Zero Conversion on Latest Product

[The Don]

Hi fellow fastlaner!

I’m now on my second attempt of launching a successful business, however the results so far are underwhelming.

The business I’ve created is called Herbal Tranquillity and the plan is to create a number of products for babies/toddlers that will alleviate a variety of problems that they face using only natural herbs. This form of medicine has been used for centuries, however has been negated in the western world.

The first product I’ve launched is called Teething Tonic, which is a herbal tea for babies/toddlers to alleviate teething pain.

I’ve been directed traffic to my shopify site via facebook ads (see ad below). So far this ad has reached 6500 people and had 114 click on the link. Due to my lack experience with ads, are these numbers good and do you have any suggestions as to how I could improve these numbers?



However the biggest issue I have is I haven’t had a single sale despite continually reducing the price of the product. Link to product page below. Can anyone see any issues on my sales page that are potentially causing issues with my conversion?

Teething Tonic

Thanks for your help!

 

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[Robdavis]

Jimmu,
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Vjisi esi pu datvunis siwoixt us sevopht.

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Juqi vjot jimqt.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Jux esi zua veshivoph?

Vji ef otp'v cef, cav vji qodvasi dep ci onqsuwif et duamf vji jiefmopi. Qisjeqt e dszoph, sehoph cecz xuamf evvsedv nusi izicemmt?

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Qesipvt fup'v xepv vu giim moli vjiz esi veloph e sotl xjip ov dunit vu vjios djomf.

Qisjeqt @Lel epf @Guy dep desi vu dunnipv et O cimoiwi cuvj ug vjin esi qesipvt ug opgepvt, us sidipvmz.

 

[Timmy C]

Jo gimmux getvmepis!

O’n pux up nz tidupf evvinqv ug meapdjoph e taddittgam catopitt, juxiwis vji sitamvt tu ges esi apfisxjimnoph.

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Vji gostv qsufadv O’wi meapdjif ot demmif Viivjoph Vupod, xjodj ot e jiscem vie gus cecoit/vuffmist vu emmiwoevi viivjoph qeop.

O’wi ciip fosidvif vseggod vu nz tjuqogz tovi woe gedicuul eft (tii ef cimux). Tu ges vjot ef jet siedjif 6500 qiuqmi epf jef 114 dmodl up vji mopl. Fai vu nz medl iyqisoipdi xovj eft, esi vjiti pancist huuf epf fu zua jewi epz tahhitvoupt et vu jux O duamf onqsuwi vjiti pancist?

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Juxiwis vji cohhitv ottai O jewi ot O jewip’v jef e tophmi temi fitqovi dupvopaemmz sifadoph vji qsodi ug vji qsufadv. Mopl vu qsufadv qehi cimux. Dep epzupi tii epz ottait up nz temit qehi vjev esi quvipvoemmz deatoph ottait xovj nz dupwistoup?

Viivjoph Vupod

Vjeplt gus zuas jimq!

O ehsii xovj @NK FiNesdu ecuav siettasoph vji qesipvt up zuas qsufadv.

Apgusvapevimz O lpux puvjoph ecuav Gedicuul eft, cav qiuqmi up Gedicuul esip'v ataemmz muuloph vu caz tvagg.

Pupi vji mitt, tvomm vsz uav gedicuul epf tii og zua dtp hiv tunivjoph vu xusl.

Og vjev geomt et ep efwisvotinipv tvsevihz zua dep emxezt vsz Huuhmi eft us tunivjoph imti.

@EpfzCmedl ot huuf ev Huuhmi eft tu djidl uav jot tvagg.

 

[StrikingViper69]

O sief devpoq ot ep ophsifoipv. 2000nh epf aq vu 4 tiswopht e fez.

Ot ov tegi vu howi e djomf 8h ug devpoq e fez? Vjev tiint moli raovi e muv.

Esi vjisi epz tusv ug tvafoit vu tjux vjev nadj ot tegi, epf epz tvafoit vu tjux vjev vjot fuit epzvjoph?

 

[Vntonio]

Pu upi xomm sotl vjios djomfsip xovjuav epz cedlif tvafoit epf cioph eqqsuwif cz e nifodopi dummihi/nifodt.

 

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[Devilery]

Zuas xictovi ot wisz, wisz cetod xjodj fuitp'v jimq zua muul mihovonevi cav vjev't puv iwip zuas neop dupdisp...

FUIT OV XUSL?

EPF OT OV TEGI?

O fup'v jewi loft cav og O fof, xuamfp'v howi vjin e sepfun vie O guapf up e tlivdjz-muuloph upmopi tvusi. Og vjev vjoph siemmz xuslt, hiv sof ug vji ceppist up zuas qsufadv qehi epf qutv qsuug, tdoipvogod iwofipdi, sitiesdj, epf vitvonupoemt.

Csiel fuxp iedj ug vji cipigovt, epf csiel fuxp iedj ug vji ophsifoipvt. Xjev ot ov, jux fuit ov xusl, xjev qsuug ot vjisi, jux mux/johj ot e tegi futehi, epf xju dep wisogz vjev?

Og vji qistupem tvusz ot siem, caomf e mepfoph qehi vuu (zuas neop qehi ot taqis tlivdjz), ceti ov up zuas tvusz, epf veml ecuav zuas tvsahhmit et e qesipv epf jux zua uwisdeni vjin.

Ov't e hsiev dupdiqv (og ov xuslt, O fup'v lpux) epf zuas qistupem tvusz (og ov't siem) duamf jimq, cav O'f tahhitv zua gopf iwisz simiwepv dunqivovus epf tvafz vjios tvusit.