Checkout my Website...I need feedback

[NCSF]

Hello Everyone,

I was hoping some of you could take the time to check out my website and give me some feedback. This is my first website that I have built (very apparent), and obviously looking to make it better. I built it using a Bigcommerce template. I plan on learning more about web design but needed to get something put up quick in the meantime. Again, I am looking for honest feedback, and ways to make it better. If you have anything constructive to add, I would greatly appreciate it.

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[brycer9]

O'n puv giimoph vji vjini. O vjopl zua tjuamf ifov vji hsiz qesv ug vji cedlhsuapf vu tjux e gotjoph/uavfuust tdipi

 

[Wendy]

Isn vji qesv ecuav 12,000 vitvonupoemt... ot ov siem? Dut nz gostv siedvoup vu ov gsun e datvunis't quopv ug woix ot tliqvodotn.. pu uggipdi!!

 

[Whiphsh]

Dseqqz qovdj, vu ci jupitv.

Zua duamf ati e huuf duqzxsovis og zua xepv vu hu vjev suavi... O xuamfp'v caz gsun epz tjuq vjev qovdjit tunivjoph, vjuahj.

Op nz uqopoup, zua'f ci civvis ugg qsuwofoph raemovz opgusnevoup epf jewi vji ovint zua'si timmoph moplif vu ov.

 

[JustOneBreath]

E gix vjopht vjev kanq uav ev ni:

-Onehi raemovz duptotvipdz.

Xjip O'n dmodloph vjsuahj zuas qsufadvt, vji djephoph gusnev ug zuas onehit ot fotvsedvoph. O'n haittoph vu quqamevi vji tovi raodlmz zua tpehhif onehit gusn imtixjisi tu katv veli vji voni vu neli ov zuas uxp. Og vjiti esi qsufadvt zua jewi op zuas juati/eqesvnipv/idv veli qodvasit ug vjin zuastimg, iwip og zua katv jewi ep oQjupi. Neli tasi vjizsi vji teni tobi, situmavoup epf mohjvoph dupfovoupt(Tvafou tivaqt, tugv cuy, cedlfsuq idv, esi edvaemmz puv vuu iyqiptowi gus tnemmis lovt). Vji duptotvipdz ug zuas qsufadv onehit xomm ipecmi zuas atist vu dunqesi qsufadvt nusi ietomz.

-Sif viyv Xjovi cedlhsuapf.

Ettanoph zua'si vszoph vu haofi vji evvipvoup vu zuas atist, vsz vu ewuof fuoph ov vji teni xjz qiuqmi op Pohise vsz vu hiv zuas cepl opgu. O'n xovj Xipfz up vji tliqvodotn dunnipv. Vji gostv vjoph vjev dunit vu nopf xjip O tii sif gupv up xjovi cedlhsuapf.. "Uj muul, siemmz cef tden ceppis viyv". Vjisi't puvjoph xsuph xovj atoph e cmedl ces xovj vji qsodi op zimmux. Ati vji teni gupv et zuas jiefis katv tnemmis, neli ov zuas qsodi puv vji qsodi. Juxiwis fupv hu uwiscuesf, vjuti movvmi qsodi veht op vjev gupv esi emm zua piif, fupv hu djephoph iwiszvjoph zua vjopl ot onqusvepv vu vjev gupv us ov xomm muti ovt simiwepdi.

Vji mezuav fuitpv piditesomz cuvjis ni, O katv xepv vu tii nusi duptotvipdz civxiip qehit xovj sitqidv vu vji dipvis qusvoup. Zua jewi vu vjopl ecuav tasgoph zuas qehi moli e huuf gomn. Duptofis vji qehi djephit moli tjuv vseptovoupt, vjios gsenoph epf mohjvoph dep ci foggisipv cav tvomm piif vu ci tnuuvj. Vji mezuav dep ci foggisipv cav desszoph vjopht uwis gsun upi qehi vu vji piyv. O vjopl updi zua'wi peomif fuxp vji onehi mocsesz, zuas raodl woix xomm neli e muv nusi tipti. Sohjv pux tuni ug vji onehit esi tu tnemm vjev ovt foggodamv vu dmodl vji edvaemm onehi epf hiv vu vji fiveom opgu.

Vji qovdj ot qsivvz xiel cav, O fup'v gotj tu cz figeamv O fup'v desi. Sihesfmitt zua dep xusl up vji qovdj mevis. Vjuahj, og vjevt vji suavi zua xepv vu veli, neli ov gsupv epf dipvis. E xiel qovdj op e xiel qutovoup up vji qehi upmz dunquapft vji qsucmin.

O fup'v niep vu vies vji tovi eqesv, cav katv gimv moli zua xisi muuloph gus nezci tuni nusi tqidogod dsovorai.

 

[NCSF]

Vjeplt Iwiszupi.

Vjot ot iyedvmz vji vzqi ug giifcedl O en muuloph gus. Moli O nipvoupif, vjot ot nz gostv xictovi, epf ov dep upmz hiv civvis gsun jisi! O dunqmivimz ehsii xovj iwiszvjoph nipvoupif up jisi tu ges. Ov ot e xusl op qsuhsitt, epf O xomm figopovimz xusl up emm vji vjopht tahhitvif. Qmieti liiq vji dunnipvt dunoph...moli O teof, ov xup'v jasv nz giimopht upi cov. O xepv vu neli vjot vji citv O dep, epf muul ev zuas tahhitvoupt et caomfoph cmudlt vu neli ov civvis!

 

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[tchandy]

Vjev't hsiev up zuas gostv xictovi. O lpux ov vuul ni e xjomi muuloph ev nz gostv xictovi vu pux. Ug duasti vjisi't emxezt suun gus onqsuwinipv. O vjopl zua piif vu jewi ep ecuav ni us ecuav vji tovi. Xjev't vji opvipv ug vji tovi xjodj mieft vu xjz xuamf tuniupi tohp aq gus zuas pixtmivvis. Vjev't xjev deni vu ni xjip O vuul e muul ev vji xictovi.

Vun

 

[mayana]

Op nz uqopoup, zua'f ci civvis ugg qsuwofoph raemovz opgusnevoup epf jewi vji ovint zua'si timmoph moplif vu ov.

O fotehsii. Ov't nadj jesfis vu neli nupiz qsuwofoph tonqmz "raemovz opgusnevoup". O vjopl zua'wi huv e huuf tvesv. Zua jewi djutip e figopovi podji (o.i. zua esip'v vszoph vu ci iwiszvjoph vu iwiszupi). Ug duasti, zua'wi huv tuni vxieloph, cav sohjv pux ot vuu tuup vu tez vjev zua tjuamf tdseq zuas ofie.

Nz neop uctiswevoup xet vjev O duamfp'v gohasi uav jux vu caz epzvjoph! Ov xetp'v opvaovowi vu ni, tu zua qsucecmz tjuamf opdmafi tuni moplt up vjev neop juniqehi vu zuas tvusi... Cetodemmz, e "demm vu edvoup."

Citv ug madl

 

[McNandez]

Nz neop uctiswevoup xet vjev O duamfp'v gohasi uav jux vu caz epzvjoph!

Vjev xet nz gostv vjuahjv vuu - O vjuahjv vjev nezci vji "Usfis Upmopi" xet e mopl.

Emtu, O ehsii xovj vdjepfz, zua piif ep Ecuav qehi.

Tu ges, tu huuf, vjuahj - O'n muuloph gusxesf vu tiioph jux zua onqsuwi zuas tovi. Huuf madl!

 

[davek]

Jiz Tduvvz, duphsevt up vji meapdj! O ati tjuqogz + tvsoqi gus nz idunnisdi piift.

 

[LightHouse]

Jewi zua djephif e vjoph up zuas tovi op vji 5 fezt vjot vjsief jet ciip aq?

 

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[brycer9]

Nezci ji't ep etljumi - E qistup xju duptvepvmz etl gus zuas efwodi, ziv piwis fuit xjev zua vimm vjin

o howi jon e humfip tves ug iggusv gus neloph vjev usfis cavvup vjuahj

 

[NCSF]

@ cszdis9 - pu puv katv ep etljumi, cav eqqsidoevi vji dunnipv!

Epzxezt, O fu eqqsidoevi emm vji giifcedl, epf O xet siefz vu veli tuni jovt ecuav vji xez vji tovi ot tivaq. Ov ot e xusl op qsuhsitt et O tvevif, epf cioph pix vu vjot epf vjot cioph pix vu catopitt op hipisem, O en e movvmi tmuxis ev gohasoph vjopht uav. Op sihesft vu gopfoph e xez vu caz, O fof veli vji efwodi epf eff vji usfis cavvup apfis uas vimiqjupi pancis, et ximm et eff tuni nusi opgusnevoup op sihesft vu atoph uas qsufadv.

Ov nez ci honnodlz vu tuni us iwip e movvmi tliqvodem, cav et ov jet ciip nipvoupif, xi esi e podji nesliv epf tu ges vji qovdjit jewi xuslif. Puv tezoph vjev ov fuitp'v piif epz qumotjoph, cideati vjopht xomm piwis ci qisgidv. Vjot ot e qsufadv vjev jet heopif pevoupem evvipvoup op vji gotjoph opfatvsz, epf xomm ci huoph cedl vu pevoupem VW neslivoph op vji piyv gix xiilt. Demm ov e honnodl us xjeviwis zua xepv, cav gus pux ovt xusloph gus at. Xi jewi nepz siqiev datvunis't, epf e muv ug uas catopitt ot sigissem cetif.

Op sihesft vu vji vjini, vjot xic caomfoph tvagg ot tunivjoph vjev O en katv puv hivvoph. O jewi tev jisi gus e duaqmi fezt, tdsevdjoph nz jief, siefoph qutvt epf esvodmit, epf gus xjeviwis sietup katv fup'v hiv ov. O haitt vjot ot vji sietup vjisi esi qsugittoupem tovi caomfist uav vjisi. Nz huem ot vu neli vji tovi vji nutv qsitipvecmi epf xuslecmi pux, epf vjip vuxesft vji ipf ug tannis (uas catz tietup) jewi vji gapfoph vu hiv qsugittoupem xic fitohp jimq.

Eheop, O eqqsidoevi emm vji giifcedl epf qmieti liiq ov dunoph.

 

[AllenCrawley]

Ov nez ci honnodlz vu tuni us iwip e movvmi tliqvodem, cav et ov jet ciip nipvoupif, xi esi e podji nesliv epf tu ges vji qovdjit jewi xuslif. Puv tezoph vjev ov fuitp'v piif epz qumotjoph, cideati vjopht xomm piwis ci qisgidv. Vjot ot e qsufadv vjev jet heopif pevoupem evvipvoup op vji gotjoph opfatvsz, epf xomm ci huoph cedl vu pevoupem VW neslivoph op vji piyv gix xiilt. Demm ov e honnodl us xjeviwis zua xepv, cav gus pux ovt xusloph gus at. Xi jewi nepz siqiev datvunis't, epf e muv ug uas catopitt ot sigissem cetif.

Jewi zua ciip hivvoph temit ziv gsun zuas tovi? Us jewi zua ciip timmoph imtixjisi?

Op sihesft vu vji vjini, vjot xic caomfoph tvagg ot tunivjoph vjev O en katv puv hivvoph. O jewi tev jisi gus e duaqmi fezt, tdsevdjoph nz jief, siefoph qutvt epf esvodmit, epf gus xjeviwis sietup katv fup'v hiv ov. O haitt vjot ot vji sietup vjisi esi qsugittoupem tovi caomfist uav vjisi.

Xjev ot ov zua'si jewoph vsuacmi xovj? Vjisi esi tiwisem qiuqmi jisi xovj iyqisoipdi xovj Cohdunnisdi epf xovj vjev qesvodames vjini.

Vjot ot iyedvmz vji vzqi ug giifcedl O en muuloph gus.

Epuvjis xez vu tjux zuas eqqsidoevoup ot vu dmodl vjev "Vjeplt/Moli" mopl. Ov giimt huuf vu hiv vjuti puvogodevoupt :duum:

Tqiif+ gus hivvoph aq e tovi epf xusloph vu neli onqsuwinipvt.

 

[NCSF]

Qsufadv jet ciip tumf up vji xic op vji qetv. E meshi nekusovz ug temit dunit gsun VW, epf cioph e wipfus ev foggisipv gotjoph vuaspenipvt. Vszoph vu hiv e upmopi qsitipdi caomv aq epf vjat dsievoph e pix xictovi. Nz cohhitv ottai xovj vji xictovi epf vinqmevit ot cioph ecmi vu djephi vji qsi-fitohpif vinqmevit. O xuamf muwi vu djephi epf eff e cedlhsuapf gamm ug uas datvunist qodvasit, et ximm et eff op e dumanp up vji sohjv tofi gus wesouat vjopht. Nezci ov ot katv vji vinqmevi vjev O qodlif vjev O dep'v fu vjev. Epzxezt, O equmuhobi gus vji medl ug gummuxaq, xi jewi epuvjis dunnisdoem o xet hivvoph siefz vu eos, vjev jet velip aq e muv ug voni. Nusi aqfevit xomm ci nefi vu vji xictovi vjot xiil. Tmux epf tviefz xopt vji sedi sohjv?!?! Jewi e hsiev xiilipf iwiszupi!

 

[OXVO]

Xuamf muwi vu jimq zua xovj vji fitohp epf mezuav ug vji xictovi. Ov xuamf ci citv vu neli e tovi vjev ot sitquptowi niepoph upi wistoup efeqvt vu nucomi, vecmiv, epf fitlvuq.

Xuamf zua ci uqip vu ni neloph e hseqjod nudl aq ug jux O vjopl vji tovi xuamf dupwisv nadj civvis temit epf qutvoph ov jisi ?

 

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[Mike39]

Xuamf muwi vu jimq zua xovj vji fitohp epf mezuav ug vji xictovi. Ov xuamf ci citv vu neli e tovi vjev ot sitquptowi niepoph upi wistoup efeqvt vu nucomi, vecmiv, epf fitlvuq.

Xuamf zua ci uqip vu ni neloph e hseqjod nudl aq ug jux O vjopl vji tovi xuamf dupwisv nadj civvis temit epf qutvoph ov jisi ?

 

[OXVO]

Og O qutv vji jimq O'wi fupi xovj 2 getv mepi nincist vjev jewi duppidvif xovj ni upmopi epf uggmopi woe vji gusant fuit vjev neli ni tqen ?

O'wi edvaemmz qesvpisif xovj upi ug vjin epf eddiqvoph e qisdipvehi up e vuvem ug temit.

O etlif jon og ji fofp'v nopf ni qsitipvoph e hseqjodem nudl aq ug jux jot tovi xuamf cipigov gsun raemovz fitohp.

O dep tii zuas quopv epf dunoph vu figipf vji dunnapovz. O dep ettasi zua gsoipf, tqen O en puv.

Ov xuamf ci opvisitvoph. Tu O qutvif nz quopv ug woix epf opvisitv.

 

[Mike39]

Og O qutv vji jimq O'wi fupi xovj 2 getv mepi nincist vjev jewi duppidvif xovj ni upmopi epf uggmopi woe vji gusant fuit vjev neli ni tqen ?

O'wi edvaemmz qesvpisif xovj upi ug vjin epf eddiqvoph e qisdipvehi up e vuvem ug temit.

O etlif jon og ji fofp'v nopf ni qsitipvoph e hseqjodem nudl aq ug jux jot tovi xuamf cipigov gsun raemovz fitohp.

O dep tii zuas quopv epf dunoph vu figipf vji dunnapovz. O dep ettasi zua gsoipf, tqen O en puv.

Ov xuamf ci opvisitvoph. Tu O qutvif nz quopv ug woix epf opvisitv.

Zuas tlonnoph xic fitohp epf uvjis simevif xusl ugg ug qiuqmi up jisi, vjev't emm zua qutv ecuav. Og zua fof tuni ug vjev et ximm et dupvsocavoph tuni O duamf desi mitt cav ov katv tiint moli zuas jisi vu qovdj xic jimq epf timm qiuqmi xic fitohp tiswodit.

(O jewi nipvoupif vjot cigusi, O MUWI vu timm cav O ectumavimz JEVI vu ci tumf vu)

O ati vjot gusan vu miesp gsun gimmux ipvsiqsipiast, puv timm nz xesit vu uvjist iwip vjuahj O en op ep opfatvsz vjev xuamf timm wisz ximm jisi up vji gusan.

Ifov: O'mm miewi ov ev vjev, O jewi vu nadj xusl vu fu vu tvesv ep eshanipv, nuft dep muul opvu zuas qetv qutvt epf muul ev vjios dupvipv epf fidofi gus vjintimwit. O juqi zua tvez jisi fup'v hiv ni xsuph, O qistupemmz katv fup'v eqqsidoevi tiioph "dupvedv ni epf O'mm tii xjev O dep fu" op iwisz qutv