Lex DeVille's: 15 Days to Freedom - Make Money Copywriting in 15 Days or Less

[Raju Zodiac]

Day 3

5 Headlines

#1) Get Your Laundry Done In 15 Minutes!

Who am I?
A busy person. 30-45
What do I want?
To be able to get my chores done quickly without wasting much time

#2) Cook Healthy Meals Under 10 Minutes

Who am I?
A health conscious person
What do I want?
To readily have healthy food to consume.

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Who am I?
A new working mother of a child.
What do I want?
To focus on work without getting distracted by the baby.

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Who am I?
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What do I want?
Small actionable steps I can take to change my life.

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Who am I?
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What do I want?
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[Raju Zodiac]

DAY 4
5 Headlines

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[Keelham]

Day 1 | Mindset Lesson 1
Be Like Jesus - Forget You. Help Them.​

I’m not sure there’s any more simple way to put it than be like Jesus. The first step to copywriting that makes money fast is to forget yourself. Forget yourself and start caring about other people.

Fake it if you have to. Fake it til’ you make it. But always operate with the intention of making it real.

Leave religion out of the picture. The only thing we’re focused on is a mindset of being focused on other people. Learning to care & help others is extremely powerful. Not only does it change the way you look at the world, but it changes the way the world looks at you.

It seems like a simple shift to make, but it’s not. It took me years to figure out what it actually means to care about others. It took years to figure out that if I just help others, good juju comes my way.

Now I finally understand, and I earn more than ever… Coincidence? Not likely.

You don’t need to fully understand why it works to make it work. All you need to do is try it. All that matters is results, remember? So start thinking in terms of other people. Start accepting others as they are. Start finding ways to help others, and you’ll find the #1 mindset technique to making money with copy.

Since I pretty much beat this concept to death in my other thread, I won’t drag it out here.

Just know that your copy won’t earn a penny until you learn to solve problems for other people.

That’s the first of the 5 Mindset lessons.

Forget You. Help Them.
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Day 1 Challenge

Really Help Someone – When I say help someone I’m not talking about convincing them that you can help them. It’s not about making them believe you can help them. It’s about actually helping them. But most of the people reading this will miss that part. That’s why I keep getting messages asking questions like “How do I get them to believe I can help them?”

The only way to get them to believe you can help them is if you actually prove you can help them, and to prove you can help them you actually have to be capable of performing the task. But before you can do that you have to be operating from the right mindset. So your challenge for Day 1 is to find someone and help them without asking anything in return.

It doesn’t matter how big or small the task, and it doesn't matter if it's online or in person. All that matters is that it truly affects the other person by making their life better, easier, more enjoyable etc.

Do it today.

Succeed at this challenge today or don’t bother reading tomorrow. Either you’re willing to take action now, and do what it takes, or you’re not, and the rest of the lessons won’t help anyway.

That's all for lesson 1. Forget you. Help them.

When
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Huge thank you for your lessons. just wanted to let you know how much i and so many other appciate it. so thank you good sir

 

[Pabblo]

I Am so Grateful,
for this value which you create.
This is more than copywriting instructions, these is about how to bring your life to the next level.
Actually i am on 10 day, and I have to this point 2 first deals in the construction industry.

 

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[Albert KOUADJA]

Thanks you very much for this thread. it is filled with several writing tips. I will keep it and come back from time to time to read it again. I think I really need him.


Thanks again ,@Lex DeVille

 

[Peacefulwarrior]

Start finding ways to help others, and you’ll find the #1 mindset technique to making money with copy.

!!

 

[gratefulwealth]

I actually just came back to the forum after a year grinding my gears at a content mill. Yeah, I made money. Just not much. So, I'm very excited to see this post. I'll be working on this.

 

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[benjamin_orji]

@Lex DeVille thanks for making this post. I just wanted to ask, are the info still valid? I'm about to journey this path in the next 14 days.

 

[Pabblo]

@Lex DeVille thanks for making this post. I just wanted to ask, are the info still valid? I'm about to journey this path in the next 14 days.

There is no secret.
Doing this you improve your skill which help you make business. People do not change so fast like world, some wisdom is true for decades.
Good luck

 

[Yula]

Thank you for taking the time to write this thread!

I wrote this last year at the end of January, since then I've been grinding and trying to master this skill.

Just wanted to say a huge thank you!

To anyone doubting if this works... I started copywriting thanks to this thread and am currently making a living off of it.

I have the same income working 8 hours per week copywriting, as I would working 40 hours per week for someone else.

 

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[Lex DeVille]

Our tone of voice

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[flyingguitarist]

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[flyingguitarist]

Day 1 : Helped a stranger by giving a set of books for free, Helped my father more with whatever he needed
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So guys, open for constructive criticism and feedback

 

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[flyingguitarist]

DAY 3 : Influence

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[flyingguitarist]

Day 4 ( took action to fix my ps4 and its controller and tested the condition of those games in order to sell on second-hand goods website )
Day 5 : Written an Ad Copy of my PS4 to sell it on

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Peace

 

[Consolation]

- How many times have I actually applied my knowledge toward making money?
- How many times have I actually tried and failed?
- How many websites have I built that actually got a product live?
- How many blogs have I actually contacted to promote my idea?
- How many books have I actually published?
- How many businesses have I actually called?
- How many cover letters have I actually submitted?
- How many clients have I actually spoken to?

Ask yourself "How many" questions first. If you answer with a number less than 1 then you are action faking.

Ever since I joined this forum, I always ask myself these questions. Last year I received 3 rejections from businesses for my offer.

One company said yes, and I got my live streaming business running. This was a year ago.

My biggest mistake was pricing my services too low. But, "the universe rewards action". I met the right people through that one company. When I gave the right price to the right people, there was no bargaining, banter, or sarcastic remarks. Money was transferred to my bank account in less than 24 hours.

I'm going to approach 5 businesses again this year.

 

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