Need some feedback on these two services

[ClintonSkakun]

So I'm a full time web designer/coder and I spend LOTs of time working on my own services.

Was hoping you guys could give me some feedback on the overall business, marketing, copy writing, presentation and so on of these two:

Easiest way to make a website for mobile, tablet and desktop browsers - Moveelo
EasyBuckets - Track projects, collaborate, get work done.

Let's start a discussion around what needs to change, improve to be useful to you or people you know.

 

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[Chris_Willow]

There's simply too little information for me to make a decision.

In your case a 100 dollar copywriter with some basic understanding will help a lot.
I've often spent too much time tweaking a page without significant traffic, so if you've got more money to spend, spend that on getting some people to your site.

 

[MJ DeMarco]

I'd recommend getting explainer videos done as I was unable to quickly determine what you do.

Also, you're primary headline should immediately state your goal(s) insofar as far as the user goes...

This...

The easiest way to organize your projects, tasks, meetings, files and notes.

While descriptive, I don't know how this fits into my world. If it doesn't fit, I won't see the benefit.

One Website

Not a good headline ... how does "ONE WEBSITE" benefit me? If you're offering a full-scale online presence on all mediums (tablet, mobile, web) you need to make that clear within seconds, not minutes.

As Chris mention, the issue is copy and headline -- if your service can't be described that easily, an Explainer Vid would be an absolute must.

 

[ClintonSkakun]

Thanks to both of you for the great suggestions. I've been spending the past few days thinking about how to get some videos set up. It looks like I need to re-evaluate then do some copywriting work.

MJ DeMarco, thanks for the advice. Always means more coming from the guy who wrote the book

 

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[ClintonSkakun]

I've started brainstorming some new headlines. Maybe a few of you could help me improve these. I'm going around on different forums asking for advice, reading articles on UVPs and trying to use the little bit of copywriting skill I have to get these going. Here's a list of headlines for both services:


EasyMango ... EasyBuckets - Track projects, collaborate, get work done.
Track your projects in stages so you and your team are always on the same page.
Easily organise and track the stages of your projects from start to finish.
Tag and organise your projects. Track the stages of completion so you're always on track.
Stay on track and in control. Organise your projects from start to finish.
Never loose control of your projects again. Stay organised and track your progress.


Easiest way to make a website for mobile, tablet and desktop browsers - Moveelo
Easily create a desktop, mobile & tablet-friendly website.
Easily create a desktop, mobile & tablet-friendly website for your small business.
Mobile, tablet and desktop-friendly websites for your small business.
Get a desktop, mobile & tablet-friendly website.

 

[Gsuz]

Create websites that fit every device

 

[ClintonSkakun]

Very good!

Get a website that fit every device. No coding required.
Create websites that fit every device
Create a website that fit every device

 

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[FreeMan]

So I'm a full time web designer/coder and I spend LOTs of time working on my own services.

Was hoping you guys could give me some feedback on the overall business, marketing, copy writing, presentation and so on of these two:

Easiest way to make a website for mobile, tablet and desktop browsers - Moveelo
EasyBuckets - Track projects, collaborate, get work done.

Let's start a discussion around what needs to change, improve to be useful to you or people you know.

Depending on who your target market is, they may not understand the terms plugins and backend. So those points wouldn't be of any benefit to low tech users.

The striped background doesn't look good on iPhone.

You should include more screenshots of websites on the various mobile devices.

 

[ClintonSkakun]

Alright, so I made some improvements to both websites. They're coming soon pages now so the visitors don't get confused.

For EasyMango - Easily organise & track the stages of your projects from start to finish. revamped the content, name, brand, design and added a Slideshare slide to explain the product.

For Easiest way to make a website for mobile, tablet and desktop browsers - Moveelo I did a few more things as well.

Would be glad to hear your feedback on these new updates.