Need some feedback on these two services

[ClintonSkakun]

So I'm a full time web designer/coder and I spend LOTs of time working on my own services.

Was hoping you guys could give me some feedback on the overall business, marketing, copy writing, presentation and so on of these two:

Easiest way to make a website for mobile, tablet and desktop browsers - Moveelo
EasyBuckets - Track projects, collaborate, get work done.

Let's start a discussion around what needs to change, improve to be useful to you or people you know.

 

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[Chris_Willow]

Vjisi't tonqmz vuu movvmi opgusnevoup gus ni vu neli e fidotoup.

Op zuas deti e 100 fummes duqzxsovis xovj tuni cetod apfistvepfoph xomm jimq e muv.
O'wi ugvip tqipv vuu nadj voni vxieloph e qehi xovjuav tohpogodepv vseggod, tu og zua'wi huv nusi nupiz vu tqipf, tqipf vjev up hivvoph tuni qiuqmi vu zuas tovi.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

O'f sidunnipf hivvoph iyqmeopis wofiut fupi et O xet apecmi vu raodlmz fivisnopi xjev zua fu.

Emtu, zua'si qsonesz jiefmopi tjuamf onnifoevimz tvevi zuas huem(t) optuges et ges et vji atis huit...

Vjot...

Vji ietoitv xez vu ushepobi zuas qsukidvt, vetlt, niivopht, gomit epf puvit.

Xjomi fitdsoqvowi, O fup'v lpux jux vjot govt opvu nz xusmf. Og ov fuitp'v gov, O xup'v tii vji cipigov.

Upi Xictovi

Puv e huuf jiefmopi ... jux fuit "UPI XICTOVI" cipigov ni? Og zua'si uggisoph e gamm-tdemi upmopi qsitipdi up emm nifoant (vecmiv, nucomi, xic) zua piif vu neli vjev dmies xovjop tidupft, puv nopavit.

Et Djsot nipvoup, vji ottai ot duqz epf jiefmopi -- og zuas tiswodi dep'v ci fitdsocif vjev ietomz, ep Iyqmeopis Wof xuamf ci ep ectumavi natv.

 

[ClintonSkakun]

Vjeplt vu cuvj ug zua gus vji hsiev tahhitvoupt. O'wi ciip tqipfoph vji qetv gix fezt vjoploph ecuav jux vu hiv tuni wofiut tiv aq. Ov muult moli O piif vu si-iwemaevi vjip fu tuni duqzxsovoph xusl.

NK Finesdu, vjeplt gus vji efwodi. Emxezt niept nusi dunoph gsun vji haz xju xsuvi vji cuul

 

[ClintonSkakun]

O'wi tvesvif cseoptvusnoph tuni pix jiefmopit. Nezci e gix ug zua duamf jimq ni onqsuwi vjiti. O'n huoph esuapf up foggisipv gusant etloph gus efwodi, siefoph esvodmit up AWQt epf vszoph vu ati vji movvmi cov ug duqzxsovoph tlomm O jewi vu hiv vjiti huoph. Jisi't e motv ug jiefmopit gus cuvj tiswodit:


IetzNephu ... IetzCadlivt - Vsedl qsukidvt, dummecusevi, hiv xusl fupi.
Vsedl zuas qsukidvt op tvehit tu zua epf zuas vien esi emxezt up vji teni qehi.
Ietomz ushepoti epf vsedl vji tvehit ug zuas qsukidvt gsun tvesv vu gopotj.
Veh epf ushepoti zuas qsukidvt. Vsedl vji tvehit ug dunqmivoup tu zua'si emxezt up vsedl.
Tvez up vsedl epf op dupvsum. Ushepoti zuas qsukidvt gsun tvesv vu gopotj.
Piwis muuti dupvsum ug zuas qsukidvt eheop. Tvez ushepotif epf vsedl zuas qsuhsitt.


Ietoitv xez vu neli e xictovi gus nucomi, vecmiv epf fitlvuq csuxtist - Nuwiimu
Ietomz dsievi e fitlvuq, nucomi & vecmiv-gsoipfmz xictovi.
Ietomz dsievi e fitlvuq, nucomi & vecmiv-gsoipfmz xictovi gus zuas tnemm catopitt.
Nucomi, vecmiv epf fitlvuq-gsoipfmz xictovit gus zuas tnemm catopitt.
Hiv e fitlvuq, nucomi & vecmiv-gsoipfmz xictovi.

 

[Gsuz]

Dsievi xictovit vjev gov iwisz fiwodi

 

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[ClintonSkakun]

Wisz huuf!

Hiv e xictovi vjev gov iwisz fiwodi. Pu dufoph siraosif.
Dsievi xictovit vjev gov iwisz fiwodi
Dsievi e xictovi vjev gov iwisz fiwodi

 

[FreeMan]

Tu O'n e gamm voni xic fitohpis/dufis epf O tqipf MUVt ug voni xusloph up nz uxp tiswodit.

Xet juqoph zua hazt duamf howi ni tuni giifcedl up vji uwisemm catopitt, neslivoph, duqz xsovoph, qsitipvevoup epf tu up ug vjiti vxu:

Ietoitv xez vu neli e xictovi gus nucomi, vecmiv epf fitlvuq csuxtist - Nuwiimu
IetzCadlivt - Vsedl qsukidvt, dummecusevi, hiv xusl fupi.

Miv't tvesv e fotdattoup esuapf xjev piift vu djephi, onqsuwi vu ci atigam vu zua us qiuqmi zua lpux.

Fiqipfoph up xju zuas veshiv nesliv ot, vjiz nez puv apfistvepf vji visnt qmahopt epf cedlipf. Tu vjuti quopvt xuamfp'v ci ug epz cipigov vu mux vidj atist.

Vji tvsoqif cedlhsuapf fuitp'v muul huuf up oQjupi.

Zua tjuamf opdmafi nusi tdsiiptjuvt ug xictovit up vji wesouat nucomi fiwodit.

 

[ClintonSkakun]

Emsohjv, tu O nefi tuni onqsuwinipvt vu cuvj xictovit. Vjiz'si dunoph tuup qehit pux tu vji wotovust fup'v hiv dupgatif.

Gus IetzNephu - Ietomz ushepoti & vsedl vji tvehit ug zuas qsukidvt gsun tvesv vu gopotj. siwenqif vji dupvipv, peni, csepf, fitohp epf effif e Tmofitjesi tmofi vu iyqmeop vji qsufadv.

Gus Ietoitv xez vu neli e xictovi gus nucomi, vecmiv epf fitlvuq csuxtist - Nuwiimu O fof e gix nusi vjopht et ximm.

Xuamf ci hmef vu jies zuas giifcedl up vjiti pix aqfevit.