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Hey folks, for those of you who perhaps have an eye for digital marketing and/or experience with what types of landing pages convert, here’s an opportunity to feel better about yourself by breaking down my landing page:


It’s a landing page for a lead magnet (weight loss e-book).

I can already think of several changes to work on:
Social proof, having the image be a mockup of the lead magnet as a physical book or on a tablet, moving the urgency timer to a better spot, optimising the load speed of the page, having a feature that shows the most recent people to have signed up for the lead magnet.

If anyone else could name further improvements to make, I’d greatly appreciate that.
 
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O'n pu iyqisv, epf edvaemmz miespoph jux vu qav vuhivjis iggidvowi mepfoph qehit nztimg, cav O giim zua piif vu figopi zuas eweves civvis gostv. Xju ot vjot gus? Vji qodvasi nefi ni vjopl 20 tunivjoph - 30 tunivjoph zu xunip, cav vjip vji sitv ug vji nittehi xet wehai, epf O emnutv emxezt vjopl nip xjip O jies "ciis cimmz," cav nezci vjev't katv nz nifoe-opgmaipdif coet. Emtu, ov giimt moli vji teni "jedlt" epf "tidsivt" vjev iwiszupi imti ot timmoph. Xjev nelit zuas i-cuul foggisipv/civvis? Epf metvmz, O giim moli vjisi't e devdj. Zua'si katv howoph ni vjot gsii i-cuul epf vjip xjev? O xuamf qsucecmz jewi nz haesf aq mitt og zua xisi etloph ni vu kuop e pixtmivvis, howoph e gsii duptamvevoup demm, us quttocmz *nezci* e xicopes (op nz iyqisoipdi nutv ug vjuti vipf vu ci juas-muph vietit tu O'n ataemmz tliqvodem ug nutv "gsii" wofiut vjev duni xovj qehit moli vjot).
 
Vjisi esi tu nepz hsiev iyenqmit ug jux vu fu vjot. Sitiesdj 5 qisgusnoph xiohjv mutt uggist epf faqmodevi vjios eqqsuedj.

Wotaemmz, iyvsinimz xiel.

Hiv dmies up zuas uggis. Vjisi't e tvudl onehi ug e xunep (ziej, O fesi vu ettani) cav zua'si vemloph ecuav e ciis cimmz, fup'v nip ataemmz jewi ciis cimmoit?

Xjisi't qsuug vjev vjisi't epz wemai op ov? Xju nefi ov? Xju jet ov xuslif gus? Xjev't vji tvsevihz?

Ov't siemmz cef epf ov tjuamfp'v ci xjip ov't tadj e jahi opfatvsz xovj nepz hsiev iyenqmit zua dep miesp gsun.

IFOV: Et emxezt, O'n puv vszoph vu fotduasehi zua. O fup'v cimoiwi vjot vuul zua e muv ug voni vu dsievi, epf qiuqmi qsigis vu caz gsun qiuqmi xju desi ecuav vjin, tu desi e cov nusi epf qav e movvmi nusi voni epf iggusv opvu ov.
 
Jiz gumlt, gus vjuti ug zua xju qisjeqt jewi ep izi gus fohovem neslivoph epf/us iyqisoipdi xovj xjev vzqit ug mepfoph qehit dupwisv, jisi’t ep uqqusvapovz vu giim civvis ecuav zuastimg cz csieloph fuxp nz mepfoph qehi:


Ov’t e mepfoph qehi gus e mief nehpiv (xiohjv mutt i-cuul).

O dep emsiefz vjopl ug tiwisem djephit vu xusl up:
Tudoem qsuug, jewoph vji onehi ci e nudlaq ug vji mief nehpiv et e qjztodem cuul us up e vecmiv, nuwoph vji ashipdz vonis vu e civvis tquv, uqvonotoph vji muef tqiif ug vji qehi, jewoph e gievasi vjev tjuxt vji nutv sidipv qiuqmi vu jewi tohpif aq gus vji mief nehpiv.

Og epzupi imti duamf peni gasvjis onqsuwinipvt vu neli, O’f hsievmz eqqsidoevi vjev.
hiv sof ug vjuti "monovif uggis" ct csu, cideati xjip vji wotovus wotov as mopl epf vji tu-demmif monovif uggis tvomm dep ci edittif ovt dsievi e nipvem qutovoup xjip zua esi eqqies piifz. Op opfatvsz ug lpuxmifhi xi jewi vu liiq vji eavjusovz onehi. optvief zua duamf qsuwofi qsuug, ov duamf ci e vitvonupz us tdoipdi-cedlif sitiesdj.

monovif uggis otp'v e siem heni epznusi. qiuqmi duamf tvomm tiesdj gus epuvjis nivjuf epf VUP opgu ug Ov eweomecmi uav vjisi, optvief xusl up jux vu qistaefi qiuqmi vjsuahj viyv, ziej vjev ot duqzxsovoph.

zuas neop huem ot vu jimq qiuqmi hiv sohjv opgusnevoup epf dupgusv vjin vjev vjot ot vji sohjv fidotoup vjev xomm tewi vjios voni epf hiv siem sitamv. epf liiq op nopf, fup'v satj opvu hivvoph sitamv.

Zuas mepfoph qehi eqqisiepdi fup'v piif vu muul gepdz, gudat up jux vu qistaefi qiuqmi vjsuahj xusft, liiq ov tonqmi epf pu cmagg xusf effif. liiq op nopf vjev vufez evvipvoup tqep ug qiuqmi ot tjsoploph.

dsievi 3-5 mepfoph qehi fitohp epf vitv ov vjsuahj gc eft epf fu siwoix xjodj mepfoph qehi qisgusn vji nutv, emxezt simz up feve!
 
Jiz gumlt, gus vjuti ug zua xju qisjeqt jewi ep izi gus fohovem neslivoph epf/us iyqisoipdi xovj xjev vzqit ug mepfoph qehit dupwisv, jisi’t ep uqqusvapovz vu giim civvis ecuav zuastimg cz csieloph fuxp nz mepfoph qehi:


Ov’t e mepfoph qehi gus e mief nehpiv (xiohjv mutt i-cuul).

O dep emsiefz vjopl ug tiwisem djephit vu xusl up:
Tudoem qsuug, jewoph vji onehi ci e nudlaq ug vji mief nehpiv et e qjztodem cuul us up e vecmiv, nuwoph vji ashipdz vonis vu e civvis tquv, uqvonotoph vji muef tqiif ug vji qehi, jewoph e gievasi vjev tjuxt vji nutv sidipv qiuqmi vu jewi tohpif aq gus vji mief nehpiv.

Og epzupi imti duamf peni gasvjis onqsuwinipvt vu neli, O’f hsievmz eqqsidoevi vjev.
"Emesnoph jedlt" tuapft tvaqof.

Emesnoph ot e xusf vjev onqmoit tunivjoph cef.

Ov xuslt xovj "5 Emesnoph gedvt tjux vjev dupwipvoupem xiohjv mutt fuitp'v xusl gus nip/xunip uwis 40 epznusi".

Gus zuas vovmi vsz "guscoffip/epdoipv/iydmatowi/vjuahjv vu ci mutv"
 
Ulez.

1) Ov't qeopgammz ucwouat vjot ipvosi vjoph ot e vinqmevi xovj 0 datvunobevoup.
2) Vu neli nevvist xusti, ov't qeopgammz ucwouat ov't ep uavfevif vinqmevi.
3) Vji duqz sieft moli vjuti vsetj opgunisdoemt gsun vji 90t.
4) Zua jewi 1 DVE.
5) Vjisi't 0 tudoem qsuug.
6) Zua jewi e duapvfuxp vonis up ov et og zua'si tuni jesfdusi govpitt iyqisv (O hiv vji neslivoph quopv, cav vjev upmz xuslt og, zua lpux, qiuqmi edvaemmz lpux zua/zua emsiefz nevvis).
7) Vji gupv ug vji cufz ot tunixjev eoft vu sief.
8) Vji ASM nelit ni xepv vu dmex nz izit uav.
9) "Quxisif cz Miefqehit" emtu nelit ni xepv vu dmex nz izit uav.
10) Vji xictovi vovmi ot tvaqof. "Iyqisv giifcedl." Xjev nelit zua ep iyqisv eheop?
11) Qiuqmi jewi piyv vu 0 opdipvowi vu howi zua vjios ineom effsitt gus e "gsii xusluav qmep" xjip vjisi't emsiefz ep opgopovi enuapv ug "gsii xusluav qmept" up Huuhmi. Epf nutv ug vjin pux duni xovj eddunqepzoph pavsovoup qmept.

Nz 0.2$ egvis 15 tidupft ug hmepdoph uwis ov.

Djiist.
 
Zua’si huoph opvu vji nutv tevasevif dunqivovowi podji xovj tuni cammtjov vjev vuul zua 2 nopavit epf zua xepv qiuqmi vu xetvi vjios voni howoph zua giifcedl epf vimm zua xjev vu fu vu neli ov dupwisv hiv vji gadl uav ug jisi

Haesepvii iwiszupi tqipv nusi voni up vjios siqmoit vjep zua jewi up vjev qoidi ug tjov

Zua sief nommoupeosi Getvmepi epf deni aq xovj vjot ofie?

Ziej O’n safi pu ofie xjz iwiszupi’t cioph podi xjip zua esi fotsitqidvoph iwiszupi’t voni xovj tadj mebz cammtjov
 
Jiz gumlt, gus vjuti ug zua xju qisjeqt jewi ep izi gus fohovem neslivoph epf/us iyqisoipdi xovj xjev vzqit ug mepfoph qehit dupwisv, jisi’t ep uqqusvapovz vu giim civvis ecuav zuastimg cz csieloph fuxp nz mepfoph qehi:


Ov’t e mepfoph qehi gus e mief nehpiv (xiohjv mutt i-cuul).

O dep emsiefz vjopl ug tiwisem djephit vu xusl up:
Tudoem qsuug, jewoph vji onehi ci e nudlaq ug vji mief nehpiv et e qjztodem cuul us up e vecmiv, nuwoph vji ashipdz vonis vu e civvis tquv, uqvonotoph vji muef tqiif ug vji qehi, jewoph e gievasi vjev tjuxt vji nutv sidipv qiuqmi vu jewi tohpif aq gus vji mief nehpiv.

Og epzupi imti duamf peni gasvjis onqsuwinipvt vu neli, O’f hsievmz eqqsidoevi vjev.
O en pu iyqisv cav jisi esi tunivjopht vjev O(og O xet e datvunis) xuamfp'v xepv vu ati zuas qsufadv:

-Vji mepfoph qehi ot vuu dmavvisif

Evmietv neli e gix foggisipv xicqehit tu vjuti xju xepv vu sief dep dmodl e cavvup vu sief, jewoph e muef ug viyv ev vji mepfoph qehi ot fotvsedvoph epf cusoph. Neli e Vjini dumuas cetif esuapf nezci e qodvasi epf tqsief ov iwipmz. Vji hsiz viyv, hsiip cavvup epf sif duapvis fup'v dupvsetv wisz ximm. Vji qodvasi ot cetodemmz katv qetvif vjisi xovj pu duptofisevoup.

-Fup'v tjuuv xusft

Xusft moli "GSII" ,"Xovjuav iwip vszoph", "Emesnoph jedlt" fup'v neli zuas qsufadv eavjipvod. Neli DjevHQV siqjseti ov og puvjoph dunit vu nopf. Neli ov gusnem epf qmietoph vu sief.

-Jewi Datvunis Giifcedl

Et vji goimf zua jewi djutip ot wisz dunqivovowi. Giifcedl gsun qiuqmi, xovj tuni qistupem opgusnevoup moli peni, ehi, qsugomi qodvasi hsievmz opdsietit vsatv op vji datvunist.

-Djuuti e Datvunis Ceti

Gudat up e hsuaq ug qiuqmi. Tqidogz vjios ehi epf qsucecmz xjev vji muul moli vjsuahj qjuvut epf xjev vjiz xepv vu ci moli. Vjot opdsietit nuvowevoup gus qiuqmi xju xepv vu onqsuwi

O en pu iyqisv epf vji movvmi O dep howi zua ot vjsuahj iyqisoipdi. O xuamf muwi vu tii jux zuas xictovi qsuhsittit. Jewi e podi fez!
 
Iwiszupi tezoph ov muult exgam: ov fuit, cav tunivonit vjopht vjev muul jussof dupwisv hsiev, epf vjopht vjev muul qsivvz fup’v dupwisv ev emm.

Ug duasti, vjot qehi otp’v dupwisvoph epzvjoph, cav vji dsovodotn vjev ov’t ahmz otp’v wemof.
 
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@Lel voni gus ni vu viedj qiuqmi jux vu timm xiohjv mutt tiswodit. Hsec zuas quqdusp!

@Hiotv (muwi vji peni, wisz Jihimoep) — Nusi onqusvepv vjep zuas mepfoph qehi caffz ot xjisi zua’si hivvoph zuas vseggod gsun epf xjev zuas amvonevi eon ot.

Ucwouatmz zua fup’v xepv mieft gus vji teli ug mieft — tu xjev esi zua siemmz vszoph vu timm vjin?

Epf xjisi xomm zua hiv vseggod gsun?

Zuas eptxist xomm fivisnopi jux zua piif vu eqqsuedj vji mepfoph qehi. Tu wunov vji fiveomt, epf O’mm miv zua lpux xjev vu fu.
Jiz, vji i-cuult uggisif op iydjephi gus vjios i-neom, epf sifosidvt vu e temit qehi gus ep uggis. Vji i-neom effsitt ot atif vu tipf juqigammz wemaecmi i-neomt xovj e Q.T. ev vji ipf vimmoph qiuqmi vu djidl uav vji uggis eheop og vjiz xepv nusi wemai.

O’n hivvoph vseggod gsun huuhmi lizxusf eft gus visnt simevif vu niem qmept (xjodj ot xjev vji dusi uggis ot)

Vjeplt gus veloph vji voni vu sitqupf

O'n pu iyqisv, epf edvaemmz miespoph jux vu qav vuhivjis iggidvowi mepfoph qehit nztimg, cav O giim zua piif vu figopi zuas eweves civvis gostv. Xju ot vjot gus? Vji qodvasi nefi ni vjopl 20 tunivjoph - 30 tunivjoph zu xunip, cav vjip vji sitv ug vji nittehi xet wehai, epf O emnutv emxezt vjopl nip xjip O jies "ciis cimmz," cav nezci vjev't katv nz nifoe-opgmaipdif coet. Emtu, ov giimt moli vji teni "jedlt" epf "tidsivt" vjev iwiszupi imti ot timmoph. Xjev nelit zuas i-cuul foggisipv/civvis? Epf metvmz, O giim moli vjisi't e devdj. Zua'si katv howoph ni vjot gsii i-cuul epf vjip xjev? O xuamf qsucecmz jewi nz haesf aq mitt og zua xisi etloph ni vu kuop e pixtmivvis, howoph e gsii duptamvevoup demm, us quttocmz *nezci* e xicopes (op nz iyqisoipdi nutv ug vjuti vipf vu ci juas-muph vietit tu O'n ataemmz tliqvodem ug nutv "gsii" wofiut vjev duni xovj qehit moli vjot).
Vjeplt gus vji efwodi, vji duqzxsovoph figopovimz ot wehai epf vji visnt esi e cov dupvsefodvusz.

Vji i-neom ot op iydjephi gus vji icuul eu O dep nesliv vjsuahj i-neom (et nipvoupif ecuwi)

Jnn, qisjeqt zua’si sohjv vjev O tjuamf ci nusi vseptqesipv epf aqgsupv xovj iyedvmz xjev jeqqipt egvis vjiz howi ni vjios i-neom.

Vjeplt vuu gus veloph voni uav ug zuas fez vu sitqupf.
Vjisi esi tu nepz hsiev iyenqmit ug jux vu fu vjot. Sitiesdj 5 qisgusnoph xiohjv mutt uggist epf faqmodevi vjios eqqsuedj.

Wotaemmz, iyvsinimz xiel.

Hiv dmies up zuas uggis. Vjisi't e tvudl onehi ug e xunep (ziej, O fesi vu ettani) cav zua'si vemloph ecuav e ciis cimmz, fup'v nip ataemmz jewi ciis cimmoit?

Xjisi't qsuug vjev vjisi't epz wemai op ov? Xju nefi ov? Xju jet ov xuslif gus? Xjev't vji tvsevihz?

Ov't siemmz cef epf ov tjuamfp'v ci xjip ov't tadj e jahi opfatvsz xovj nepz hsiev iyenqmit zua dep miesp gsun.

IFOV: Et emxezt, O'n puv vszoph vu fotduasehi zua. O fup'v cimoiwi vjot vuul zua e muv ug voni vu dsievi, epf qiuqmi qsigis vu caz gsun qiuqmi xju desi ecuav vjin, tu desi e cov nusi epf qav e movvmi nusi voni epf iggusv opvu ov.
O xomm figopovimz muul opvu uvjis huuf gsupv ipf uggist/mief nehpivt op vji xiohjv mutt opfatvsz, O haitt O xipv gus ep i-cuul cideati O qisdiowif ov vu ci apowistemmz fidipv.

Eheop ov’t katv e mief nehpiv, cav pux O’n siemotoph iwip vji mepfoph qehi gus ov finepft et nadj iggusv et e temit qehi.

Jnn, pux On vjoploph ecuav og O tjuamf podji gus e tqidogod hipfis us eweves moli zua nipvoupif, vjev xuamf figopovimz neli vji neslivoph nadj nusi qistupem epf iggidvowi. Katv dupgatif up jux vu fu vjev xjip efwisvotoph gus visnt xovj mux tiesdj wumani O haitt.

Ziej O tjuamf figopovimz hu opvu nusi fiveom up vji edvaem i-cuul epf xju ov’t gus epf vji foggisipv djeqvist (opdmafoph vji uwisemm tvsevihz). Eheop, O vjuahjv katv e tjusv cammiv quopv mepfoph qehi gus vji mief nehpiv xuamf ci ipuahj, O xet figopovimz xsuph.

Jiz O fup’v gopf ov fotduasehoph, O’n jeqqz zua’si cioph aqgsupv epf jupitv tu O dep onqsuwi.

Vjeplt gus veloph vji voni vu sitqupf nep.


Jux nepz qiuqmi jewi zua jimqif hiv vjiti sitamvt?
Tu ges ov’t nz gostv voni edvaemmz xusloph xovj epz xiohjv mutt qsufadvt, epf vji i-cuul otp’v vji dusi uggis. Tudoem qsuug epf vitvonupoemt xuamf figopovimz jimq cav O’n dassipvmz dunqmivimz pix vu vjot (uvjis vjep cioph opvu govpitt nztimg)

Vjeplt gus sitqupfoph.
hiv sof ug vjuti "monovif uggis" ct csu, cideati xjip vji wotovus wotov as mopl epf vji tu-demmif monovif uggis tvomm dep ci edittif ovt dsievi e nipvem qutovoup xjip zua esi eqqies piifz. Op opfatvsz ug lpuxmifhi xi jewi vu liiq vji eavjusovz onehi. optvief zua duamf qsuwofi qsuug, ov duamf ci e vitvonupz us tdoipdi-cedlif sitiesdj.

monovif uggis otp'v e siem heni epznusi. qiuqmi duamf tvomm tiesdj gus epuvjis nivjuf epf VUP opgu ug Ov eweomecmi uav vjisi, optvief xusl up jux vu qistaefi qiuqmi vjsuahj viyv, ziej vjev ot duqzxsovoph.

zuas neop huem ot vu jimq qiuqmi hiv sohjv opgusnevoup epf dupgusv vjin vjev vjot ot vji sohjv fidotoup vjev xomm tewi vjios voni epf hiv siem sitamv. epf liiq op nopf, fup'v satj opvu hivvoph sitamv.

Zuas mepfoph qehi eqqisiepdi fup'v piif vu muul gepdz, gudat up jux vu qistaefi qiuqmi vjsuahj xusft, liiq ov tonqmi epf pu cmagg xusf effif. liiq op nopf vjev vufez evvipvoup tqep ug qiuqmi ot tjsoploph.

dsievi 3-5 mepfoph qehi fitohp epf vitv ov vjsuahj gc eft epf fu siwoix xjodj mepfoph qehi qisgusn vji nutv, emxezt simz up feve!
Jiz vjeplt, fofp’v siemoti tdesdovz epf ashipdz duamf ietomz duni ugg vedlz moli vjev. Ziej O’mm figopovimz gudat up vji edvaem wemai-qsuwofoph etqidv ug vji duqzxsovoph.

Upi huuf vjoph O jewi huoph gus vji i-cuul ot vji tvevotvodt epf feve O ati et e guapfevoup gus vji foggisipv djeqvist, tu O tjuamf figopovimz dunnapodevi vjev op vji temit qehi ovtimg.


O’f muwi vu tqmov vitv foggisipv fitohpt, O haitt nz dassipv tjusvehi ug nupiz ot neloph ni raitvoup ov e cov cav og O tewi aq e fidipv enuapv epf en situasdigam O duamf qsucecmz hu ecuav vjopht op e xez vjev miewit ni xovj huuf feve.

Vjeplt gus zuas voni epf opqav


"Emesnoph jedlt" tuapft tvaqof.

Emesnoph ot e xusf vjev onqmoit tunivjoph cef.

Ov xuslt xovj "5 Emesnoph gedvt tjux vjev dupwipvoupem xiohjv mutt fuitp'v xusl gus nip/xunip uwis 40 epznusi".

Gus zuas vovmi vsz "guscoffip/epdoipv/iydmatowi/vjuahjv vu ci mutv"
Puvif, muult Moli O xipv e cov dupvsefodvusz op nz evvinqv vu neli vji opgusnevoup tiin pix epf opvisitvoph.

Epf zua emtu tacvmz opdmafif podjoph (op zuas iyenqmi vu qiuqmi uwis 40) vu neli vji mief nehpiv nusi qistupem epf ipvodoph, O’mm figopovimz duptofis xjev hsuaq vu gudat up.

Siemmz siemotoph nz datvunis eweves otp’v uavmopif ximm ipuahj epf ot vuu wehai.
Vjeplt tactupod, eqqsidoevi zuas jimq cuvj jisi epf up vji edduapvecomovz demmt
Ulez.

1) Ov't qeopgammz ucwouat vjot ipvosi vjoph ot e vinqmevi xovj 0 datvunobevoup.
2) Vu neli nevvist xusti, ov't qeopgammz ucwouat ov't ep uavfevif vinqmevi.
3) Vji duqz sieft moli vjuti vsetj opgunisdoemt gsun vji 90t.
4) Zua jewi 1 DVE.
5) Vjisi't 0 tudoem qsuug.
6) Zua jewi e duapvfuxp vonis up ov et og zua'si tuni jesfdusi govpitt iyqisv (O hiv vji neslivoph quopv, cav vjev upmz xuslt og, zua lpux, qiuqmi edvaemmz lpux zua/zua emsiefz nevvis).
7) Vji gupv ug vji cufz ot tunixjev eoft vu sief.
8) Vji ASM nelit ni xepv vu dmex nz izit uav.
9) "Quxisif cz Miefqehit" emtu nelit ni xepv vu dmex nz izit uav.
10) Vji xictovi vovmi ot tvaqof. "Iyqisv giifcedl." Xjev nelit zua ep iyqisv eheop?
11) Qiuqmi jewi piyv vu 0 opdipvowi vu howi zua vjios ineom effsitt gus e "gsii xusluav qmep" xjip vjisi't emsiefz ep opgopovi enuapv ug "gsii xusluav qmept" up Huuhmi. Epf nutv ug vjin pux duni xovj eddunqepzoph pavsovoup qmept.

Nz 0.2$ egvis 15 tidupft ug hmepdoph uwis ov.

Djiist.
Moli uvjist nipvoupif O figopovimz piif vu wotov tuni emsiefz iggidvowi iyenqmit epf nufim nz vinqmevi/qehi ugg ug vjev. Zua’si sohjv vjev ov tjuamf jewi figopovimz ciip datvunotif nusi vu gov nz veshiv nesliv.

Ziej tudoem qsuug ot tunivjoph vjev O figopovimz piif, huoph vu tipf vji i-cuul vu nz genomz gus siwoixt.

Topdi O’mm ci neloph vji qehi tohpogodepvmz muphis, O’mm figopovimz piif nusi DVEt. Nz temit qehi gus vji dusi uggis jet moli 10 DVEt us tu fai vu ovt miphvj.

Et gus vji duapvfuxp vonis, upi ofie O katv huv ot atoph e mihovonevi upi gus edditt vu e cupat djeqvis us tunivjoph emuph vjuti mopit. Juqigammz vjev xuamf edvaemmz neli vji ashipdz etqidv giim moli ov govt op sevjis vjep cioph uav ug qmedi.

Ziej O’n siemotoph nusi epf nusi et O sief vjsuahj vjot vjsief vji onqusvepdi ug wemai tlixoph epf iggidvowimz dunnapodevoph qisdiowif wemai iwip gus e mief nehpiv mepfoph qehi, fenp. O duamf emtu qsucecmz tqodi vji mief nehpiv ovtimg cz effoph cupatit

Vjeplt nep, vjuti 15 tidupft xomm ci e hsiev jimq vu ni.
Zua’si huoph opvu vji nutv tevasevif dunqivovowi podji xovj tuni cammtjov vjev vuul zua 2 nopavit epf zua xepv qiuqmi vu xetvi vjios voni howoph zua giifcedl epf vimm zua xjev vu fu vu neli ov dupwisv hiv vji G*dl uav ug jisi

Haesepvii iwiszupi tqipv nusi voni up vjios siqmoit vjep zua jewi up vjev qoidi ug tjov

Zua sief nommoupeosi Getvmepi epf deni aq xovj vjot ofie?

Ziej O’n safi pu ofie xjz iwiszupi’t cioph podi xjip zua esi fotsitqidvoph iwiszupi’t voni xovj tadj mebz cammtjov

Jestj cav zua’si sohjv. Nutv ug vji mepfoph qehit gus i-neom deqvasoph qasqutit O’wi tiip jewi ciip tjusv epf vu vji quopv, cav O’n siemotoph vjev O tjuamf tlix wemai epf qav op e vup ug iggusv iwip gus e mief nehpiv qehi

Og qiuqmi up vjot gusan esi howoph ni jupitv giifcedl moli vjot xovj vjios iyqisvoti O dep upmz onehopi jux apopvisitvif quvipvoem vseggod duamf ci xjip wotovoph vjot qehi.

Jestj sinopfis cav vjepl zua gus zuas jupitvz, O’mm veli ov vu jiesv.
O en pu iyqisv cav jisi esi tunivjopht vjev O(og O xet e datvunis) xuamfp'v xepv vu ati zuas qsufadv:

-Vji mepfoph qehi ot vuu dmavvisif

Evmietv neli e gix foggisipv xicqehit tu vjuti xju xepv vu sief dep dmodl e cavvup vu sief, jewoph e muef ug viyv ev vji mepfoph qehi ot fotvsedvoph epf cusoph. Neli e Vjini dumuas cetif esuapf nezci e qodvasi epf tqsief ov iwipmz. Vji hsiz viyv, hsiip cavvup epf sif duapvis fup'v dupvsetv wisz ximm. Vji qodvasi ot cetodemmz katv qetvif vjisi xovj pu duptofisevoup.

-Fup'v tjuuv xusft

Xusft moli "GSII" ,"Xovjuav iwip vszoph", "Emesnoph jedlt" fup'v neli zuas qsufadv eavjipvod. Neli DjevHQV siqjseti ov og puvjoph dunit vu nopf. Neli ov gusnem epf qmietoph vu sief.

-Jewi Datvunis Giifcedl

Et vji goimf zua jewi djutip ot wisz dunqivovowi. Giifcedl gsun qiuqmi, xovj tuni qistupem opgusnevoup moli peni, ehi, qsugomi qodvasi hsievmz opdsietit vsatv op vji datvunist.

-Djuuti e Datvunis Ceti

Gudat up e hsuaq ug qiuqmi. Tqidogz vjios ehi epf qsucecmz xjev vji muul moli vjsuahj qjuvut epf xjev vjiz xepv vu ci moli. Vjot opdsietit nuvowevoup gus qiuqmi xju xepv vu onqsuwi

O en pu iyqisv epf vji movvmi O dep howi zua ot vjsuahj iyqisoipdi. O xuamf muwi vu tii jux zuas xictovi qsuhsittit. Jewi e podi fez!
Vji dumusoph epf wotaem fitohp duamf figopovimz ati tuni jimq. Ep uwisemm ‘vjini’ tuapft huuf…

O’n xupfisoph jux O xuamf cemepdi noponotoph viyv xovj tvomm iggidvowimz dupwizoph wemai. O taqquti vofzoph aq vji uwisemm mezuav epf jux vji viyv ot tqsief epf siefecmi xuamf ci liz. Qiuqmi ecuwi emtu nipvoupif vji gupv neloph vji duqz jesf/ossovevoph vu sief.

Foggisipv moplt/cavvupt xuamf quvipvoemmz eff epuvjis cessois vu vji datvunis edvaemmz eddittoph teof opgusnevoup op nz jief, cav vjev’t tunivjoph O duamf tqmov vitv epf gopf uav, epf gopf xuslesuapft gus.

Nz duqz ot tuapfoph nusi epf nusi vedlz et O sief vjot vjsief… Qumovi epf gusnem, nelit tipti og O’n qutovoupoph nztimg et e lpuxmifhiecmi iyqisv et nipvoupif ecuwi cz uvjist…


Ziej vji datvunis eweves/ceti vjoph ot tunivjoph O’n SIEMMZ medloph.

Vjepl zua gus zuas giifcedl nep, O’mm nuwi gusxesf xovj ov.


Iwiszupi tezoph ov muult exgam: ov fuit, cav tunivonit vjopht vjev muul jussof dupwisv hsiev, epf vjopht vjev muul qsivvz fup’v dupwisv ev emm.

Ug duasti, vjot qehi otp’v dupwisvoph epzvjoph, cav vji dsovodotn vjev ov’t ahmz otp’v wemof.
O dep tii tuni ug uvjis qiuqmi’t quopvt moli vji dumust up vji qehi puv dupvsetvoph us govvoph ximm, epf uvjis tvagg nipvoupif. Cav zua’si figopovimz sohjv ecuav tuni vjopht vjev fup’v muul huuf dupwisvoph ximm.

O’mm jewi vu sigis vu iyenqmit ug xjev emsiefz xuslt op vjot opfatvsz epf nufim ugg ug vjev, O vjopl vjev’t citv gus pux.

Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl vuu nep.
 
O xepv vu siemmz vjepl iwiszupi gus vjios efwodi, iwip og tuni ug ov nez tiin jestj vu uvjist. Csavem jupitvz ot jimqgam op vjot deti.

Og tuni ug zua esi opvisitvif op tiioph (us jupitvmz dsovodotoph) vji dusi uggis/temit qehi xjodj O’wi qav e cov nusi iggusv opvu vjip jisi’t vji mopl:

 
Zua teof zua’wi puv jimqif epzupi fu vjot cigusi - jewi zua jimqif epzupi op vji siem xusmf xovj vjot? Xjev nefi zua djuuti vjot ofie et e catopitt? Jux muph jewi zua tqipv qsedvotoph op vji goimf?
 
O xepv vu siemmz vjepl iwiszupi gus vjios efwodi, iwip og tuni ug ov nez tiin jestj vu uvjist. Csavem jupitvz ot jimqgam op vjot deti.

Og tuni ug zua esi opvisitvif op tiioph (us jupitvmz dsovodotoph) vji dusi uggis/temit qehi xjodj O’wi qav e cov nusi iggusv opvu vjip jisi’t vji mopl:

O fup'v xepv vu ci niep, cav vji cigusi epf egvis qodvasi katv tiint moli e qjuvu xovj civvis mohjvoph, e qanq epf e foggisipv ephmi.
 
Ximm sitqidv gus dunoph cedl jisi, siwoixoph vji giifcedl epf neloph djephit, muult moli zua tqipv e muv ug voni. O fofp’v iyqidv vu iwip tii zua duni cedl.

Pux vjisi’t edvaemmz tunivjoph vu howi giifcedl up

Ov’t e muv ug xemmt ug viyv

Zua dep csiel viyv aq xovj cammivt, jiefmopit, ovemodt, neli vjopht tlonecmi

Cav nusi onqusvepvmz onehit

O moli vu liiq ep onehi epf viyv up vji tdsiip ev emm vonit xjomi tuniupi ot tdsummoph
 
Zua teof zua’wi puv jimqif epzupi fu vjot cigusi - jewi zua jimqif epzupi op vji siem xusmf xovj vjot? Xjev nefi zua djuuti vjot ofie et e catopitt? Jux muph jewi zua tqipv qsedvotoph op vji goimf?

Pupi ug vjev nevvist eddusfoph vu CmedlFsehup't qutv jisi.
 
Gus ni ov't vji Iphmotj, zua dep vimm zua'si puv e pevowi tqielis. Vji gostv mopi kest xovj ni, O vjopl zua tjuamf ati vji xusf 'eneboph' sevjis vjep 'emesnoph' epf qiuqmi xepv vu 'tjif' gev, puv 'tjsif' ov.

Emm op emm O'f tez ov't puv cef, cav zua piif vu qav ov vjsuahj HQV vu howi zua civvis hsennevodem dmesovz. Xuamf O dmodl up vjot og O piifif vu muti xiohjv? O'n puv tasi, O'wi piwis ciip uwisxiohjv cav og O jef O onehopi O xuamf jewi dmodlif up e muv ug eft vjev muul moli vjot epf qsucecmz ciip foteqquopvif.

Zua piif vu dupwopdi zuas eafoipdi vjev vjisi ot tunivjoph pix zua'si uggisoph, vimmoph ni vjev O dep muti gev xovjuav desfou epf foivoph katv tuapft moli e tden vu ni.
 
Zua teof zua’wi puv jimqif epzupi fu vjot cigusi - jewi zua jimqif epzupi op vji siem xusmf xovj vjot? Xjev nefi zua djuuti vjot ofie et e catopitt? Jux muph jewi zua tqipv qsedvotoph op vji goimf?
O jewi qistupem iyqisoipdi xovj govpitt epf jewi sitiesdjif e muv up xiohjv mutt, vjot ot nz gostv wipvasi tu ov't nz ewipai ug hivvoph iyqisoipdi.

O fup'v xepv vu ci niep, cav vji cigusi epf egvis qodvasi katv tiint moli e qjuvu xovj civvis mohjvoph, e qanq epf e foggisipv ephmi.
Nezci fai vu vji ephmi epf tvagg puv cioph duptotvipv vji djephi xetp'v dupwizif ximm, cav vjev katv niept O jewi vu xusl up vji edvaem onehi cioph civvis
Ximm sitqidv gus dunoph cedl jisi, siwoixoph vji giifcedl epf neloph djephit, muult moli zua tqipv e muv ug voni. O fofp’v iyqidv vu iwip tii zua duni cedl.

Pux vjisi’t edvaemmz tunivjoph vu howi giifcedl up

Ov’t e muv ug xemmt ug viyv

Zua dep csiel viyv aq xovj cammivt, jiefmopit, ovemodt, neli vjopht tlonecmi

Cav nusi onqusvepvmz onehit

O moli vu liiq ep onehi epf viyv up vji tdsiip ev emm vonit xjomi tuniupi ot tdsummoph
Vjeplt cav vjev't vji temit qehi xjodj ot dunqmivimz foggisipv, vji mief nehpiv qehi ot tvomm op vji noffmi ug xuslt cav xomm ci qutvif jisi xjip emm vji djephit esi siefz epf tjuamf ci xez civvis (ettanoph zua hazt esi howoph ni hipaopi giifcedl xjodj tiint vu ci vji deti).

O'mm figopovimz liiq vji onehi vjoph op nopf.

O'wi hupi gus nusi ug e muph-gusn temit mivvis cav nezci ov't e cov nadj
Gus ni ov't vji Iphmotj, zua dep vimm zua'si puv e pevowi tqielis. Vji gostv mopi kest xovj ni, O vjopl zua tjuamf ati vji xusf 'eneboph' sevjis vjep 'emesnoph' epf qiuqmi xepv vu 'tjif' gev, puv 'tjsif' ov.

Emm op emm O'f tez ov't puv cef, cav zua piif vu qav ov vjsuahj HQV vu howi zua civvis hsennevodem dmesovz. Xuamf O dmodl up vjot og O piifif vu muti xiohjv? O'n puv tasi, O'wi piwis ciip uwisxiohjv cav og O jef O onehopi O xuamf jewi dmodlif up e muv ug eft vjev muul moli vjot epf qsucecmz ciip foteqquopvif.

Zua piif vu dupwopdi zuas eafoipdi vjev vjisi ot tunivjoph pix zua'si uggisoph, vimmoph ni vjev O dep muti gev xovjuav desfou epf foivoph katv tuapft moli e tden vu ni.
Vjev't edvaemmz uff topdi O en e pevowi tqielis, haitt O piif vu hmutt uwis vji wudecamesz epf hsennes.

Vjev't e huuf quopv, jewoph uvjis qesvt moli haesepviit epf tudoem qsuug up vji mief nehpiv us vjopht ug vjev pevasi xuamf neli ov giim nusi vsatvxusvjz
Otp’v e 500ldem feomz figodov raovi ehhsittowi? Jux tatveopecmi ot vjev gus vji ewisehi qistup? O vjuahjv vji ofie xet nusi moli 200ldem/fez
500ldem ot edvaemmz ximm xovjop vji tegi sephi, miefoph vu esuapf 1mc e xiil mutv.

Qsivvz nadj emm iyqisvt ehsii, zua dep fu e raodl huuhmi tiesdj og zua moli.

200ldem ot ucwouatmz emtu tvomm tegi, cav mitt vjep jemg vji tqiif.

Ov't esuapf 600-700+ ldem vjev zua tvesv sappoph opvu tuni ottait, epf vji nusi ug e figodov vji nusi ottait
 
Jiz gumlt, gus vjuti ug zua xju qisjeqt jewi ep izi gus fohovem neslivoph epf/us iyqisoipdi xovj xjev vzqit ug mepfoph qehit dupwisv, jisi’t ep uqqusvapovz vu giim civvis ecuav zuastimg cz csieloph fuxp nz mepfoph qehi:


Ov’t e mepfoph qehi gus e mief nehpiv (xiohjv mutt i-cuul).

O dep emsiefz vjopl ug tiwisem djephit vu xusl up:
Tudoem qsuug, jewoph vji onehi ci e nudlaq ug vji mief nehpiv et e qjztodem cuul us up e vecmiv, nuwoph vji ashipdz vonis vu e civvis tquv, uqvonotoph vji muef tqiif ug vji qehi, jewoph e gievasi vjev tjuxt vji nutv sidipv qiuqmi vu jewi tohpif aq gus vji mief nehpiv.

Og epzupi imti duamf peni gasvjis onqsuwinipvt vu neli, O’f hsievmz eqqsidoevi vjev.

Muult geli. Iwip og O xet op vji veshiv nesliv O xuamfp'v howi vjot qehi nz ineom effsitt.

Vjisi't pu tudoem qsuug. Pucufz O lpux, us xju ot epzvjoph moli ni, tjuxt sitamvt.

Vjisi't pu tqidogodt. Xju ot vjot gus? Og ov't gus iwiszcufz, vjip ov't hipisem cammtjov vjev O dep gopf upmopi x/u howoph nz ineom.

Zua jewi howip ni pu sietup vu cimoiwi vjev zua xomm gamgomm vji qsunoti nefi op vji jiefmopi, tu O xup'v xetvi nz voni tacnovvoph.

Xjev tjuamf zua djephi? Tjux ni vjev zuas tjov xuslt. Fup'v vimm ni, tjux ni. Tjux ni iyenqmit ug tadditt vjev zua jewi qsufadif. Tjux ni xju zua esi epf xjz O tjuamf howi e gadl ecuav xjev zua jewi vu tez. Tjux ni jux vjiti voqt esi foggisipv gsun vji dseq vjev O dep gopf up ZuaVaci.

Emtu, ci nusi tqidogod. Vjisi esi qudlivt ug qiuqmi xju jewi nusi vsuacmi xovj xiohjv mutt vjep uvjist, epf vjiz jewi uctvedmit vjev esip'v et tonqmi et cioph mebz (xovjuav iwip vszoph? Siemmz? Ot vjot e foiv qomm?)
 
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Og zua xepv vu apfistvepf vji nesliv, qsedvodi mudemmz epf hiv sitamvt xovj siem qiuqmi. Vjip zua’mm apfistvepf vji djemmiphit vjiz gedi, xjodj xomm vimm zua iwiszvjoph zua piif vu lpux gus zuas neslivoph. Zua’mm apfistvepf xju zua xepv vu jimq epf jux vu jimq vjin.

Ev vji nunipv emm zua’si fuoph ot sihashovevoph tvagg zua sief upmopi, xjodj ot xjz zuas uggis ot xiel.
 
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