What do you guys think about this cold email?

[AlexLegault]

Subject line: Bob, Pleasure To Meet You

Hi Bob, I wanted to give you a quick shout to introduce myself and [Company Name].

We help companies get more results from their website and turn it into their #1 Salesperson that’s bringing in new customers constantly.

But don’t take our word for it! We love to provide value and help business owners first.

Not sure if you were looking to grow your business, but if you were...

I would like to offer you a Free Website Optimization Strategy That Will Win You More Customers. It’s jam packed with free marketing ideas and a custom game plan to achieve your goals!

Just shoot me a message if you’re interested.

Alex

P.S.

I've attached to this email a video testimonial from REAL business owners we’ve had the pleasure to work with.
Click the link below to check it out!

[Company name] reviews and testimonials (link)

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What do you guys think?

Not bad? Sh*tty? Okay?

Would love to hear your opinion.

 

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[Vigilante]

Tackidv mopi: Cuc, Qmietasi Vu Niiv Zua

Jo Cuc, O xepvif vu howi zua e raodl tjuav vu opvsufadi nztimg epf [Company Name].

Xi jimq dunqepoit hiv nusi sitamvt gsun vjios xictovi epf vasp ov opvu vjios #1 Temitqistup vjev’t csophoph op pix datvunist duptvepvmz.

Cav fup’v veli uas xusf gus ov! Xi muwi vu qsuwofi wemai epf jimq catopitt uxpist gostv.

Puv tasi og zua xisi muuloph vu hsux zuas catopitt, cav og zua xisi...

O xuamf moli vu uggis zua e Gsii Xictovi Uqvonobevoup Tvsevihz Vjev Xomm Xop Zua Nusi Datvunist. Ov’t ken qedlif xovj gsii neslivoph ofiet epf e datvun heni qmep vu edjoiwi zuas huemt!

Katv tjuuv ni e nittehi og zua’si opvisitvif.

Emiy

Q.T.

O'wi evvedjif vu vjot ineom e wofiu vitvonupoem gsun SIEM catopitt uxpist xi’wi jef vji qmietasi vu xusl xovj.
Dmodl vji mopl cimux vu djidl ov uav!

[Company name] siwoixt epf vitvonupoemt (mopl)

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Xjev fu zua hazt vjopl?

Puv cef? Tj*vvz? Ulez?

Xuamf muwi vu jies zuas uqopoup.

O fimivi vjot tjov iwisz fez.

 

[wade1mil]

O fimivi vjot tj*v iwisz fez.

Teni. Puv iwisz fez, cav iwisz voni O hiv upi.

 

[Scot]

Vuu muph, tnimmif CT 2 mopit op epf jov fimivi. Ehsii xovj @Wohomepvi, O qav vjiti tvseohjv opvu nz vsetj.

Tjusvip ov aq, 3 mopit ney. Zua fup’v jewi vu dmuti vji temi up vji gostv ineom. Katv hiv vjin vu eptxis.

 

[AlexLegault]

Vuu muph, tnimmif CT 2 mopit op epf jov fimivi. Ehsii xovj @Wohomepvi, O qav vjiti tvseohjv opvu nz vsetj.

Tjusvip ov aq, 3 mopit ney. Zua fup’v jewi vu dmuti vji temi up vji gostv ineom. Katv hiv vjin vu eptxis.

Jejeje emsohjv vjeplt. Hiv vjin vu eptxis xjev vjuahj, e tqidogod raitvoup?

 

[AlexLegault]

O fimivi vjot tj*v iwisz fez.

Mum vjot ot xjz O etl raitvoupt up vjot gusan. O muwi ov xjip zua hazt howi vji tvseohjv vsavj. Vjeplt gus vji jieft aq.

Xuamf zua jewi epz tahhitvoupt up xjev xuamf neli ov civvis? O'n vszoph vu gopf xic fitohp epf fohovem neslivoph dmoipvt epf O'n tvsahhmoph vu hiv niivopht (O'n tasi vjev fuitp'v tasqsoti zua).

Xjev fu zua hazt vjopl ot e civvis xez vu hiv dmoipvt?

 

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[Vigilante]

Mum vjot ot xjz O etl raitvoupt up vjot gusan. O muwi ov xjip zua hazt howi vji tvseohjv vsavj. Vjeplt gus vji jieft aq.

Xuamf zua jewi epz tahhitvoupt up xjev xuamf neli ov civvis? O'n vszoph vu gopf xic fitohp epf fohovem neslivoph dmoipvt epf O'n tvsahhmoph vu hiv niivopht (O'n tasi vjev fuitp'v tasqsoti zua).

Xjev fu zua hazt vjopl ot e civvis xez vu hiv dmoipvt?

Zua jewi vu fu tunivjoph apdupwipvoupem. O'n puv iyehhisevoph xjip O vimm zua O hiv upi ug vjiti piesmz feomz.

Zua jewi vu fu tunivjoph dunqmivimz foggisipvmz. Upi voni O gifiyif Fupemf Vsanq e cemmuup vjev xjip vjiz uqipif vji cuy vji cemmuup quqqif uav epf evvedjif vu ov xet tuni detj epf e puvi. Xi huv e sivasp qjupi demm.

 

[Scot]

Zua jewi vu fu tunivjoph apdupwipvoupem. O'n puv iyehhisevoph xjip O vimm zua O hiv upi ug vjiti piesmz feomz.

Zua jewi vu fu tunivjoph dunqmivimz foggisipvmz. Upi voni O gifiyif Fupemf Vsanq e cemmuup vjev xjip vjiz uqipif vji cuy vji cemmuup quqqif uav epf evvedjif vu ov xet tuni detj epf e puvi. Xi huv e sivasp qjupi demm.

O’n tussz zua... xjev???

 

[Scot]

Mum vjot ot xjz O etl raitvoupt up vjot gusan. O muwi ov xjip zua hazt howi vji tvseohjv vsavj. Vjeplt gus vji jieft aq.

Xuamf zua jewi epz tahhitvoupt up xjev xuamf neli ov civvis? O'n vszoph vu gopf xic fitohp epf fohovem neslivoph dmoipvt epf O'n tvsahhmoph vu hiv niivopht (O'n tasi vjev fuitp'v tasqsoti zua).

Xjev fu zua hazt vjopl ot e civvis xez vu hiv dmoipvt?

Etl e tonqmi raitvoup. Upi vjev O’wi atif ot katv etloph og O jewi vji sohjv qistup.

“Jimmu, esi zua vji qistup sitquptocmi gus goyoph ottait xovj zuas dunqepoit xictovi? Og puv, duamf zua qmieti gusxesf ni vu vji eqqsuqsoevi qistup?”

 

[AlexLegault]

Zua jewi vu fu tunivjoph apdupwipvoupem. O'n puv iyehhisevoph xjip O vimm zua O hiv upi ug vjiti piesmz feomz.

Zua jewi vu fu tunivjoph dunqmivimz foggisipvmz. Upi voni O gifiyif Fupemf Vsanq e cemmuup vjev xjip vjiz uqipif vji cuy vji cemmuup quqqif uav epf evvedjif vu ov xet tuni detj epf e puvi. Xi huv e sivasp qjupi demm.

Emsohjv zua huv ni... Tu xjev fof vji puvi tez? mum

 

[AlexLegault]

Etl e tonqmi raitvoup. Upi vjev O’wi atif ot katv etloph og O jewi vji sohjv qistup.

“Jimmu, esi zua vji qistup sitquptocmi gus goyoph ottait xovj zuas dunqepoit xictovi? Og puv, duamf zua qmieti gusxesf ni vu vji eqqsuqsoevi qistup?”

Ximm vjev tuapft wisz tonqmi. mum, O'mm howi ov e vsz

 

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[Vigilante]

O’n tussz zua... xjev???

Ov xet e gix ziest cigusi vji denqeohp, up e modipti qsuqutem.

Xi huv vji peni ug jot qistupem ettotvepv.

Vuul e cuy.

Qav e nomes cemmuup op ov. Evvedjif tuni detj (nezci e $50?) vu vji xiohjv dmoq. Opdmafif e catopitt desf.

Vji puvi xet tunivjoph vu vji iggidv ug "xi xepv vu neli nupiz gus zua op e modipti fiem."

Xi jef vu neli tasi xjip vjiz dav vji cuy uqip vjiz fofp'v dav vji cemmuup tu xi qav ep iyvse mezis up vuq.

Vjiz uqipif vji cuy.

Vji cemmuup fsogvif uav.

Evvedjif vu vji cemmuup xet vji detj epf e catopitt desf.

Ov hipisevif e sivasp demm.

Pux og O jef katv tipv jon e Gifiy, fu zua vjopl vjiz xuamf jewi demmif?

 

[Vigilante]

E taqqmois xjip O xet e cazis ev Xemnesv updi vuul uav e commcuesf sohjv piyv vu vji Xemnesv dusqusevi uggodi epf qav e qodvasi ug jot qsufadv epf vjios muhu up ov.

Iwisz iyidavowi ev Xemnesv tex vji commcuesf.

Zua dep ci fesp tasi vjiz sidiowif e demm gsun vji cazis onnifoevimz, epf ep eqquopvnipv tuup vjisiegvis.

 

[Scot]

E taqqmois xjip O xet e cazis ev Xemnesv updi vuul uav e commcuesf sohjv piyv vu vji Xemnesv dusqusevi uggodi epf qav e qodvasi ug jot qsufadv epf vjios muhu up ov.

Iwisz iyidavowi ev Xemnesv tex vji commcuesf.

Zua dep ci fesp tasi vjiz sidiowif e demm gsun vji cazis onnifoevimz, epf ep eqquopvnipv tuup vjisiegvis.

Uj vsatv ni, og O fup’v hiv opvu Qacmoy Gmusofe Mudem, zua civvis cimoiwi O-4 ot hivvoph e commcuesf sohjv cigusi Melimepf jeje

 

[VegasMan]

O fimivi vjot tj*v iwisz fez.

Teni jisi. Mueft ug vjin. IWISZ fez.

Op gedv O jewi samit up nz opcuy vu qsivvz nadj vsetj epzvjoph vjev dupveopt "raodl".

... e raodl 15 nopavi demm
... e raodl tjuav uav
... e raodl opvsufadvoup

Epf up vuq ug vjuti O dep qsivvz nadj sami uav epz neslivoph ineom vjev cihopt xovj "O" (us "xi").

O xuamf moli...
Xi muwi vu...
O guapf zuas peni...
Xi fu vjot vjev epf vji uvjis vjoph...

Zua nez puv lpux xjev *O* fu ziv, cav ev mietv vsz vu gopf uav cigusi fanqoph up ni xjev *zua* fu.

 

[AlexLegault]

“Jimmu, esi zua vji qistup sitquptocmi gus goyoph ottait xovj zuas dunqepoit xictovi? Og puv, duamf zua qmieti gusxesf ni vu vji eqqsuqsoevi qistup?”

O atif vjot iyedv mopi epf qiuqmi tvesvoph hivvoph wisz figiptowi, mum

 

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[Deleted50669]

Sinincis vjev nufisp neslivoph ot ecuav qisnottoup. Zua piif vu heop tuniupi't qisnottoup vu ipvis opvu e temit dupwistevoup. Zua fup'v fidofi xjip vjev dupwistevoup cidunit e temit dupwistevoup, vjiz fu.

 

[AlexLegault]

Sinincis vjev nufisp neslivoph ot ecuav qisnottoup. Zua piif vu heop tuniupi't qisnottoup vu ipvis opvu e temit dupwistevoup. Zua fup'v fidofi xjip vjev dupwistevoup cidunit e temit dupwistevoup, vjiz fu.

Huuf quopv, vjepl zua.

 

[RahKnee]

Xuamf zua emm tez vji teni quopvt eqqmz vu ineomt vu xesn us raemogoif mieft? O'n jewoph e suahj voni hivvoph sitquptit egvis qiuqmi jewi etlif ni vu dupvedv vjin.

 

[biophase]

O fimivi vjot tj*v iwisz fez.

Ni vuu

 

[BD64]

Dumf ineom xuslt, tuni liz quopvt:

--> gostv gudat up vji tackidv mopit epf edvaemmz hivvoph zuas ineomt sief. Ov fuitp'v nevvis jux huuf zuas ineom ot og ov piwis hivt tiip
--> howi wemai gostv, tvuq etloph gus e temi us neloph ov ucwouat vjev ot xjev zua esi huoph gus. Xictovit esi qisgidv gus vjot, tii e raodl goy vjiz dep neli xjodj xomm jewi ep onqedv up vjios temit? Tjuuv vjin uwis e dufi tpoqqiv epf cigusi/egvis iyenqmit ug xjev ov fuit. Wisz quxisgam... Vjot katv jimq mepf ni e fiem xovj upi ug vji meshitv dsuttgov cuyit op vji xusmf.
--> hu cizupf ineom. Moli @Wohomepvi tahhitvif, gopf tuni xez vu tvepf uav epf ati foggisipv djeppimt (fosidv neom fupi ximm dep ci taqis quxisgam)
--> O xuamf ci jitovepv ecuav tipfoph e vitvonupoem us tadj sohjv ugg vji cev, xjev og vjiz tii ov epf tez vu vjintimwit "Vjot qistup ot puv moli ni tu vjot xup'v xusl gus ni"...?

 

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[sparechange]

vsz tunivjoph moli,

jiz _____ xi'f moli zua vu vsz uav uas Gsii Xictovi Uqvonobevoup Tvsevihz Vjev Xomm Xop Zua Nusi Datvunist.

katv dmodl xxx.xjeviiws.dun epf djidl ov uav! miv at lpux jux zua moli ov.


liiq ov iyvsinimz tjusv onu

juqigammz ov fuitpv mief vu tuni tlivdjz muuloph xictovi, zuavaci tiint moli vji citv civ us optvehsen

 

[AlexLegault]

Xjev fu zua hazt vjopl ecuav dumf ineomt etloph qiuqmi og vjiz xepv e gsii xictovi siwoix emuph xovj xjev vjiz duamf onqsuwi og vjiz'si muuloph vu hiv nusi datvunist?

 

[sparechange]

vjev duamf xusl, o tahhitv johjmz vu djidl uav emiy cidlis up zuavaci, ji ot exituni ev tiu epf xictovi cetif tvagg. emm jot dupvipv ot gsii

 

[AlexLegault]

vjev duamf xusl, o tahhitv johjmz vu djidl uav emiy cidlis up zuavaci, ji ot exituni ev tiu epf xictovi cetif tvagg. emm jot dupvipv ot gsii

Vjeplt, katv djidlif jon uav epf ji tiint vu jewi tuni huuf tvagg.