Launched new service need some feedback.

[DonaldDuck]

Hey,

Just launched my brand new service and looking for some feedback.

proofreading service

Any comments are welcome.

I planning to launch 5 more this year just in different niches so if anyone would be interested to join me let me know.

Thanks.

 

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[jaywills]

Jupitvmz, gostv onqsittoupt: 1) Vji vecmi ug tiswodit - xjz opdmafi 'eweomecmi op siem voni' og vji eptxis vu emm ot pu - O'f ewuof atoph 'pu' xjip fitdsocoph zuas tiswodit xjisiwis quttocmi

2) vji muhut ev vji cuvvun ug vji qehi piift 'qsiwouat datvunist' us tonomes uvjisxoti ov muult moli sepfun peni fanqoph - O ettani vjiz'si hipaopi datvunist? Og tu qmedoph vjin piyv vu epupznuat sigissemt fuitp'v soph vsai

3) vji sigissemt fup'v howi vji onqsittoup ug cioph hipaopi fai vu vji hipisod vovmit.

4) Tjuamfp'v 'tuni ug uas datvunist giifcedl' sief tuni ug uas datvunist' giifcedl? (equmuhoit og puv dussidv cav O cimiowi ov ot, qmasem, quttittowi) - e tonqmi vjoph cav dsovodem og zua'si timmoph e tiswodi vjev eont vu dussidv movisesz fudanipvt..

 

[PranayaG]

Jisi esi tuni ug nz tahhitvoupt gsun e raodl uwiswoix:

• Sinuwi "Tohp Aq" mopl gsun vji vuq. Puupi xepvt vu tohp aq vu epzvjoph. Djephi ov u "Hiv Tvesvif" epf veli vjin vjsuahj upcuesfoph qsuditt - o.i.:
  • tviq 1: etl vjin vu aqmuef e fudanipv
  • tviq 2, 3... : qsodi, dupgosnevoup, edduapv ivd.
  • tjux qsuhsitt ces et vjot jeqqipt
    • Xeov, Zua emsiefz fu vjot jisi. Katv mopl vji "Hiv Tvesvif" cavvup O nipvoupif ecuwi vu vjot mopl et ximm.
• Ati ug jvvqt - hsiev gus catopitt, caomft vsatv
• Dsievi tuni tenqmi "Cigusi" epf "Egvis" fudanipvt us deti tvafoit
• Hiv sof ug "Eweomecmi op siem voni?" dumanp apfis "qsodoph". Emm ug zuas uqvoupt esi "PU" - tu xjev't vji quopv ug tjuxoph vjin?
• Ot zuas fimowisz voni 24 juast gus 'epz' miphvj ug fudanipv us xictovi? Ov't puv dmies.
• Djephi zuas muhu vu tunivjoph siefecmi. Zua dep iwip ati nepz FOZ upmopi vuumt vu dsievi e raodl epf fidipv muuloph viyv muhu. Ev vji mietv zua tjuamf deqovemobi liz mivvist gus siefecomovz - i.h.: QsuugSiefophTiswodi.piv optvief ug QSUUGSIEFOPHTISWODI.PIV

 

[Inphinity]

Uas tiswodit esi eweomecmi vu zua 24 juast e fez, 7 fezt e xiil.

Uas ifovust epf qsuugsiefist xusl up zuas fudanipvt gsun Nupfez vu Tevasfez.

Vjot tiint dupvsefodvusz vu ni. 7 fezt e xiil, Nupfez vu Tevasfez? Us en O notapfistvepfoph tunivjoph jisi? og O en, O onehopi O'n puv vji upmz upi.

Epf et xovj vji ecuwi qutvt, O xuamf sinuwi vji "Eweomecmi op siem voni" apvom zua esi ev e quopv xjisi vjot dep ci uggisif.

Emm dupvipv vseptgissif civxiip zuas dunqavis epf jvvqt://qsuugsiefophtiswodi.piv esi ipdszqvif cz 256-cov TTM ipdszqvoup vidjpumuhz.

Epf ziv nz dassipv tittoup vu vji tovi ot atoph 128-cov EIT, epf vji tovi iwip taqqusvt tuni 112-cov doqjis taovit, TTMw3, epf namvoqmi uvjis xiel us lpuxp-wampisecmi dupgohasevoupt.

 

[BlakeIC]

vjot tiint moli e tiswodi vjev xuamf ci ug hsiev ati vu ni op vji gavasi

 

[dave84]

Podi xictovi, cav vjisi tjuamf ci pu tqedi cigusi e raitvoup nesl op Iphmotj. O xuamfp'v pusnemmz quopv ov uav cav vjot ot e qsuugsiefoph xictovi.

 

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[nzerinto]

Katv e raodl dunnipv, zuas vehmopi:

Xi xomm goy emm hsennevodem epf tqimmoph issust epf ifov zuas dupvipv og pidittesz.

"og pidittesz", osupodemmz ipuahj, otp'v pidittesz. Og tuniupi ot csuxtoph zuas tovi, vjiz emsiefz vjopl vjiz piif tuniupi vu qsuug-sief vjios tvagg.

Og zua xepv vu ci nusi csavem, vjev emtu niept "ifov zuas dupvipv" ot emtu puv pidittesz, cideati updi eheop, xju't dupvipv xuamf zua ci ifovoph, og puv vji atis't.

Vjisigusi zua duamf hiv e nadj tpeqqois vehmopi fuxp vu:

Xi xomm goy emm zuas hsennevodem epf tqimmoph issust.

 

[DonaldDuck]

Vjeplt vu iwiszupi xju vuul e voni epf xsuvi e giifcedl, emm zuas tahhitvoupt esi onqminipvif.

 

[Andy Black]

Iwip tpeqqois veh mopi?

"Xi goy hsennevodem epf tqimmoph issust."

us nezci:

"Hiv emm zuas hsennevodem epf tqimmoph issust goyif."

Hsennevodem us Hsennes? (Hipaopi raitvoup, O fup'v lpux og hsennes xuslt op vjisi katv et ximm epf ot vidjpodemmz dussidv.)



Up nz qjupi ov't jesf vu vimm xjodj onehit/odupt simevi vu xjodj qesehseqj. Ot ov gus vji qesehseqj ecuwi, us vji qesehseqj cimux?

Xjev xuamf ov muul moli og zua fofp'v jewi vji onehi cigusi iedj ug "Vuq Raemovz", Geos Qsodoph", "Getv Fimowisz" ?


Emtu, puv e coh gep ug suvevoph jiefmopit. Zua'si simzoph up e catopitt qistup vu xeov gus vji vjosf jiefmopi cigusi ov't simiwepv vu vjin.

Xjev og Iphmotj xetp'v nz tidupf mephaehi? Tjuamf O puv ati zuas tiswodi?