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ItsAllBull
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Update - Jan 11
Update on the stats so far ( stats have improved as days went on )
If my campaign today tops out in the 30%-40% open range then that suggests to me I have a good subject line that at least provokes an open.
I did a bit of research yesterday and found out that normal response rates is 10% +. I guess that means my body is terrible. lol
This is the email I have been sending. I got it from a fb ads "guru " online who was showing he had some good results with it and thought it was worth it to give it a try .
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Subject : Get Your Facebook Ads Plan Free
Hi there, {{name}}
We're looking to partner with some {targeted clients industry} to run their Facebook Ads campaign for free!
My name is Alexander and I currently run Facebook Advertisements for Barbers , Realtors & E-Commerce stores BUT I'm looking to bring on 5 more new clients.
I'd love to work with you on some FB campaigns to prove my worth and earn your business. Ideally, I would hope to get you new clients through your doors.
I will waive my fee, do ALL the work for free (all you'll need to do is pay for the advertising spend) to generate results then use that as a case study to get more clients for business.
It's really simple...You get the leads, I get the results, we're both happy
Is this something you'd be interested in?
Alexander Manning
Facebook Ads Specialist
New Leads. For Your Business. Fast.
FYI,
I'm looking to work with 5 case study clients this month so please let me know asap and we'll get you going...to be fair, i'll be asking quite a few businesses.
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What I liked about this email initially : It seemed a pretty straight forward , and would get at least a response
What I didn't like : it seemed a bit like "fake it till you make it " , the original email told me to put industries similar to the clients own , but I just put the industries that I have personally worked with in the past.
I don't know much about email cold outreach , so I kind of just took something I thought would perform and figured I'd learn as I go and not get stuck in analysis paralysis , SO I just ran with this one. Feedback welcome... besides the feedback I just got with 0 replies XD
Update on the stats so far ( stats have improved as days went on )
- Jan 8th Campaign - 28% open , 0% response
- Jan 9th Campaign - 44% open , 0% response
- Jan 10th Campaign - 48% open , 0% response
- Jan 11th Campaign - 17% open , 0% response ( todays email went out at 6:30 am , I expect the stats to grow to the 30-40% open range by the end of the day.)
If my campaign today tops out in the 30%-40% open range then that suggests to me I have a good subject line that at least provokes an open.
I did a bit of research yesterday and found out that normal response rates is 10% +. I guess that means my body is terrible. lol
This is the email I have been sending. I got it from a fb ads "guru " online who was showing he had some good results with it and thought it was worth it to give it a try .
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Subject : Get Your Facebook Ads Plan Free
Hi there, {{name}}
We're looking to partner with some {targeted clients industry} to run their Facebook Ads campaign for free!
My name is Alexander and I currently run Facebook Advertisements for Barbers , Realtors & E-Commerce stores BUT I'm looking to bring on 5 more new clients.
I'd love to work with you on some FB campaigns to prove my worth and earn your business. Ideally, I would hope to get you new clients through your doors.
I will waive my fee, do ALL the work for free (all you'll need to do is pay for the advertising spend) to generate results then use that as a case study to get more clients for business.
It's really simple...You get the leads, I get the results, we're both happy
Is this something you'd be interested in?
Alexander Manning
Facebook Ads Specialist
New Leads. For Your Business. Fast.
FYI,
I'm looking to work with 5 case study clients this month so please let me know asap and we'll get you going...to be fair, i'll be asking quite a few businesses.
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What I liked about this email initially : It seemed a pretty straight forward , and would get at least a response
What I didn't like : it seemed a bit like "fake it till you make it " , the original email told me to put industries similar to the clients own , but I just put the industries that I have personally worked with in the past.
I don't know much about email cold outreach , so I kind of just took something I thought would perform and figured I'd learn as I go and not get stuck in analysis paralysis , SO I just ran with this one. Feedback welcome... besides the feedback I just got with 0 replies XD
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