- Thread starter
- #53
Lex DeVille
Sweeping Shadows From Dreams
FASTLANE INSIDER
EPIC CONTRIBUTOR
Read Fastlane!
Read Unscripted!
Speedway Pass
I didn't know oDesk and it's very interesting! What you think about such a describe of me on my Profile?
"Student of architecture, graphic designer. You propably need a good graphic project, layout or logo to increase your income and strengthen the power of your brand. I can do it. And it will be nice."
Honestly...
I'd hire one of the forum members who's learning copy. Let them write it for you. Especially if you're marketing to English speaking countries.
Doesn't need to be expensive. Maybe PM one of the guys who replied to this thread.
Give them an opportunity to test their skills. Help them grow. They'll help you grow.
Leave each other good feedback. Build working relationships.
Unless you're learning copy, and plan to write in your native language, you may do more harm than good.
Your example lists skills first. Then it tells prospects what they probably need. You need to figure out their deepest desire/need and show how you solve it in your very first sentence. That's how you get their attention.