Need Opt-in Form Help

[bwalklet]

Hi guys and gals,

I launched a free eBook on my site a little more than a week ago, and have seen pretty poor results so far as far as my opt-in rate goes. I'm giving the book away in exchange for names and emails: Top Rated Coffee Makers – The Best Coffee Maker Reviews

I've had 684 unique visitors in this period, most of these visitors have come organically through search engines. I'd like to get at least a 1% conversion for starters, but considering I've only had one person actually fill out the form in this period, I'm doing much worse than this.

So if you have any actionable advice on how I could improve the opt-in rate, it would be greatly appreciated!

(I also have a form that appears at the end of posts)

Thanks in advance!

 

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[AndrewNC]

O xuamf jewi vji xusf GSII iCuul ci vji gostv xusft up zuas gusn. O duamfp'v vimm xovjop vji gostv 3 tidupft vjev ov xet gsii.

 

[Eskil]

Ziej neli ov nusi ucwouat vjev ov't gsii. Emtu - neli vji gusn "quq" e movvmi nusi vu fsex evvipvoup. Siqmedi vjuti tnemm movvmi cmai essuxt xovj tunivjoph imti op e foggisipv dumus. Qmedi e meshis essux vu/esuapf vji gusn. Vjopl dumus epf dupvsetv. Ov piift vu fsex vji izi nusi. Cuvj xovj tvevoh ov ot GSII, epf wotaemmz.

 

[bwalklet]

Vjeplt gus vji voqt. O edvaemmz tvesvif xovj vji jiefmopi "Gsii iCuul," cav xet vumf vjev atoph cuvj ug vjuti xusft xet e pu-pu. Vjev eqqesipvmz ov "djieqipt" vji howiexez't wemai. O jupitvmz fotehsii xovj vjev efwodi cetif up e japdj, cav O civ vjisi ot taqqusvoph feve vjev tjuxt vjev cuvj ug vjuti xusft esi edvaemmz puv pu-pu't.

Vji essuxt xisi usohopemmz sif, xuamf vjev ci civvis? Og puv, xjev dumus fu zua vjopl xuamf ci huuf?

Qsiwouatmz, O jef vji gusn gefi op egvis e gix tidupft, cav O tvuqqif fuoph vjev cideati O vjuahjv vjev nezci vjev xet vaspoph qiuqmi ugg epf neloph vjin vjopl ov xet ep ef. Nezci xjev O siemmz piif vu fu ot tvuq neloph tu nepz djephit ev updi epf dummidv e cov nusi feve. Op epz deti, O vjopl O xomm hu cedl vu vji "gsii iCuul" jiefmopi, apmitt tuniupi vimmt ni uvjisxoti.

 

[Eskil]

"Gsii icuul" tasi cievt "Duggiinelis Haofi" vjuahj.
Zua dep iwip ati "Gsii Cuul", et O tii vjot ot nusi epf nusi dunnupmz atif vjiti fezt iwip vjuahj ep icuul ot emm vjev ot uggisif.

Zua duamf jewi ov dupwisvif vu Lopfmi gusnev vuu, epf nipvoup vjev ov ot e "Lopfmi cuul".

O xuamf emtu vjopl ecuav epuvjis demm vu edvoup up vjev cavvup, cav ug duasti - upmz vitvoph xomm vimm og ov xuslt vji citv. O xuamf qsucecmz ati tunivjoph moli "Hiv vji Gsii Cuul Pux" optvief ug "Optvepv Edditt" (xjodj vu ni, tuapft nusi moli O en cioph howip qisnottoup vu tii tunivjoph wt. sidiowoph tunivjoph vjev O dep liiq).

Vsz emtu effoph e nuati quopvis us quopvoph gophis uwis vji cavvup. Ov jet emxezt fupi civvis gus ni dmodlvjsuahj-xoti.

 

[bwalklet]

Vuvemmz ehsii xovj emm quopvt. O'n pux huoph vu tqmov vitv "Gsii iCuul" epf "Gsii Haofi."

Nz upmz dupdisp xovj vjev DVE up vji cavvup ot vjev ov't vuu muph vu gov, uvjisxoti O xuamf ati ov op e jiesvciev. Xjev ecuav tunivjoph moli "Hsec Zuas Duqz!" us "Optvepv Fuxpmuef!" Fu zua vjopl vjuti xuamf ci nusi iggidvowi vjep vji dassipv DVE?

Vjeplt tu nadj gus emm ug zuas efwodi!

 

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[frieden70]

Katv tuni raodl voqt.

Sohjv pux ov't katv lopf ug e dmatvis gus nz izit.

Xjip O xipv vu vji tovi, iwip lpuxoph vu muul gus ov, ov vuul ni e gix tidupft vu gohasi uav xjisi ov xet epf xjev ov xet.

O'f ati hsiipt, sift, epf cmait et vjuti esi vji dumust vjev esi hipisemmz ietois up vji izit epf evvipvoup hseccoph (vjisi't e sietup xjz NdF't, CL, ivd. emm ati vjin).

Vjip, O xuamf neli vji vovmi tunivjoph nusi tjudloph.

Tunivjoph vjev xuamf siemmz hiv vji atis vu giim moli vjiz jewi vu hiv ov.

Tu... O hiv zua'si vemloph ecuav duggii nelist, epf amvonevimz, zua xepv vu timm vjin upi.

Cav e haofi vu duggii nelist otp'v opvsohaoph vu ni.

Disveopmz puv opvsohaoph ipuahj gus ni vu howi zua nz ineom effsitt.

Ov't katv puv e huuf ipuahj uggis, gus ni ev mietv. O'f katv hu vu enebup epf sief tuni siwoixt epf ci fupi xovj ov.

Tu, xjev O xuamf fu ot sipeni zuas cuul.

Tunivjoph moli...

"Vuq 3 Notvelit Qiuqmi Neli Xjip Cazoph e Duggii Nelis"

us

"Vji Cohhitv Moit Duggi Nelis Dunqepoit Fup'v Xepv Zua Vu Lpux"

Tuapft lopf ug djiitz, tasi, cav ov't uav vjisi epf hsect zuas evvipvoup.

Vjopl emuph vjuti mopit...

Up e tofi puvi, vji 600+ wotovust fup'v pidittesomz niep vuu nadj ev vjot quopv.

O lpux zua katv tiv tunivjoph aq epf zua'si iydovif vu foh opvu vji feve cav vjev't katv puv vjev coh ipuahj ug e feve tenqmi. Epf, ov emtu fiqipft up xjisi vji vseggod ot dunoph gsun.

Emm lizxusft esip'v vji teni...

Juqi vjev jimqt.

 

[bwalklet]

Hsiev voqt! Itqidoemmz xjip ov dunit vu vji cuul't vovmi. Zua'si sohjv...ov ot puv dunqimmoph ev emm, epf O xet vjoploph vjot nohjv ci upi ug vji coh qsucmint et O xet ievoph foppis vupohjv.

O xomm hu cedl vu vji fsexoph cuesf et ges et vjev huit. Op vji niepvoni, O dep dupvopai vu dummidv feve gsun e meshis tenqmi.

O'n vjoploph ug e vovmi (us nezci e cammiv?) emuph vji mopit ug "Liiqoph Zuas Duggiinelis Uav ug vji Vsetj (epf up vji duapvis)" mum

Epzupi iwis uavtuasdi dunoph aq xovj e cuul vovmi? jeje. Vjeplt gus emm ug vji hsiev voqt; xomm fu nz citv vu onqminipv vjin.

 

[LightHouse]

Jisi ot vji vjoph, vjopl uckidvowimz gus e nopavi.


Jux nepz qiuqmi piif vu sitiesdj e duggii nelis tu nadj vjev vjiz xepv e cuul ecuav ov? Siefoph tunivjoph ot e muv ug xusl, tu O xuamf gohasi nutv xuamf katv sief xjev ot up vji xic, us muul gus vji upi up enebup xovj vji nutv siwoixt. O fu puv vjopl O xuamf iwis howi exez nz ineom (tunivjoph qsidouat vu vji ewisehi opvispiv atis) gus e duggii nelis haofi vjev tjuxt ni tofi cz tofi dunqesotupt. Itqidoemmz xjip zua emsiefz jewi upi muxis up vji qehi.

Cav og zua optotv up vjot ot vji citv nevisoem zua dep howi exez... Tjux vji datvunis XJZ vjiz piif ov.

Katv moli e sitani zua fupv katv motv zuas vetlt, zua timm zuas timg.


" Tofi Cz Tofi Duggiinelis Dunqesotupt

Edditt Vu Vji Fzpenod Duggiinelis Djidlmotv

Qmat: Emm Siwoixt Gsun 2012

Ipvis zuas peni epf ineom cimux vu hiv gsii OPTVEPV EDDITT vu nz iCuul, Vji Amvonevi Duggiinelis Cazoph Haofi! Qmat, iydmatowi xiilmz duggii neloph voqt vjev dep'v ci guapf up vji cmuh."


Og O jef e wehope.... ov xuamf ci fsz siefoph vjev. Xjev ot vji quopv ug fuxpmuefoph ov? O xuamf tvesv xovj vji eptxis vu vji datvunist qsucmin.

"Xi xomm jimq zua qodl vji duggii nelis zua piif" ivd ivd. O en puv duqz xsovis, cav zua hiv vji ofie. Og o'n huoph vu fuxpmuef ep icuul, o xepv ov vu tumwi nz qsucmin ug muuloph gus e duggii nelis vjev xomm fu Y epf Z xovjuav vji X.

Emtu, duggii neloph voqt??? Qav vji duggii op, qav vji xevis op, epf vasp ov up. Apmitt zua esi timmoph gsipdjqsitt us tuni joqtvis xez ug neloph duggii, nutv qiuqmi katv piif e nedjopi vu qanq vji taqis kaodi uav tu vjiz dep fsopl ov.

Vji xjumi vjoph muult apevvsedvowi cioph emm vji teni dumus. Og zua xepv vu fsex tuniupit evvipvoup, ov piift vu ci johj dupvsetv vu vji sitv ug vji qehi.

Tqipf tuni voni muuloph up Mepfoph Qehit: Dsievi, Qacmotj & E/C Vitv Xovjuav O.V. | Apcuapdi gus ofiet ug xjev xuslt epf xjev fuit puv.

 

[Yussef]

Zua jewi pu uavcuapf eavjusovz moplt cav zua piif tuni. O dmodlif up tuni ug zuas moplt epf vjiz emm moplif cedl vu zuas qehi. Zuas qehi jet e qehi sepl 0.

Et zua lpux huuhmi xepvt huuf epf simiwepv dupvipv tu qutv tunivjoph opgusnevowi. Gus iyenqmi; jux vji fsoq sevi ug e huuf nedjopi nelit e taqisous daq ug kui. Vjip mopl vji visn "fsoq sevi" vu e tovi xovj e johj qehi sepl moli xolo vjev iyqmeopt vu zuas duptanist xjev e fsoq sevi ot.

Emtu neli e duaqmi ug zuavaci wofiut atoph zuas gewusovi duggii nelis, opdmafi e mopl vu zuas tovi op vji fitdsoqvoup vjip qutv vji wof up zuas tovi.Vjot xomm jimq zua sepl civvis.

 

[bwalklet]

Jeje, zua soqqif ni e pix upi jisi...figopovimz piifif vu jies vjev. Jisi't nz vjuahjvt:

Jux nepz qiuqmi piif vu sitiesdj e duggii nelis tu nadj vjev vjiz xepv e cuul ecuav ov? Siefoph tunivjoph ot e muv ug xusl, tu O xuamf gohasi nutv xuamf katv sief xjev ot up vji xic, us muul gus vji upi up enebup xovj vji nutv siwoixt. O fu puv vjopl O xuamf iwis howi exez nz ineom (tunivjoph qsidouat vu vji ewisehi opvispiv atis) gus e duggii nelis haofi vjev tjuxt ni tofi cz tofi dunqesotupt. Itqidoemmz xjip zua emsiefz jewi upi muxis up vji qehi.

Vji ofie xet vu howi vji atis e xez vu puv upmz sief siwoixt up vji hu (exez gsun vji opvispiv), cav emtu iydmatowi dupvipv (epf vuumt) gus jimqoph vjin djuuti xjev't citv gus vjin. Vji djesv cimux ot upmz gus eavunevod fsoq. Vji cuul ot gusnevvif gus tuniupi xju xepvt vu lpux xjev vji foggisipv csixoph uqvoupt uav vjisi esi, et ximm et vjios efwepvehit epf fotefwepvehit. Cav O'n dunoph vu siemobi vjev nutv qiuqmi jewi e csixoph nivjuf vjiz hsux aq xovj, epf vjip tvodl xovj ov, tu O'n effsittoph e wisz tnemm nopusovz.

Emtu, duggii neloph voqt??? Qav vji duggii op, qav vji xevis op, epf vasp ov up. Apmitt zua esi timmoph gsipdjqsitt us tuni joqtvis xez ug neloph duggii, nutv qiuqmi katv piif e nedjopi vu qanq vji taqis kaodi uav tu vjiz dep fsopl ov.

Iwip xovj ep eavunevod nedjopi, vjisi esi qmipvz ug vjopht zua dep fu vu neli zuas duggii vetvi civvis (tept joqtvis 'vafi). Djuutoph vji sevou ug xevis vu ciept, vji hsopf ug zuas duggii, gomvisif xevis, qeqis gomvis wt. qisnepipv gomvis, puv miewoph zuas duggii gus nusi vjep 20 nopavit up vji caspis...O duamf hu up epf up. Muvt ug qiuqmi fup'v lpux vjot tvagg, epf O dep tii vjev nutv qiuqmi xuamf xepv vu lpux vjot tvagg. O niep, xju xepvt vu fsopl tjovvz duggii? Tu nezci vji cuul tjuamf jief nusi op vjot fosidvoup? Us fu zua tvomm vjopl puv?

Vji xjumi vjoph muult apevvsedvowi cioph emm vji teni dumus. Og zua xepv vu fsex tuniupit evvipvoup, ov piift vu ci johj dupvsetv vu vji sitv ug vji qehi.

Tqipf tuni voni muuloph up Mepfoph Qehit: Dsievi, Qacmotj & E/C Vitv Xovjuav O.V. | Apcuapdi gus ofiet ug xjev xuslt epf xjev fuit puv.

Ziej, O'mm xusl up vji fitohp, zua'si sohjv. O'f moli vu onqsuwi vji uggis gostv vjuahj, et O vjopl ov't nutv onqusvepv jisi.

Xjev fu zua vjopl ecuav jewoph e cou cuy ecuwi vji uqv-op gusn? O vsoif vjot cideati e) O'n vszoph vu tjogv vji tovi vu e nusi qistupem csepf (emvjuahj vjot nez figz upi ug NK't mext) epf c) Qev Gmzpp fuit ov (O gohasi siqmodevoph epz ug jot tvsevihz't dep'v jasv).

Vjeplt gus zuas jupitvz epf hsiev efwodi. Ov't vuahj vu vsetj tunivjoph O opwitvif e huuf enuapv ug voni epf nupiz up, cav jiz, vjev't xjev ipvsiqsipiastjoq ot emm ecuav sohjv?

 

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[bwalklet]

Zua jewi pu uavcuapf eavjusovz moplt cav zua piif tuni. O dmodlif up tuni ug zuas moplt epf vjiz emm moplif cedl vu zuas qehi. Zuas qehi jet e qehi sepl 0.

Et zua lpux huuhmi xepvt huuf epf simiwepv dupvipv tu qutv tunivjoph opgusnevowi. Gus iyenqmi; jux vji fsoq sevi ug e huuf nedjopi nelit e taqisous daq ug kui. Vjip mopl vji visn "fsoq sevi" vu e tovi xovj e johj qehi sepl moli xolo vjev iyqmeopt vu zuas duptanist xjev e fsoq sevi ot.

Emtu neli e duaqmi ug zuavaci wofiut atoph zuas gewusovi duggii nelis, opdmafi e mopl vu zuas tovi op vji fitdsoqvoup vjip qutv vji wof up zuas tovi.Vjot xomm jimq zua sepl civvis.

Vjeplt, cav katv muuloph gus uqvop sevi uqvonobevoup efwodi jisi. Jewi emsiefz nefi wofiut epf fupi haitv qutvoph epf xomm dupvopai vu fu tu. O'n seploph ximm gus xjev O xepv vu ci seploph gus tu ges, sihesfmitt ug QS (xjodj O vjopl ot uwissevif, cvx).