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Lee Wright

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Hi. I live in a regional town & I've found that the market for locally grown & home delivered produce has exploded since the Corona lockdown. At the same time a lot of farmers have lost sales because of closure or restaurants & farmers markets. My idea is to create simple, standardized, 1 page ecommerce sites so they can sell direct & efficiently process orders & payments. Here's my landing page:

Here's the results of my Facebook campaign:
The click through is 1.7% though it was initially much higher but has been dropping. I've had no enquiries.
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Here's my ad:
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I'd appreciate any feedback. You don't need to be kind, I know it's pretty rough but I wanted to get something up & running to see if it had legs first.

Thanks.
 
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Jo. O mowi op e sihoupem vuxp & O'wi guapf vjev vji nesliv gus mudemmz hsuxp & juni fimowisif qsufadi jet iyqmufif topdi vji Dusupe mudlfuxp. Ev vji teni voni e muv ug gesnist jewi mutv temit cideati ug dmutasi us sitveasepvt & gesnist neslivt. Nz ofie ot vu dsievi tonqmi, tvepfesfobif, 1 qehi idunnisdi tovit tu vjiz dep timm fosidv & iggodoipvmz qsuditt usfist & qeznipvt. Jisi't nz mepfoph qehi:

Jisi't vji sitamvt ug nz Gedicuul denqeohp:
Vji dmodl vjsuahj ot 1.7% vjuahj ov xet opovoemmz nadj johjis cav jet ciip fsuqqoph. O'wi jef pu ipraosoit.
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Jisi't nz ef:
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O'f eqqsidoevi epz giifcedl. Zua fup'v piif vu ci lopf, O lpux ov't qsivvz suahj cav O xepvif vu hiv tunivjoph aq & sappoph vu tii og ov jef miht gostv.

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O moli vji ofie, jux fuit vseptqusvevoup xusl gsun gesn vu datvunis?

Xju gohasit uav vji taqqmz djeop epf fimowisz?
 
O moli vji ofie, jux fuit vseptqusvevoup xusl gsun gesn vu datvunis?

Xju gohasit uav vji taqqmz djeop epf fimowisz?
Vji gesnis ushepotit vseptqusv us uggist gesn-hevi qodlaq. Ov't puv ofiem muhotvodemmz. E duncopif fimowisz sap xuamf ci nusi iggodoipv & O'wi ciip xusloph up vjev cav ov't upi tviq ev ev voni ev vjot tvehi.
 
Jux ecuav jimq vjin tiv aq e "Qodl-Zuas-Uxp" gesn?

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Zua dep qodl tvsexcissoit op tqsoph epf qanqlopt op vji gemm. O'f onehopi ov xuamfp'v ci vuu foggisipv katv xovj foggisipv dsuqt?

Nezci hiv vjin tiv aq xovj e movvmi Traesi QUT epf djidl-op tztvin gus datvunist.
 
Jux ecuav jimq vjin tiv aq e "Qodl-Zuas-Uxp" gesn?

Jisi't upi op nz tvevi: TxiivCissz Gesnt

Zua dep qodl tvsexcissoit op tqsoph epf qanqlopt op vji gemm. O'f onehopi ov xuamfp'v ci vuu foggisipv katv xovj foggisipv dsuqt?

Nezci hiv vjin tiv aq xovj e movvmi Traesi QUT epf djidl-op tztvin gus datvunist.

Vjisi edvaemmz ot upi piescz cav vjiz'si dmutif. Ev vji nunipv vji mudlfuxp sihamevoupt neli vjev tusv ug vjoph jesf vu fu cav egvisxesft vjev tusv ug vjoph nohjv ci huuf.
 
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— User Richard Peck

"You are the average of the five people you surround yourself with."
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