How much total are you looking to raise?
One of the things I would be concerned with, as an investor, is that you are spreading yourself super thin with investors. If you are looking to raise $200k, then there is potentially 40 investors in this deal.
Also, you need to include more details if you are trying to attract people. Most smart investors don't look at the return only to generate interest. They look at the type of investment it is, then at the folks running it, then at the return.
Lastly, if you are soliciting investors you are potentially violating blue sky laws. As an investor, the fact you are unaware of this would worry me about the viability of your project.
Blue sky law - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
One of the things I would be concerned with, as an investor, is that you are spreading yourself super thin with investors. If you are looking to raise $200k, then there is potentially 40 investors in this deal.
Also, you need to include more details if you are trying to attract people. Most smart investors don't look at the return only to generate interest. They look at the type of investment it is, then at the folks running it, then at the return.
Lastly, if you are soliciting investors you are potentially violating blue sky laws. As an investor, the fact you are unaware of this would worry me about the viability of your project.
Blue sky law - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia