I thought it might be useful for those of us who do cold outreach to have a roast my outreach content thread.
We could post our content here and get some feedback from the business owners in the group on whether they liked it, hated it or offer advice on what they'd change.
I'll start.
Here's one I'm using for Email and SMS. (this is sent after I've confirmed I'm speaking to business owner)
"Noticed you had 13 Google reviews - it looks like a lot of customers don't leave a review.
Built an app that might help you become the obvious choice in Manchester. Uses AI to automatically collect REAL customer reviews, handles responses, and displays your glowing testimonials on social media.
Helped Emperor Oven Cleaning get 24 reviews in just 7 days.
Interested in a trial?"
We could post our content here and get some feedback from the business owners in the group on whether they liked it, hated it or offer advice on what they'd change.
I'll start.
Here's one I'm using for Email and SMS. (this is sent after I've confirmed I'm speaking to business owner)
"Noticed you had 13 Google reviews - it looks like a lot of customers don't leave a review.
Built an app that might help you become the obvious choice in Manchester. Uses AI to automatically collect REAL customer reviews, handles responses, and displays your glowing testimonials on social media.
Helped Emperor Oven Cleaning get 24 reviews in just 7 days.
Interested in a trial?"
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