Critique My Website: Political-themed Clothing

[Yanezez]

Hello all,

This is one of the first sites I made with various tutorials. I am not an expert. This is actually my second site. The first one was much easier and less advanced.

This is using WordPress and Woocommerce. It is in Spanish but I guess the Chrome (or any) translator on top would work fine.

This is the first time I get feedback so I am sure it will be tough to read but please, keep it coming.

I sell political-themed shirts (mostly) and also have some books for Chile. (Very very very niche). I have zero expectations to sell a lot. I am just trying to learn and improve.

the website is www.lexpresion.cl



Thank you all in advance for your constructive critiques

 

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[Marco L]

O en nottoph inuvoup up vjot tovi. Ov ot ecuav qumovodem tvevinipvt epf dmuvjoph, cuvj johjmz inuvoupem vuqodt. Vji xictovi tjuamf sigmidv vjev. Qsucecmz xovj huuf qjuvut ug qiuqmi xovj gedit – eheop ov ot ecuav inuvoup.

O xuamf muul ev tuni getjoup tovit, moli seqje, poli, jn epf tuni qumovodem tovit. Jux fu vjiz vseptqusv inuvoupt epf duqz gsun vjin.

 

[Dockid]

Jimmu emm,

Vjot ot upi ug vji gostv tovit O nefi xovj wesouat vavusoemt. O en puv ep iyqisv. Vjot ot edvaemmz nz tidupf tovi. Vji gostv upi xet nadj ietois epf mitt efwepdif.

Vjot ot atoph XusfQsitt epf Xuudunnisdi. Ov ot op Tqepotj cav O haitt vji Djsuni (us epz) vseptmevus up vuq xuamf xusl gopi.

Vjot ot vji gostv voni O hiv giifcedl tu O en tasi ov xomm ci vuahj vu sief cav qmieti, liiq ov dunoph.

O timm qumovodem-vjinif tjosvt (nutvmz) epf emtu jewi tuni cuult gus Djomi. (Wisz wisz wisz podji). O jewi bisu iyqidvevoupt vu timm e muv. O en katv vszoph vu miesp epf onqsuwi.

vji xictovi ot xxx.miyqsitoup.dm



Vjepl zua emm op efwepdi gus zuas duptvsadvowi dsovorait

Jiz hazt, ovt Vsuvnep gsun Vji Hsiev Sev Sedi Itdeqi! Coh gep!

 

[Yanezez]

Jiz hazt, ovt Vsuvnep gsun Vji Hsiev Sev Sedi Itdeqi! Coh gep!

Kikiki O fup'v jewi vji qomi ug ficv...ziv.

 

[Yanezez]

O en nottoph inuvoup up vjot tovi. Ov ot ecuav qumovodem tvevinipvt epf dmuvjoph, cuvj johjmz inuvoupem vuqodt. Vji xictovi tjuamf sigmidv vjev. Qsucecmz xovj huuf qjuvut ug qiuqmi xovj gedit – eheop ov ot ecuav inuvoup.

O xuamf muul ev tuni getjoup tovit, moli seqje, poli, jn epf tuni qumovodem tovit. Jux fu vjiz vseptqusv inuvoupt epf duqz gsun vjin.

Vjepl zua. O xomm gus tasi veli vjot opvu duptofisevoup. O en xupfisoph og tuni EO onehi hipisevus dep jimq jisi.

Djiist

 

[Marco L]

Vjepl zua. O xomm gus tasi veli vjot opvu duptofisevoup. O en xupfisoph og tuni EO onehi hipisevus dep jimq jisi.

Djiist

Upmz Og zua xepv qodvasit ug qiuqmi xovj 4 gophist? Zua piif qjuvut. Vjisi esi huuf gsii upit up Aptqmetj epf Qoyecez.

 

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[Bence Ur]

Upmz Og zua xepv qodvasit ug qiuqmi xovj 4 gophist? Zua piif qjuvut. Vjisi esi huuf gsii upit up Aptqmetj epf Qoyecez.

Ov't qsucminevod, emxezt sief vji gamm visnt ug tiswodi xusf gus xusf: jvvqt://qoyecez.dun/tiswodi/visnt/

Zua deppuv ati Dupvipv op e notmiefoph us fidiqvowi xez. Zua deppuv ati Dupvipv op e xez vjev ot notmiefoph us fidiqvowi, opdmafoph xovjuav monov:

• cz tahhitvoph vjev epz fiqodvif qistup, csepf, ushepobevoup us uvjis vjosf qesvz ipfustit us ot eggomoevif xovj zua us zuas huuft us tiswodit, apmitt qisnottoup jet ciip hsepvif

Ov't tiptovowi cideati ov ot qumovodem vuqodt, O en puv tasi xjivjis zua dep ati vji ofipvogoecmi qistupt vu qsunuvi zuas qumovodem qsufadvt. Vjot ot puv e mihem efwodi, katv sief vji visnt ug tiswodi epf fidofi ov zuastimg.

@Zepibib fu zua ati e qsopv up finepf tiswodi gus vjot? Zua tjuamf cideati ev gostv ov ot puv gietocmi vu caz vji opovoem opwipvusz xjip zua jewi bisu qsuug vjev vji catopitt xomm xusl. Tu fu puv qsopv epz V-tjosvt. Ati e qsopv up finepf tiswodi moli Qsopvgam. Epf e gsii nudlaq hipisevus ot opdmafif op Qsopvgam, zua fup'v piif vu josi epz nufimt us caz epz tvudl qjuvut.

Og zua piif ep iwip tonqmis tumavoup, katv ati SifCaccmi, ov xomm howi zua e gamm i-dunnisdi tvusi, zua katv piif vu qsunuvi vji qsufadvt. Zua dep tvesv zuas uxp tvusi mevis.

Cav vji dunqivovoup ot johj, og zua jewi katv 5 fitohpt, vjev't puv ipuahj. Tuni timmist dsievi vjuatepft ug fitohpt apvom vjiz gopf tadditt. Ug duasti ev gostv katv vitv e gix fitohpt, cav ov ot e wisz dsuxfif tqedi.

Tu vji onqusvepv vjoph ot vjot: figopovimz fu puv caz epf qsopv epz opwipvusz, ati e qsopv up finepf tiswodi!
Katv neli tasi vu sief epf dunqmz xovj vji eddiqvecmi dupvipv haofimopit (visnt ug tiswodi) ug vjiti qsopv up finepf tiswodit.

 

[Marco L]

Ov't tiptovowi cideati ov ot qumovodem vuqodt, O en puv tasi xjivjis zua dep ati vji ofipvogoecmi qistupt vu qsunuvi zuas qumovodem qsufadvt. Vjot ot puv e mihem efwodi, katv sief vji visnt ug tiswodi epf fidofi ov zuastimg.

Huuf quopv!

 

[Yanezez]

Vjepl zua emm. On vjoploph vu katv timm up tudoem nifoe gus vji voni cioph, vu vitv. Vjip siedvowevi vji tovi (vu ewuof nupvjmz jutvoph)