StrikingViper69
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Hey Fastlane Forumers,
I was hoping that someone with a bit of online copywriting / sales experience could help me out with this.
I have a warm audience opting in to my email list, receiving a couple of free songs, and then receiving an offer to buy a CD and T Shirt. The sales page is here:
www.samrussell.co.uk
Only about 1% of the warm audience are buying. I get great feedback from people who receive the free songs, but getting people to take the step from enjoying the music to buying it is proving tricky.
I've tried to include a story, previews, social proof and a guarantee on the sales page.
Is there anything you think I've missed that I should be including, or that I could add to the page to improve it? Or is there something on the page that looks confusing?
Any help will be swiftly implemented!
Sam
(after reading the page I realise there are no photos of me.. so I should probably add that on).
I was hoping that someone with a bit of online copywriting / sales experience could help me out with this.
I have a warm audience opting in to my email list, receiving a couple of free songs, and then receiving an offer to buy a CD and T Shirt. The sales page is here:
Checkout
Today: Get Your Copy of the Album “Impetuous Desire” and The T Shirt! Today, you can get the album Impetuous Desire, and a great T Shirt – read on to find out how A great T Shirt,…
Only about 1% of the warm audience are buying. I get great feedback from people who receive the free songs, but getting people to take the step from enjoying the music to buying it is proving tricky.
I've tried to include a story, previews, social proof and a guarantee on the sales page.
Is there anything you think I've missed that I should be including, or that I could add to the page to improve it? Or is there something on the page that looks confusing?
Any help will be swiftly implemented!
Sam
(after reading the page I realise there are no photos of me.. so I should probably add that on).
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