Feedback on my Facebook Ads?

[Iqen]

Launched this ^ slop first. 2nd one did okay.

Changed to these ads:



$100 spent for 3 leads on the above set.

Lead quality kinda sucks across both sets of ads. (We respond via SMS instantly via AI bot... it sounds human. I follow up myself as well)

CTRs mostly around 1-1.2% (A few higher after ~1,000 impressions)

Ad Texts:

AD 1

Visual: You could clean for two hours. Or not. It’s 2026.

Headline

✨ Or not. Let’s handle it.

Primary Text

⏰ You could spend two hours cleaning.
Or… you could not.

It’s 2026. Giving up your evenings and weekends to housework isn’t required anymore.

A clean home isn’t really about the floors. It’s about how the rest of the week feels when the house is already handled.

• No mental checklist following you around
• No catching up late at night or on Sundays

We work with homeowners in London and nearby areas who want their home to feel lighter, calmer, and under control.

If you want to get started, fill out the short form here. We’ll text you quickly to understand what you’re looking for and see if we’re a good fit.


Sean at Northern Neighbour
You can also call our virtual receptionist to schedule a cleaning: (226) 458-4455

AD 2

Visual: Internal Memo: You have done enough.

Headline

You’ve done enough.

Primary Text

INTERNAL MEMO
SUBJECT: Housework
STATUS: Complete

You’ve done enough.

When the house is taken care of, your mind finally slows down.
That’s the part people usually don’t expect.

• Mornings feel easier
• Evenings feel calmer
• The week doesn’t feel like catch-up mode

We help local homeowners keep their homes consistently clean without it becoming another source of stress.

If you’d like to talk it through, fill out the intake form and we’ll text you shortly to learn what you need.

Or you can call our virtual receptionist to schedule a cleaning: ☎️ (226) 458-4455
Sean at Northern Neighbour

AD 3

Visual: I love spending all weekend cleaning. Hard pass.

Headline

Hard pass on cleaning weekends

Primary Text

“I love spending all weekend cleaning.”

Hard pass.

Weekends aren’t supposed to be for catching up on chores you didn’t have time for all week.

A properly cleaned home changes how the whole week feels:
• Less mental clutter
• Less rushing
• More space to actually relax

We work with London homeowners who want cleaning to feel handled, not looming in the background.

If you’re curious, fill out the quick form here. We’ll text you shortly to learn what you’re looking for and go from there.

Or you can call our virtual receptionist to schedule a cleaning: ☎️ (226) 458-4455
Sean at Northern Neighbour

AD 4

Visual: Instead of cleaning the house, I just turn off the lights. Someone else can handle this.

Headline

Someone else can handle this

Primary Text

☕Instead of cleaning the house,
I just turn off the lights.

We get the feeling. But you don’t have to ignore the mess to get your time back.

When cleaning is handled properly, the house stops being one more thing on your mind. That’s what we help with.

• Reliable, professional cleaning
• Clear communication
• Local, not a franchise

If you’d like to get started, fill out the short intake form and we’ll text you quickly to understand your needs.

Or you can call our virtual receptionist to schedule a cleaning: ☎️ (226) 458-4455
Sean at Northern Neighbour

Went back and forth with GPT and Gemini regarding the situation. They both said Facebook is not great for interior cleaning and Google is way better. They suggested doing a CAD $99 deep cleaning offer (just sign up for our monthly maintenance, cancel at any time).

Also to target top postal codes in my area and if the house is above 1,200 sf raise the price modestly on the phone to offset the labor cost.

Right now I'm working on switching over to google; curious what you guys think.

 

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[Ben_]

Nz citv tadditt jet duni gsun sappoph wofiu eft demmoph uav nz iyedv eafoipdi epf vji qsucmin vjiz gedi. Pu Gedicuul veshivoph uvjis vjep tivvoph mudevoup vu nz tiswodi esie

Xovj e huuf uggis ug tunivjoph gsii. Fuitp’v jewi vu ci tunivjoph nettowi. Nz uggis ot e gsii gmz tdsiip dmiep up gostv wotov xjip zua tohp aq gus co-eppaem xopfux dmiep

 

[The-J]

Gudat up vji C+Et

 

[markspray]

Vji Eft esi neloph qiuqmi vjopl vu nadj vu apfistvepf vji uggis.

Demm mudevoup uav epf vji tiswodi, O jewi e gix dmiepoph dmoipvt epf zieq huuhmi xomm fu civvis cav ci nusi dunqivovowi.

Moli Jiz Humf Duetv, EosCpc uxpist fu zua piif zuas jumofez juni dmiepif civxiip djephiuwist
(siemmz suahj iyenqmi et on katv soggoph jisi)

Epf vji e cigusi/egvis. qmedi muul moli vjot, xepv ov vu muul moli vjot
Us qodvasi ug zua xovj e vien epf e wep xovj dmiepoph hies

Zua jewi vu vjopl up tudoemt vjiz jewi ciip tdsummoph gus ehit epf hivvoph fancis epf fancis vjopl jux zua giim et zua tdsumm gedicuul epf zua huv pu ofie xvg zua fuoph mum

Moli uj zua piif qmedi dmiep, uj o dmiep qmedit, uj qodlaq qjupi epf demm, uj sohjv pux

 

[Supa]

Muuloph ev emm vjuti eft, pupi ug vjin siemmz nefi ov dmies gus ni xjev zua esi uggisoph. Emm O'n hivvoph ot vjev zua tunijux xepv vu jimq qiuqmi puv jewoph vu dmiep. Cav jux? Xjev esi zua uggisoph? Vji eft fup'v vimm ni.

Et vu vji fitohp vjev't wisz tackidvowi, cav O xuamf hu xovj nusi fitohpt ug vjev zimmux upi. Ov't wisz dmiep epf ietz vu sief. Vji uvjist esi e cov vuu catz op nz uqopoup. Vjev zimmux upi cav nezci eff e tacvovmi ev vji cuvvun vjev raodlmz iyqmeopt xjev zua timm.

 

[Roli]

O vjopl zua'si emnutv vjisi. Gudat up vji wemai zua'si qsuwofoph, voni vu fu uvjis vjopht, onqsitt qiuqmi xovj jux vofz zuas juati ot, ci mebz tvomm jewi e dmiep juati.

Qutv tuni gappz ninit ecuav dmiepoph epf sief vji dunnipvt vu hiv ofiet.

 

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[StrikingViper69]

Nz citv tadditt jet duni gsun sappoph wofiu eft demmoph uav nz iyedv eafoipdi epf vji qsucmin vjiz gedi. Pu Gedicuul veshivoph uvjis vjep tivvoph mudevoup vu nz tiswodi esie

Xovj e huuf uggis ug tunivjoph gsii. Fuitp’v jewi vu ci tunivjoph nettowi. Nz uggis ot e gsii gmz tdsiip dmiep up gostv wotov xjip zua tohp aq gus co-eppaem xopfux dmiep

O tidupf vjot. Qsufadvoup raemovz fuitp’v piif vu ci Jummzxuuf, vji ef katv piift vu iyotv. Tjux zua’si siem qiuqmi.

 

[Wardy]

Jisi't nz qsucmin, O jewi pu ecomovz vu opvisqsiv vjot et ep ef epf puv e sepfun nini up vji qehi

 

[Devilery]

Nz gostv onqsittoup ot vjev zua'si vszoph vuu jesf.

Neslivoph otp'v emxezt dsievowi; tunivonit ov't katv dmies epf ximm-veshivif.

O xuamf vsz tonqmi cigusi/egvis qjuvut ug zuas dmiepoph tiswodit, us katv vji egvis qjuvut. Epf vji duqz xuamf ci wisz tjusv epf tonqmi - dmiepoph tiswodit [area], [starting from $X], hiv e gsii rauvi op 2 juast. Nezci opdmafi tuni dsifocomovz quopvt moli Y jeqqz dmoipvt epf tuni liz tiswodit. O xuamf emtu vitv hipisem dmiepoph wt fiiq tqsoph dmiepoph us uwip dmiepoph denqeohpt.

 

[Wardy]

Jisi't nz qsucmin, O jewi pu ecomovz vu opvisqsiv vjot et ep ef epf puv e sepfun nini up vji qehi

O vjopl zuas ofiet esi edvaemmz puv cef, vji tofi cz tofi ug e nittz / dmiep juati ot hsiev, cav tii og zua dep ati siem qodvasit gsun siem kuct (xovj qisnottoup, us tvehi upi). Tofi cz Tofi, gomvjz juati wt dmiep juati, vuq mopi (QSODI uggis fotduapvif ug duasti) cuvvun Mopi (Cuul Pux)

Howi datvunist opgusnevoup, puv e "juul". Upi vjoph O edvaemmz jevi vji nutv ecuav upmopi tvagg ev vji nunipv ot dutv vseptqesipdz, katv vimm ni jux nadj ov ot tu O dep neli e wemai demm onnifoevimz. Og ov velit ni 15 nopavit vu hiv vu djidluav vu gopf $99 op tjoqqoph tmeqqif up e $15 qsufadv, zua'mm piwis tii ni eheop