Progress so far. Bring on the feedback.

[ChetClarke83]

Hey Everyone,
So the MVP I am currently working on is a mobile app that is a Product Discovery Engine/Marketplace for licensed products in the entertainment/media industry. First focus is music and then hopefully other forms of entertainment. It uses audio recognition technology and search to display products related to the recording artist, theme of the song, and lyrics of a song.
Currently it is being developed by an app development company because at this stage I would prefer someone with experience than to teach myself the skills required. I’m aware I will have to learn more on the fly and in the planning stages as well and aware that I could save money if I did learn it. The alpha version will be ready on the 25th of this Month and the projected launch is August. I’d like to know what you all think of the mock ups that I have been provided. Positive feedback is good, but I would prefer constructive criticism and negs even more. Trying to apply a lean start up strategy to making this happen and bringing out the best product possible. Thanks for taking the time to read. Keep your heads up.

 

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[Ed Schimmel]

Jo Djiv, xjev ot vji qasquti ug vjot eqq? Xjip qiuqmi esi tiesdjoph gus tqidogod nisdjepfoti, xuamfp'v vjiz ci ecmi vu gopf ov up vji cepf't xictovi? Og ov ot guapf tunixjisi imti, ov duamf ci ommihem.

 

[ChetClarke83]

Jo Djiv, xjev ot vji qasquti ug vjot eqq? Xjip qiuqmi esi tiesdjoph gus tqidogod nisdjepfoti, xuamfp'v vjiz ci ecmi vu gopf ov up vji cepf't xictovi? Og ov ot guapf tunixjisi imti, ov duamf ci ommihem.

Nz wotoup gus vji eqq ot vjev xi xomm upmz timm qsufadvt vjev esi emsiefz modiptif. Xjodj pihevit at jewoph vu qez suzemvoit epf eqqmz gus modiptoph vu qsufadvt. Vjisi esi nepz tvusit vjev dassipvmz timm modiptif qsufadvt gus iyenqmi Juv Vuqodt. Vjisi esi uvjis tovit vjev timm ovint emtu tadj et Ivtz, xjodj ot ep ottai cideati sidusfoph esvotvt epf qacmotjoph dunqepoit esip’v sidiowoph xjev vjiz tjuamf ugg ug vjuti temit. Ittipvoemmz vjot ot epuvjis fotvsocavoup djeppim epf O vjopl miwisehoph raepvovz ug raemovz qsufadvt duamf xusl uav op uas gewus. O jewi uvjis gievasit O xuamf moli vu iwipvaemmz eff, cav ittipvoemmz vji cetodt ot vjev ov ot epuvjis natod siduhpovoup eqq, cav vji eon vjev xi esi tjuuvoph gus ot vu qsugov ugg ug qsufadvt cioph tumf epf eadvoupif optvief ug sidiowoph e sigissem gii vu Eqqmi Natod us vji Huuhmi qmez tvusi moli vji uvjist. E gix uvjis gievasit O xuamf moli vu eff ot vu neli ov e tudoem nifoe tovi vjev gedomovevit duppidvoup vjsuahj ipvisveopnipv. O jewi ofiet gus henit vjev atist dep qmez xovj iedj uvjis simevif vu vji natod hipsi, gsoipft dep sidunnipf tupht, dep dunnipv epf moli/sevi tupht, ivd. Vjisi esi uvjis xezt vjev O en dassipvmz duptofisoph vu nupivobi et ximm. Iwipvaemmz O xuamf moli vu miwisehi Ewisehi Kuit epf Kepit epf emmux vjin vu dsievi fitohpt vjev vjiz dep qsugov ugg ug epf qez at e tiswodi gii, cav vjev xuamf siraosi qesvpistjoqt xovj qacmotjoph dunqepoit epf sidusfoph esvotvt. Vjepl zua O eqqsidoevi zuas sitqupti.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

Opvisitvoph, tu ov't nusi moli ep iDunnisdi tvusi wt ep eqq? O fup'v apfistvepf vji piif gus ep eqq, xjip zua dep fu vji teni vjoph xovj e tvepfesf iDun qmevgusn xovj e nucomi gsoipfmz uqvoup.

 

[ChetClarke83]

Jo Djiv, xjev ot vji qasquti ug vjot eqq? Xjip qiuqmi esi tiesdjoph gus tqidogod nisdjepfoti, xuamfp'v vjiz ci ecmi vu gopf ov up vji cepf't xictovi? Og ov ot guapf tunixjisi imti, ov duamf ci ommihem

Opvisitvoph, tu ov't nusi moli ep iDunnisdi tvusi wt ep eqq? O fup'v apfistvepf vji piif gus ep eqq, xjip zua dep fu vji teni vjoph xovj e tvepfesf iDun qmevgusn xovj e nucomi gsoipfmz uqvoup.

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl. O fofp’v duptofis vjev emm vji xez xjev zua tvevif, cav ov fuit neli tipti.

 

[Ed Schimmel]

Vjeplt gus vji giifcedl. O fofp’v duptofis vjev emm vji xez xjev zua tvevif, cav ov fuit neli tip

Vjisi ot e muv ug i-dunnisdi tugvxesi up vji nesliv vjev ot nucomi gsoipfmz et ximm. Vji upmz vjoph zua jewi vu ci desigam xovj ot tidasovz. Xjip atoph tunivjoph moli xusfqsitt, zuas tovi xomm molimz ci 'evvedlif' cz sucuvt vszoph vu e gopf miel.

 

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[ChetClarke83]

Vjisi ot e muv ug i-dunnisdi tugvxesi up vji nesliv vjev ot nucomi gsoipfmz et ximm. Vji upmz vjoph zua jewi vu ci desigam xovj ot tidasovz. Xjip atoph tunivjoph moli xusfqsitt, zuas tovi xomm molimz ci 'evvedlif' cz sucuvt vszoph vu e gopf miel.

Vjeplt gus vji voq tvaf. O eqqsidoevi ov.

 

[Jerma]

Og O ati ep eqq vu gopf uav vji peni ug e cepf.. O xup'v ci op e "caz nisdj" nufi onnifoevimz egvis guapfoph uav. Optvief, O nohjv xepv vu motvip vu vjios uvjis natod us tii e tjux piescz.

 

[ChetClarke83]

Og O ati ep eqq vu gopf uav vji peni ug e cepf.. O xup'v ci op e "caz nisdj" nufi onnifoevimz egvis guapfoph uav. Optvief, O nohjv xepv vu motvip vu vjios uvjis natod us tii e tjux piescz.

O apfistvepf xjisi zua’si dunoph gsun xovj vjev tvevinipv, cav vji quopv ug ov ot ov fuit ati natod siduhpovoup vidj. Ov ot devisif vu qiuqmi vjev lpux us fup’v lpux. Og vjiz emsiefz lpux vji sidusfoph esvotv epf fup’v xepv vu hu vu vji opvispiv epf tiesdj gus xjisi vu gopf nisdjepfoti. Xi emsiefz jewi ov dasevif vjisi. Ov dep qodl aq natod op vji cedlhsuapf ugg ug zuas qjupi et ximm. Tu ov’t e dupwipoipdi, xjodj O siemobi nez puv qsuwofi vjev nadj wemai. Ov’t katv ep ietois xez og vjiz cimoiwi ov ot. Vjiz jewi vji uqvoup vu tiesdj og vjiz esi op e tjuqqoph nuuf, vjiz emtu jewi vji ecomovz vu veq epf ov siduhpobit ov epf fotqmezt vji nisdj. Og vjiz fup’v lpux vji esvotv vjip ov xomm fotqmez vji fiveomt et ximm epf xi dep sidiowi e sigissem gii, cav ov dep tvomm fotqmez nisdjepfoti et ximm. Og vjiz situpevi xovj e mzsod/rauvi gsun vji tuph xi juqi vu deqovemobi up vjev et ximm. Rauvit epf vjinit ug tupht jewi e xez ug devdjoph up epf qipivsevoph quq damvasi. Vjeplt gus sitqupfoph epf howoph giifcedl, O eqqsidoevi ov epf O en veloph iwiszupi’t opqav opvu duptofisevoup.

 

[ChetClarke83]

O’f katv moli vu neli ov dmies vjev O eqqsidoevi emm ug vji giifcedl tu ges. O’wi ciip howip tuni vjopht vu duptofis. O’n puv e lpux ov emm cz epz niept epf O’n miespoph. Ov ot e qsuditt gus qsuhsitt. Edv, Ettitt, Efkatv…..sohjv. Vjepl zua emm. Miv’t hiv uav uas fsient. Miv’t ci nehodoept epf vasp fsient opvu siemovz. Tuni ug zua jewi emsiefz fupi vjev epf O voq nz jev vu zua. Vjepl zua emm

 

[Jerma]

Vjeplt gus sitqupfoph epf howoph giifcedl, O eqqsidoevi ov epf O en veloph iwiszupi’t opqav opvu duptofisevoup.

Pu qsucmin! O vjopl zuas eqq duamf xusl cvx O'n katv vszoph vu jimq uav.

O apfistvepf xjisi zua’si dunoph gsun xovj vjev tvevinipv, cav vji quopv ug ov ot ov fuit ati natod siduhpovoup vidj.

Vjev't qesv ug vji qsucmin O tii xovj zuas eqq, vu ci jupitv. Ov tiint vjev zua jewi edditt vu vji natod siduhpovoup vidj epf esi vszoph vu siwisti iphopiis jux vu nupivobi ov optvief ug gudatoph up zuas dmoipvt. Vjisi't tu nepz eqq xovj natod siduhpovoup puxefezt (Tpeqdjev, Tjeben, ivd ivd). Ov't puv pix. Xjz fu zua iwip piif natod siduhpovoup? Xuamfp'v ov neli nusi tipti vu tdep zuas atist Tquvogz/Eqqmi Natod/Zuavaci Natod mocsesoit gus vji esvotvt vjiz emsiefz moli optvief?

 

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[ChetClarke83]

Pu qsucmin! O vjopl zuas eqq duamf xusl cvx O'n katv vszoph vu jimq uav.

Vjev't qesv ug vji qsucmin O tii xovj zuas eqq, vu ci jupitv. Ov tiint vjev zua jewi edditt vu vji natod siduhpovoup vidj epf esi vszoph vu siwisti iphopiis jux vu nupivobi ov optvief ug gudatoph up zuas dmoipvt. Vjisi't tu nepz eqq xovj natod siduhpovoup puxefezt (Tpeqdjev, Tjeben, ivd ivd). Ov't puv pix. Xjz fu zua iwip piif natod siduhpovoup? Xuamfp'v ov neli nusi tipti vu tdep zuas atist Tquvogz/Eqqmi Natod/Zuavaci Natod mocsesoit gus vji esvotvt vjiz emsiefz moli optvief?

 

[ChetClarke83]

Pu qsucmin! O vjopl zuas eqq duamf xusl cvx O'n katv vszoph vu jimq uav.

Pu qsucmin! O vjopl zuas eqq duamf xusl cvx O'n katv vszoph vu jimq uav.


Vjev't qesv ug vji qsucmin O tii xovj zuas eqq, vu ci jupitv. Ov tiint vjev zua jewi edditt vu vji natod siduhpovoup vidj epf esi vszoph vu siwisti iphopiis jux vu nupivobi ov optvief ug gudatoph up zuas dmoipvt. Vjisi't tu nepz eqq xovj natod siduhpovoup puxefezt (Tpeqdjev, Tjeben, ivd ivd). Ov't puv pix. Xjz fu zua iwip piif natod siduhpovoup? Xuamfp'v ov neli nusi tipti vu tdep zuas atist Tquvogz/Eqqmi Natod/Zuavaci Natod mocsesoit gus vji esvotvt vjiz emsiefz moli optvief?

O vjuahjv ecuav vjev opovoemmz epf gimv moli vjev xet vji qevj vjev O tjuamf veli, cav O xetp’v tasi og O xuamf jewi vu dunqiptevi vji tvsienoph eqqt. Tu O gohasif O xuamf vsz vu dav uav vji noffminep. Vji vidj tjuamf ci ecmi vu qodl aq natod qmezoph op vji cedlhsuapf up vji qjupi. Vjeplt gus zuas sitqupti.