direct feedback ahead, so be warned:
I don't like the name of the book.
I'm not an Alpha. I'm just me, and I don't have any interest in changing the core of what makes me tick. I don't care to measure up to whatever an Alpha is (people that identify as an Alpha tend to annoy me).
I also don't want a dadbod. If I'm going to shoot for a goal, physique-wise, I want abs, big arms, strong legs, etc.
I have a feeling that Alpha Dadbod means something different in the context of your book. A title, though, needs to stand on its own. People need to know what it means without any other explanation necessary.
Millionaire Fastlane is a great title (though a little corny). Millionaire - I know what that is. Fastlane - I know what that is too. Millionaire Fastlane - That sounds like it means 'become a millionaire quickly.' Yeah, I could live with that. It also sounds like this might be a roadmap for how to get there...show me this lane so I can drive it. -- I put together all of that without opening the front cover. Your title should do the same.
I don't like the name of the book.
I'm not an Alpha. I'm just me, and I don't have any interest in changing the core of what makes me tick. I don't care to measure up to whatever an Alpha is (people that identify as an Alpha tend to annoy me).
I also don't want a dadbod. If I'm going to shoot for a goal, physique-wise, I want abs, big arms, strong legs, etc.
I have a feeling that Alpha Dadbod means something different in the context of your book. A title, though, needs to stand on its own. People need to know what it means without any other explanation necessary.
Millionaire Fastlane is a great title (though a little corny). Millionaire - I know what that is. Fastlane - I know what that is too. Millionaire Fastlane - That sounds like it means 'become a millionaire quickly.' Yeah, I could live with that. It also sounds like this might be a roadmap for how to get there...show me this lane so I can drive it. -- I put together all of that without opening the front cover. Your title should do the same.
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