I've been writing advertising copy for a little while now but recently I felt the need to level up on the general quality of my copy. Below is a piece of a Facebook ad that I wrote a couple of days ago about a volcano air humidifier. Just wondering about general opinions as well as improvements that could be made. Suggestions on copywriting practices would also be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance!
Dry air sure is a hassle, especially if not handled properly.
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Enjoy benefits like:
Our new and improved volcano diffuser also offers an outstanding
330ml water tank - Convenient and easy, you rarely have to refill it!
Built-in timer feature -Say goodbye to the hassle of manually checking your diffusers - enjoy the convenience of our built-in timer feature!
Two modes - Jellyfish and volcano - Choose the one best suited for you!
Start enjoying the life-changing benefits of an air humidifier now. Get yours today!
Dry air sure is a hassle, especially if not handled properly.
Invest in an air humidifier today and enjoy fresh and humid air on demand!
Enjoy benefits like:
- Reduced dry skin: Dry air can cause the skin to become overly dry, leading to irritation, itching, and flaking
- Reduced nasal congestion: Breath better through your nose!
- Improved air quality: Live a more active and free lifestyle with cleaner and fresher air!
Our new and improved volcano diffuser also offers an outstanding
330ml water tank - Convenient and easy, you rarely have to refill it!
Built-in timer feature -Say goodbye to the hassle of manually checking your diffusers - enjoy the convenience of our built-in timer feature!
Two modes - Jellyfish and volcano - Choose the one best suited for you!
Start enjoying the life-changing benefits of an air humidifier now. Get yours today!
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