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Dreamify

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Hi guys!

We've just launched a rebrand of our digital agency with the aim of specifically helping entrepreneurs and startups realizing their digital business dreams. What we believe we do a little different than many other agencies, is that we start with the client's business vision, let it lead the way as we set up goals and actions together, and then co-create the digital presence and follow through until our joint goals are successfully achieved.

What are your thoughts on this concept and our website as a whole?

I appreciate taking your time and thank you in advance!
 

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Are you subversively advertising/self-promoting or asking for legitimate feedback?
 

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The design looks sharp. I would have recommended not going with a .net domain extension, but your premise is probably strong enough to overcome that shortcoming.

Your messaging needs work, in my opinion. Your landing page reads:

"At Dreamify we believe in the power of dreams. We create powerful digital experiences and dreamify* visions for businesses, entrepreneurs and startups from all over the world."

I still don't fully understand what you're selling. You have not defined "digital experience" for me. This term can mean many many different things.

Whoever your graphic designer is, kudos.
 

Dreamify

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Are you subversively advertising/self-promoting or asking for legitimate feedback?

I am well aware of the rules and I am asking for genuine feedback. But if you consider it being advertising, then I respect that.
 

Dreamify

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The design looks sharp. I would have recommended not going with a .net domain extension, but your premise is probably strong enough to overcome that shortcoming.

Your messaging needs work, in my opinion. Your landing page reads:

"At Dreamify we believe in the power of dreams. We create powerful digital experiences and dreamify* visions for businesses, entrepreneurs and startups from all over the world."

I still don't fully understand what you're selling. You have not defined "digital experience" for me. This term can mean many many different things.

Whoever your graphic designer is, kudos.

Thanks for the feedback 404profound. The point about the message is valid for sure, we'll take it another round and see if we can make it more clear.
 

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How would he do one without the other?

Too many folks use the forum for their backlinks and self-promoting objectives under the guise of asking for feedback. The big tell is post and then disappear and contribute nothing anywhere else, no intro, no other contributions but a thinly veiled request for feedback.

I am well aware of the rules and I am asking for genuine feedback. But if you consider it being advertising, then I respect that.

The fact you responded lends credibility to your desire for feedback, most don't return.
We've just launched a rebrand of our digital agency with the aim of specifically helping entrepreneurs and startups realizing their digital business dreams.

Site looks good. I think your main headline and sub-benefit could use some tweaking to better express what you do. "We are a digital agency that creates powerful digital experiences" -- what does that mean? A powerful digital experience? Is that building websites? Social media presences? Brand building? I think you need to be more specific to your company's primary mission so visitors know without question, what you do, and what you can do for them. Right now I'm not sure, and I'm in your target market. You have 5 seconds to make that happen.
 

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Dreamify

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Too many folks use the forum for their backlinks and self-promoting objectives under the guise of asking for feedback. The big tell is post and then disappear and contribute nothing anywhere else, no intro, no other contributions but a thinly veiled request for feedback.



The fact you responded lends credibility to your desire for feedback, most don't return.


Site looks good. I think your main headline and sub-benefit could use some tweaking to better express what you do. "We are a digital agency that creates powerful digital experiences" -- what does that mean? A powerful digital experience? Is that building websites? Social media presences? Brand building? I think you need to be more specific to your company's primary mission so visitors know without question, what you do, and what you can do for them. Right now I'm not sure, and I'm in your target market. You have 5 seconds to make that happen.

Thanks for the feedback MJ DeMarco. We added "We are a digital agency" to the paragraph since the last iteration, but perhaps it is still not clear enough as you just stated. Naming specific services that we offer might be the key here, so I'll think about it. And yes, the 5 seconds rule is a great point for sure.
 

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Who do you help? What do you help them with? How do you do it?

Try and answer those questions for visitors in the 5 seconds MJ mentioned.
 

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