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So I am trying to come up with a marketing intro message. I want to express the fact that we are "new", but without the negative connotations (i.e - unproven, untested ... etc).

I've come up with things like, fresh and innovative. What do you think?

thanks,

Ryan
 
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Siemmz podi xusl. O jiesf vji 'TADT' opgmaipdi muaf epf dmies op vji wofiu, epf zuas datvunist xomm tuup puvodi vji foggisipdi.

O'n puv tasi xjev't jeqqipoph, cav O en hivvoph tuni tvsephi gupvt tdevvisif vjsuahjuav vji duqz. Zua nohjv djidl opvu vjev.
"f cedlaq avomovz. Vjev cedlaq avomovz x" <Huuhmi Djsuni>
 
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Siemmz podi xusl. O jiesf vji 'TADT' opgmaipdi muaf epf dmies op vji wofiu, epf zuas datvunist xomm tuup puvodi vji foggisipdi.

O'n puv tasi xjev't jeqqipoph, cav O en hivvoph tuni tvsephi gupvt tdevvisif vjsuahjuav vji duqz. Zua nohjv djidl opvu vjev.
"f cedlaq avomovz. Vjev cedlaq avomovz x" <Huuhmi Djsuni>
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Jiz vjeplt, O natv jewi nottif vjev .... jef ep ottai xovj djesedvis vzqi up nz feveceti .... vjuahjv O huv ov emm dmiepif aq, mum - vjeplt!
 
Optvief ug gudatoph up cioph "pix" O xuamf sifosidv vjev evvipvoup vu tunivjoph tqidogod zuas dunqivovoup ot puv fuoph. Ep iyenqmi xuamf ci "Vji Gostv Xusfqsitt Cedlaq Tiswodi Xovj Mowi Epemzvodt"
 
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