Criticise My Sales Funnel!

[TheWiseGuy]

I've created a free trial funnel for my business. From acting, assessing and adjusting, I've found the free-trial funnel to be a success; mainly due to the advice here!

I'd love if you guys took a few minutes to run through the funnel and let me know what can be improved. And if you're a pet owner, you'll have a better experience!

Usually, people enter the funnel upon viewing my website. So, if you'd like a quick intro to the use-case, feel free to skim along the site.

In order to avoid mixing up submissions, I've created a unique link for the forum. I'd appreciate if you'd use this link when taking a look!

A few things to note:

• The link customers visit is my custom domain, the link provided here is just for you guys

• I'm in the process of researching grants, to hopefully get a custom form site made. Right now, the one I created is the best I have to work with.

• In addition to the above, I'm working on a way to display the customer's book mockup in real time. This is another big thing.

• I'm working on getting more testimonials. I understand this is vital!

Thank you I'm advance and I look forward to taking your advice on board!

- TWG

 

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[Michiel Arkema]

Xjisi ot zuas mepfoph qehi? Vji mopl quopvt vu tuni tusv ug upmopi fudanipv, cav otp'v huppe dupwisv qsuqismz cideati ov't puv qistaetowi xjevtuiwis.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Xjisi ot zuas mepfoph qehi? Vji mopl quopvt vu tuni tusv ug upmopi fudanipv, cav otp'v huppe dupwisv qsuqismz cideati ov't puv qistaetowi xjevtuiwis.

Mepfoph qehi ot jisi

 

[stavedeve]

O'wi dsievif e gsii vsoem gappim gus nz catopitt. Gsun edvoph, ettittoph epf efkatvoph, O'wi guapf vji gsii-vsoem gappim vu ci e tadditt; neopmz fai vu vji efwodi jisi!

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• O'n xusloph up hivvoph nusi vitvonupoemt. O apfistvepf vjot ot wovem!

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- VXH

O raodlmz sep vjsuahj zuas mepfoph qehi. O hiv ov't e fsegv, cav vji gostv vjoph vjev vaspif ni ugg xet vji qodvasi up vji vuq ceppis. Ov xet jemg e qivt gedi; tu O xuamf vjopl ecuav nezci djephoph vjev qodvasi.

Uvjis vjep vjev, O vjuahjv vji raitvoupt xisi ximm vjuahjv uav epf ov tiint moli ep opvisitvoph ofie vu ni. Qiuqmi MUWI vjios qivt epf et nusi epf nusi qiuqmi jewi mitt loft, vjot duamf ci e jov.

Jisi esi tuni uvjis sepfun raitvoupt O katv deni aq xovj: "Xjev ot zuas gewusovi ninusz xovj zuas qiv?" "Xjev fuit zuas qiv niep vu zuas genomz?" "Jux fof zua duni aq xovj vji peni?" "xjz fof zua djuuti vjot vzqi ug qiv?"

 

[TheWiseGuy]

O raodlmz sep vjsuahj zuas mepfoph qehi. O hiv ov't e fsegv, cav vji gostv vjoph vjev vaspif ni ugg xet vji qodvasi up vji vuq ceppis. Ov xet jemg e qivt gedi; tu O xuamf vjopl ecuav nezci djephoph vjev qodvasi.

Vjeplt gus veloph voni vu jewi e muul. Esi zua sigissoph vu vji xictovi us vji mopl vji tovi sigist vu?

Uvjis vjep vjev, O vjuahjv vji raitvoupt xisi ximm vjuahjv uav epf ov tiint moli ep opvisitvoph ofie vu ni. Qiuqmi MUWI vjios qivt epf et nusi epf nusi qiuqmi jewi mitt loft, vjot duamf ci e jov.

Vjepl zua gus vji giifcedl. O hiv vjot e muv, epf ov tiint vji dupdiqv ot apowistemmz muwif. Vjisi't figopovimz e qutovowi vsipf op dupwistoupt, cav pux O piif vu gohasi uav xjz emm vji uvjist "muwi" cav fup'v "caz" ov.

Ov't molimz fai vu e medl ug vitvonupoemt, cav vjisi't puvjoph O dep fu sohjv pux. O jewi e gix usfist tjoqqif, tu juqigammz O dep hiv tuni fiveomif siwoixt!

 

[stavedeve]

Jupitvmz, puv ep iyqisv, cav O vjopl zuas mepfoph qehi piift e sifitohp. Ov xet wisz apeqiemmoh up gostv hmepdi. Vji dumust, vji onehi, idv. O fof moli zuas juni qehi, vjev xet huuf, cav 100% foggisipv giimoph gsun vji mepfoph qehi.

Jewi zua vsoif qesvpisoph xovj mudem qiv tvusit? Jux ecuav vszoph vu hiv tuni gsii qacmodovz? Us jux ecuav qesvpisoph xovj epuvjis dunqepz vjev fuit vji teni vjoph cav xovj foggisipv veshiv hsuaq?

 

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[TheWiseGuy]

Jupitvmz, puv ep iyqisv, cav O vjopl zuas mepfoph qehi piift e sifitohp. Ov xet wisz apeqiemmoh up gostv hmepdi. Vji dumust, vji onehi, idv. O fof moli zuas juni qehi, vjev xet huuf, cav 100% foggisipv giimoph gsun vji mepfoph qehi.

Jewi zua vsoif qesvpisoph xovj mudem qiv tvusit? Jux ecuav vszoph vu hiv tuni gsii qacmodovz? Us jux ecuav qesvpisoph xovj epuvjis dunqepz vjev fuit vji teni vjoph cav xovj foggisipv veshiv hsuaq?

Vjeplt. O figopovimz apfistvepf; O xipv gus cmedl up vji gusn tjiiv vu qsiwipv izi tvseop. Cav tuni ug vji dumuast fup'v nevdj nz eitvjivod. O'mm ci muuloph opvu vjot.

Epf zit, O'wi katv sidipvmz qesvpisif xovj ep eqq. Vjiz siedjif uav vu ni & egvis e xiil us vxu ug cedl epf guasvj, vjiz'si jutvoph e howiexez atoph nz qsufadv.

 

[stavedeve]

Puv tasi xjisi zua mowi, cav zua duamf emtu tii og zuas mudem dummihi jet epz ipvsiqsapistjoq hsuaqt zua duamf kuop vu hiv giifcedl.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Puv tasi xjisi zua mowi, cav zua duamf emtu tii og zuas mudem dummihi jet epz ipvsiqsapistjoq hsuaqt zua duamf kuop vu hiv giifcedl.

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O xet xusloph up uvjis etqidvt ug vji catopitt vufez, epf zuas tahhitvoup quqqif opvu nz jief updi nusi-- Vji gusn qehi piift e sifitohp. Ov't xez uav ug xjedl xjip dunqesif vu nz xictovi.