How good is my landing page?

[Epynok]

Landing Page

@MaximOntheRoad helped me to get 10% CTR. However, the LP was shit, zero sales with 50 clicks.

Then, I did some changes. Now, I'm trying to use the following framework:

1. Promise
2. Proof
3. Contest the objection (I could not think of this one yet tho)
4. Offer

What do you think?

Try making a very aggressive and irresistible offer and focus only on that throughout the page.

 

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[happybhoy]

So how did it convert? Landing pages can be endlessly critiqued, the true measure is what the market thinks.

 

[Andy Black]

Thanks for more feedback again, folks

Here's the Landing Page V2. Not so shitty anymore, I implemented lots of feedbacks.

Still have to do some stuff tho:

• I will change domain so there's no portuguese on the bottom right
• Will apply Privacy Policy & Terms of Service as well
• Restate the offer if I can't put the cart on the LP

I will test it and iterate using content here and the book that @Johnny boy mentioned.

Thanks again everyone!

Screenshot(s)?

 

[Lou7]

@Andy Black

 

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