Help critique my new webisodes!

[XOthermic]

Hello,

I'm putting these webisode videos together for work, so that we can drive traffic to our webpage. The videos would focus on nutrition concepts that go beyond "eat this, not that". However, I need to develop more of a tv character/personality to be successful. Any ideas?

Any critiques on speaking, word flow, clarity, ect would also be helpful.

Also, I realize that I seem a little shaky and nervous however i have only made a few videos (all shot in one take and some just minor editing) and I'll soon have my full confidence on camera!

Ideally i want to come off

passionate
knowledgeable
Zaney
funny
popular culture buff
how can i do this?


If anyone has some nutrition topics that think are interesting let me know. As I have studied nutrition for a while and what i think is interesting may differ from the general public.

Thanks ahead of time guys!!

VIDEO Syntec Weekly Digest #2 - Tips on Reading a Nutrition Facts Panel - YouTube


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