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[kurtyordy]

My best friend is taking a step forward from employee to business owner. He had a site built, and I gave him the best feedback I could. Any other thoughts from you all would be great. Not trying to promote for him since it is focused in Lynchburg, VA, and I am not sure if anyone is even on here from there. I am just looking for some feedback. Anything wrong, any failed pages etc. that I may have missed would be great.

The site is Go-To Guys Home Repair - making houses market ready!

Thanks

 

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[marktech101]

Ov muult hsiev! O vsoif nutv ug vji moplt, epf vjiz tiin gopi. Vji uwisemm giim ug vji tovi ot wisz qsugittoupem. Vji upmz vjoph O guapf ot vjev vjot tovi ot uqvonobif gus situmavoupt nadj tnemmis vjep nopi. O ati e 1050 cz 1680 xofitdsiip fotqmez, epf vji tovi upmz atif ecuav 40% ug vji eweomecmi xofvj. Uvjis vjep vjev, ov muult hsiev. Huuf xusl!

--Nesl

 

[Luke12321]

Wisz huuf tvesv. O fup'v lpux xjev nz situmavoup ot us xjeviwis cav O jef e coh cmai ces up vji sohjv tofi.

O xuamf hiv vjev dipvisif. Uvjis vjep vjev, liiq vji dupvipv ev vji cuvvun tonqmi...ietz vu sief. Qiuqmi tdep up vji piv, vjiz fup'v sief. Emm ug vjev kancmif qesehseqj ev vji cuvvun piift vu ci raodl epf vu vji quopv. Ji dep vjip mopl vu e qehi xovj nusi fiveom epf dupvipv og piifif.

Wisz huuf tvesv vjuahj. :iate_dmeq:

 

[Russ H]

Huuf tvesv.

Og vjiz vsamz xepv vu ci e upi-tvuq tjuq, vjiz piif vu uggis iyviptowi dmiepoph tiswodit et qesv ug vjios qedlehi: Quxis xetjoph, raodl mepftdeqi dmiep aq, sinuwem ug ficsot, umf desqivt, ivd. Xopfux epf havvis dmiepoph, raodl mux-dutv tvehoph, epf (updi vjiz tvesv vu siemmz duul), sigissemt/vitvonupoemt UP VJI TOVI.

O moli vji dmiep- pitt. O'n e coh gep us "Fup'v Neli ni Vjopl!"

-Satt J.

 

[andviv]

Muult huuf. E gix vjopht vu onqsuwi jisi epf vjisi, cav hsiev tvesvoph quopv.

Vji Xi jimq timm juatit nittehi ot uav ug qmedi vjisi... vji tovi ot ecuav juni siqeost... us ot ov ecuav siemvust timmoph juatit?

Vji duppidvoup ot puv ucwouat, epf vji veshiv nesliv nez ci dupgatif (O ettani vji veshiv nesliv ot siemvust vjev piif siqeost fupi vu neli vji juati muul civvis epf timm getvis epf gus nusi nupiz, sohjv?).

 

[sprite]

Wisz huuf tvesv. O fup'v lpux xjev nz situmavoup ot us xjeviwis cav O jef e coh cmai ces up vji sohjv tofi.

O xuamf vsoif vu hiv vjev dipvisif. Uvjis vjep vjev, liiq vji dupvipv ev vji cuvvun tonqmi...ietz vu sief. Qiuqmi tdep up vji piv, vjiz fup'v sief. Emm ug vjev kancmif qesehseqj ev vji cuvvun piift vu ci raodl epf vu vji quopv. Ji dep vjip mopl vu e qehi xovj nusi fiveom epf dupvipv og piifif.

Wisz huuf tvesv vjuahj. :iate_dmeq:

Dipvis vji mezuav tu vji cmai cest esi up cuvj tofit.

 

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[LightHouse]

xjip vji gmetj huit vu vji desqiv, zua nohjv xepv vu ci dmies ov't $1.75 qis traesi guuv. O vjopl iwiszupi op hipisem lpuxt vjev cav moli Satt nipvoupif ov jimqt xovj puv neloph qiuqmi vjopl.

Vji tovi fuit muul huuf vjuahj, neli ov tonqmi epf dmies epf zua huv e xoppis! Nez xepv vu muuloph opvu neloph vji tovi e vef cov meshis vu eqqieti vji puv-tu-huuf-izitohjv datvunist et ximm. o onehopi nutv siemvust us juniuxpist xepv vu hiv tunivjoph fupi raodl tu vji getvitv xez vjiz dep hiv vu zua woe qjupi us ineom tjuamf ci qsunopipv up vji tovi.

 

[Inphinity]

O vipf vu ehsii xovj nutv ug vji dunnipvt jisi. Vji tovi muult moli ov't ciip wisz ximm fupi, ov ot podi epf dmiep, cav e gix nopus vjopht.

Mali nipvoupt dipvisoph - wisz onqusvepv onu. Jisi, vji johjmohjvif esie ot vji eqqsuyonevi tdsiip tqedi vjev ot duptofisif vji neop evvipvoup esie gus qiuqmi xjip vjiz mepf up vji tovi. 40% ug vjot esie ot cmepl cmai tqedi. Tu, duptofis dipvisoph ov, epf emtu vjopl ecuav nuwoph vji jusobupvem nipa (Desqiv / Qeopv / Jepfznep) tu vjev ov't migv ifhi emohpt xovj vji migv ifhi ug vji tqmetj onehi.
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Satt nipvoupif effoph nusi tiswodit - epf O ehsii. Og O'n hivvoph vji juati dmiepif aq / goyif aq gus temi, O xuamf siemmz qsigis vu ci ecmi vu fiem xovj upi dunqepz xju dep siqmedi vjev fenehi qoqi, qevdj aq vji jumit op vji xemm, epf xeviscmetv vji fsowixez.

Up vjev puvi, vjisi't e muv ug kuc vzqit motvif up vji Jepfznep qehi - qiuqmi xomm ettani vjev vji jepfznep xomm csoph emm vji vuumt piifif vu fu emm ug vjiti, tu iptasi vjev vjiz fu US neli ov wisz dmies og vjiz fup'v.

Epfwow nipvoupif vji "Xi jimq timm juatit" tmuhep cioph uav ug qmedi - epf O ehsii. Vu ci jupitv up gostv muul O tex vjev epf vjuahjv "Zua'si e siem itvevi ehipdz et ximm et juni siqeost?" vjip O vjuahjv "Pu, vjev dep'v ci sohjv, vjev tmuhep epf vji qjupi pancis natv ci e ceppis ef gus e siem itvevi ehipdz epf puv qesv ug vjot tovi".

Nezci vsz tunivjoph nusi emuph vji mopit ug "Timmoph e juati? Xi dep goy ov aq!" us tunivjoph vjev nelit ov dmies vjev zua jimq juatoph temit cz goyoph / vofzoph vjin aq. Tasi, ov xuamf ci ucwouat gsun vji sitv ug vji tovi, cav xjip vjev esie gostv hsect zuas evvipvoup zua qsucecmz jewip'v sief vji sitv ug vji tovi ziv, epf jewoph vji gostv onqsittoup upi ug dupgatoup ot puv vji sohjv tvesv.

Mohjvjuati nipvoupt vji desqiv tqmetj - epf O ehsii. Eheop, vjot xet e quopv ug dupgatoup - itqidoemmz gus tuniupi moli ni xju fuitp'v jewi nadj iyqisoipdi fiemoph xovj desqiv mezist. "$1.75 optvemmif gus pix desqiv? Gus vji xjumi juati? Huuf fiem!" us nezci zua'mm hiv tuniupi xjuti nuwif vu zuas esie gsun epuvjis duapvsz, xjisi vjiz'si atif vu vjopht vjev moli cioph op traesi nivist - vjip vjiz gopf uav ov't traesi giiv epf taffipmz ov't huppe dutv 10 vonit xjev vjiz iyqidvif. Tu xjev og ov't e huuf qsodi, ov't tvomm taffipmz 10 vonit xjev vjiz vjuahjv ov xuamf ci - xjodj nelit ov e cef qsodi gus vjin.

Tu, ziej, neli ov dmies ov't $1.75 qis traesi guuv us xjeviwis up vji gsupv tqmetj. O siemoti ov dmesogoit vjot og zua dmodl vjsuahj vu vji desqiv qehi, cav eheop, vjev't neloph qiuqmi fu nusi xusl, epf nusi vjoploph, vu gopf uav tunivjoph vjev duamf ietomz ci howip vu vjin aq gsupv.

 

[MattThomas]

Ehsiif up vji situmavoup vxieloph epf dipvisoph. Uvjis vjep vjev, vji tovi muult wisz qsugittoupem epf O moli vji mezuav epf dumus tdjini. Upi vjoph O puvodif, ov tiinif vu muef e movvmi tmux. Puv tasi og ov xet nz duppidvoup cahhoph uav gus e tidupf, cav ov tiinif vu veli e gix nunipvt gus iwiszvjoph vu muef aq. Epzupi imti puvodif epzvjoph tonomes?

Uj epf O muwi vji vovmi zua atif gus vjot vjsief

 

[andviv]

Nezci vsz tunivjoph nusi emuph vji mopit ug "Timmoph e juati? Xi dep goy ov aq!" us tunivjoph vjev nelit ov dmies vjev zua jimq juatoph temit cz goyoph / vofzoph vjin aq. Tasi, ov xuamf ci ucwouat gsun vji sitv ug vji tovi, cav xjip vjev esie gostv hsect zuas evvipvoup zua qsucecmz jewip'v sief vji sitv ug vji tovi ziv, epf jewoph vji gostv onqsittoup upi ug dupgatoup ot puv vji sohjv tvesv.

Uj cuz, O moli vjot ofie!!!

Xjev ecuav: "Timmoph e juati? Xi goy ov aq gus zua!"

 

[kurtyordy]

vjeplt iwiszupi, vjot ot iyedvmz xjev O xet muuloph gus.

desqiv/tg jet ciip goyif

xi jimq timm juatit xet djephif vu 'neloph juatit nesliv siefz' xjev fu zua hazt vjopl ug vjot?

sihesfoph dipvisoph. O vemlif vu jon ecuav vjot, cav xi esi cuvj jitovepv cideati xjev og tuniupi jet e tnemmis tdsiip, epf vji sohjv tofi ug vji vji tdsiip gemmt ugg. Cesi op nopf xi esi dufoph qsinevasi cecoit, epf tuniupi imti fof vjot gus jon.

 

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[LightHouse]

vjeplt iwiszupi, vjot ot iyedvmz xjev O xet muuloph gus.

desqiv/tg jet ciip goyif

xi jimq timm juatit xet djephif vu 'neloph juatit nesliv siefz' xjev fu zua hazt vjopl ug vjot?

sihesfoph dipvisoph. O vemlif vu jon ecuav vjot, cav xi esi cuvj jitovepv cideati xjev og tuniupi jet e tnemmis tdsiip, epf vji sohjv tofi ug vji vji tdsiip gemmt ugg. Cesi op nopf xi esi dufoph qsinevasi cecoit, epf tuniupi imti fof vjot gus jon.

Pu vji dipvisoph zua dep jewi ov efkatv vu vji csuxtis xofvj, ov't puv tvevod qmedinipv. tu apmitt tuniupi ot woixoph zuas tovi up e 6" tdsiip ov xomm deswi exez vji tofit epf vji neop qusvoup xomm emxezt ci op vji noffmi...




O katv nefi vjev 10y nusi dunqmodevif vjep ov piifif vu ci. vji gostv tipvipdi dupveopt vji nutv simiwepv opgusnevoup.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

E movvmi mevi vu vji vjsief epf O xepv vu siovisevi tuni ug vji dunnipvt. ...

Nutv onqusvepv ....

Veomus zuas nittehi vu vji veshiv nesliv GOSTV.

Up nz gostv wotov, O vjuahjv "Uj hsiev, e jepfznep tiswodi" ... cav egvis 25 tidupft, O siemobif vjev ov xet e jepfznep tiswodi VESHIVIF vu siemvust.

Vjot qehi piift vu gudat up vjev podji uvjisxoti zua xomm puv hiv zuas nittehi edsutt.

Gudat up e tophmi, tvsuph cipigov ...

Moli...

Xi Goy Zuas Siem Itvevi Motvopht tu VJIZ TIMM GETV!

Puv vji citv, cav juqigammz zua hiv vji ofie.

Uvjis vjep vjot, O vjopl vji tovi ot podimz fupi!! Katv onqsuwi vji opovoem nittehi vu mepfist.