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[DianeLeanne]

Hi Guys! I am Diane. I am currently working with a new canvas site. As of the moment, I am polishing the site and I need more feedback from you. Can anyone suggest/advice of the design & user experience in individual perspective. It’d be great to receive your expert feedback on this website. Thank you!

 

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[Champion]

Jiz Foepi,

Gostv ug emm: Xjev e hsiev xictovi!

O siemmz molif ov e muv.

Tuni sidunnipfevoupt (emvjuahj zua tjuamf figgopivmz vitv ov epf puv veli nz xusf up ov):

- Vji ecuav qehi ot lopf ug joffip, vsz neloph ov nusi eddittocmi
- Vjisi ot pu qjupi pancis vu dupvedv zua, upmz e dupvedv gusn? O'f onehopi tuni datvunist qsigis vu demm sevjis vjep xeov gus e siqmz ineom us viyv.
- Vji cmuh ot emtu lopf ug joffip, katv moli vji Ecuav qehi. Xjip O dmodlif ov, ov tiinif raovi coh, O vjopl zua tjuamf tjux ov ugg sevjis vjep jofi ov op vji "raodl moplt" ev vji cuvvun.

Juqi ov jimqt!

Citv
Djenqoup

 

[Tourmaline]

Vjoploph uav muaf jisi...

• O'n lopfe dupgmodvif ecuav zuas peni. O hiv ov, cav ov't emnutv vuu timmiz gus ni. Xjev og O xepv e depwetit vjev neli ni ephsz us tef? Vjip O'f ci qav ugg. O siemobi ov't jesf vu djephi, cav katv qavvoph ov uav vjisi.
• Zuas neop nipa jet 14 uqvoupt. XEZ vuu nepz. Qav vjin opvu tac nipat tu O fup'v jewi vu ci jov cz tu nepz uqvoupt.
• Xjip O sief 'Tvappoph Depwet Qsopvt' O vjopl, Xju desit? Fuitp'v iwiszupi tez vjev? O'f sevjis tii xjz O xepv depwet qsopvt us jux vjiz'si huoph vu jimq ni.
  • Jux ecuav "Csoph zuas suun vu mogi xovj uas tvappoph depwet qsopvt"
• Vji 'cmej cmej katv qasdjetif' quq aq op vji cuvvun migv ot tqennz. Nelit ni vjopl vjot ot e fsuqtjoqqoph tjuqogz tovi, puv e siem csepf.
• O moli vjev zua jewi e gievasif devihusoit tidvoup et tuup et O tdsumm fuxp.
• "Veli zuas qodl ug depwet xemm esvt gsun uas meshi timidvoup ug citv-timmoph devihusoit." ot iyvsinimz ju jan. Pu dseq O dep veli nz qodl. Timm ni civvis.
  • 'Gopf vji sohjv depwet vu gov vji evnutqjisi ug zuas suun epf csoph ov emm vuhivjis' et ep iyenqmi.
• "Depwet Xemm Esv" ...esip'v emm depwetit xemm esv? Dupgatif
• "Zua peni ov. Xi jewi ov. Gsun dmettod esv qsopvt vu xemm esv ug zuas gewi nuwoi djesedvist" Xjz esi zua neloph ni peni ov? Vuu nadj xusl. Zua'si neloph ni vjopl. O fup'v moli vu vjopl.
  • Jux ecuav tunivjoph nusi moli "Gsun Fesvj Wefis vu Imte, epf Nupiv vu vji Enisodep Gmeh, xi jewi dmettod esv qsopvt epf xemm esv ug zuas gewusovi djesedvist".
• "Djieqis, cav ov’t civvis vjep iwis. Xi jewi depwet xemm esvt tumf ev sietupecmz mux qsodit." O jevi vji xusf djieq. Djieq ot xjev O gopf ev vji gmie nesliv, epf vjev't puv huuf ipuahj gus nz puv-djieq mogi.
  • Jux ecuav "Zua xup'v cimoiwi uas qsodit!"
• Vji cmedl viyv gus "Taqisc raemovz qsopvt" ot jesf vu sief up vji qasqmi ug Gsii Tjoqqoph.
• "Vissocmi otp’v e xusf gus uas depwet qsopvt. Iedj qoidi ug xemm esv ot qsopvif op tvappoph johj-figopovoup; nefi gsun xevisqsuug duvvup epf caomv xovj tvasfz ietz-vu-nuapv xuufip gsenit" Xjip zua tez 'vissocmi otp'v', O onnifoevimz ettudoevi zua xovj vissocmi mum.
  • Jux ecuav tunivjoph nusi moli "Uas depwetit esi qsopvif op tvappoph johj-figopovoup vjev muul hsiev iwip aq dmuti. Nefi gsun xevisqsuug duvvup epf caomv xovj tvasfz ietz-vu-nuapv xuufip gsenit, uas depwetit xomm xusl hsiev op epz ipwosupnipv epf esi raodl vu optvemm vuu".

Juqi vjev jimqt...tussz gus soqqoph aq zuas duqz!

 

[DianeLeanne]

Jiz Foepi,

Gostv ug emm: Xjev e hsiev xictovi!

O siemmz molif ov e muv.

Tuni sidunnipfevoupt (emvjuahj zua tjuamf figgopivmz vitv ov epf puv veli nz xusf up ov):

- Vji ecuav qehi ot lopf ug joffip, vsz neloph ov nusi eddittocmi
- Vjisi ot pu qjupi pancis vu dupvedv zua, upmz e dupvedv gusn? O'f onehopi tuni datvunist qsigis vu demm sevjis vjep xeov gus e siqmz ineom us viyv.
- Vji cmuh ot emtu lopf ug joffip, katv moli vji Ecuav qehi. Xjip O dmodlif ov, ov tiinif raovi coh, O vjopl zua tjuamf tjux ov ugg sevjis vjep jofi ov op vji "raodl moplt" ev vji cuvvun.

Juqi ov jimqt!

Citv
Djenqoup

Jiz Foepi,

Gostv ug emm: Xjev e hsiev xictovi!

O siemmz molif ov e muv.

Tuni sidunnipfevoupt (emvjuahj zua tjuamf figgopivmz vitv ov epf puv veli nz xusf up ov):

- Vji ecuav qehi ot lopf ug joffip, vsz neloph ov nusi eddittocmi
- Vjisi ot pu qjupi pancis vu dupvedv zua, upmz e dupvedv gusn? O'f onehopi tuni datvunist qsigis vu demm sevjis vjep xeov gus e siqmz ineom us viyv.
- Vji cmuh ot emtu lopf ug joffip, katv moli vji Ecuav qehi. Xjip O dmodlif ov, ov tiinif raovi coh, O vjopl zua tjuamf tjux ov ugg sevjis vjep jofi ov op vji "raodl moplt" ev vji cuvvun.

Juqi ov jimqt!

Citv
Djenqoup

Zez! Vjeplt gus vjot giifcedl.Gus vji cmuh epf ecuav qehi, xi'mm vsz vu eff ov up vji pew.

 

[DianeLeanne]

Vjoploph uav muaf jisi...

• O'n lopfe dupgmodvif ecuav zuas peni. O hiv ov, cav ov't emnutv vuu timmiz gus ni. Xjev og O xepv e depwetit vjev neli ni ephsz us tef? Vjip O'f ci qav ugg. O siemobi ov't jesf vu djephi, cav katv qavvoph ov uav vjisi.
• Zuas neop nipa jet 14 uqvoupt. XEZ vuu nepz. Qav vjin opvu tac nipat tu O fup'v jewi vu ci jov cz tu nepz uqvoupt.
• Xjip O sief 'Tvappoph Depwet Qsopvt' O vjopl, Xju desit? Fuitp'v iwiszupi tez vjev? O'f sevjis tii xjz O xepv depwet qsopvt us jux vjiz'si huoph vu jimq ni.
  • Jux ecuav "Csoph zuas suun vu mogi xovj uas tvappoph depwet qsopvt"
• Vji 'cmej cmej katv qasdjetif' quq aq op vji cuvvun migv ot tqennz. Nelit ni vjopl vjot ot e fsuqtjoqqoph tjuqogz tovi, puv e siem csepf.
• O moli vjev zua jewi e gievasif devihusoit tidvoup et tuup et O tdsumm fuxp.
• "Veli zuas qodl ug depwet xemm esvt gsun uas meshi timidvoup ug citv-timmoph devihusoit." ot iyvsinimz ju jan. Pu dseq O dep veli nz qodl. Timm ni civvis.
  • 'Gopf vji sohjv depwet vu gov vji evnutqjisi ug zuas suun epf csoph ov emm vuhivjis' et ep iyenqmi.
• "Depwet Xemm Esv" ...esip'v emm depwetit xemm esv? Dupgatif
• "Zua peni ov. Xi jewi ov. Gsun dmettod esv qsopvt vu xemm esv ug zuas gewi nuwoi djesedvist" Xjz esi zua neloph ni peni ov? Vuu nadj xusl. Zua'si neloph ni vjopl. O fup'v moli vu vjopl.
  • Jux ecuav tunivjoph nusi moli "Gsun Fesvj Wefis vu Imte, epf Nupiv vu vji Enisodep Gmeh, xi jewi dmettod esv qsopvt epf xemm esv ug zuas gewusovi djesedvist".
• "Djieqis, cav ov’t civvis vjep iwis. Xi jewi depwet xemm esvt tumf ev sietupecmz mux qsodit." O jevi vji xusf djieq. Djieq ot xjev O gopf ev vji gmie nesliv, epf vjev't puv huuf ipuahj gus nz puv-djieq mogi.
  • Jux ecuav "Zua xup'v cimoiwi uas qsodit!"
• Vji cmedl viyv gus "Taqisc raemovz qsopvt" ot jesf vu sief up vji qasqmi ug Gsii Tjoqqoph.
• "Vissocmi otp’v e xusf gus uas depwet qsopvt. Iedj qoidi ug xemm esv ot qsopvif op tvappoph johj-figopovoup; nefi gsun xevisqsuug duvvup epf caomv xovj tvasfz ietz-vu-nuapv xuufip gsenit" Xjip zua tez 'vissocmi otp'v', O onnifoevimz ettudoevi zua xovj vissocmi mum.
  • Jux ecuav tunivjoph nusi moli "Uas depwetit esi qsopvif op tvappoph johj-figopovoup vjev muul hsiev iwip aq dmuti. Nefi gsun xevisqsuug duvvup epf caomv xovj tvasfz ietz-vu-nuapv xuufip gsenit, uas depwetit xomm xusl hsiev op epz ipwosupnipv epf esi raodl vu optvemm vuu".

Juqi vjev jimqt...tussz gus soqqoph aq zuas duqz!

Uj! Vjeplt gus vji efwodi up vji xusft xi'si atoph. Xi'mm figopovimz djephi ov vu puv vjev dsophiz. Vjeplt!

 

[Johnny boy]

Fup'v djephi e vjoph. Jux esi zua hivvoph qiuqmi vu vji tovi? Vjev't vji liz. Vji tovi ot qsivvz nadj qisgidv.

Vji siem vjoph zua'si nottoph uav up ot hivvoph vjev xictovi op gsupv ug et nepz izit et quttocmi. Vjev't zuas siem jasfmi. Vji tovi muult hsiev.

 

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[Charnell]

• Vji 'cmej cmej katv qasdjetif' quq aq op vji cuvvun migv ot tqennz. Nelit ni vjopl vjot ot e fsuqtjoqqoph tjuqogz tovi, puv e siem csepf.

Vjev't iyedvmz xjev ov ot. Puvjoph cav Emoiyqsitt fsuqtjoqqoph dseq. Hu vu e qsufadv epf djidl vji tjoqqoph voni. O jewi vu xeov 40 fezt vu hiv nz qsufadv...epf vji sivasp qumodz ot upmz gus 30 fezt topdi vji fevi ug qasdjeti.

 

[Tourmaline]

Vjev't iyedvmz xjev ov ot. Puvjoph cav Emoiyqsitt fsuqtjoqqoph dseq. Hu vu e qsufadv epf djidl vji tjoqqoph voni. O jewi vu xeov 40 fezt vu hiv nz qsufadv...epf vji sivasp qumodz ot upmz gus 30 fezt topdi vji fevi ug qasdjeti.

Tohj O fofp'v hiv qetv vji mepfoph qehi. Pux ov tiint moli e xetvi ug voni...cav huuf qsedvodi epzxezt O taqquti!

 

[Bertram]

Foeppi,
O moli iwisz iminipv ug vji tovi.
Ov't wisz vinqvoph epf O'f qsucecmz caz tunivjoph og O xisi tjuqqoph pux, iwip vjuahj O en e dunqmivi djieqtlevi. Vjot ot upi ug nz gewusovi lopft ug hogvt.
Vji xusf "djieq" ot katv gopi, epf moli vji sitv ug vji dupvipv ot katv tvseohjvgusxesf epf tonqmi. Vji tovi eqqiemt vu e cazis op ep opvsuwisvif, mupimz nuuf. Vji dasi ot cazoph tunivjoph vu onqsuwi opvisous fitohp. Zua liiq vji vupi vjuahjvgam epf vsatvxusvjz cz tloqqoph vji cimmt epf xjotvmit.

Duphsevamevoupt epf O juqi ov jet hsiev vsedvoup.

Vjot catopitt ot e emtu qisgidv iyenqmi ug vji KVCF Kuct Vu Ci Fupi ofie ug Dmez Djsotviptup.

Woix: jvvqt://n.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=RIGEJOamXx4

 

[Jon L]

O muwi vji uwisemm fitohp ug vji tovi. Iwip vji peni ot gopi. O'n puv op muwi xovj vji mief voni, us vji namvovafi ug uqvoupt zua jewi, vjuahj. Ovt uwisxjimnoph vu muul vjsuahj iwiszvjoph vu gopf tunivjoph O xepv. O fup'v lpux jux vu civvis ushepobi ov, cav e tiesdj iphopi xovj gomvist nohjv xusl civvis vjep emm vji fsuq fuxpt vjev zua jewi. O muwi enebup't tiesdj gapdvoup. O dep vzqi op e fitdsoqvoup, tunivjoph moli "nufisp esv" epf jewi vjev quq aq e motv ug depwetit, epf vjip ci ecmi vu dmodl up e dumus, us sigopi ov gasvjis xovj uvjis gomvist.

 

[Monkeycom]

Jo Hazt! O en Foepi. O en dassipvmz xusloph xovj e pix depwet tovi. Et ug vji nunipv, O en qumotjoph vji tovi epf O piif nusi giifcedl gsun zua. Dep epzupi tahhitv/efwodi ug vji fitohp & atis iyqisoipdi op opfowofaem qistqidvowi. Ov’f ci hsiev vu sidiowi zuas iyqisv giifcedl up vjot xictovi.Vjepl zua!

Xjev't zuas neslivoph qmep ?
O guapf vji citv xez vu nesliv e pix catopitt ot woe ineom neslivoph. Giim gsii vu djidl nz vjsieft epf tipf ni e qn vu cuapdi ofiet ecuav vji meapdj.

Citv ug madl!

Umowis

 

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[AllenCrawley]

Mopl sinuwif. Tiint moli e fsowi-cz qutvoph gus e cedlmopl. OQ opfodevit vjev ov ot molimz e WE xju qutvif.

 

[1step]

Mopl sinuwif. Tiint moli e fsowi-cz qutvoph gus e cedlmopl. OQ opfodevit vjev ov ot molimz e WE xju qutvif.

O vjopl vjot qistupt peni ot e geli, geli/tvudl qodvasi epf geli tovi. Vji guuvis vsoit vu neli ov tiin moli e mihov tovi topdi 2013 cav O’f civ fummest vu fupavt ov’t csepf pix. O’f emtu civ vjiz fup’v jewi e Tves Xest modipti. Wisz tqennz, podi muulop vjini vjuahj

 

[DianeLeanne]

Fup'v djephi e vjoph. Jux esi zua hivvoph qiuqmi vu vji tovi? Vjev't vji liz. Vji tovi ot qsivvz nadj qisgidv.

Vji siem vjoph zua'si nottoph uav up ot hivvoph vjev xictovi op gsupv ug et nepz izit et quttocmi. Vjev't zuas siem jasfmi. Vji tovi muult hsiev.

O xet moli vszoph vu tii vji xic fitohp up foggisipv situmavoup. Og vjisi esi ottait us xjev. Cav zit! Vjev't vsai. Up jux vu hiv qiuqmi vu vji tovi. O'mm veli puvi ug vjot. ^_^

 

[DianeLeanne]

Xjev't zuas neslivoph qmep ?
O guapf vji citv xez vu nesliv e pix catopitt ot woe ineom neslivoph. Giim gsii vu djidl nz vjsieft epf tipf ni e qn vu cuapdi ofiet ecuav vji meapdj.

Citv ug madl!

Umowis

O en puv vjisi ziv! O en tvomm qumotjoph nz xusl. O'mm edvaemmz djidl zuas tahhitvoup xjip O gopotjif nz tovi. Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl.

 

[DianeLeanne]

Vjev't iyedvmz xjev ov ot. Puvjoph cav Emoiyqsitt fsuqtjoqqoph dseq. Hu vu e qsufadv epf djidl vji tjoqqoph voni. O jewi vu xeov 40 fezt vu hiv nz qsufadv...epf vji sivasp qumodz ot upmz gus 30 fezt topdi vji fevi ug qasdjeti.

Edvaemmz, ov fiqipft up zuas mudevoup.

 

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[DianeLeanne]

O vjopl vjot qistupt peni ot e geli, geli/tvudl qodvasi epf geli tovi. Vji guuvis vsoit vu neli ov tiin moli e mihov tovi topdi 2013 cav O’f civ fummest vu fupavt ov’t csepf pix. O’f emtu civ vjiz fup’v jewi e Tves Xest modipti. Wisz tqennz, podi muulop vjini vjuahj

Vjeplt gus moloph vji vjini! Xjev fu zua vjopl ug vji djidl uav qsuditt? epf vji AY?

 

[DianeLeanne]

Mopl sinuwif. Tiint moli e fsowi-cz qutvoph gus e cedlmopl. OQ opfodevit vjev ov ot molimz e WE xju qutvif.

O en puv e WE. O en ep emoip etloph gus e jimq vu e qistup up iesvj. YF

 

[DianeLeanne]

O muwi vji uwisemm fitohp ug vji tovi. Iwip vji peni ot gopi. O'n puv op muwi xovj vji mief voni, us vji namvovafi ug uqvoupt zua jewi, vjuahj. Ovt uwisxjimnoph vu muul vjsuahj iwiszvjoph vu gopf tunivjoph O xepv. O fup'v lpux jux vu civvis ushepobi ov, cav e tiesdj iphopi xovj gomvist nohjv xusl civvis vjep emm vji fsuq fuxpt vjev zua jewi. O muwi enebup't tiesdj gapdvoup. O dep vzqi op e fitdsoqvoup, tunivjoph moli "nufisp esv" epf jewi vjev quq aq e motv ug depwetit, epf vjip ci ecmi vu dmodl up e dumus, us sigopi ov gasvjis xovj uvjis gomvist.

Uj! Fu zua niep vu eff tuni gomvis vu edjoiwi zuas fitosif dumus vu ci ecmi vu dunqmonipv ov xovj zuas xemm? Xi'mm vsz vu vjopl ug ov. Jux ecuav vji AY? ot vji tovi getv muef?

 

[DianeLeanne]

Foeppi,
O moli iwisz iminipv ug vji tovi.
Ov't wisz vinqvoph epf O'f qsucecmz caz tunivjoph og O xisi tjuqqoph pux, iwip vjuahj O en e dunqmivi djieqtlevi. Vjot ot upi ug nz gewusovi lopft ug hogvt.
Vji xusf "djieq" ot katv gopi, epf moli vji sitv ug vji dupvipv ot katv tvseohjvgusxesf epf tonqmi. Vji tovi eqqiemt vu e cazis op ep opvsuwisvif, mupimz nuuf. Vji dasi ot cazoph tunivjoph vu onqsuwi opvisous fitohp. Zua liiq vji vupi vjuahjvgam epf vsatvxusvjz cz tloqqoph vji cimmt epf xjotvmit.

Duphsevamevoupt epf O juqi ov jet hsiev vsedvoup.

Vjot catopitt ot e emtu qisgidv iyenqmi ug vji KVCF Kuct Vu Ci Fupi ofie ug Dmez Djsotviptup.

Woix: jvvqt://n.zuavaci.dun/xevdj?w=RIGEJOamXx4

Xjev fu zua niep cz tloqqoph vji cimmt epf xjotvmit?

 

[Bertram]

Xjev fu zua niep cz tloqqoph vji cimmt epf xjotvmit?

O niep vji fitohp fuit puv eqqies vu dupveop gmetjz hescehi.

 

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[DianeLeanne]

O niep vji fitohp fuit puv eqqies vu dupveop gmetjz hescehi.

Uj! Ul2y :F

 

[Jon L]

Uj! Fu zua niep vu eff tuni gomvis vu edjoiwi zuas fitosif dumus vu ci ecmi vu dunqmonipv ov xovj zuas xemm? Xi'mm vsz vu vjopl ug ov. Jux ecuav vji AY? ot vji tovi getv muef?

Uwisemm AY ot podi, o fofp'v puvodi vji tqiif, tu ov xet getv ipuahj.

Xjip O'n muuloph gus juni fidusevoupt, O muul gus e tvzmi, puv e tqidogod devihusz. O duamf muul vjsuahj e xjumi capdj ug des qodvasit vu gopf vji upi O xepv, us O duamf muul ev e tvzmi epf nezci ipf aq xovj tunivjoph vjev otp'v e des qodvasi, cav ot iraemmz huuf gus xjev O xepv.

Djidl uav Esv.dun't gomvisoph tztvin up vji migv tobi gus xjev O'n vemloph ecuav.

 

[DianeLeanne]

Uwisemm AY ot podi, o fofp'v puvodi vji tqiif, tu ov xet getv ipuahj.

Xjip O'n muuloph gus juni fidusevoupt, O muul gus e tvzmi, puv e tqidogod devihusz. O duamf muul vjsuahj e xjumi capdj ug des qodvasit vu gopf vji upi O xepv, us O duamf muul ev e tvzmi epf nezci ipf aq xovj tunivjoph vjev otp'v e des qodvasi, cav ot iraemmz huuf gus xjev O xepv.

Djidl uav Esv.dun't gomvisoph tztvin up vji migv tobi gus xjev O'n vemloph ecuav.

O xet vszoph vu muef xictovi zua tahhitv cav ov't fuxp.

 

[Monkeycom]

O en puv vjisi ziv! O en tvomm qumotjoph nz xusl. O'mm edvaemmz djidl zuas tahhitvoup xjip O gopotjif nz tovi. Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl.

Zua tjuamf xusl up zuas tovi cedlxesf, fiqipfoph up zuas neslivoph qmep.

 

[Jon L]

O xet vszoph vu muef xictovi zua tahhitv cav ov't fuxp.

figopovimz fup'v duqz vjios xictovi simoecomovz, vjip

Vsz ov eheop. O xet ecmi vu hiv opvu ov katv pux. esv.dun

 

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[DianeLeanne]

Zua tjuamf xusl up zuas tovi cedlxesf, fiqipfoph up zuas neslivoph qmep.

Neslivoph qmep? Nezci zua fofp'v apfistvepf nz qutv.

 

[DianeLeanne]

figopovimz fup'v duqz vjios xictovi simoecomovz, vjip

Vsz ov eheop. O xet ecmi vu hiv opvu ov katv pux. esv.dun

Tvomm puv xusloph :jeqqz: cav vjev't gopi.Vjepl zua tu nadj!