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Hey guys and gals,

I just created my first profile sales video. It's a super quick introduction to me and my services and how it benefits the user.

One small thing that I already know is wrong is the spelling of the word 'guaranteed', eh I'll use spell check on the slides next time. Other than that, comments? Critiques? General words of approval or disapproval?

Point of the video:

It'll sit on my LinkedIn profile page as a welcome video.

Length:

Short, coming in at 1:15

Link:

Code:
 [URL="http://youtu.be/aAuSGkEDX0Y"]linked_in_video.mp4 - YouTube[/URL]
Technical info for the geeks here who are curious:
  • Created using javascript and CSS (impress.js)
  • Recorded in Linux using ffmpeg
  • 1st rending pass in Linux using Avidemux (quickly cropping and giving it a smaller file size)
  • Final rendering in Windows virtual machine using Camtasia Studio to remove audio noise and adding music
  • Audio recorded with a condenser microphone + stand + pop filter + vibration filter thingy
Thanks,
--PK
 
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