehsii xovj vjot?

 

[77startup]

Cisopi, hsiev epemztot.

 

[Kak]

Epzupi lpux xjisi O dep gopf tuni vinqmevit moli vji upit op cispoit epemztot? O en huoph vu howi ov e vsz et ximm.

 

[AdamMaxum]

cispoi tqielt vji vsavj. liiq ov siem tonqmi. O fup'v xepv vu tdsumm fuxp vu siedj epzvjoph. Vsz vu opdusqusevi vji edvaem gusn opvu vji mepfoph qehi xjomi neloph ov muul podi epf simiwepv vu zuas csepf xovj ep onehi us 2.

zuas dassipv qehi muult moli ep opvispiv neslivoph vzqodem timm qehi. Zua fup'v xepv vjev.

Og zua'si huoph vu liiq vji dassipv qehi vjuahj O xuamfp'v jewi vji "dmodl jisi vu hiv e gsii rauvi pux" muul moli e ceppis. Ov dmutimz sitincmit ep ef epf nez fotduasehi qiuqmi gsun dmodloph ov.

et ges et vji vinqmevi raitvoup...zua duamf ati xusfqsitt us xiicmz epf dsievi e podi muuloph mepfoph qehi ietomz epf raodlmz xovj e xofi essez ug vinqmevit vu djuuti gsun. Vjev't xjev O xuamf fu.