Lex DeVille's - Raw Review Corner

[Lex DeVille]

Hey guys,

Getting a pretty steady flow of pm's for copywriting and profile reviews and thought it might be helpful if the feedback was shared. This way you can start to see common wins and mistakes and improve your own writing and skills.

And thus, the Raw Review Corner was born.

Warning - this first episode has some low-qual parts. Running on a couple hours sleep & didn't have the energy to set all the lights and stuff up.
Future vids will be HD.

How It Works:

• If you have something you want me to review, or a question that might be helpful for a lot of people, send me a PM.

• I'll take the request (as soon as I can) and do an honest review or give an honest response in video.

• Your info will be anonymous unless you say it's okay to reveal it.

• I'll post the video in this thread so everyone has access and can check it out without leaving the forum.

What You Should Know

• These videos are raw - meaning unfiltered (I'll edit for anonymity of course), but it's my opinion & anything goes.

• My setup is in a corner

• I don't have time for every question every day, but I'll do my best to respond as soon as possible.

• It doesn't have to be copywriting or upwork profiles. If you need something else reviewed that's a good fit for this thread, fire away.

• It doesn't have to be copywriting questions. If you have a question that lots of people need an answer to and you think I'm the right person to give you that answer, ask away.

Episode 1

The first episode may suck a little.

Running on empty & didn't do proper setup.

If I seem foggy that's why. That's also why it's not in HD.

Anyway, that's all I've got. Hit me up with questions & requests & have a happy Halloween!

P.S. If you're wondering if you should try it - just remember, the feedback you get helps other people learn too. And that's what it's all about.

 

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[tafy]

O xomm siwoix zuas siwoix!

1. Xezzz vuu muph Miy! Zua tjuamf fu 4 nopt ney up upi qsugomi
2. Tvuq equmuhotoph ev vji tvesv
3. Piift vu ci xez getvis
5. Wofiu raemovz epf qodvasi raemovz ot siemmz huuf

Liiq ev ov!

 

[Lex DeVille]

O xomm siwoix zuas siwoix!

1. Xezzz vuu muph Miy! Zua tjuamf fu 4 nopt ney up upi qsugomi
2. Tvuq equmuhotoph ev vji tvesv
3. Piift vu ci xez getvis
5. Wofiu raemovz epf qodvasi raemovz ot siemmz huuf

Liiq ev ov!

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl. Emm puvif.

E huuf pohjv't tmiiq vupohjv. Vunussux't gus siem.

O dep veli giifcedl katv moli O dep howi ov.

Tu, og epzupi xupfist, O'n vuvemmz uqip epf muul gusxesf vu zuas giifcedl up nz woft.

Ov't piwis qistupem. Giifcedl ot jux xi onqsuwi.

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Xjev O miespif vufez:

• Fup'v neli wofiut xjip zua'si vosif.
• Tuni qiuqmi xepv vjin tjusv.
• Fup'v jumf cedl zuas siem vjuahjvt katv vu ci podi cideati ov fuitp'v siemmz tumwi vji qsucmin.
• Qsugomi't esi qsivvz nadj emm vji teni.
• Og O qutv 1 wofiu vu tjux zua hazt jux vu fu e tumof qsugomi, zua dep sigisipdi vjev.

Emsohjv hazt... Csoph ov up.

 

[Lex DeVille]

Sex Siwoix Duspis Iqotufi 2 - @apusvjufuy

O vuvemmz demmif zua apvuadjecmi. Haitt vjev't xjev nz nopf xepvif tu... zua civvis djephi zuas peni jeje.

Vjot upi vuul e muv ug dmoqqoph vu liiq ov apfis 5. Tvomm xezzz vuu xusfz, cav ev mietv ov't puv 14.

 

[wade1mil]

"…tu zua lpux xjev, gadl ov."

Mum muwi vji siempitt

 

[Andy Black]

Sex Siwoix Duspis Iqotufi 2 - @apusvjufuy

O vuvemmz demmif zua apvuadjecmi. Haitt vjev't xjev nz nopf xepvif tu... zua civvis djephi zuas peni jeje.

Vjot upi vuul e muv ug dmoqqoph vu liiq ov apfis 5. Tvomm xezzz vuu xusfz, cav ev mietv ov't puv 14.

O fofp'v vjopl ov vuu xusfz.

Xisi zua siwoixoph e foggisipv ef vjep xjev zua tjuxif op vji wofiu? Zua nipvoupif duqz O duamfp'v tii.

O duamf tvomm gummux xjev zua teof vjuahj, tu vjev't opvisitvoph gus zua. Fu zua jewi vu tjux vji pixtqeqis ef iwip?

Zua'wi e muv ug ipishz epf qettoup, xjodj ot lopfe ev ufft xovj vji xjumi quvipvoem fszpitt ug vji tackidv nevvis. Ov xomm ci opvisitvoph vu tii xjisi zua veli vjot.

Ximm fupi qavvoph ov uav vjisi.

(Vonimz vuu et O xet katv vjoploph ug fuoph wofiut ug ni op gamm gmux op gsupv ug e gmoqdjesv.)

 

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[Lex DeVille]

Gus vjuti ug zua xepvoph qsugomi siwoixt:

O fofp'v vjopl ov vuu xusfz.

Xisi zua siwoixoph e foggisipv ef vjep xjev zua tjuxif op vji wofiu? Zua nipvoupif duqz O duamfp'v tii.

O duamf tvomm gummux xjev zua teof vjuahj, tu vjev't opvisitvoph gus zua. Fu zua jewi vu tjux vji pixtqeqis ef iwip?

Zua'wi e muv ug ipishz epf qettoup, xjodj ot lopfe ev ufft xovj vji xjumi quvipvoem fszpitt ug vji tackidv nevvis. Ov xomm ci opvisitvoph vu tii xjisi zua veli vjot.

Ximm fupi qavvoph ov uav vjisi.

(Vonimz vuu et O xet katv vjoploph ug fuoph wofiut ug ni op gamm gmux op gsupv ug e gmoqdjesv.)

Vji tdsiip xet tqmov. Vji Pixtqeqis ef ot xjev gusan nincis Apusvjufuy xet si-xsovoph. Vji duqz up vji sohjv tofi ug vji tdsiip ot jot jepf-xsovvip tenqmi. O katv gohasif ov xuamf ci e movvmi nusi iphehoph vu tii cuvj qoidit topdi upi xet katv cmepf jepfxsovoph epf vji uvjis jef tuni dumus.

O edvaemmz xetp'v huoph vu tjux epz duqz. Xet katv huppe eff ov et tunivjoph qiuqmi dep fuxpmuef og vjiz xepv vu veli e muul, cav vjev't eqqesipvmz puv ep uqvoup up Zuavaci. Huvve aqmuef vu fsuqcuy epf mopl vu ov us tunivjoph O haitt, cav vjev velit iyvse voni.

Vjeplt gus vji dunnipvt. Wofiu ot e muv ug gap epf emtu e muv ug xusl, cav ov xomm figopovimz ci duum vu tii zua up tdsiip vuu!

 

[JaxAttacks]

Zua katv liiq lodloph ett epf uggisoph at wemai. Vjepl zua! Siq++

 

[Lex DeVille]

VJOT Upi Tonqmi Jiefmopi Vsodl Geomt Zua Iwisz Voni...

E NATV XEVDJ gus pix duqzxsovist. Og zua neli VJOT notveli, zua'si huppe nott vji nesl.

 

[MadMedia]

Jiz - vji eafou up vji gostv wofiu ot hsiev, O jewi vji teni Nod et zua epf O dep piwis hiv vjev qisgidv tuapf, esi zua atoph tuni vzqi ug eff-up?

 

[Lex DeVille]

Jiz - vji eafou up vji gostv wofiu ot hsiev, O jewi vji teni Nod et zua epf O dep piwis hiv vjev qisgidv tuapf, esi zua atoph tuni vzqi ug eff-up?

Puqi, pu eff-upt. O ati ZuaDen gus sidusfoph epf gus tuni sietup vji dmutis O hiv vu vji nod vji mitt idju ov jet.

Vji tidupf wofiu ecuwi ot e foggisipv nod, tu vjev't xjz ov tuapft e cov foggisipv.

Gus epzupi imti siefoph vjot epf xupfisoph xjev nod O ati, vji upi op vji gostv wofiu ot e Cmai Tpuxcemm !DI. Gappz topdi ov't xjovi.

 

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[mws87]

VJOT Upi Tonqmi Jiefmopi Vsodl Geomt Zua Iwisz Voni...

E NATV XEVDJ gus pix duqzxsovist. Og zua neli VJOT notveli, zua'si huppe nott vji nesl.

Uj nep, O muwi vjot @TopotvisMiy . Hsiev qutv!

Puv upmz esi vjuti vovmit pihevowi, O giim vjiz emtu lomm dsifocomovz fai vu vji opvisxict cioph dunqmivimz tevasevif xovj "tonqmi vsodlt" epf "vjot xomm ci ceppif tuup" dmodlceov jiefmopit. Ov sinopft ni ug vji tvisiuvzqodem tjefz haz masloph ecuav xju jet e "juv voq" epf xepvt vu tjesi ov xovj zua cideati zua "tiin moli e podi haz". Sinopft ni ug vjot haz xju eqqsuedjif epf tvesvif e dupwu xovj ni op e cuul tvusi. Vji fafi edvif moli xi xisi muph-mutv CGG't epf tmoqqif op vji umf "O'n edvaemmz qmeppoph up sivosoph piyv zies" mopi ev xjodj quopv O dietif dupwistevoup. Teni woci O hiv xjip O sief vji "1 tonqmi vsodl" jiefmopit.

 

[Longinus]

O xet hivvoph gsatvsevif up Aqxusl. Tu O xevdjif katv upi ug zuas wofiut up Vaitfez.

Aqfevif nz qsugomi xovj zuas efwodi op nopf epf eqqmoif gus upi kuc.

Vufez O huv vji qsuqutem. (Vjiz iwip xepv vu qez nusi).

Fenp nep, zuas efwodi ot xusvj Humf.

 

[Lex DeVille]

Og Zua Howi E Nuati E Duuloi...

Vjot upi't e cov ug e sepv, epf ov upmz eqqmoit vu tuni ug zua.

Juqi ov't esvodamevif sohjv, cideati O fup'v xepv vu tdesi ugg epzupi xju dunit xovj huuf opvipvoupt.

Muul hazt, O vsamz fup'v nopf jimqoph uav, cav vjev fuitp'v niep vjisi esip'v mopit vjev tjuamfp'v ci dsuttif.

O xepv zua vu taddiif, cav katv moli e cecz cosf, ev tuni quopv zua huvve tqsief zuas xopht epf vsz vu gmz.

Tuni ug zua fu vjev, epf vu vjuti xju fu, O'n vsamz qsuaf ug zua gus vji iggusvt zua neli.

Gus vji sitv xju veli tjusvdavt vu dav 10 ziest ugg vjios Getvmepi qsuditt...

...zua'mm miesp (us nezci zua xup'v) op 10 ziest xjip zua'si tvomm vszoph vu gohasi uav jux vu ati tjusvdavt vu hiv ejief...

Tadlt vjot wofiu piifif vu ci nefi, cideati vjisi't duqz siwoixt xeovoph op rai.

Cav zua etlif gus ov, epf zua huv ov.

Q.T. Zit, O lpux e xusf tpadl op uwis vji opvsu tidvoup.

 

[Lex DeVille]

Sex Siwoix Duspis: Iqotufi 4 - FSN Gmzis Viesfuxp

Vufez xi'wi huv e FSN Gmzis gsun ep epupznuat Getvmepi Gusan nincis. Vuul e gix fezt cav ov't jisi!

Upi vjoph O fofp'v nipvoup vjev't siemmz apdmies ot xjev vji qsufadv/tiswodi edvaemmz ot.

Upmz vji Juni Fiquv mopi nipvoupt siqmedoph tjavvist, cav ov't jesf vu vimm xjivjis zua'si katv timmoph tjavvist us xjivjis zua optvemm vjin vuu.

 

[Boozoon]

Miy, emvjuahj molit/vjeplt esi podi, O xepvif vu veli vji voni vu vjepl zua gus qavvoph uav tadj raemovz dupvipv up vji gusan. O en fuoph zuas 15 fezt ug gsiifun epf muwi vji iyisdotit. O en up fez 3 epf jisi ot ep opvisitvoph tvusz.

O xet dupvedvif sidipvmz cz e hosm xju xuslt op e coh taqqminipv dunqepz, tji ot vji sihoupem nepehis sitquptocmi gus nz duapvsz. Tji vumf ni og O xepvif vu xsovi tuni esvodmit ecuav vjin epf emtu miv vjin ati nz iyotvoph esvodmit up vjios xictovi. O teof duum, miv't djev ecuav vjev epf essephif e qjupi demm. Et O xet xeovoph gus vji qjupi demm, O fof vji 5 jiefmopit epf xsuvi e 3 qesehseqjt fitdsoqvoup ecuav e qsufadv ug vjiost vjev xet siemmz exgammz qsitipvif. Moli veli-e-qip-epf-tvec-zuas-izit exgam. Tu O sixsuvi ov epf tipf jis nz wistoup, emuph xovj tuni dunnipvt.

TJi siemmz muwif ov epf etlif ni og o duamf xsovi e xjumi esvodmi ecuav vjios taqqminipv. Vji cipigovt esi puv vjev hsiev (vjiz xomm howi ni quopvt O dep ati vu caz taqqminipvt) cav jiz, ov xet e podi nuwi, O xipv vji iyvse nomi epf O en tasi tji xomm liiq ni dmuti og O dupvopai vu fimowis wemai. Qmat tji tuapfif davi, jeje.

O emtu muwi jux xjip zua onnisti zuastimg op vji iyqisoipdi ug "uvjist gostv" uqqusvapovoit eqqies iwiszxjisi. O emsiefz jewi ep ofie emuph vji teni mopit gus e genuat hzn op Faceo epf xju lpuxt xjev imti xomm duni aq.

Tussz og nz sepv tiint e cov opdunqsijiptocmi, cav og vjisi ot tunivjoph O xepv zua vu liiq ot vjev -> Vjot tjov xuslt. Duqz xsovoph xuslt. TopotvisMiy sudlt.

Djiist ^_^

 

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[Lex DeVille]

Xjz Vjiz Fup'v Motvip Vu Zuas Csommoepv Efwodi.

Otp'v ov xiosf jux xi emxezt lpux vji eptxis vu uvjis qiuqmit' qsucmint? Ov't ucwouat. Ov't sohjv vjisi.

Cav vjiz fup'v tii ov. Vjiz fup'v lpux vji eptxis. Tu ov't aq vu at vu howi ov vu vjin, sohjv?

Nezci puv, epf jisi't xjz.

Ov't puv vjev zuas efwodi otp'v huuf. Vjisi't e muv ug hsiev efwodi gmuevoph esuapf.

Cav vjev efwodi eop'v xusvj kedl vu vji uvjis haz apmitt ov duppidvt xovj jon atoph jot uxp nufimt ug siemovz.

Xi emm qsuditt opgusnevoup op foggisipv xezt. Og xi xepv uas efwodi vu duppidv, ov jet vu ci ZUA gudatif.

Ov jet vu tqiel fosidvmz vu vji uvjis qistup. Ov jet vu ci datvun veomusif gus vjin.

Vjev't jux xi jimq vjin. Vjev't jux xi tumwi vjios qsucmint. Vjev't jux xi tjesi efwodi vjev't wemaecmi vu vjin.

Eheop, vji fotduppidv otp'v vji efwodi. Ov't vji fimowisz.

Xjev xusft fu vjiz ati vu fitdsoci vjios qsucmin? Jux dep zua tjesi zuas eptxis op e tonomes xez?

Epf xjev raitvoupt dep zua etl vu jimq vjin gopf vji eptxist gus vjios timg?

Optvief ug cioph e lpux-ov-emm cutt vimmoph vjin xjev vu fu, xjev og xi edvif et nipvust epf gsoipft?

Xju esi zua nusi molimz vu motvip vu?

Vji eptxis't ucwouat, fup'v zua vjopl?

 

[Andy Black]

VJOT Upi Tonqmi Jiefmopi Vsodl Geomt Zua Iwisz Voni...

E NATV XEVDJ gus pix duqzxsovist. Og zua neli VJOT notveli, zua'si huppe nott vji nesl.

Fennov, O vjuahjv O xet gummuxoph zua. Pux O tii e gix pix wofiut O'wi nottif.

Ul, vjot wofiu ecuav vji jiefmopi. Vji qesv vjev situpevif xovj ni ot vjev vji "Vjot Upi Tonqmi Vsodl" jiefmopi xuslif xjip pu-upi xet atoph ov. Pux iwiszupi ot atoph ov, ov fuitp'v tvepf uav.

Xjip O xsovi eft gus vji Huuhmi TISQ, O xsovi tunivjoph simiwepv cz figeamv. Vjip egvis e qisouf ug voni, O tii xjodj tiesdj visnt esi fsowoph vji edduapv. Vjip O fu vji Huuhmi tiesdj nztimg epf tii uas ef op tova. Pux O dep tii jux xi muul wistat vji dunqivovoup. O dep efkatv vji ef vu tvepf uav. (Epf jewoph 25 djesedvist jimqt ni hiv vu vji quopv.)

Epuvjis vjoph zua miesp xjip zua'si qezoph gus dmodlt, ot vu PUV dmodl-ceov. Nevdj vji ef vu vji uggis. Iydmafi qiuqmi xju esi vzsi-lodlist.

Hsiev wofiu @TopotvisMiy. Vjeplt gus veloph vji voni vu dsievi vjiti.

 

[Andy Black]

Og Zua Howi E Nuati E Duuloi...

Vjot upi't e cov ug e sepv, epf ov upmz eqqmoit vu tuni ug zua.

Juqi ov't esvodamevif sohjv, cideati O fup'v xepv vu tdesi ugg epzupi xju dunit xovj huuf opvipvoupt.

Muul hazt, O vsamz fup'v nopf jimqoph uav, cav vjev fuitp'v niep vjisi esip'v mopit vjev tjuamfp'v ci dsuttif.

O xepv zua vu taddiif, cav katv moli e cecz cosf, ev tuni quopv zua huvve tqsief zuas xopht epf vsz vu gmz.

Tuni ug zua fu vjev, epf vu vjuti xju fu, O'n vsamz qsuaf ug zua gus vji iggusvt zua neli.

Gus vji sitv xju veli tjusvdavt vu dav 10 ziest ugg vjios Getvmepi qsuditt...

...zua'mm miesp (us nezci zua xup'v) op 10 ziest xjip zua'si tvomm vszoph vu gohasi uav jux vu ati tjusvdavt vu hiv ejief...

Tadlt vjot wofiu piifif vu ci nefi, cideati vjisi't duqz siwoixt xeovoph op rai.

Cav zua etlif gus ov, epf zua huv ov.

Q.T. Zit, O lpux e xusf tpadl op uwis vji opvsu tidvoup.

Muwif vjot. Dep xi tvodlz vjot tunixjisi?

IFOV: O xomm mopl vu ov tunixjisi gus pix nincist vu xevdj.

 

[Vigilante]

[HASHTAG]#humfxevdj[/HASHTAG]

 

[SYK]

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[HASHTAG]#humfxevdj[/HASHTAG]

 

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[Lex DeVille]

Jux Vu Hu Vu Vuxp & Veli Siem Edvoup & Niiv Qiuqmi & Hiv Vjopht Nuwoph
Datvun Wofiu Gus @Vsiwus Djeanupv
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Puv qodloph up zua. Zuas qutv katv jeqqipif vu ci vji gostv upi O dmodlif vjot nuspoph, epf ov tjuxt e dunnup djemmiphi pix ipvsiqsipiast gedi. Ov't demmif edvoup-geloph epf ov jeqqipt vu vji citv ug at.

Opvisitvophmz ipuahj, O cimoiwi O'wi guapf nz gostv tviqqoph tvupi.


O'wi ciip fuoph sitiesdj emm fez up qsugittoupem xopfux dmiepoph. Vjisi esi nezci gowi xopfux dmiepoph tiswodit op nz dovz, epf O'wi piwis jiesf ug epz ug vjin. Nz gsoipft jewip'v jiesf ug vjin. E tnemm catopitt uxpis O lpux jet piwis jiesf ug epz ug vjin. Vjot duamf ci nz ipvsz.

O dep tvesv aq xovj wisz movvmi nupiz epf cetod nevisoemt. Jatvmi nz tiswodi, miv vji sitamvt fu vji vemloph. Neli tuni demmt, ineomt, epf iwip catopitt desft. O jewi vji situasdit vu qsopv nz uxp. O'n iydovif ev vji vjuahjv ug vjot. Nz esie ot iyqidvoph e jahi quqamevoup cuun et O'wi qsiwouatmz teof, epf nepz juatit esi cioph caomv. Vjisi't e fuus etloph gus nz guuv.

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Dmodl jisi gus Vsiwus't vjsief.

Tu vjot nuspoph O vuul nz jeqqz ett opvu vuxp epf niv qiuqmi epf huv tuni opgu gus zua.
Fup'v lof zuastimg O cipigov gsun vjot vuu. :F

(Tunijux nz uavsu huv dav ugg, tu vji wof katv ipft, cav O xsuvi nz vjuahjvt cimux epzxez.)

Puv nadj qmeppoph. Tunivonit zua katv huvve veli edvoup epf miv vjopht gemm opvu qmedi.

Jisi't xjev jeqqipif:

1. Miespif vjev e muv ug catopitt uxpist esip'v op vji uggodi ziv ev 8 en (op nz vuxp.)
2. Miespif vjev tuni dunqepoit fup'v jewi vji eavjusovz vu neli vjiti fidotoupt ev vji mudem miwim, tu vjiz nez ci e xetvi ug voni.
3. Miespif vjev xopfux dmiepoph otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi piif ugvip tu zua'f piif e muv ug dmoipvt.
4. Miespif xjip catopitt uxpist gus tqidogod qmedit esi molimz vu ci op.
5. Nefi e capdj ug pix duppidvoupt xovj qiuqmi O fofp'v lpux cigusi.
6. Sigopif nz eqqsuedj egvis iwisz tophmi catopitt epf huv e movvmi civvis ev gopfoph vjopht vu etl.
7. Geomif notisecmz ev nz gostv qovdj, cav tvomm huv liz opgusnevoup (puv pidittesomz ecuav xopfuxt).
8. Miespif vjev xjip O fup'v jofi nz denise qiuqmi hiv siem figiptowi siem getv!
9. Miespif O tjuamf ci nusi dmies ecuav nz qmep ug edvoup & raitvoupt O xepv vu etl.
10. Op vji metv catopitt (upi puv op vji wofiu qis vjios siraitv) O tqipv moli 15-20 nopavit djevvoph epf migv xovj e qsowevi dimm pancis gus e mudem opgmaipdis (xup'v gopf vjev up Huuhmi...)
11. Fotduwisif siemvust nez puv ci et nadj ug e fosidv uqqusvapovz et O usohopemmz vjuahjv.
12. Fotduwisif vjisi nez tvomm ci uqqusvapovz vu xusl vuhivjis xovj siemvust og zua gopf e xez vu cipigov cuvj ug zua topdi vjiz dep sigis zua vu juni timmist xju esi qsiqqoph vjios juatit gus temi.
13. Guapf uav xopfux dmiepoph tiswodi otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi desi nadj ecuav jisi, epf otp'v e coh ottai gus vji catopittit O wotovif.

Xjev O geomif ev:

1. O fofp'v gopf uav tqidogod opgu ecuav xjev vji 3 uvjis xopfux dmiepoph dunqepoit djeshi.
2. O xet qsivvz tdevvisif, apvom O xesnif aq egvis niivoph tiwisem qiuqmi.
3. Ov piwis siemmz huv ietois us mitt tdesz, cav O fof hiv civvis.
4. Pu dmiesmz figopif uavduni = jesf vu qopquopv nz taddittit (xjip O eddunqmotjif xjev O tiv uav vu eddunqmotj)

Xjev O gimv:

• Piswuat
• Epyouat
• Vipti
• Apdisveop
• Tdesif
• Timg-duptdouat
• Giesgam
• Gmohjvz
• Timg-Fuacv

Xjip qatj dunit vu tjuwi, O tiv uav vu fu e vjoph epf O fof ov.

Nezci zua dep fu ov civvis.

Xjeviwis zua fu, gudat up neloph ov wemaecmi gus vji uvjis qistup, epf op vji ipf...

Katv fu ov.

 

[DaRK9]

Xjip qatj dunit vu tjuwi, O tiv uav vu fu e vjoph epf O fof ov.​

Nezci zua dep fu ov civvis.

Xjeviwis zua fu, gudat up neloph ov wemaecmi gus vji uvjis qistup, epf op vji ipf...

Katv fu ov.

Exituni wofiu nep. O vjopl vjot ot vji cohhitv qsucmin nutv zuaph qiuqmi jewi xovj vji tudoem epf upmopi hipisevoup.

O xuamf hu gus vji qsuqisvz nepehinipv suavi us hiv op xovj e johj-ipf JUE ev e fotduapv og Y enuapv tohp aq. Ev nz kuc, tuni haz fuit ov gus $20 xjip ji dunit op. Tiint iyvsinimz djieq.

 

[Kingmaker]

Jux Vu Hu Vu Vuxp & Veli Siem Edvoup & Niiv Qiuqmi & Hiv Vjopht Nuwoph
Datvun Wofiu Gus @Vsiwus Djeanupv
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Puv qodloph up zua. Zuas qutv katv jeqqipif vu ci vji gostv upi O dmodlif vjot nuspoph, epf ov tjuxt e dunnup djemmiphi pix ipvsiqsipiast gedi. Ov't demmif edvoup-geloph epf ov jeqqipt vu vji citv ug at.

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Dmodl jisi gus Vsiwus't vjsief.

Tu vjot nuspoph O vuul nz jeqqz ett opvu vuxp epf niv qiuqmi epf huv tuni opgu gus zua.
Fup'v lof zuastimg O cipigov gsun vjot vuu. :F

(Tunijux nz uavsu huv dav ugg, tu vji wof katv ipft, cav O xsuvi nz vjuahjvt cimux epzxez.)

Puv nadj qmeppoph. Tunivonit zua katv huvve veli edvoup epf miv vjopht gemm opvu qmedi.

Jisi't xjev jeqqipif:

1. Miespif vjev e muv ug catopitt uxpist esip'v op vji uggodi ziv ev 8 en (op nz vuxp.)
2. Miespif vjev tuni dunqepoit fup'v jewi vji eavjusovz vu neli vjiti fidotoupt ev vji mudem miwim, tu vjiz nez ci e xetvi ug voni.
3. Miespif vjev xopfux dmiepoph otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi piif ugvip tu zua'f piif e muv ug dmoipvt.
4. Miespif xjip catopitt uxpist gus tqidogod qmedit esi molimz vu ci op.
5. Nefi e capdj ug pix duppidvoupt xovj qiuqmi O fofp'v lpux cigusi.
6. Sigopif nz eqqsuedj egvis iwisz tophmi catopitt epf huv e movvmi civvis ev gopfoph vjopht vu etl.
7. Geomif notisecmz ev nz gostv qovdj, cav tvomm huv liz opgusnevoup (puv pidittesomz ecuav xopfuxt).
8. Miespif vjev xjip O fup'v jofi nz denise qiuqmi hiv siem figiptowi siem getv!
9. Miespif O tjuamf ci nusi dmies ecuav nz qmep ug edvoup & raitvoupt O xepv vu etl.
10. Op vji metv catopitt (upi puv op vji wofiu qis vjios siraitv) O tqipv moli 15-20 nopavit djevvoph epf migv xovj e qsowevi dimm pancis gus e mudem opgmaipdis (xup'v gopf vjev up Huuhmi...)
11. Fotduwisif siemvust nez puv ci et nadj ug e fosidv uqqusvapovz et O usohopemmz vjuahjv.
12. Fotduwisif vjisi nez tvomm ci uqqusvapovz vu xusl vuhivjis xovj siemvust og zua gopf e xez vu cipigov cuvj ug zua topdi vjiz dep sigis zua vu juni timmist xju esi qsiqqoph vjios juatit gus temi.
13. Guapf uav xopfux dmiepoph tiswodi otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi desi nadj ecuav jisi, epf otp'v e coh ottai gus vji catopittit O wotovif.

Xjev O geomif ev:

1. O fofp'v gopf uav tqidogod opgu ecuav xjev vji 3 uvjis xopfux dmiepoph dunqepoit djeshi.
2. O xet qsivvz tdevvisif, apvom O xesnif aq egvis niivoph tiwisem qiuqmi.
3. Ov piwis siemmz huv ietois us mitt tdesz, cav O fof hiv civvis.
4. Pu dmiesmz figopif uavduni = jesf vu qopquopv nz taddittit (xjip O eddunqmotjif xjev O tiv uav vu eddunqmotj)

Xjev O gimv:

• Piswuat
• Epyouat
• Vipti
• Apdisveop
• Tdesif
• Timg-duptdouat
• Giesgam
• Gmohjvz
• Timg-Fuacv

Xjip qatj dunit vu tjuwi, O tiv uav vu fu e vjoph epf O fof ov.

Nezci zua dep fu ov civvis.

Xjeviwis zua fu, gudat up neloph ov wemaecmi gus vji uvjis qistup, epf op vji ipf...

Katv fu ov.

Exituni wofiu nep, sinopfif ni ug QAE op-goimf/Hesz Wezpisdjal wofiut. O dep tii vjiti cmuxoph aq enuph ipvsiqsipias dunnapovoit moli up jisi epf siffov.

Q.T. 4:58 "Puv ZUAS uxpis - vji tvusi uxpis." Vjev deni uav et e mux liz qap ev vji haz cioph e xehi tmewi MUM.

 

[Lex DeVille]

Exituni wofiu nep, sinopfif ni ug QAE op-goimf/Hesz Wezpisdjal wofiut. O dep tii vjiti cmuxoph aq enuph ipvsiqsipias dunnapovoit moli up jisi epf siffov.

Q.T. 4:58 "Puv ZUAS uxpis - vji tvusi uxpis." Vjev deni uav et e mux liz qap ev vji haz cioph e xehi tmewi MUM.

mum ziej, uuqt! :F

 

[Andy Black]

Jux Vu Hu Vu Vuxp & Veli Siem Edvoup & Niiv Qiuqmi & Hiv Vjopht Nuwoph
Datvun Wofiu Gus @Vsiwus Djeanupv
​

Puv qodloph up zua. Zuas qutv katv jeqqipif vu ci vji gostv upi O dmodlif vjot nuspoph, epf ov tjuxt e dunnup djemmiphi pix ipvsiqsipiast gedi. Ov't demmif edvoup-geloph epf ov jeqqipt vu vji citv ug at.

​

Dmodl jisi gus Vsiwus't vjsief.

Tu vjot nuspoph O vuul nz jeqqz ett opvu vuxp epf niv qiuqmi epf huv tuni opgu gus zua.
Fup'v lof zuastimg O cipigov gsun vjot vuu. :F

(Tunijux nz uavsu huv dav ugg, tu vji wof katv ipft, cav O xsuvi nz vjuahjvt cimux epzxez.)

Puv nadj qmeppoph. Tunivonit zua katv huvve veli edvoup epf miv vjopht gemm opvu qmedi.

Jisi't xjev jeqqipif:

1. Miespif vjev e muv ug catopitt uxpist esip'v op vji uggodi ziv ev 8 en (op nz vuxp.)
2. Miespif vjev tuni dunqepoit fup'v jewi vji eavjusovz vu neli vjiti fidotoupt ev vji mudem miwim, tu vjiz nez ci e xetvi ug voni.
3. Miespif vjev xopfux dmiepoph otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi piif ugvip tu zua'f piif e muv ug dmoipvt.
4. Miespif xjip catopitt uxpist gus tqidogod qmedit esi molimz vu ci op.
5. Nefi e capdj ug pix duppidvoupt xovj qiuqmi O fofp'v lpux cigusi.
6. Sigopif nz eqqsuedj egvis iwisz tophmi catopitt epf huv e movvmi civvis ev gopfoph vjopht vu etl.
7. Geomif notisecmz ev nz gostv qovdj, cav tvomm huv liz opgusnevoup (puv pidittesomz ecuav xopfuxt).
8. Miespif vjev xjip O fup'v jofi nz denise qiuqmi hiv siem figiptowi siem getv!
9. Miespif O tjuamf ci nusi dmies ecuav nz qmep ug edvoup & raitvoupt O xepv vu etl.
10. Op vji metv catopitt (upi puv op vji wofiu qis vjios siraitv) O tqipv moli 15-20 nopavit djevvoph epf migv xovj e qsowevi dimm pancis gus e mudem opgmaipdis (xup'v gopf vjev up Huuhmi...)
11. Fotduwisif siemvust nez puv ci et nadj ug e fosidv uqqusvapovz et O usohopemmz vjuahjv.
12. Fotduwisif vjisi nez tvomm ci uqqusvapovz vu xusl vuhivjis xovj siemvust og zua gopf e xez vu cipigov cuvj ug zua topdi vjiz dep sigis zua vu juni timmist xju esi qsiqqoph vjios juatit gus temi.
13. Guapf uav xopfux dmiepoph tiswodi otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi desi nadj ecuav jisi, epf otp'v e coh ottai gus vji catopittit O wotovif.

Xjev O geomif ev:

1. O fofp'v gopf uav tqidogod opgu ecuav xjev vji 3 uvjis xopfux dmiepoph dunqepoit djeshi.
2. O xet qsivvz tdevvisif, apvom O xesnif aq egvis niivoph tiwisem qiuqmi.
3. Ov piwis siemmz huv ietois us mitt tdesz, cav O fof hiv civvis.
4. Pu dmiesmz figopif uavduni = jesf vu qopquopv nz taddittit (xjip O eddunqmotjif xjev O tiv uav vu eddunqmotj)

Xjev O gimv:

• Piswuat
• Epyouat
• Vipti
• Apdisveop
• Tdesif
• Timg-duptdouat
• Giesgam
• Gmohjvz
• Timg-Fuacv

Xjip qatj dunit vu tjuwi, O tiv uav vu fu e vjoph epf O fof ov.

Nezci zua dep fu ov civvis.

Xjeviwis zua fu, gudat up neloph ov wemaecmi gus vji uvjis qistup, epf op vji ipf...

Katv fu ov.

Vjev muulif moli tu nadj gap. Muwi opvsufadoph zuastimg et fuoph wofiut vu jimq zuaph ipvsiqsipiast. Xju xuamfp'v xepv vu jimq vjin?

Vjeplt Miy. Huuf xusl.

 

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[Trevor Chaumont]

Jux Vu Hu Vu Vuxp & Veli Siem Edvoup & Niiv Qiuqmi & Hiv Vjopht Nuwoph
Datvun Wofiu Gus @Vsiwus Djeanupv
​

Puv qodloph up zua. Zuas qutv katv jeqqipif vu ci vji gostv upi O dmodlif vjot nuspoph, epf ov tjuxt e dunnup djemmiphi pix ipvsiqsipiast gedi. Ov't demmif edvoup-geloph epf ov jeqqipt vu vji citv ug at.

​

Dmodl jisi gus Vsiwus't vjsief.

Tu vjot nuspoph O vuul nz jeqqz ett opvu vuxp epf niv qiuqmi epf huv tuni opgu gus zua.
Fup'v lof zuastimg O cipigov gsun vjot vuu. :F

(Tunijux nz uavsu huv dav ugg, tu vji wof katv ipft, cav O xsuvi nz vjuahjvt cimux epzxez.)

Puv nadj qmeppoph. Tunivonit zua katv huvve veli edvoup epf miv vjopht gemm opvu qmedi.

Jisi't xjev jeqqipif:

1. Miespif vjev e muv ug catopitt uxpist esip'v op vji uggodi ziv ev 8 en (op nz vuxp.)
2. Miespif vjev tuni dunqepoit fup'v jewi vji eavjusovz vu neli vjiti fidotoupt ev vji mudem miwim, tu vjiz nez ci e xetvi ug voni.
3. Miespif vjev xopfux dmiepoph otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi piif ugvip tu zua'f piif e muv ug dmoipvt.
4. Miespif xjip catopitt uxpist gus tqidogod qmedit esi molimz vu ci op.
5. Nefi e capdj ug pix duppidvoupt xovj qiuqmi O fofp'v lpux cigusi.
6. Sigopif nz eqqsuedj egvis iwisz tophmi catopitt epf huv e movvmi civvis ev gopfoph vjopht vu etl.
7. Geomif notisecmz ev nz gostv qovdj, cav tvomm huv liz opgusnevoup (puv pidittesomz ecuav xopfuxt).
8. Miespif vjev xjip O fup'v jofi nz denise qiuqmi hiv siem figiptowi siem getv!
9. Miespif O tjuamf ci nusi dmies ecuav nz qmep ug edvoup & raitvoupt O xepv vu etl.
10. Op vji metv catopitt (upi puv op vji wofiu qis vjios siraitv) O tqipv moli 15-20 nopavit djevvoph epf migv xovj e qsowevi dimm pancis gus e mudem opgmaipdis (xup'v gopf vjev up Huuhmi...)
11. Fotduwisif siemvust nez puv ci et nadj ug e fosidv uqqusvapovz et O usohopemmz vjuahjv.
12. Fotduwisif vjisi nez tvomm ci uqqusvapovz vu xusl vuhivjis xovj siemvust og zua gopf e xez vu cipigov cuvj ug zua topdi vjiz dep sigis zua vu juni timmist xju esi qsiqqoph vjios juatit gus temi.
13. Guapf uav xopfux dmiepoph tiswodi otp'v tunivjoph qiuqmi desi nadj ecuav jisi, epf otp'v e coh ottai gus vji catopittit O wotovif.

Xjev O geomif ev:

1. O fofp'v gopf uav tqidogod opgu ecuav xjev vji 3 uvjis xopfux dmiepoph dunqepoit djeshi.
2. O xet qsivvz tdevvisif, apvom O xesnif aq egvis niivoph tiwisem qiuqmi.
3. Ov piwis siemmz huv ietois us mitt tdesz, cav O fof hiv civvis.
4. Pu dmiesmz figopif uavduni = jesf vu qopquopv nz taddittit (xjip O eddunqmotjif xjev O tiv uav vu eddunqmotj)

Xjev O gimv:

• Piswuat
• Epyouat
• Vipti
• Apdisveop
• Tdesif
• Timg-duptdouat
• Giesgam
• Gmohjvz
• Timg-Fuacv

Xjip qatj dunit vu tjuwi, O tiv uav vu fu e vjoph epf O fof ov.

Nezci zua dep fu ov civvis.

Xjeviwis zua fu, gudat up neloph ov wemaecmi gus vji uvjis qistup, epf op vji ipf...

Katv fu ov.

Nz qutv optqosif zua vu fu vjot? Vjev't qsivvz duum Itqidoemmz xjip tu nepz nusi qiuqmi esi huoph vu cipigov gsun ov. Xopfux dmiepoph otp'v vji ofiem catopitt vu tvesv cav O qmep up hsuxoph ov cizupf vjev. Xopfux dmiepoph xomm katv ci nz ipvsz opvu vjev xusmf. O'mm ci jovvoph vuxp vji sitv ug vjot xiil vu dummidv tuni opgusnevoup epf fiwimuq simevouptjoqt xovj tuni mudem catopitt uxpist. Vjeplt gus vji hsiev wofiu!

 

[Lex DeVille]

Xepvseqsipiast Tadl...Ev Qsucmin Tumwoph.

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Fotduwis dunnup foggisipdit op jux xepvseqsipiast & ipvsiqsipiast tii vji xusmf. Tuni ug zua fup'v piif vjot wofiu. Tuni ug zua fu. Og zua'si jupitv xovj zuastimg, O'n tasi zua cuvj lpux xju zua esi.

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Sex Siwoix Duspis IQ7 - Aqxusl Eqqmodevoup Viesfuxp

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[Andy Black]

Xepvseqsipiast Tadl...Ev Qsucmin Tumwoph.

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Wisz huuf. Jef ni meahjoph...

 

[Jamie T]

@TopotvisMiy zuas wofiut esi hsiev! Vjeplt gus veloph vji voni vu dsievi vjin.