As a software guy, never really do any marketing stuffs, esp. copywriting. After hanging long enough here, I realised that it is a skill that I must pick up and master it.
Hence, I started reading now (doing the 30-day challenge) but there is so much to learn, and will take it sometime.
Meanwhile, I got few ideaa on my head that I want to validate them. So, I started creating a landing page and copywrite it myself with the limited copywriting knowledge that I have now. I hope you guys point out what I did wrong (or right) and how I can improve it better. These feedback will be very valuable lesson for me. TIA.
Here it goes (sorry for the long posting):
Here's how... and why
Dear Parents,
As parent like you, my spouse & I am as concern as you when it comes to our kids' education, and inevitably their exam result. Over the years of experience with our 3 kids & tons of research, here are our working "formulas" to help them to get into top schools/class:
Yes, the "How" is just that simple. And, it works!
It may sounds simple, but definitely not easy to do, especially the Monitor step. Unlike the first 2 steps, Monitor step requires constant effort from you and your kid. We truly understand the pain... and that's why we created an application that will make your life (as a parent) and your kid's life easier.
Here's why you should have it ...
Sound Great? Ready to help your kid to score in exam?
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$29.90/year for first 100 subscribers!
$39.90/year for first 500 subscribers!
After that, you just pay the usual price:
$9.90/month or $79.90/year
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Special Bonus: +1 month FREE (total 13 months), and only pay when 1-month (free) is over
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Not ready to commit?
We really think that our tool can help parents like you, just like how it helps us.
So, we want you to experience it for FREE for 1 month. If you find the tool useful for you and your kid, you can always subscribe later, just$9.90/mth or $79.90/year!
Subscribe 1-Month FREE (note: red button with white text)
After that, you just pay the usual price:
$9.90/month or $79.90/year
Hence, I started reading now (doing the 30-day challenge) but there is so much to learn, and will take it sometime.
Meanwhile, I got few ideaa on my head that I want to validate them. So, I started creating a landing page and copywrite it myself with the limited copywriting knowledge that I have now. I hope you guys point out what I did wrong (or right) and how I can improve it better. These feedback will be very valuable lesson for me. TIA.
Here it goes (sorry for the long posting):
How to prepare your kid to score in exam!
if you'd like your kid to score in the exam... and... able to go to the top school or class, then you'll want to read every single word in this message.
if you'd like your kid to score in the exam... and... able to go to the top school or class, then you'll want to read every single word in this message.
Here's how... and why
Dear Parents,
As parent like you, my spouse & I am as concern as you when it comes to our kids' education, and inevitably their exam result. Over the years of experience with our 3 kids & tons of research, here are our working "formulas" to help them to get into top schools/class:
- Set A Goal : Discuss with your kid and "negotiate" a realistic goal with mutual agreement, something that can stretch (but not over-stretch) their potential. Kids are just like you, you can't force them to go against their will, or it may backfire. Identify the goal in concrete terms and put it in writing to strengthen their resolve (and remind them occasionally). And, of course, a little bit of reward won't harm at all, if they achieve the goal.
- Create a Study Plan : Again, discuss with your kid and come out with a study plan like how much time they should spend on home work and assessment. Do take note of the time they need to spend on other activities such as enrichment classes, sport, leisure and etc. So, DO NOT overload them, and be flexible.
- Monitor - Practise & Analyse : The best way to assess your kid's understanding & ability on a subject is to let them work on assessment books or past year exam papers, especially the top schools (even school teachers are doing this). As the saying goes, practise makes perfect. Make these practices part of their study plan, so that it becomes a routine (but again, don't overload them). But don't just stop here. As parents, you should help your kid to improve & do better. So, help them to identify their weakness areas, improve them and seek help if need be.
Yes, the "How" is just that simple. And, it works!
It may sounds simple, but definitely not easy to do, especially the Monitor step. Unlike the first 2 steps, Monitor step requires constant effort from you and your kid. We truly understand the pain... and that's why we created an application that will make your life (as a parent) and your kid's life easier.
Here's why you should have it ...
- You can setup plan for your kid & track their progress - number of tests taken, when & amount of time taken, and their scores
- Gain access to many top school past year test papers - interactive test papers - no more printing and/or piles of papers flying around
- No more manual marking or checking for answers - system will just do that for you automatically - so that you can save time to do better things
- Know your kid's weakness areas - the system will highlight that - so that you can work on them together with your kids
- Help your kid to learn better time management skill for exam - we track the time spent on each question and warn them
- Stuck with a difficult question? We experienced that too - we will show you how other kids are solving the question by showing their working - we also aim to build a community of parents & students that will you & your kid can connect to ask question and seek explanation/help.
Sound Great? Ready to help your kid to score in exam?
Subscribe NOW and start enjoying all these benefits....
Special Offer!
$19.90/year for first 50 subscribers! SOLD OUT
$29.90/year for first 100 subscribers!
$39.90/year for first 500 subscribers!
After that, you just pay the usual price:
$9.90/month or $79.90/year
Subscribe NOW! $29.90/year (note: red button with white text)
Special Bonus: +1 month FREE (total 13 months), and only pay when 1-month (free) is over
FREE 1-month Subscription
Not ready to commit?
We really think that our tool can help parents like you, just like how it helps us.
So, we want you to experience it for FREE for 1 month. If you find the tool useful for you and your kid, you can always subscribe later, just$9.90/mth or $79.90/year!
Subscribe 1-Month FREE (note: red button with white text)
After that, you just pay the usual price:
$9.90/month or $79.90/year
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