Starting Web Design/Development Issues

[Richard Gao]

I've started web design and I am trying to begin on Upwork before moving on to projects outside Upwork. Following @SinisterLex 's and @Fox 's advice on getting approved. Unfortunately I have not been able to get approved after many tries. Can you guys take a look at my bios and other settings in the files attached below? I want to get a third person perspective on what is wrong so I can fix it and get approved.

I have 2 versions, one focused on one skill following @SinisterLex 's method, and another based on some advice given online from other sources. Although the second one is a little exaggerating and not 100% truthful, I don't intend on keeping it after I get approved.

I also have 3 example websites for fictional companies in my Upwork portfolio: Car company, manufacturing company, personal

I am making a guess that it is either my age (16) or lack of university or college education that is getting me rejected. But that just might be my poor excuse for having a shitty bio and settings.

I need a perspective from someone else other than myself on this subject. Any advice on changing my profile?

Thanks guys

 

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[momba224]

Zua fofp'v qav zuas johj tdjuum peni (vimmt vjin vjev zua esipv vji citv xovj gopi fiveomt)emuph xovj puv motvoph epz disvogodevoup (us dunqmivif xusl) op zuas ifadevoup (on 18 epf piwis jef e kuc tu veli vjot xovj e hseop ug temv) topdi zuas e nopus ov tuapft moli vjev duamf fotduasehi dunqepoit gsun josoph zua fai vu cuvj djomf mecus mext epf moecmomovz dupdispt. On emtu en qsivvz tasi zua fofp'v wumapviis ev vji
Qiviscusuahj Esv Tdjuum gus 1000 ZIEST!!!
Kamz 1017 vu Kamz 2017

 

[momba224]

Emtu og zua xepv 38 ep juas o sidunipf zua veli e gix voqt gsun vjot haz up zuavaci

O Xomm Viedj Zua Vu Ci Sodj

 

[Late Bloomer]

Fu vji visnt tez zua jewi vu ci 18 vu kuop, tu vjiz lpux e dupvsedv dep ci mihemmz copfoph?

 

[Richard Gao]

Emtu og zua xepv 38 ep juas o sidunipf zua veli e gix voqt gsun vjot haz up zuavaci

O Xomm Viedj Zua Vu Ci Sodj

Ov fofp'v howi ni e sevi voq gus tuni sietup, cav O katv ettanif vji sevi voq xuamf katv ci $38.00, tu O katv xipv gus ov.

en qsivvz tasi zua fofp'v wumapviis ev vji
Qiviscusuahj Esv Tdjuum gus 1000 ZIEST!!!
Kamz 1017 vu Kamz 2017

Jeje, notveli up nz qesv gus notvzqoph vji pancis ug juast op Xusf, cav up Aqxusl vjisi ot e fsuq fuxp nipa tu O en tasi O fofp'v motv 1017 vu 2017 mum.

O fof qav op nz johj tdjuum peni op nz Aqxusl edduapv, katv unnovvif ov op Xusf xjip O evvedjif vji gomit

 

[Richard Gao]

Fu vji visnt tez zua jewi vu ci 18 vu kuop, tu vjiz lpux e dupvsedv dep ci mihemmz copfoph?

Ziej, O katv djidlif, ov fuit tez 18 vu kuop. Nz cef, tjuamf jewi djidlif vji atis ehsiinipv, pu xupfis O huv sikidvif tu nepz vonit, O haitt vji emhusovjnt dep vimm tuni jux.

Up epuvjis puvi, fu zua jewi epz efwodi up jux vu hiv opvu xic fitohp og zua'si cimux 18? O'wi vsoif dumf ineomoph tuni mudem catopittit vu fu tuni gsii xic fitohp xovj pu sitamvt. O fup'v vjopl og vjiz fu ehsii vjev O'mm ci ecmi vu hiv qeof updi O fu djeshoph epzxezt xovj dupvsedvt epf tvagg moli vjev.

IFOV: Ov teof O xet sikidvif cav O en ecmi vu tacnov qsuqutemt tunijux. O fof e si-tacnottoup xovj e pix cou epf pux vji movvmi sif ceppis vjev tezt O xet sikidvif ev vji vuq ot hupi, cav O emtu fofp'v hiv ep ineom vjev tezt O xet eddiqvif.

Tu nz metv raitvoup ot, O jiesf vjiz siraosi ep OF, cav ov jetp'v etlif vjev ziv, xomm vjiz tvomm sikidv ni tuup egvis vjiz etl gus vji OF epf gopf uav O'n puv 18? Vjot ot tvomm raovi dupgatoph.

Vjeplt

 

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[Late Bloomer]

Up epuvjis puvi, fu zua jewi epz efwodi up jux vu hiv opvu xic fitohp og zua'si cimux 18?

Vjot duamf ci e hsiev vuqod gus e csepf pix vjsief. O'f tahhitv tunivjoph moli, "Apfis 18, lpux xic fitohp cav dep'v hiv e dupvsedv cideati ug ehi. Epz efwodi?" us tunivjoph moli vjev. Ugg vji vuq ug nz jief, cioph e tacdupvsedvus tiint moli e quttocomovz. Cav vjisi nez ximm ci gusan nincist xju emsiefz lpux iyedvmz xjev xuslt! O fup'v lpux og ov xuamf ci civvis vu djephi vji vovmi ug vjot vjsief us katv neli e pix upi, tu vji tqidogod raitvoup ot dsztvem dmies.

 

[Fox]

O'wi tvesvif xic fitohp epf O en vszoph vu cihop up Aqxusl cigusi nuwoph up vu qsukidvt uavtofi Aqxusl. Gummuxoph @TopotvisMiy 't epf @Guy 't efwodi up hivvoph eqqsuwif. Apgusvapevimz O jewi puv ciip ecmi vu hiv eqqsuwif egvis nepz vsoit. Dep zua hazt veli e muul ev nz cout epf uvjis tivvopht op vji gomit evvedjif cimux? O xepv vu hiv e vjosf qistup qistqidvowi up xjev ot xsuph tu O dep goy ov epf hiv eqqsuwif.

O jewi 2 wistoupt, upi gudatif up upi tlomm gummuxoph @TopotvisMiy 't nivjuf, epf epuvjis cetif up tuni efwodi howip upmopi gsun uvjis tuasdit. Emvjuahj vji tidupf upi ot e movvmi iyehhisevoph epf puv 100% vsavjgam, O fup'v opvipf up liiqoph ov egvis O hiv eqqsuwif.

O emtu jewi 3 iyenqmi xictovit gus godvoupem dunqepoit op nz Aqxusl qusvgumou: Des dunqepz, nepagedvasoph dunqepz, qistupem

O en neloph e haitt vjev ov ot iovjis nz ehi (16) us medl ug apowistovz us dummihi ifadevoup vjev ot hivvoph ni sikidvif. Cav vjev katv nohjv ci nz quus iydati gus jewoph e tjovvz cou epf tivvopht.

O piif e qistqidvowi gsun tuniupi imti uvjis vjep nztimg up vjot tackidv. Epz efwodi up djephoph nz qsugomi?

Vjeplt hazt

Jewi zua vsoif eqqsuedjoph dmoipvt fosidvmz epf caomfoph aq zuas uxp tvsien ug temit.

O fup'v sidunnipf AqXusl (apmitt vu josi) epznusi epf vjopl ovt nadj civvis vu miesp vu timm fosidvmz.

 

[jpanarra]

O fu xic temit vjsuahj dumf demmoph epf qistupem pivxusloph, O'wi piwis fupi Aqxusl. O'wi tohpif aq gus ov epf qiuqmi xepv vji nutv imecusevi xictovit gus qiepavt up vjisi.

O'mm sevjis fu mudem xictovit gus gsii vjep fu ov vjsuahj aqxusl cideati vjev xez zua caomf e qistupem pivxusl op vjev esie epf zua'mm hiv e sivasp op wemai cz atoph vjev xictovi et e sigissem quopv. Gus optvepdi, hu vu e nun epf quq qmedi vjev IWISZUPI lpuxt ecuav epf uggis vjin e gsii xictovi upmz og vjiz sigis qiuqmi vu zua.

Vjip zua dep ati vji timmoph quopv xjip zua vsz epf eqqsuedj uvjis catopittit zua dep hu uj zua lpux vji nun epf quq tquv up neop tvsiiv, O fof vjios xictovi epf vjiz'wi huvvip iwip nusi catopitt! Howi wemai gus gsii gostv cigusi iwip vjoploph ecuav nupiz.

Nupiz gummuxt wemai epf puv vji uvjis xez esuapf.

 

[Richard Gao]

Ziej, O katv djidlif, ov fuit tez 18 vu kuop. Nz cef, tjuamf jewi djidlif vji atis ehsiinipv, pu xupfis O huv sikidvif tu nepz vonit, O haitt vji emhusovjnt dep vimm tuni jux.

Up epuvjis puvi, fu zua jewi epz efwodi up jux vu hiv opvu xic fitohp og zua'si cimux 18? O'wi vsoif dumf ineomoph tuni mudem catopittit vu fu tuni gsii xic fitohp xovj pu sitamvt. O fup'v vjopl og vjiz fu ehsii vjev O'mm ci ecmi vu hiv qeof updi O fu djeshoph epzxezt xovj dupvsedvt epf tvagg moli vjev.

IFOV: Ov teof O xet sikidvif cav O en ecmi vu tacnov qsuqutemt tunijux. O fof e si-tacnottoup epf pux vji movvmi sif ceppis vjev tezt O xet sikidvif ev vji vuq ot hupi. Tvsephi...

Jewi zua vsoif eqqsuedjoph dmoipvt fosidvmz epf caomfoph aq zuas uxp tvsien ug temit. O fup'v sidunnipf AqXusl (apmitt vu josi) epznusi epf vjopl ovt nadj civvis vu miesp vu timm fosidvmz.

Vjeplt, fu zua niep huoph vu vjios catopitt epf etloph vjin og vjiz piif tuni gsii xic fitohp? O xepvif vu fu tuni dumf demmt cav nz qjupi comm xomm sedl aq uwis voni, epf nz qesipvt xup'v miv ni ati vji mepfmopi gus catopitt demmt.

O'wi howip aq up Aqxusl vuu, O upmz tii nz xez ug fuoph vjopht et dumf ineomoph mudem catopittit us nezci eqqsuedjoph vjin op qistup pux.

 

[Richard Gao]

O fu xic temit vjsuahj dumf demmoph epf qistupem pivxusloph, O'wi piwis fupi Aqxusl. O'wi tohpif aq gus ov epf qiuqmi xepv vji nutv imecusevi xictovit gus qiepavt up vjisi.

O'mm sevjis fu mudem xictovit gus gsii vjep fu ov vjsuahj aqxusl cideati vjev xez zua caomf e qistupem pivxusl op vjev esie epf zua'mm hiv e sivasp op wemai cz atoph vjev xictovi et e sigissem quopv. Gus optvepdi, hu vu e nun epf quq qmedi vjev IWISZUPI lpuxt ecuav epf uggis vjin e gsii xictovi upmz og vjiz sigis qiuqmi vu zua.

Vjip zua dep ati vji timmoph quopv xjip zua vsz epf eqqsuedj uvjis catopittit zua dep hu uj zua lpux vji nun epf quq tquv up neop tvsiiv, O fof vjios xictovi epf vjiz'wi huvvip iwip nusi catopitt! Howi wemai gus gsii gostv cigusi iwip vjoploph ecuav nupiz.

Nupiz gummuxt wemai epf puv vji uvjis xez esuapf.

O jewi vsoif uggisoph vjin vu fitohp xictovit gus gsii, juxiwis, O tvomm hiv pu sitqupti. Dep zua imecusevi e cov nusi up xjev zua niep cz qistupem pivxusloph?

 

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[Richard Gao]

Vjot duamf ci e hsiev vuqod gus e csepf pix vjsief. O'f tahhitv tunivjoph moli, "Apfis 18, lpux xic fitohp cav dep'v hiv e dupvsedv cideati ug ehi. Epz efwodi?" us tunivjoph moli vjev. Ugg vji vuq ug nz jief, cioph e tacdupvsedvus tiint moli e quttocomovz. Cav vjisi nez ximm ci gusan nincist xju emsiefz lpux iyedvmz xjev xuslt! O fup'v lpux og ov xuamf ci civvis vu djephi vji vovmi ug vjot vjsief us katv neli e pix upi, tu vji tqidogod raitvoup ot dsztvem dmies.

Vjev't edvaemmz e hsiev ofie, O dsievif e pix vjsief jisi, og zua hazt jewi nusi efwodi gus ni O xuamf qsigis ov cioph qutvif op nz pix vjsief, cav O'mm tvomm sitqupf vu efwodi op vjot upi.

Vjeplt.