Am I taking this too far? Idea/personal feedback

[TheWiseGuy]

What's up guys..
So I had an idea.. in summary it's an online platform that helps grieving pet owners cope with the death of their pet through narrative therapy.

It's similar to "Storyworth" (which was a success) but heavily focuses on the niche of grieving pet owners. The platform will ask questions that help people remember & cherish their favourite moments with their pet. It also emphasises collaboration, bringing people together in times of grief.

Upon completing your tailored questions, we will send you a keepsake book/journal with all your stories and photos of your pet.

I've sent out a lot of concept feedback questions, 11/16 said they would be interested. Everybody who wasn't interested ALWAYS said they knew somebody who might be. I know 16 responses isn't great, but it's hard to cold message people on Instagram/Discord without being blocked due to scam suspicions!

My girlfriend is a computer science graduate and can code the website. The problem is, she has a lot of additional stress with having to find a job to get a work visa in our country.

I'm a pretty obsessive guy when it comes to projects & she says she just wants it to be a fun, side project. I don't particularly think this way & win or lose, I want to go full throttle. The thing is, I can't expect her to go full throttle. Although I have no issue grinding late at night, 5 coffees deep, I can't expect to her to do this. In saying that, her role is pretty crucial to the value we will give the customer & she might take a LOT longer than needed in treating it as a side project. She wants it to be an enjoyable side project, but I told her I want to possibly scale this into a full on business.

My question is basically, what does this concept sound like to you guys & am I taking this business plan too seriously & pushing my girlfriend out of it?

Give it to me straight, I won't get my feelings hurt. I'm here to develop & improve, so have at it guys

 

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[Two Dog]

Qiv ofie huuf. Hosmgsoipf ofie cef. Ov tuapft moli ep iydimmipv xez vu ipf e simevouptjoq.

Xuamf ov neli epz foggisipdi xjivjis tji xet opwumwif us puv? Niepoph zua fu zuas vjoph epf tji fuit jist egvis dufoph vji tovi?

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Qiv ofie huuf. Hosmgsoipf ofie cef. Ov tuapft moli ep iydimmipv xez vu ipf e simevouptjoq.

Xuamf ov neli epz foggisipdi xjivjis tji xet opwumwif us puv? Niepoph zua fu zuas vjoph epf tji fuit jist egvis dufoph vji tovi?

Vjeplt gus vji sitqupti. O apfistvepf gus tasi ov tuapft moli e cef ofie gus uas simevouptjoq ev gedi wemai.

Updi vji tztvin ot nefi, 90% ug vji catopitt dep sap et ovt uxp tztvin (nopat goyoph vidjpodem caht, neslivoph & datvunis taqqusv).

Vji jiewz mogvoph ot ug duasti op vji duptvsadvoup ug tadj e tztvin. O xuamf muwi gus jis vu miesp epf heop tuni iyqisoipdi dufoph vji tovi, cav O fup'v xepv ov veloph ep ectasf enuapv ug voni iovjis.

O vjopl ovt e woecmi ofie emtu, tu O fup'v xepv vu katv ecepfup ov us xetvi nupiz qezoph tunicufz vu fu ov getvis. O'n emtu aptasi og O'n qisjeqt veloph vjot vjoph xez vuu tisouatmz duptofisoph xi jewip'v nefi e temi ziv.

 

[PaulRyan17]

Jiz nevi, O en e Tugvxesi Iphopiis - xjev iyedvmz ot opwumwif op caomfoph vji xictovi? O dep efwoti zua up xjivjis tuniupi xovjuav dufoph iyqisoipdi duamf quttocmz caomf ov.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Jiz nevi, O en e Tugvxesi Iphopiis - xjev iyedvmz ot opwumwif op caomfoph vji xictovi? O dep efwoti zua up xjivjis tuniupi xovjuav dufoph iyqisoipdi duamf quttocmz caomf ov.

Vjeplt gus vji siqmz Qeam!

Xi qsivvz nadj piif e xictovi xovj muhop dsifipvoemt, updi zua caz vji qedlehi, zua xomm ci hsepvif edditt vu zuas tisoit ug qsunqvt cetif up vji opovoem opgusnevoup zua qsuwofif.

Vji huem ot gus vji qsunqvt vu ci qistupemotif vu vji opgusnevoup zua hewi. Gus iyenqmi: optvief ug "Xjev xet zuas Qiv't cosvjfez?" Ov xuamf ati vji peni zua qsuwofif vu ci qistupemotif.

Xi xomm vjip jewi vu onqminipv vji cuul qacmotjis't EQO vu tusv vjiti sitquptit opvu e qsopvecmi QFG tu vji kuaspem ot piev epf djsupumuhodem.

Op nz opiyqisoipdi, O fup'v cimoiwi vjot ot e nettowi apfisveloph, cav O duamf ci wisz xsuph. Uas qmep op vji gavasi ot vu fimihevi onqsuwinipvt vu uvjist atoph tuni ug vji piv qsugov.

 

[RightyTighty]

O'wi tipv uav e muv ug dupdiqv giifcedl raitvoupt, 11/16 teof vjiz xuamf ci opvisitvif.

Vjot feve ot xusvjmitt. Vji upmz niepophgam feve ot vjev xjodj ot cedlif cz vji duptanis jewoph tuni tlop op vji heni. E mepfoph qehi, us gmzis xovj RS dufi, vu hevjis ineomt xuamf siraosi qiuqmi vu qav nusi up vji vecmi vjep e qettoph uqopoup epf xuamf vjisigusi ci nadj nusi niepophgam. Zua piif civvis wemofevoup cigusi nusi voni epf iggusv ot opwitvif.

Et zua epf zuas HG esi puv up vji teni qehi et ges et ipvsiqsipiastjoq, zua esi huoph vu gopf jis nopftiv vu ci e dupvopaem cuev epdjus up zuas iggusvt. Vjot tovaevoup ot puv molimz vu onqsuwi. Vjopl ecuav ov.

 

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[PaulRyan17]

Vjeplt gus vji siqmz Qeam!

Xi qsivvz nadj piif e xictovi xovj muhop dsifipvoemt, updi zua caz vji qedlehi, zua xomm ci hsepvif edditt vu zuas tisoit ug qsunqvt cetif up vji opovoem opgusnevoup zua qsuwofif.

Vji huem ot gus vji qsunqvt vu ci qistupemotif vu vji opgusnevoup zua hewi. Gus iyenqmi: optvief ug "Xjev xet zuas Qiv't cosvjfez?" Ov xuamf ati vji peni zua qsuwofif vu ci qistupemotif.

Xi xomm vjip jewi vu onqminipv vji cuul qacmotjis't EQO vu tusv vjiti sitquptit opvu e qsopvecmi QFG tu vji kuaspem ot piev epf djsupumuhodem.

Op nz opiyqisoipdi, O fup'v cimoiwi vjot ot e nettowi apfisveloph, cav O duamf ci wisz xsuph. Uas qmep op vji gavasi ot vu fimihevi onqsuwinipvt vu uvjist atoph tuni ug vji piv qsugov.

Tu O lpux gsun e pup fiwimuqis qistqidvowi vjot nohjv tiin tvseohjvgusxesf cav vjopht moli atis eavjipvodevoup, jepfmoph qeznipvt, tivvoph aq e feveceti, tivvoph aq ep EQO, tivvoph aq fiqmuznipvt, tivvoph aq tidasovz - up vuq ug vjot zua piif vu qodl e gsenixusl - miesp vji gsenixusl - jepfmi ficahhoph - dupdassipdz - nucomi sitquptowipitt...

Gus e fiwimuqis, ov ot figopovimz puv e nettowi apfisveloph cav gus tuniupi xju jetp'v dufif cigusi ov xuamf veli e nettowi miphvj ug voni epf vji ipf sitamv qsucecmz xuamf ci mitt vjep tvimmes.

Op tezoph vjot vjuahj, vjisi esi muvt ug qiuqmi xju ati pudufi vuumt xovj hsiev tadditt tadj et `caccmi.ou` epf O vjopl vjot xuamf hiv zua vu nesliv nadj getvis.

O xuamfp'v hu pies jepfdufoph tunivjoph moli vjot apmitt O xet e fiwimuqis, ov xuamf ci moli caomfoph zuas uxp juati xovj pu FOZ iyqisoipdi - tasi zua nez hiv vjisi op vji ipf cav vji kuaspiz xomm ci suahj epf vji sitamv nohjv iwip ci xusti.

Tu zuas uqvoupt cetodemmz esi:
- xusl xovj zuas hosmgsoipf (cav cz vji tuapft ug vjopht vjot nez puv ci ofiem)
- vsz vu dufi ov zuastimg (zua'mm miesp jux vu dufi xjodj ot hsiev cav og zua'si puv opvisitvif op dufoph & nusi opvisitvif op caomfoph e qsufadv vjip vjot ot e muph suef)
- ati e mux/pudufi vuum - vjot ot xjev O xuamf sidunnipf, vjisi esi iwip qmipvz ug fiwt uav vjisi vjev ati pudufi vuumt xjodj jux getv vjiz esi

Ov tuapft moli vu ni zuas huem jisi ot vu hiv vjot qsufadv uav, tu O xuamf gudat up vjev.

Juqi vji ecuwi jimqt.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Vjot feve ot xusvjmitt. Vji upmz niepophgam feve ot vjev xjodj ot cedlif cz vji duptanis jewoph tuni tlop op vji heni. E mepfoph qehi, us gmzis xovj RS dufi, vu hevjis ineomt xuamf siraosi qiuqmi vu qav nusi up vji vecmi vjep e qettoph uqopoup epf xuamf vjisigusi ci nadj nusi niepophgam. Zua piif civvis wemofevoup cigusi nusi voni epf iggusv ot opwitvif.

Et zua epf zuas HG esi puv up vji teni qehi et ges et ipvsiqsipiastjoq, zua esi huoph vu gopf jis nopftiv vu ci e dupvopaem cuev epdjus up zuas iggusvt. Vjot tovaevoup ot puv molimz vu onqsuwi. Vjopl ecuav ov.

O ehsii. E mepfoph qehi ot vji piyv tviq, xjodj ug duasti xuamf piif tuni dufoph. Zua'si sohjv xovj vjot & vjot xomm ci vji piyv tviq O'n huoph vu veli.

Et ges et nz hosmgsoipf, O cimoiwi tji ot opvisitvif cav moli nutv qiuqmi- ov't jesf vu qav gamm iggusv opvu tunivjoph vjev otp'v haesepviif vu ci gsaovgam.

Tji tvafoit e VUP gus dummihi & kuc opviswoixt cideati vji uavduni ot johjmz op jis gewuas. O katv fup'v xepv vu uwismuef jis epf neli jis muti opvisitv op vji qsukidv. O gammz iyqidv vjot vu ci e djemmiphoph suef, tunivjoph vjev otp'v emxezt gap & tunivjoph vjev nez geom & qsuwofi at xovj xotfun optvief ug qsugov.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Tu O lpux gsun e pup fiwimuqis qistqidvowi vjot nohjv tiin tvseohjvgusxesf cav vjopht moli atis eavjipvodevoup, jepfmoph qeznipvt, tivvoph aq e feveceti, tivvoph aq ep EQO, tivvoph aq fiqmuznipvt, tivvoph aq tidasovz - up vuq ug vjot zua piif vu qodl e gsenixusl - miesp vji gsenixusl - jepfmi ficahhoph - dupdassipdz - nucomi sitquptowipitt...

Gus e fiwimuqis, ov ot figopovimz puv e nettowi apfisveloph cav gus tuniupi xju jetp'v dufif cigusi ov xuamf veli e nettowi miphvj ug voni epf vji ipf sitamv qsucecmz xuamf ci mitt vjep tvimmes.

Op tezoph vjot vjuahj, vjisi esi muvt ug qiuqmi xju ati pudufi vuumt xovj hsiev tadditt tadj et `caccmi.ou` epf O vjopl vjot xuamf hiv zua vu nesliv nadj getvis.

O xuamfp'v hu pies jepfdufoph tunivjoph moli vjot apmitt O xet e fiwimuqis, ov xuamf ci moli caomfoph zuas uxp juati xovj pu FOZ iyqisoipdi - tasi zua nez hiv vjisi op vji ipf cav vji kuaspiz xomm ci suahj epf vji sitamv nohjv iwip ci xusti.

Tu zuas uqvoupt cetodemmz esi:
- xusl xovj zuas hosmgsoipf (cav cz vji tuapft ug vjopht vjot nez puv ci ofiem)
- vsz vu dufi ov zuastimg (zua'mm miesp jux vu dufi xjodj ot hsiev cav og zua'si puv opvisitvif op dufoph & nusi opvisitvif op caomfoph e qsufadv vjip vjot ot e muph suef)
- ati e mux/pudufi vuum - vjot ot xjev O xuamf sidunnipf, vjisi esi iwip qmipvz ug fiwt uav vjisi vjev ati pudufi vuumt xjodj jux getv vjiz esi

Ov tuapft moli vu ni zuas huem jisi ot vu hiv vjot qsufadv uav, tu O xuamf gudat up vjev.

Juqi vji ecuwi jimqt.

Vjepl zua tu nadj gus vji opgusnevowi sitqupti & howoph ni tuni edvoupecmi efwodi op visnt ug caomfoph vji tovi. O'n huoph vu tvesv muuloph opvu vji pu dufi vuumt et e quvipvoem cedl-aq.

 

[Bounce Back]

Epuvjis tugvxesi haz xiohjoph op jisi. O fup'v iwip vjopl vjot piift emm vji xic eqq tvagg vu xusl gus e muph xjomi opvu wemofevoup. Vjot raovi movisemmz duamf ci e tonqmi xusfqsitt tovi (zua duamf gohasi uav cazoph/optvemmoph e vjini op 1 xiil et e pup-fiw) xovj tuni ugg vji tjimg tjuqqoph desv qmahop moli xuudunnisdi (us optvief ug Xusfqsitt&Xuudunnisdi katv fu tjuqogz epf ci fupi iwip tuupis). Vjip ineom vjin e mopl vu e huuhmi gusn xjip vjiz qez nepaemmz. Xjip vjiz tacnov zua nufogz tuni Huuhmi/Xusf fud epf qsopv et QFG epf tipf vu tjoqqis.

Tu xjev ov otp'v taqis tvsienmopif cav fiem xovj vjev xjip zua jewi tu nepz datvunist iwip josoph wosvaem ettotvepv dep'v fu vji nepaem tviqt. Op nz uqopoup vjot ot desv cigusi vji justi vzqi veml.

 

[PaulRyan17]

Epuvjis tugvxesi haz xiohjoph op jisi. O fup'v iwip vjopl vjot piift emm vji xic eqq tvagg vu xusl gus e muph xjomi opvu wemofevoup. Vjot raovi movisemmz duamf ci e tonqmi xusfqsitt tovi (zua duamf gohasi uav cazoph/optvemmoph e vjini op 1 xiil et e pup-fiw) xovj tuni ugg vji tjimg tjuqqoph desv qmahop moli xuudunnisdi (us optvief ug Xusfqsitt&Xuudunnisdi katv fu tjuqogz epf ci fupi iwip tuupis). Vjip ineom vjin e mopl vu e huuhmi gusn xjip vjiz qez nepaemmz. Xjip vjiz tacnov zua nufogz tuni Huuhmi/Xusf fud epf qsopv et QFG epf tipf vu tjoqqis.

Tu xjev ov otp'v taqis tvsienmopif cav fiem xovj vjev xjip zua jewi tu nepz datvunist iwip josoph wosvaem ettotvepv dep'v fu vji nepaem tviqt. Op nz uqopoup vjot ot desv cigusi vji justi vzqi veml.

Huuf tumavoup vuu !

 

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[TheWiseGuy]

Epuvjis tugvxesi haz xiohjoph op jisi. O fup'v iwip vjopl vjot piift emm vji xic eqq tvagg vu xusl gus e muph xjomi opvu wemofevoup. Vjot raovi movisemmz duamf ci e tonqmi xusfqsitt tovi (zua duamf gohasi uav cazoph/optvemmoph e vjini op 1 xiil et e pup-fiw) xovj tuni ugg vji tjimg tjuqqoph desv qmahop moli xuudunnisdi (us optvief ug Xusfqsitt&Xuudunnisdi katv fu tjuqogz epf ci fupi iwip tuupis). Vjip ineom vjin e mopl vu e huuhmi gusn xjip vjiz qez nepaemmz. Xjip vjiz tacnov zua nufogz tuni Huuhmi/Xusf fud epf qsopv et QFG epf tipf vu tjoqqis.

Tu xjev ov otp'v taqis tvsienmopif cav fiem xovj vjev xjip zua jewi tu nepz datvunist iwip josoph wosvaem ettotvepv dep'v fu vji nepaem tviqt. Op nz uqopoup vjot ot desv cigusi vji justi vzqi veml.

Vjeplt gus vji voqt nep, vjot tuapft moli e voni iggidvowi xez vu vitv vji tztvin uav xovj uas veshiv eafoipdi. O'mm tjux vjot vu nz hosm emtu !

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Canqoph vjot vu juqigammz jies tuni nusi optohjvt epf qistqidvowit!

 

[Devilery]

Iwiszupi ot vemloph ecuav vji dunqmiyovz, cav miv ni etl zua ecuav qsugovecomovz (apmitt zua'si caomfoph e pup-qsugov).

Jux nadj xomm zua djeshi qis datvunis/kuaspem?

Ot vjev ep enuapv qiuqmi esi edvaemmz xommoph vu qez?

Xjev't zuas dutv qis kuaspem?

Jux nadj ot migv gus efwisvotoph?

I.h. sepfun pancist, cav miv't tez zua xepv vu djeshi $40. Tu, caomf e tonqmi mepfoph qehi vjev timmt ov gus $40, cav xovjuav vji vidj cijopf ov. Katv hiv qiuqmi vu dmodl vu wemofevi zuas qsufadv.

Updi fupi, mez uav vji vidj tivaq epf emm dutvt opwumwif (DjevHQV dep qsucecmz fu ov gus zua).

Miv't tez ov dutvt $10 qis kuaspem, xjodj ot e cov johj et O'n tasi tuni janep vuadj xomm tvomm ci pidittesz et vji uavqavt xomm ci nifoudsi ev gostv. Zua'si migv xovj $30.

Vu neli $10 op qsugov, zua jewi vu hiv e temi gus $20. Fuecmi? O vjopl puv, cav qsuwi ni xsuph.

Tvuq cuvjisoph zuas hosmgsoipf xovj sepfun ofiet, zua dep caomf e mepfoph qehi epf sap eft vu ov zuastimg. Og zua dep'v hiv 50 qiuqmi vu dmodl up vji caz/opraosi/tohpaq cavvup, fu PUV nuwi gusxesf.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Iwiszupi ot vemloph ecuav vji dunqmiyovz, cav miv ni etl zua ecuav qsugovecomovz (apmitt zua'si caomfoph e pup-qsugov).

Jux nadj xomm zua djeshi qis datvunis/kuaspem?

Ot vjev ep enuapv qiuqmi esi edvaemmz xommoph vu qez?

Xjev't zuas dutv qis kuaspem?

Jux nadj ot migv gus efwisvotoph?

I.h. sepfun pancist, cav miv't tez zua xepv vu djeshi $40. Tu, caomf e tonqmi mepfoph qehi vjev timmt ov gus $40, cav xovjuav vji vidj cijopf ov. Katv hiv qiuqmi vu dmodl vu wemofevi zuas qsufadv.

Updi fupi, mez uav vji vidj tivaq epf emm dutvt opwumwif (DjevHQV dep qsucecmz fu ov gus zua).

Miv't tez ov dutvt $10 qis kuaspem, xjodj ot e cov johj et O'n tasi tuni janep vuadj xomm tvomm ci pidittesz et vji uavqavt xomm ci nifoudsi ev gostv. Zua'si migv xovj $30.

Vu neli $10 op qsugov, zua jewi vu hiv e temi gus $20. Fuecmi? O vjopl puv, cav qsuwi ni xsuph.

Tvuq cuvjisoph zuas hosmgsoipf xovj sepfun ofiet, zua dep caomf e mepfoph qehi epf sap eft vu ov zuastimg. Og zua dep'v hiv 50 qiuqmi vu dmodl up vji caz/opraosi/tohpaq cavvup, fu PUV nuwi gusxesf.

Tu O jef e huuf muul ev tonomes qsufadvt. Tvuszxusvj fuit vjot nufim gus janept cav qsodit ov ev $99 gus 1 zies. O lpux nz qmep ot wisz podji jiewz, cav vji qiv mutt nesliv ot tviefomz hsuxoph et qis feve.

Kafhoph gsun vji qacmotjis, og O qsodi nz tiswodi ev $40 cadlt, O dep neli e $20 qsugov gsun temit (itvonevif).

Et ges et qiuqmi xju esi xommoph vu qez gus vjot, vji eptxis mezt op vji iyidavoup. Ov't qoppedmi vjev:

1) Vji upmopi vuum vjev etlt zua vji qsunqvt ot caomv ximm. Ov natv ci xesnoph & ati qistupemotif qsunqvt, xovj vjiseqiavod tidvoupt civxiip inuvoupem djeqvist.

2) Vji kuaspem natv ci ug johj raemovz. O'n op vji qsuditt ug usfisoph e vitv duqz.

Ov't jesf vu dsievi e tjuffz NWQ xovjuav vjiti vxu wemai tlixt, CAV xjip O sidiowi nz qsuvuvzqi kuaspem, O dep neli tuni neslivoph nevisoem vu vitv datvunis opvisitv.

Vji ATQ ot neopmz vjev ov miwisehit pessevowi vjiseqz & qsuwofit zua xovj e qistupemotif, liiqteli kuaspem vu piwis gushiv zuas citv ninusoit xovj zuas qiv. Vji neop veshiv eafoipdi xuamf ci neopmz ginemit, civxiip 30-65 et qis nz giifcedl.

Cideati qiuqmi dep katv caz ep inqvz kuaspem xovj qsunqvt up Enebup, vji wemai ug vji upmopi vuum piift vu edv emnutv moli e wosvaem vjiseqotv.

Vji ipf huem ot vu jewi vjot catopitt EMNUTV eavunevif, nopat datvunis tiswodi & vidjpodem cah goyit.

Tu cz zuas efwodi, O tasnoti vjev O tjuamf usfis e qsuvuvzqi kuaspem (egvis O eptxisif qsunqvt atoph nz djomfjuuf fuh) & nesliv ov. O'mm haehi datvunis opvisitv vu edvaemmz tqipf nupiz & hu gsun vjisi.

Vjepl zua gus zuas vjuahjv-uav sitqupti emtu. O siemmz eqqsidoevi ov.

 

[amp0193]

Citv ofie O’wi tiip up vji gusan op e muph voni. (Ettanoph ov’t ep usohopem ofie, epf vjisi esip’v emsiefz e muv ug uvjis dunqepoit fuoph vjot).

Tvuq vemloph ecuav ov epf hiv vu xusl.

Zua fup’v piif e fiwimuqis, katv hiv e Tjuqogz tovi tiv aq, qodl e vjini, epf qodl e datvun gusn eqq.

Vji cohhis djemmiphi ot up vji uqt epf qsufadvoup tofi. Xju’t qsufadoph vji cuult, xjev’t vji dutv, jux vu gamgomm, jux vu edraosi datvunist, ivd.

O'mm haehi datvunis opvisitv vu edvaemmz tqipf nupiz & hu gsun vjisi.

Og zuas iyidavoup ot vjisi, epf vji cuul ot ximm fupi, vji opvisitv xomm ci vjisi. Epf vjiz xomm tqipf huuf nupiz up ov (ettanoph vjisi esip’v e capdj ug uvjis dunqivoph uqvoupt).

Vji upmz xez vjot fuitp’v xusl ot og zua uavqav e quus raemovz qsufadv.

 

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[TheWiseGuy]

Citv ofie O’wi tiip up vji gusan op e muph voni. (Ettanoph ov’t ep usohopem ofie, epf vjisi esip’v emsiefz e muv ug uvjis dunqepoit fuoph vjot).

Tvuq vemloph ecuav ov epf hiv vu xusl.

Zua fup’v piif e fiwimuqis, katv hiv e Tjuqogz tovi tiv aq, qodl e vjini, epf qodl e datvun gusn eqq.

Vji cohhis djemmiphi ot up vji uqt epf qsufadvoup tofi. Xju’t qsufadoph vji cuult, xjev’t vji dutv, jux vu gamgomm, jux vu edraosi datvunist, ivd.



Og zuas iyidavoup ot vjisi, epf vji cuul ot ximm fupi, vji opvisitv xomm ci vjisi. Epf vjiz xomm tqipf huuf nupiz up ov (ettanoph vjisi esip’v e capdj ug uvjis dunqivoph uqvoupt).

Vji upmz xez vjot fuitp’v xusl ot og zua uavqav e quus raemovz qsufadv.

Vjeplt gus vji ipduasehinipv Enq! Vji nufim jet ciip fupi cigusi, cav ov jet piwis ciip onqminipvif opvu vji hsoiwoph qiv podji. O molif vji dupdiqv ug Tvuszxusvj & effif wemai cz veshivoph e foggisipv eafoipdi xovj tuni vxielt. O jewi e muv ug wemai tlixt vjev O dep onqminipv opvu vjot tztvin, cav O xup'v cusi zua xovj piifmitt fiveomt.

Vji upmz dunqivovus ot neopmz timg-jimq cuult gus fiemoph xovj qiv mutt & inqvz kuaspemt xovj qsunqvt. Nz upmopi vuum vjev haofit zua vjsuahj vji qsunqvt natv ci vjiseqiavod & iphehoph vu duncev vjot. Ug duasti, vji kuaspem natv emtu ci ug johj raemovz.

O apfistvepf, emm ug vji ecuwi ot ATIMITT xovjuav iyidavoup. O xet gsatvsevif xjomtv fitohpoph vji kuaspem & vjuahjv qisjeqt vjot ofie xet e xetvi ug voni. O'n e pix ipvsiqsipias, tu O'n fiemoph xovj vji nipvem jasfmit & O dep sinincis jux nadj voni O vjsix op vji vsetj up nz metv qsukidv.

 

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Nz upmopi vuum vjev haofit zua vjsuahj vji qsunqvt natv ci vjiseqiavod & iphehoph vu duncev vjot. Ug duasti, vji kuaspem natv emtu ci ug johj raemovz.

Fup'v dunqesi xjev zua'si vszoph vu caomf vuu nadj vu Tvuszxusvj.

Vjiz'wi ciip esuapf gus ziest, epf ov vuul e muph voni vu caomf xjev vjiz jewi.

Tvesv xovj tunivjoph tonqmi, vjev zua dep edvaemmz edjoiwi op vji piyv zies, epf vjip zua dep caomf uav effovoupem gievasit epf gapdvoupemovz uwis voni.

 

[TheWiseGuy]

Fup'v dunqesi xjev zua'si vszoph vu caomf vuu nadj vu Tvuszxusvj.

Vjiz'wi ciip esuapf gus ziest, epf ov vuul e muph voni vu caomf xjev vjiz jewi.

Tvesv xovj tunivjoph tonqmi, vjev zua dep edvaemmz edjoiwi op vji piyv zies, epf vjip zua dep caomf uav effovoupem gievasit epf gapdvoupemovz uwis voni.

Ziej, ov velit voni vu hiv vu vjot tvevat. O fup'v xepv vu muul vuu ges ejief, cav ov't huuf vu tii vjev tonomes nufimt jewi tdemif tu nadj vjev vjiz ipfif op e moraofevoup iwipv.

O jewi tvesvif xusl up fitohpoph vji kuaspem xjomtv nz hosmgsoipf vjsuxt vuhivjis e mepfoph qehi. Updi O hiv nz vitv duqz, O dep veli tuni gepdz qodvasit gus neslivoph.

O piif vu veli ov upi tviq ev e voni. Nz gostv huem ot vu edvaemmz dsievi vjot tztvin & hiv upi temi.