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Jonas Napier

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Hey

I'm applying for a business angel investment (Nordic Angel Program Batch 3 For startups | Danish Business Angels)

I have created a pitch deck that I would like to have you guys look at. The deck will be attached to the "real" application - but I'm planning to use it later on as a teaser for let's-have-a-meeting-approach with selected investors.

The DECK: https://kontrolrummet.dk/pitch-deck/

So the deck is supposed to be a stand-alone thing and should be understood without anything else - but it's NOT supposed to explain everything.

The market analysis part for Denmark is coming in a few days, but since the application deadline is on the 25th I'm putting this up now...

Thanks in advance
 
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You might want to read Oren Klaff's "Pitch Anything" and/or look at his videos/webinars. He's used his method to raise millions in capital, is an excellent copywriter, and has a nontraditional approach to pitching that's built on neuropsychology.
 

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Typo on slide 13 "Tranlate into English". Also would be good to review it again and look for other mistakes.

Looks interesting in general, but I'm not an investor so have no idea what would they look for.
 

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You might want to read Oren Klaff's "Pitch Anything" and/or look at his videos/webinars. He's used his method to raise millions in capital, is an excellent copywriter, and has a nontraditional approach to pitching that's built on neuropsychology.
Awesome - I'll check him out, thanks.
 
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