Bekit
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- Aug 13, 2018
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My feedback:
COPY:
The headline doesn't answer the question, "What is this?" I don't understand the offer from the copy that's provided. I understood it better from your post, but even that brought up some questions and I'm not sure I understand what it is or what it does.
DESIGN:
The page looks like this on my mobile device (a Moto G6 Android device)(attached).
I'm surprised that an Unbounce page would be able to become that big of a mess on mobile. I would have thought their page designs were more mobile-friendly than that.
COPY:
The headline doesn't answer the question, "What is this?" I don't understand the offer from the copy that's provided. I understood it better from your post, but even that brought up some questions and I'm not sure I understand what it is or what it does.
DESIGN:
The page looks like this on my mobile device (a Moto G6 Android device)(attached).
I'm surprised that an Unbounce page would be able to become that big of a mess on mobile. I would have thought their page designs were more mobile-friendly than that.