- Thread starter
- #31
Hey LiveEntrepreneur, I've noticed that you're a go getter and an action taker, and I like that about you. Here's the approach that I was taught to practice copywriting. I would not advocate your current approach, as you won't know if your copy is good or bad, so you might be reinforcing bad techniques in your mind rather than eradicating them. What you're doing is just guessing at what may be effective, but it also may NOT be effective. And you won't know unless they actually publish your copy, but if you're writing practice copy for people like Google, no one is going to publish this. So you have no feedback loop. Here's what you can do instead:
1. Copy successful, high-performing ads. Write them out by hand, word-for-word. This trains your brain to begin to see the patterns for effective, high-performing copy.
2. Write out 100 headlines for a single product. Use a handful of proven headline "formulas" to create your headlines. Make sure you incorporate strong emotion words in your headlines. The headline should make a big promise while evoking curiosity. One place where you can get different headline formulas is simply by googling terms like "Copywriting formulas for headlines" and you'll get lots of results.
- What is a successful, high-performing ad? It's one that has typically served as the "control" for a long time. The control is the ad that is currently performing the best to sell a given product or service. Copywriters are constantly writing new ads, trying to get one to perform better than the control. They run a test. For example, half the audience gets the new ad, and half the audience gets the control. They see which ad generates more responses. The control still wins, so the new ad gets thrown out, and the copywriters start over trying to beat the control. An ad that lasts a long time as the control is something that you should emulate to improve your copywriting skills. Don't just emulate ANY ad.
- How do you get access to ads like these? Where do you find data on which ads fit this criteria? Two ways. First, keep your eyes open for what is often called a "Direct Response Swipe File." The direct response copywriters have been testing what works and what doesn't work for much longer than the internet has been around. So a lot of the basic principles of psychology and persuasion have already been uncovered by their long-term testing, and much of what you see on the internet is merely a rehash of what the direct mailing folks were doing all along. All the top copywriters in that space tended to keep a "swipe file" of good ads that they could model and use for inspiration. Second, look at the brands that have enough money to do a lot of testing. Find their landing pages. One way to do this for any industry is to type in some of the top keywords that indicate buying intent, look at the Google Adwords ads that the largest companies in your space are running, and then click on the ads to see what kind of landing page they go to. Look at their headline copy. Study their bullet points. Find out what customer pain points they're speaking to. Notice what kind of aspirations they're tapping into. Pay attention to what kind of language they're using. (Is it highbrow, posh, super polished language? Or is it common, everyday-speak? Or is it borderline crude/vulgar? They're using this kind of language for a reason, because the target audience uses it.) Take the ads that stand out to you and add them to your own swipe file. (Start a swipe file now if you haven't already).
3. Write out 100 bullet points for a single product. Again, use proven "formulas" to construct your bullet points. Part of the discipline of copywriting is being creative within a structure. You never want to write from scratch if you can help it. I learned to write bullet points from Ray Edwards' book, "How to Write Copy that Sells," which includes 21 different bullet point formulas with examples. You write 5 bullet points for each type and at the end you'll have 105 bullets. By just doing this exercise ONCE, you'll become significantly better at writing enticing, compelling copy. How fast could you get good at copywriting by doing it repeatedly?
4. Go through your list of headlines and bullet points. Pick the best 10-15 of each. Then post them in this thread (preferably with some context about what product they're for) and I think you'll get some more constructive feedback on your copywriting. (Please post them as text, not as images. It's very hard to tell what you've written in image format.)
Hope this helps!
Hey I had a question. So I found a swipe file like you mentioned. Listed here:
https://s3-eu-west-1.amazonaws.com/johnmulry/The+Ultimate+Headlines+Swipe+File+2017+John+Mulry.pdf
I went to the bullet point section, starts on page : 26. My question is all these bullet points seem like titles or a headline. How do these work when it comes to for example an online course? Or even describing a product? Am I missing something?
Dislike ads? Remove them and support the forum:
Subscribe to Fastlane Insiders.