Hi,
I have started to send some cold emails to business around where we live – trying to emphasise we are a local business.
Our business is web design/development. I do work full time as well in a completely different field.
I have used Google map to find companies locally (same or adjacent suburb) – check their website to see how it is. If the website is ‘old looking’ and not responsive I send them an email.
I have sent a few email but not have not had any replies as of yet.
Below is my email copy. I want to keep them short as no one wants to read anything longer than 1-2 paragraphs.
Any suggestions on copy/subject changes would be much appreciated.
Thank you
JH
######email 1 ######
Subject: New higher converting website by local [Suburb] Company
We are an established family owned web design company with over 10yrs of experience located in ……..
When I came across [company name] I noticed the current website is not responsive (Mobile Friendly), which is very important now days. Google penalizes sites that are not Mobile Friendly. We are able to build a professional site and get it up and running in under three weeks. The site will be mobile friendly and extremely easy for anyone at the company to update and maintain.
Please find below sample of other [field of business] we worked on
Please let me know if you want an obligation fee quote.
Looking forward hearing from you.
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I have started to send some cold emails to business around where we live – trying to emphasise we are a local business.
Our business is web design/development. I do work full time as well in a completely different field.
I have used Google map to find companies locally (same or adjacent suburb) – check their website to see how it is. If the website is ‘old looking’ and not responsive I send them an email.
I have sent a few email but not have not had any replies as of yet.
Below is my email copy. I want to keep them short as no one wants to read anything longer than 1-2 paragraphs.
Any suggestions on copy/subject changes would be much appreciated.
Thank you
JH
######email 1 ######
Subject: New higher converting website by local [Suburb] Company
We are an established family owned web design company with over 10yrs of experience located in ……..
When I came across [company name] I noticed the current website is not responsive (Mobile Friendly), which is very important now days. Google penalizes sites that are not Mobile Friendly. We are able to build a professional site and get it up and running in under three weeks. The site will be mobile friendly and extremely easy for anyone at the company to update and maintain.
Please find below sample of other [field of business] we worked on
Please let me know if you want an obligation fee quote.
Looking forward hearing from you.
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