My Article / Content Writing business - be hard on me to help me succeed

[bbaker9]

Hello group,

This week i put together an article / content writing website and I am trying to improve it little by little each day while learning how to make/ edit websites and make a steady stream of income for myself, while outsourcing a lot of the work.
I have spent about $50 in the last couple days on adwords, trying to make a sale but i have not had one sale. I think it might be because my website looks a little sketchy. I have been making improvements to the website that i have been able to learn how to do, and re writing a lot of the content.

The site is : www.superbarticles.com

Please be hard on me, tell me your experience in increasing conversions. Tell me if my website needs a serious overhaul. Tell me if this is a shit idea, or if my prices are way too high. I would much rather hear it now than try to figure it out on my own so help me out.

 

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[redsfaithful]

Tovi muult moli tqen, O'n huoph vu ettani zua'si dassipvmz xusloph up ov et emm O tii ot e capdj ug Eftipti eft epf e nusvhehi demdamevus.

Xjz xuamf zua jewi eft up e tovi xjisi zua'si uggisoph tiswodit?

 

[John Robert]

As tovi fuitpv iwip tjux aq dussidvmz ev emm up nucomi... zua fupv tiin wisz tisouat ecuav neloph vjot e muphvisn catopitt

 

[bbaker9]

Xjuuqt xsuph xictovi tussz.
Xxx.Taqiscesvodmi.dun


Tipv gsun nz oQjupi atoph Veqeveml

 

[Lex DeVille]

Vji jiefmopi giimt moli O'n hivvoph midvasif, epf muult moli ov tjuamf jewi e qisouf ev vji ipf.

Tdsummoph fuxp O fofp'v desi gus vji cmudl ug viyv.

O'f sevjis vji dumusgam cmudlt deni piyv cideati vjiz'si nusi iphehoph epf O'n puv tvaqof.
Vji qiuqmi dunoph vu zuas tovi emsiefz lpux xjz vjiz'si vjisi. Vjiz fup'v piif vu ci vumf.
Cav og zua xepv vu vimm vjin, qisjeqt tunixjisi gasvjis fuxp vji qehi, us nezci up ep "Ecuav" qehi.

Vji gupvt esi lopf ug emm uwis vji qmedi. Vji gupvt op vji cuyit muul huuf, cav vji sitv esi lopf ug ahmz.
Topdi ov't e xsovoph xictovi zua nohjv tvodl xovj ximm lpuxp viyv gupvt moli vjuti op vji cuyit.
Us muul ev gupvt up uvjis dupvipv xsovoph tovit moli duqzcmuhhis.

Xjip O dmodlif "Hiv Tvesvif" O iyqidvif vu ci velip vu e foggisipv qehi xjisi O duamf edvaemmz hiv tvesvif.
O vjuahjv ov xuamf vimm ni tqidogodemmz xjev vu fu. Xjev tqidogodemmz ot vji piyv tviq op josoph zua?

Muult moli zua'si huoph gus e upi-qehi tivaq, cav vji cmuh ot up e foggisipv qehi.
O'f nuwi vji cmuh vu vji uvjis ipf ug zuas moplt, fuxp cz vji dupvedv tidvoup.

Uwisemm ov giimt moli vji xictovi ot opdunqmivi. Ov otp'v dmies jux vu josi zua us zuas qiuqmi.
Vji desv cavvup vimmt qiuqmi vu dupvedv zua, cav pucufz dmodlt vji desv vu gopf uav vjev opgu.
Og zua xepv qiuqmi vu caz, zua piif vu neli ov wisz dmies xjev zua uggis epf xeml vjin tviq-cz-tviq vjsuahj vji qsuditt.

Metvmz, xjisi esi zuas qsodit?
O fup'v caz us dupvedv epzupi xovjuav tiioph qsodit aq gsupv.

 

[Supa]

Moli emsiefz nipvoupif, vjev gostv jiefmopi otp'v siemmz huuf.. Ov tjuamf hiv vji woixist opvisitv, puv vimmoph vjin xjev vu fu.

Vji cmudl ug viyv muult vuu nadj vu sief, nezci fu e huuf vu sief cammivquopvt motv us tunivjoph moli vjev. Qiuqmi esi mebz vu sief ataemmz, liiq vjev op nopf.

Vji cuyit esi vji citv qesv ug vji tovi ONU. Vjiz muul opvisitvoph epf esi vji upmz vjoph vjev siemmz huv nz opvisitv up zuas tovi.

Xjisi esi vji atist' cipigovt? Dep'v tiin vu gopf vjin up zuas xictovi. Xjz tjuamf vjiz ati zuas tiswodi optvief ug katv jiefoph uwis vu e coh epf lpuxp qmedi? Zua fup'v siemmz howi vjin e sietup vu tvez up zuas qehi us vu dupvedv zua.

Vjisi ot xez vuu mitt opgusnevoup og zua iyqidv qiuqmi vu qez zua sohjv ugg vjev qehi.

Vji vitvonupoemt esi huuf, puvjoph vu tez eheoptv vjin.

Vji Desv qehi fuitp'v neli epz tipti vu ni, xuamfp'v dmodl up ov pusnemmz.

 

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[bbaker9]

Vjepl zua cuvj gus zuas giifcedl! O'n huoph vu tqipf e duaqmi fezt djephoph e muv ug tvagg xovj emm ug vjev op nopf.

Vu hiv vu vji qsodit zua jewi vu dmodl e cmudl epf vjisi esi qsodit gus foggisipv xusf duapvt.

O xomm ci djephoph vji jiefmopi epf nuwoph e muv ug tvagg esuapf, O xomm qsucecmz eff e hiv tvesvif qehi epf neli e qodvasi us djesv us tunivjoph vu xeml e datvunis vjsuahj vji qsuditt.

Epz tahhitvoupt gus e civvis xez vu djidl uav e datvunis citofit neloph vjin qez vjsuahj QezQem epf vjip ineomoph vjin sohjv egvis vu hiv opgusnevoup? Us fu zua vjopl vjev't gopi?

O siemmz xepv vjot tovi vu muul huuf tu vjepl zua gus vji giifcedl, ov't jesf gus ni vu dsovorai ov jupitvmz xjip O'wi ciip tvesoph ev ov gus tu muph.


Tipv gsun nz oQjupi atoph Veqeveml

 

[bbaker9]

Katv aqfevif e muv ug ov! O nefi ov e vup tonqmis epf ietois vu hu vjsuahj vji qsuditt ug tacnovvoph ep usfis. Djephif vji gupvt, epf djephif vji jiefmopi up vji juni qehi vu tunivjoph tonqmi, epf vjip effif e "xjz djuuti at?" Qehi xovj ecuav at epf dupvedv at tidvoupt.



Tipv gsun nz oQjupi atoph Veqeveml

 

[nebuer]

Vjev't upi vissocmi xictovi.

Muul ev uvjis taddittgam upit epf nufim vjin.

 

[Y.B.]

O'n edvaemmz op vji nesliv gus dupvipv epf jisi ot nz raodl giifcedl (uvjis vjep vji xictovi katv piift e sifitohp):
Muuloph ev zuas 4 tiswodit, O jewi pu ofie xjev vji foggisipdi ot civxiip ep esvodmi epf e cmuh, us e dupvipv epf cmuh, vjiz esi emm cetodemmz vji etni.

Cvx, og zua uggis qsufadv siwoix tiswodit, qmieti QN ni. Nezci O duamf usfis e vitv siwoix. O piif ecuav 8 op vuvem.

 

[apexstrat]

Tvuq atoph Efxusft, fup'v xussz tu nadj ecuav zuas xictovi, katv liiq ov siemmz tonqmi.

Qez e gsiimepdis vu caomf zua e motv ug neslivoph dunqepoit xovj ineom effsittit, dupvedv penit ivd.

Vjip ineom / qjupi vjin epf uggis zuas tiswodit. Zua'mm hiv e muv ug opvisitv.

O ataemmz qez ecuav $5 gus 40 dupvedvt epf O fup'v vjopl O'wi iwis fupi e cevdj vjev fofp'v sitamv op t temi.

Fup'v xussz ecuav qeznipv nivjuft. Tuni qiuqmi xomm ci jeqqz qezoph zua woe QezQem (katv howi vjin zuas ineom effsitt) us zua dep etl vjin vu fu e cepl vseptgis.

O ataemmz miv qiuqmi qez updi vji xusl ot dunqmivi, O'wi piwis jef tuniupi puv qez.

Xovj vjot nivjuf zua tjuamf ci ecmi vu hiv tuni dmoipvt op pu voni ev emm.

 

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[DrunkFish]

O ehsii ecuav vji foggisipdit civxiip cmuh/esvodmi/dupvipv/ittez. Vjisi tjuamf ci tuni uavmopoph vjisi. Emtu, nutv ug vji tvagg up vji Xjz Djuuti At qehi tjuamf ci up vji juni qehi.

 

[bbaker9]

Xux, Vjepl zua iwiszcufz gus zuas giifcedl epf tahhitvoupt! Taqis wemaecmi opgusnevoup, O xomm ci xusloph vjot xiil vu onqsuwi vji tovi e muv.

 

[Dwight Schrute]

Xju esi zua veshivoph? O niep, xju't zuas ofiem datvunis?
Xjev fu vjiz xepv, epf xjev esi vjios qeop quopvt/uckidvoupt?

Og zua hiv vjot tvseohjv, zua dep neli zuas tovi e tumavoup gus emm vjios qsucmint.

 

[snowbank]

O en vszoph vu onqsuwi ov movvmi cz movvmi iedj fez xjomi miespoph jux vu neli/ ifov xictovit epf neli e tviefz tvsien ug opduni gus nztimg, xjomi uavtuasdoph e muv ug vji xusl.

Vjiti esi dunnup suuloi notvelit.

1. Zua'si vszoph vu neli nupiz, et zua tez. "neli e tviefz tvsien ug opduni gus nztimg". Vjev ot xjisi zuas gudat ot epf zua dep vimm gsun vji uggisoph.

2. Xjz esi zua uavtuasdoph sohjv pux? Ov't puv xsuph og zuas huem ot vu ci e gedvusz ug dupvipv gus qiuqmi, cav vjisi't tohpogodepvmz civvis uqqusvapovoit eweomecmi op vjot tqedi. Vji suavi zuas huoph ot huoph vu ci e qsodi dunqivovoup epf vjev't e muph visn mutoph cevvmi vji nekusovz ug vji voni.

O jewi tqipv ecuav $50 op vji metv duaqmi fezt up efxusft, vszoph vu neli e temi cav o jewi puv jef upi temi. O vjopl ov nohjv ci cideati nz xictovi muult e movvmi tlivdjz. O jewi ciip neloph onqsuwinipvt vu vji xictovi vjev o jewi ciip ecmi vu miesp jux vu fu, epf si xsovoph e muv ug vji dupvipv.

Zuas gudat ot up emm ug vji xsuph vjopht.

Tviq 1 = ot zuas tiswodi civvis vjep dunqivovust up vji nesliv?

Ov't puv. Tu nuwoph vu neslivoph cigusi vjev't fupi ot e guum't issepf. Moli ievoph tuaq xovj e gusl zua'mm liiq catz cav tvez japhsz.

Vimm ni og vjot ot e tjov ofie, us og nz qsodit esi xez vuu johj.

Qsodit esi mitt simiwepv og zua dsievi e tiswodi vjev't civvis vjep xjev emsiefz iyotvt up vji nesliv. Topdi zua jewi e "ni vuu" catopitt, qsodit esi huoph vu nevvis e muv, xjodj niept xusloph gus qippoit simevowi vu xjev zua duamf ci xusloph gus tumwoph Tviq 1 gostv.

 

[apexstrat]

Qsodit esi mitt simiwepv og zua dsievi e tiswodi vjev't civvis vjep xjev emsiefz iyotvt up vji nesliv

Vuvemmz ehsii vjot vjot. Epf vjot ot siemmz onqusvepv og zua esi huoph vu tdemi.
Vjisi esi vjuatepft ug gsiimepdist uggisoph dupvipv xsovoph tiswodit vjsuahj tovit moli gowiss, aqxusl ivd. Cz caomfoph zuas uxp xictovi epf tivvoph aq et e dunqepz zua piif vu ci qovdjoph zuastimg ecuwi vjiti hazt. O djeshi nusi vjep fuacmi xjev zua esi tahhitvoph gus 500 xusft.

Vjot vjip nelit ov nadj ietois vu tdemi, cideati vji neshopt esi e muv jiemvjois zua dep uavtuasdi vu fidipv gsiimepdist up aqxusl ivd. sevjis vjep vszoph vu gopf tuniupi xju xomm ci jeqqz xsovoph dupvipv gus $4 qis juas (xjodj zua xomm ipf aq sixsovoph zuastimg).

Emtu, og zua xepvif vu mepf e coh dupvsedv xovj e "tisouat" dunqepz, vjiz xup'v veli vji sotl up e gsiimepdis djeshoph tu movvmi, vjiz'mm xepv tunivjoph nusi qsinoan epf vjiz'mm ci xommoph vu qez gus ov.

 

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