I'll keep that in mind during today's activity. Thank you for the advice!What's up RG, this is better than my first copy lol. But I'd say you definitely need to make this much more believable. If you can't use credibility I would recommend making the beach story longer and more detailed. Make them desire the ebook without even knowing for sure if it works. Good job, keep writing.
Day 5:
I did my writing on Halo Top ice cream. This ended up being only a half page rather than a full page because I didn't know what else to add. Any advice on this would also be greatly appreciated.
Bodybuilders Use This Secret Food to Enhance Performance
Are you tired of eating clean? Wouldn’t it be great to have a cheat meal without ruining your macros? We’ve got your back.
Introducing Halo Top ice cream—Yes, you heard that correctly. This low fat, low sugar, high protein ice cream is the key to staying on a diet.
The best part? It only costs $5.99.
Just imagine. You complete a tiring workout in the gym, and are absolutely starving. You are craving something sweet and delicious.
This is your solution.
Now sold at supermarkets all over the world, you have the opportunity to get your hands on some. Trust me, you won’t regret it.
Click here to visit Halo Top’s website.
Are you tired of eating clean? Wouldn’t it be great to have a cheat meal without ruining your macros? We’ve got your back.
Introducing Halo Top ice cream—Yes, you heard that correctly. This low fat, low sugar, high protein ice cream is the key to staying on a diet.
The best part? It only costs $5.99.
Just imagine. You complete a tiring workout in the gym, and are absolutely starving. You are craving something sweet and delicious.
This is your solution.
Now sold at supermarkets all over the world, you have the opportunity to get your hands on some. Trust me, you won’t regret it.
Click here to visit Halo Top’s website.
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