Just listed my first eBook on Kindle, get it FREE :)

[ZMan26]

edited : too many trolls and this thread became time consuming, those of you who tried to give a real feedback, thanks for the support, and if you're a troll, get a life

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Hi guys

Im so excited lol just released my first kindle ebook, its called "ebay selling mastery 2016" see it here.

In it I shared how I make money with ebay, including some awesome resources I use to get products from...

I currently sell it for 99 cents on amazon kindle, will soon increase the price to $9.99,
however, I will give it to Fastlane forum members for free !

I will appreciate it if you leave a review after you read it

If you're interested, just leave your email or pm me.

Zion.

 

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[Charnell]

You couldn't even capitalize your title in the very first line of the introduction.

 

[Lex DeVille]

Hi guys

Im so excited lol just released my first kindle ebook, its called "ebay selling mastery 2016" see it here.

In it I shared how I make money with ebay, including some awesome resources I use to get products from...

I currently sell it for 99 cents on amazon kindle, will soon increase the price to $9.99,
however, I will give it to Fastlane forum members for free !

I will appreciate it if you leave a review after you read it

If you're interested, just leave your email or pm me.

Zion.

Good job taking action.

I think I saw probably 10 to 15 errors by the time I reached the Look Inside.

The cover is kind of cool, but also kind of hard to read.

If I made it beyond the title you'd lose me at the description.

Something I'd wonder...

If you're an ebay master, why don't you have enough money for proofreading and editing?

 

[InformationH]

Similar books are selling for 2.99. I can find others that are actually free. Why do you think you can eventually increase your selling price from .99 to 9.99? What value are you giving that others aren't? If you believe this ebook really is worth that much you need to convince your customers that it is and then actually deliver or you will quickly get bad reviews

 

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[ZMan26]

Good job taking action.

I think I saw probably 10 to 15 errors by the time I reached the Look Inside.

The cover is kind of cool, but also kind of hard to read.

If I made it beyond the title you'd lose me at the description.

Something I'd wonder...

If you're an ebay master, why don't you have enough money for proofreading and editing?

I never said im a "master" I make enough money reselling items there are expenses too

About the spelling, I want it to be a best selling book, not a best written book

Im not an author and its not a novel, its a guide to make money on ebay (that sells for 99 cents btw)

thanks for the comments though

 

[ZMan26]

Similar books are selling for 2.99. I can find others that are actually free. Why do you think you can eventually increase your selling price from .99 to 9.99? What value are you giving that others aren't? If you believe this ebook really is worth that much you need to convince your customers that it is and then actually deliver or you will quickly get bad reviews

lol. first off everyone here on this forum get it for free.
Second, I provided more value in my ebook than in all of these ebooks combined.

most of them are "step by step guides" to register and ebay account, they are a joke, I read them to see who im competing with.

 

[ZMan26]

You couldn't even capitalize your title in the very first line of the introduction.

thanks for the comment, fixed

 

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[InformationH]

lol. I provided more value in my ebook than in all of these ebooks combined.

most of them are "step by step guides" to register and ebay account, they are a joke, I read them to see who im competing with.

Wasn't disagreeing with the value you offer because I haven't read your book or the competitors. But you do need to make it clear to your potential customers your book is better. From just reading your description I don't see the value you supply that others don't. Maybe try in your description being very clear on what makes your product better/different then your competitors

 

[ZMan26]

Wasn't disagreeing with the value you offer because I haven't read your book or the competitors. But you do need to make it clear to your potential customers your book is better. From just reading your description I don't see the value you supply that others don't. Maybe try in your description being very clear on what makes your product better/different then your competitors

Good idea, rewriting the description

 

[Charnell]

I never said im a "master"

Come on, man. Your book has "Mastery" in the title. How can you write a book called [whatever] Mastery without being a master? That's teetering on the deception line.

About the spelling, I want it to be a best selling book, not a best written book

Do you think songs that have great lyrics but shitty production make it to the radio? No, because no matter how great the song could be lyrically, the actual sound quality is shit.

Im not an author and its not a novel, its a guide to make money on ebay (that sells for 99 cents btw)

People go on the Kindle Books section of Amazon to buy books. Even if your content is up to snuff like you believe it is, your apathy will reflect in the reviews that say something like
2/5 stars
"It helped me out, but damn this author could use an editor. It was really hard to read. Not worth $0.99 because of that!"

 

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[SweetTooth]

About the spelling, I want it to be a best selling book, not a best written book

Way to plagiarize Grant Cardone's quote. He didn't go out of his way to make the spelling in his book shitty though.

 

[ZMan26]

Way to plagiarize Grant Cardone's quote. He didn't go out of his way to make the spelling in his book shitty though.

I love it though, he didn't procrastinate like most people
I wrote this book in a few hours and it gives a great value to ebay sellers guaranteed.

Besides if you're gonna be a hater read the book first, there are no spelling mistakes at all im just saying if there are any, I don't really care, im not Paulo Coehlo im just writing tutorials.

 

[ZCP]

Argue with the very people you want to get feedback from before launching for 9.99??
3 C's: Create value. Customer service. Care.

 

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[EE7]

I wrote this book in a few hours and it gives a great value to ebay sellers guaranteed.

Great you took action and wrote the book in a few hours! The thing is you can't make it look like you only put a few hours into it.

 

[Belcher]

I love it though, he didn't procrastinate like most people
I wrote this book in a few hours and it gives a great value to ebay sellers guaranteed.

Besides if you're gonna be a hater read the book first, there are no spelling mistakes at all im just saying if there are any, I don't really care, im not Paulo Coehlo im just writing tutorials.

Nobody is hating, friend.

I'll be reading it and leaving a review.

If YOU were buying a book, don't you think it'd at least be considerate to have correct spelling and grammar?

You might find you devalue your content if the spelling or grammar isn't correct..

I think you should care.. Especially if you're charging people!

Hope it sells well

 

[mayana]

Hi guys

Im so excited lol just released my first kindle ebook, its called "ebay selling mastery 2016" see it here.

In it I shared how I make money with ebay, including some awesome resources I use to get products from...

I currently sell it for 99 cents on amazon kindle, will soon increase the price to $9.99,
however, I will give it to Fastlane forum members for free !

I will appreciate it if you leave a review after you read it

If you're interested, just leave your email or pm me.

Zion.

I guess I missed the free day to download the book, so I just downloaded the sample that they offer.

I would agree that your time will be well spent making your guide easier to read. There are some typos and grammatical errors that could possibly make it difficult for your readers to understand your message. If your guide is really good and it is well-written, then it could be a top seller in your category - why wouldn't you want to capitalize on that?

I've published many books on Amazon, some of them "guides" such as yours. With so many people providing similar information, you have to make sure that yours is presented in an easy-to-understand fashion. Otherwise, your readers aren't going to be able to learn what you want to teach them.

One thing that I've done if I really want to know what people think is run the free book promo for a few days. The more free downloads you get, the more likely it is that someone will leave some feedback and let me know. There is nothing better than a completely honest positive comment by a complete stranger telling me that my book helped them in some way. And if it is negative, it might sting for a while, but I will know that I possibly need to revisit my book and make some changes.

(After the initial period, I don't pay much attention to negative reviews. There will always be people who don't like what I've done, and some that do.)

Most of us here aren't trying to attack you, but provide constructive criticism to help you make your product even better.

Good luck on your sales and in your E-bay business.

 

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[SweetTooth]

I love it though, he didn't procrastinate like most people
I wrote this book in a few hours and it gives a great value to ebay sellers guaranteed.

Besides if you're gonna be a hater read the book first, there are no spelling mistakes at all im just saying if there are any, I don't really care, im not Paulo Coehlo im just writing tutorials.

You asked for feedback and you call me a hater for pointing out that your spelling is shit and you used Grant Cardone's quote as your own? Good luck with this thread dude.

 

[SweetTooth]

P.S. Grant Cardone has the choice to make the spelling in his book shitty. He already has an audience and knows how to market. You don't. It's almost like you thought that if you made the spelling purposely bad it would sell.

 

[ZMan26]

You asked for feedback and you call me a hater for pointing out that your spelling is shit and you used Grant Cardone's quote as your own? Good luck with this thread dude.

Where did I ask for your feedback ? I said im looking for amazon reviews, English isnt my mothers language and I speak 4 languages besides that, so whats your point bro ? just go hate somewhere else I aint got time for your negativity

 

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[X01]

“He has a right to criticize, who has a heart to help.”
― Abraham Lincoln

 

[X01]

“He has a right to criticize, who has a heart to help.”
― Abraham Lincoln

"Most people have been brainwashed into believing that their job is to copyedit the world, not to design it." --Seth Godin

 

[ZMan26]

Not charging anybody, maybe I wasn't clear enough.

I wrote a kindle ebook and published it on amazon.

The purpose of the ebook : giving ebay sellers new ideas / sources for products, plus tips on product research (products demand and so on)

If anyone interested in getting it FOR FREE, message me, i'll be glad to give it to you, in fact im even paying for it myself most times ( through amazon "gift" option).

In return, I will appreciate if you leave your review on AMAZON to help me get more reviews.

I know it's not written like a best selling novel, if you are looking for a masterpiece, I recommend Paulo Coehlos' books ( the Alchemist is my fav)

Thanks everybody

 

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[jon.a]

Maybe these folks should leave an honest review on Amazon rather than trying to help you here.

 

[ZMan26]

Maybe these folks should leave an honest review on Amazon rather than trying to help you here.

THANK YOU SO MUCH, lol.

EVEN IF YOUR REVIEW WILL SAY : " HI MAN, NICE BOOK HATED YOUR SPELLING" I will still appreciate it guys, I need amazon reviews. lol.

 

[jon.a]

THANK YOU SO MUCH, lol.

EVEN IF YOUR REVIEW WILL SAY : " HI MAN, NICE BOOK HATED YOUR SPELLING" I will still appreciate it guys, I need amazon reviews. lol.

I need a face palm meme.

 

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[ZMan26]

I need a face palm meme.

keep it for next time, you'll need it here

 

[EE7]

I need a face palm meme.

How's this?

 

[ZCP]

Funny, you never really know what you are going to get out of a thread. This one had more turns than the road to Hana.
+1, [HASHTAG]#lovedit[/HASHTAG], would reread!

 

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[ddzc]

keep it for next time, you'll need it here

Did you come here looking for 1 star reviews?

 

[ZMan26]

Did you come here looking for 1 star reviews?

Came here to give some people a copy of my free awesome book that made me money on ebay

Met some haters like you, that for some reason spend time bashing my stuff without even reading them

Vs going out there and actually doing something yourself...

Thanks though, I need more haters