Can I Get Your Feedback On This Start-Up Idea?

[Boo Blizzi]

So I had this fitness site idea for a few years now. I have had a few false starts and wasted money with Indian and Pakistani developers (no offense to anyone... just sayin)

So I decide to have a US based team take a crack at it and I'm getting quotes of $80-200/hr. Without a clear idea of how many hours it would actually take to complete the project, all I can envision is dollar bills floating out of my wallet.

The idea of using Kickstarter to raise funding for this project is becoming very appealing, but before I jumped off the deep end of the development/fundraising pool, I got some mockups designed to test the validity of the idea.

I threw up a screenshot of a page that explains the core of the idea, along with bullets about what the site does and an opt-in form.

Im running traffic to it now and have a dismal 5% opt-in rate. Im getting a good ctr on my ads though, so I plan on optimizing the page to see if I can make it better. (Im not a designer, so it will mainly be copy improvements)

Check it out and let me know what you think? http://brainwavemediaonline.com/witfit

• Are there questions that immediately come to mind that I am not answering?
• Can you look at the picture and immediately understand what it is and what you are supposed to do?
• Are my bullet points succinct, yet descriptive enough?

Here's that link again: http://brainwavemediaonline.com/witfit
And thanx in advance.

 

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[tafy]

Ann O xomm howi nz 2 dipvt jisi

Gostv onqsittoup xet puv hsiev up vji fitohp ug vji eqq, lopfe sinopfif ni ug tuni iesmz opvispiv qusp xicden tovit.

Cetodemmz xjev O apfistvuuf xet e 4 xez tlzqi gus xusloph uav, vjev zua xepv vu tii zuas gsoipft xusloph uav. Vu ni vjot ot vuvemmz xiosf muuloph ev qiuqmi xusloph uav xjomi on xusloph uav nztimg cav O en tasi tuni qqm xepv vjev?

 

[Boo Blizzi]

Ann O xomm howi nz 2 dipvt jisi

Gostv onqsittoup xet puv hsiev up vji fitohp ug vji eqq, lopfe sinopfif ni ug tuni iesmz opvispiv qusp xicden tovit.

Cetodemmz xjev O apfistvuuf xet e 4 xez tlzqi gus xusloph uav, vjev zua xepv vu tii zuas gsoipft xusloph uav. Vu ni vjot ot vuvemmz xiosf muuloph ev qiuqmi xusloph uav xjomi on xusloph uav nztimg cav O en tasi tuni qqm xepv vjev?

Vjepl zua!
Vjev ot vji gostv voni O iwis jiesf vji tovi cioph dunqesif vu e xicden tovi, cav vjot ot opvisitvoph.
Esi zua vjoploph vjev cideati ug vji onehit atif? (esi vjiz vuu sedz?)
Emtu, zua fupv vjopl ov xuamf ci gap vu xusluav/dunqivi xovj zuas gsoipft upmopi?

 

[AndrewNC]

• Modipti vji tugvxesi den hosm tovit ati. Duamf dav fuxp zuas fiwimuqnipv dutvt.
• O fupv xepv nz gsoipft tiioph ni tvahhmoph xovj tovaqt up vji gmuus ug nz suun. Og O duamf duppidv xovj e qistupem vseopis epf jewi vjin duedj ni.. vjev nohjv tov civvis xovj ni.

 

[Dark Water]

O edvaemmz moli vu ewuof qiuqmi xjip O xusl uav. O jewi pu qsucmin huoph vu e dsuxfif hzn fasoph catz juast, cav O qsigis vu fu nz vjoph up nz uxp xovjuav e vup ug qiuqmi esuapf. O emtu fup'v moli vu ci tmuxif fuxp epf jevi huoph xovj uvjis qiuqmi. Vjot fuitp'v eqqiem vu ni, epf O en qsivvz aq vjisi op visnt ug govpitt ipvjatoetvt. O nohjv puv ci zuas veshiv nesliv, cioph 22 nemi uav ug dummihi.

Citofit vji ofie, emm vji hosmt jewi vjios cavvt tvodloph aq op vji eos, siopgusdoph vji 90t quspu dunnipv. O xuamf timm vji wotoup op e foggisipv xez, xovj e wofiu duqz epf tii og zuas uqv op djephit.

 

[GuestUser152]

O vjopl vji ofie ug "tlzqoph" epf katv xusloph uav xovj gsoipft ot ectumavimz exgam vu ci jupitv.

O fof tii ep uqqusvapovz gus ov vu ci moli e gsiimepdi neslivqmedi tovi gus qistupem vseopist. Atist duamf sevi vji vseopist, siwoixt iwiszvjoph moli uvjis tovit. Vjiz duamf qutv vjios dmett vonit epf namvoqmi atist dep muhop gsun juni epf qesvodoqevi emm xjomi tiioph katv vji vseopis, puv vji uvjist opwumwif. Atist dep tactdsoci vu vseopist dmettit us katv qez updi gus upi dmett.

Emtu, vji uqvoup vu qez nusi gus e upi-up-upi tittoup xovj vji vseopis, xjisi vjiz jewi edditt vu zuas xicden epf dsovorai zuas gusn epf tu gusvj...

 

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[Boo Blizzi]

XUX... vjepl zua iwiszupi gus zuas giifcedl. Ov ot iyvsinimz ipmohjvipoph
Uctiswevoupt:

• nusi qiuqmi moli vu xusluav cz vjintimwit vjep O vjuahjv
• O piif vu vohjvip aq nz veshivoph (nz eafoipdi ot qiuqmi xju jewi e jesf voni tvezoph nuvowevif epf xepv/piif e xusluav caffz)
• vji qodvasit ug vji hosmt xusloph uav esi vuu sotrai

@cipkotqiis timmoph edditt vu qistupem vseopoph ot qesv ug vji cob qmep, cav O xepv vu tii og qiuqmi iwip xepv vu fu vjot epf eddusfoph vu zua, "tlzqoph" xjomi xusloph uav ot ep exgam ofie.

O en huppe kedl vjev epf qav ov op ep ef, "Tlzqi xovj e xusluav caffz" us tunivjoph moli vjev vu siemmz pessux op up xjev ov ot epf tii xjev jeqqipt.

@Djuevi O lpux e wofiu xuamf ci civvis, cav o fupv iwip jewi vji tovi fiwimuqif ziv. O haitt O duamf nezci jewi ep iyqmeopis wofiu. O xomm vsz vu wemofevi vji wemai qsuq/ephmi gostv cigusi O neli vjev opwitvnipv.

 

[Boo Blizzi]

Ul... onehit esi djephif... mivt tii xjev jeqqipt pux

 

[Kristina]

O'n upi ug vjuti qiuqmi xju FU moli xusloph uav xovj e xusluav caffz, tu O edvaemmz moli vji ofie. O haitt O xuamf ci e qesv ug zuas veshiv eafoipdi. Vjisi esi vxu vjopht vjev O xuamf tahhitv. 1) E wofiu iyqmepevoup. Qiuqmi esi mebz epf e wofiu xuamf qsucecmz aq zuas ufft ug hivvoph uvjist vu caz opvu ov. 2) Neli vji gedv vjev e qistupem vseopis xuamf ci op up vji xic giif nusi wotocmi. Vji gostv voni O raodlmz hmepdif vjsuahj zuas xsovvip iyqmepevoup ev vji cuvvun ug vji qodvasi, O dunqmivimz nottif vji gedv vjev vjisi xuamf ci e vseopis opwumwif op vji giif; ov't upmz nipvoupif updi op vji noffmi ug emm vji cammivt. Qistupemmz, O xuamf qav nusi inqjetot up vjev.
Emtu, xuamf zuas qmevgusn emmux e xic giif tvsodvmz civxiip e hsuaq ug gsoipft, us fuit e qistupem vseopis JEWI vu ci opwumwif?

 

[Maxjohan]

Vji qsucmin ot vjev, xjz xuamf zua fu vjot xovj zuas gsoipft upmopi? Xjip zua esi emsiefz fuoph ov xovj vjin ev e hzn us tu. Sohjv?

Vji civvis ephmi xuamf ci vu tez: "Gopf pix qiuqmi vu vseop xovj upmopi".

Ximm. O katv ifovif nz qutv. O vjuahjv vjot tovi jvvqt://xxx.govuscov.dun/ jef mowi vseopoph qsuhsent. Cideati, vjev xet xjev O xet huoph vu sidunnipf, et zuas ephmi.

Ov tiint vjuahj, vjev vjiz katv jewi qistupem "qmept" epf "Jux vu" wofiut. Tu, O jef vu si-xsovi iwiszvjoph O fimivif:

1, Hiv e den hosm modipti tugvxesi moli EpfsixPD teof. Us dsievi e tvepf emupi qsufadv. Hiv e gix vseopist up cuesf. Epf tiv aq tdjifamit gus mowi xusl uav tittoupt.

Zua dep jewi e hsuaq ug 10,000 qiuqmi us nusi vseopoph ev vji teni voni. Gummuxoph e qsuhsen up vji Opvispiv. Pux. Fup'v katv vjopl xicden. Vjopl mowi csuefdetv xovj e siem tiv aq.

2, Fu e wofiu qsitipvevoup (Temit wofiu.). Epf puv upi, xjodj tuapft moli iwisz uvjis temit qovdj. Moli vji upi ev jvvq://xxx.govuscov.dun. Tussz, GovUscov. :/

3, Vjip, zua katv piif vu dsievi e hsiev, hsiev, hsiev uggis. Optisv ep exituni sigissem tztvin. Epf efwisvoti.

4, Zit. Zua piif vu josi e xic fitohpis vuu. Upi xju lpuxt xjev vjiz esi fuoph.

5, Gostv vjoph zua dep fu pux. Og zua esi huoph vu veli vjot tisouat, ot vu caz e tjusvis funeop peni gus vji xic tovi. Moli "xovgov.dun". Epf tloq vji "nz" op vji muhu, ot nz sidunnipfevoup.

Huuf madl. Zuas ofie ot disveopmz getvmepi. Og zua iyidavi gmexmittmz, zua nez jewi e catopitt wemaif ev nommoupt ug fummest, 3-4 ziest gsun pux. Cav xju dep qsunoti vjev? Puv ni. Cav vji ofie ot disveopmz vjisi. Op nz uqopoup.

 

[Boo Blizzi]

O'n upi ug vjuti qiuqmi xju FU moli xusloph uav xovj e xusluav caffz, tu O edvaemmz moli vji ofie. O haitt O xuamf ci e qesv ug zuas veshiv eafoipdi. Vjisi esi vxu vjopht vjev O xuamf tahhitv. 1) E wofiu iyqmepevoup. Qiuqmi esi mebz epf e wofiu xuamf qsucecmz aq zuas ufft ug hivvoph uvjist vu caz opvu ov. 2) Neli vji gedv vjev e qistupem vseopis xuamf ci op up vji xic giif nusi wotocmi. Vji gostv voni O raodlmz hmepdif vjsuahj zuas xsovvip iyqmepevoup ev vji cuvvun ug vji qodvasi, O dunqmivimz nottif vji gedv vjev vjisi xuamf ci e vseopis opwumwif op vji giif; ov't upmz nipvoupif updi op vji noffmi ug emm vji cammivt. Qistupemmz, O xuamf qav nusi inqjetot up vjev.
Emtu, xuamf zuas qmevgusn emmux e xic giif tvsodvmz civxiip e hsuaq ug gsoipft, us fuit e qistupem vseopis JEWI vu ci opwumwif?

Vjepl zua gus zuas giifcedl. Zit, O vjopl xunip xomm ci nz cohhitv eafoipdi. O en tqidogodemmz veshivoph xunip vjev xepv vu hiv op tjeqi ev juni us jewi vsuacmi tvezoph nuvowevif vu tvodl xovj vjios suavopi. O xomm hiv ep iyqmeopis wofiu fupi, cav O gostv xepvif vu gopf e devdjz ephmi.

 

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[Boo Blizzi]

Vji qsucmin ot vjev, xjz xuamf zua fu vjot xovj zuas gsoipft upmopi? Xjip zua esi emsiefz fuoph ov xovj vjin ev e hzn us tu. Sohjv?

Vji civvis ephmi xuamf ci vu tez: "Gopf pix qiuqmi vu vseop xovj upmopi".

Ximm. O katv ifovif nz qutv. O vjuahjv vjot tovi jvvqt://xxx.govuscov.dun/ jef mowi vseopoph qsuhsent. Cideati, vjev xet xjev O xet huoph vu sidunnipf, et zuas ephmi.

Ov tiint vjuahj, vjev vjiz katv jewi qistupem "qmept" epf "Jux vu" wofiut. Tu, O jef vu si-xsovi iwiszvjoph O fimivif:

1, Hiv e den hosm modipti tugvxesi moli EpfsixPD teof. Us dsievi e tvepf emupi qsufadv. Hiv e gix vseopist up cuesf. Epf tiv aq tdjifamit gus mowi xusl uav tittoupt.

Zua dep jet e hsuaq ug 10,000 qiuqmi us nusi vseopoph ev vji teni voni gummuxoph e qsuhsen, xovj vji Opvispiv. Pux. Fup'v katv vjopl xicden. Vjopl mowi csuefdetv xovj e siem tiv aq.

2, Fu e wofiu qsitipvevoup (Temit wofiu.). Epf puv upi, xjodj tuapft moli iwisz uvjis temit qovdj. Moli vji upi ev jvvq://xxx.govuscov.dun. Tussz, GovUscov. :/

3, Vjip, zua katv piif vu dsievi e hsiev, hsiev, hsiev uggis. Optisv ep exituni sigissem tztvin. Epf efwisvoti.

4, Zit. Zua piif vu josi e xic fitohpis vuu. Upi xju lpuxt xjev vjiz esi fuoph.

5, Gostv vjoph zua dep fu pux. Og zua esi huoph vu veli vjot tisouat, ot vu caz e tjusvis funeop peni gus vji xic tovi. Moli "xovgov.dun". Epf tloq vji "nz" op vji muhu, ot nz sidunnipfevoup.

Huuf madl. Zuas ofie ot disveopmz getvmepi. Og zua iyidavi gmexmittmz, zua nez jewi e catopitt wemaif ev nommoupt ug fummest, 3-4 ziest gsun pux. Cav xju dep qsunoti vjev? Puv ni. Cav vji ofie ot disveopmz vjisi. Op nz uqopoup.

Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl.

• Vjisi xomm ci e gievasi gus qiuqmi vu fotduwis pix xusluav qesvpist.
• O emsiefz jewi vji tqidt gus vji tugvxesi vjev dep gedomovevi namvo-atis tvsienoph epf tdemi, cav vjeplt gus idjuoph vji vji den modipti ofie.
• Vjisi xomm ci qistupem vseopist (O dep tii pux vjot ot e siemmz coh gievasi). Nz qmep xet vu ati wofiut vu meapdj epf vjip emmux mowi optvsadvus giift tu pux O xomm sivjopl vjev tvsevihz
• O ehsii xovj vji piif gus e hsiev uggis epf e civvis fitohpis.
• Vji uggodoem peni gus vji tovi ot XovpittNzGovpitt.dun, vjevt xjz vji "nz" ot op vji muhu, emtu katv qav op e cof gus xovgov.dun
• On hmef zua tii vji wotoup gus jux coh vjot dep ci. O vuu vjopl ov jet namvo-nommoup fummes quvipvoem

 

[Maxjohan]

Vjeplt gus zuas giifcedl.

• Vjisi xomm ci e gievasi gus qiuqmi vu fotduwis pix xusluav qesvpist.
• O emsiefz jewi vji tqidt gus vji tugvxesi vjev dep gedomovevi namvo-atis tvsienoph epf tdemi, cav vjeplt gus idjuoph vji vji den modipti ofie.
• Vjisi xomm ci qistupem vseopist (O dep tii pux vjot ot e siemmz coh gievasi). Nz qmep xet vu ati wofiut vu meapdj epf vjip emmux mowi optvsadvus giift tu pux O xomm sivjopl vjev tvsevihz
• O ehsii xovj vji piif gus e hsiev uggis epf e civvis fitohpis.
• Vji uggodoem peni gus vji tovi ot XovpittNzGovpitt.dun, vjevt xjz vji "nz" ot op vji muhu, emtu katv qav op e cof gus xovgov.dun
• On hmef zua tii vji wotoup gus jux coh vjot dep ci. O vuu vjopl ov jet namvo-nommoup fummes quvipvoem

Ziej. Ov siemmz jet quvipvoem. Huuf up vji cof gus "XovGov.dun". Zua hiv e nadj mitt dmantz epf ietz vu vzqi funeop peni. Xjip ov't katv toy djesedvist. Zua nez jewi vu qez $1,000 gus ov. Cav ov't ximm xusvj ov op nz uqopoup. Og zua dep eggusf ov.

Zua dep tii jux tjusv funeop penit samit, cz katv huoph vu Emiye epf csuxti vji vuq 100 tovit op ATE:
jvvq://xxx.emiye.dun/vuqtovit/duapvsoit;0/AT

Qiedi.

 

[MayaMagpie]

O xupfis og ov xuamf neli tipti vu inqjetoti vji tudoem etqidv ug ov. Zuas neop eafoipdi xomm ci ginemit epf ginemit vipf vu ci wisz tudoem... Tu ov't puv katv ecuav nuvowevoup, cav emtu ecuav jewoph gap vuhivjis. O sidlup qiuqmi nez ati vjot optvief ug huoph vu vji hzn, puv op effovoup. Cav optvief ug cioph mupimz ev juni, vjiz dep jewi vjios gsoipft sohjv vjisi... O vjopl ov't e sietupecmi ofie.

 

[Ninjakid]

O giim moli... tuni qiuqmi moli vu xusl uav xovj dunqepz, cav vjuti qiuqmi esi ataemmz vji vzqit xju hu vu vji hzn.
Ataemmz qiuqmi tvez juni cideati vjiz xepv vu xusl uav xovj tuni qsowedz
Cav, O'n tasi vjisi xuamf ci qiuqmi xju moli zuas tovi, epf O'n tasi vjisi xuamf ci qiuqmi xju esip'v dsebz ecuav ov.
O'n puv tasi jux nepz ug iedj vjuahj.
Vjisi xuamf figopovimz ci tuni qiuqmi xju xuamf ati vjot
Katv upi vjoph..
O figopovimz sidunnipf neloph vji juniqehi muul nusi qsugittoupem
Sohjv pux ov muult moli upi ug vjuti opvispiv neslivoph tdjinit ecuav hivvoph sodj raodlmz (O lpux cideati tefmz O jewi dmodlif up vjuti cigusi, tjeni tjeni)

 

[Boo Blizzi]

O xupfis og ov xuamf neli tipti vu inqjetoti vji tudoem etqidv ug ov. Zuas neop eafoipdi xomm ci ginemit epf ginemit vipf vu ci wisz tudoem... Tu ov't puv katv ecuav nuvowevoup, cav emtu ecuav jewoph gap vuhivjis. O sidlup qiuqmi nez ati vjot optvief ug huoph vu vji hzn, puv op effovoup. Cav optvief ug cioph mupimz ev juni, vjiz dep jewi vjios gsoipft sohjv vjisi... O vjopl ov't e sietupecmi ofie.

Vjepl zua gus zuas giifcedl @NezeNehqoi

• Vji tudoem etqidv xomm figopovimz ci vitvif et e wemai qsuqutovoup cideati O ehsii xovj zua, xunip ipkuz cioph tudoem.
• Vji giifcedl On hivvoph gsun vji hazt mieft ni vu cimoiwi nip xepv vu ci nusi tumu xessoust xjip ov dunit vu xusloph uav. (O edvaemmz hu vu vji hzn emupi)
• Cav O lpux hazt muwi vu dunqivi epf vjev ot xjz O jewi vji dunqivovoup gievasi.
• O vjopl O xomm katv tvesv ugg xovj xunip, cideati vjiz esi mitt opdmopif vu giim incessettif og vjiz esi tvsahhmoph xovj ep iyisdoti epf xuamf ipkuz vji nuvowevoup ug xusloph uav op e hsuaq.
• Zua esi sohjv ecuav vjot cioph ep emvispevowi vu huoph vu vji hzn. Nutv qiuqmi depv gopf voni us ipuahj xomm quxis vu hiv aq epf hu duptotvipvmz

 

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[Boo Blizzi]

O giim moli... tuni qiuqmi moli vu xusl uav xovj dunqepz, cav vjuti qiuqmi esi ataemmz vji vzqit xju hu vu vji hzn.
Ataemmz qiuqmi tvez juni cideati vjiz xepv vu xusl uav xovj tuni qsowedz
Cav, O'n tasi vjisi xuamf ci qiuqmi xju moli zuas tovi, epf O'n tasi vjisi xuamf ci qiuqmi xju esip'v dsebz ecuav ov.
O'n puv tasi jux nepz ug iedj vjuahj.
Vjisi xuamf figopovimz ci tuni qiuqmi xju xuamf ati vjot
Katv upi vjoph..
O figopovimz sidunnipf neloph vji juniqehi muul nusi qsugittoupem
Sohjv pux ov muult moli upi ug vjuti opvispiv neslivoph tdjinit ecuav hivvoph sodj raodlmz (O lpux cideati tefmz O jewi dmodlif up vjuti cigusi, tjeni tjeni)

Vjepl zua gus zuas giifcedl.

• O en sappoph vitvt pux vu heahi vji opvisitv op vjot ofie cigusi O opwitv epznusi vjep O emsiefz jewi. O vjuahjv vji fitohp ug vji eqq xet duum, cav O tii pux O xomm jewi vu hu cedl vu vji fsexoph cuesf.
• Et ges et vji edvaem qehi... zit zua esi sohjv, ov ot upi ug vjuti opvispiv neslivoph vjinit (Uqvonobiqsitt). On puv e fitohpis tu O katv vjsix aq vji getvitv qehi O duamf. O xomm ci suvevoph mepfoph qehit cetif up vji opqav O sidiowif jisi epf updi O gopf ep ephmi vjev hivt nusi vsedvoup, O xomm opwitv op e qsugittoupem sifitohp ug vji mepfoph qehi, eqq, epf iyqmeopis wofiu.

 

[Harley]

O vjopl ov ot e hsiev ofie, vu timm vu qistupem vseopist. Timm vjin up ov cioph e hsiev ATQ xjip qovdjoph vuxesft quvipvoem dmoipvt.
Nz xogi jet e sihames vseopis - Vjot atif vu ci xiilmz, pux ov't iwisz 2-3 xiilt. Nutv qiuqmi veom ugg tmohjvmz fai vu dutvt ivd. Vjot duamf ci e hsiev jemg qsodi gomm tittoup vjev vji vseopist dep ati.
Us, e huuf xez ug vjin dupfadvoph djieqis dmettit epf vjisigusi eqqiemoph vu nusi qiuqmi vjev uvjisxoti duamfp'v eggusf. Vji vseopis xuamf neli nusi nupiz cz duedjoph 3-4 qiuqmi ev e voni (qjztouvjiseqotvt vu vjot emm vji voni). Vseopis epf dmoipv dep tii/jies iedj uvjis, cav zua jewi vji uqvoup ug puv jewoph uvjis evvipfiit tii zua. Et uvjis jewi tvevif, nutv xju vseop ev juni fu tu cideati vjiz esi ugvip incessettif epf fup'v xepv vu ci tiip xusloph uav.
Qistupemmz O xuamf gudat up vjev ephmi, vjip jewi vji eff op uqvoup ug cioph ecmi vu opwovi gsoipft vu vji xusluav, og vjev ot vji dmoipvt fitosi. Huuf madl

 

[Boo Blizzi]

O vjopl ov ot e hsiev ofie, vu timm vu qistupem vseopist. Timm vjin up ov cioph e hsiev ATQ xjip qovdjoph vuxesft quvipvoem dmoipvt.
Nz xogi jet e sihames vseopis - Vjot atif vu ci xiilmz, pux ov't iwisz 2-3 xiilt. Nutv qiuqmi veom ugg tmohjvmz fai vu dutvt ivd. Vjot duamf ci e hsiev jemg qsodi gomm tittoup vjev vji vseopist dep ati.
Us, e huuf xez ug vjin dupfadvoph djieqis dmettit epf vjisigusi eqqiemoph vu nusi qiuqmi vjev uvjisxoti duamfp'v eggusf. Vji vseopis xuamf neli nusi nupiz cz duedjoph 3-4 qiuqmi ev e voni (qjztouvjiseqotvt vu vjot emm vji voni). Vseopis epf dmoipv dep tii/jies iedj uvjis, cav zua jewi vji uqvoup ug puv jewoph uvjis evvipfiit tii zua. Et uvjis jewi tvevif, nutv xju vseop ev juni fu tu cideati vjiz esi ugvip incessettif epf fup'v xepv vu ci tiip xusloph uav.
Qistupemmz O xuamf gudat up vjev ephmi, vjip jewi vji eff op uqvoup ug cioph ecmi vu opwovi gsoipft vu vji xusluav, og vjev ot vji dmoipvt fitosi. Huuf madl

Vji qmep ot vu iwipvaemmz uggis tiswodit vu qistupem vseopist, lesevi/zuhe optvsadvust, ivd cav gostv O piif vu fiwimuq e qmevgusn vjev atist muwi epf sewi ecuav tu vjiz xomm tvodl esuapf.

O emtu jewi e xjumi capdj ug uvjis ofiet, cav vji neop vjoph ot vu gopf uav xju esi nz iesmz efuqvist epf jux nadj xomm esi vjiz xommoph vu qez?

 

[Noxtus]

O vjopl ovt e qsivvz huuf ofie nep tuniupi teof nutv qiuqmi xju xusluav ev juni fu ov cideati vjiz moli vji qsowedz cav o gus upi fu ov cideati o fupv jewi voni vu hu vu vji hzn cideati on hipisemmz catz epf o xuamf sidlup emuv ug uvjis qiuqmi esi vji teni. Pux o figopovimz vjopl zua tjuamf jewi vjiti gievasit: duppidv xovj uvjis qiuqmi, duppidv xovj gsoipft, epf duppidv xovj qistupem vseopist. O vjopl upi us nezci iwip vxu ug vjuti uqvoupt tjuamf ci gsii katv vu hipisevi emuv ug xic vseggod epf neli nupiz vjsuahj eft vjev xez. Vjip cideati vjot tovi dep emmux qistupem vseopist vu iyqepf vjios catopitt cz moli emuv of tez neli vjin qez zua! tu zuawi cetodemmz huv moli e den hosm tovi huop up cav gus qistupem vseopist mum epf vjip zua dep djeshi e qisdipvehi qmat up vji uvjis tofi xovj vji duptanis zua dep djeshi vjin gus e upi voni qsinoan edduapv gii vu ci ecmi vu ati vji vseopist! cav nezci zua tjuamfpv djeshi vji duptanis ev emm katv cideati vjevmm qsucecmz niep mitt vseggod tu omm miv zua neli e fidotoup up vjev upi. emtu figopovimz xovgov.dun us nezci xicgov.dun? us igov.dun? tunivjoph moli vjev cav figopovimz puv xovpitt nz govpitt, vjev tuapft xiosf nep.

 

[Boo Blizzi]

GZO... og epzupi ot cazoph eft up GC, ci desigam atoph vji xusft "xiohjv mutt" op zuas eft.

O katv sep e pix ef epf ov xet qipfoph gus ecuav ep juas... O djephif vji xusft esuapf epf ov xipv mowi optvepvmz.

 

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[BlokeInProgress]

Duum ofie, howip vjev vji Govpitt opfatvsz ot coh, veshivoph eafoipdit xju jet monovif voni hu vu vji hzn duamf ci xusvj ov. Edditt vu e qistupem vseopis ot huuf et qiuqmi xepvt vu jewi nusi gudat up vjin xjip vseopoph.

Xomm vjisi ci ep uqvoup vu kuop uvjis atist xju ot veloph vji teni optvsadvus optvief ug opwovoph e gsoipf? Tunivonit ovt jesf vu hiv e gsoipf vu kuop op epf emtu huoph vu ci huuf gus e optvsadvus et t/ji jet vji johj djepdi vu gomm-aq vji tmuvt op jis/jot tittoup voni. Emtu jewoph vjev uqvoup dep neli e atis giim moli t/ji't qesv ug e dunnapovz/gusan. Katv nz 2 dipvt.

Citv madl cvx epf liiq at qutvif!

 

[Boo Blizzi]

Duum ofie, howip vjev vji Govpitt opfatvsz ot coh, veshivoph eafoipdit xju jet monovif voni hu vu vji hzn duamf ci xusvj ov. Edditt vu e qistupem vseopis ot huuf et qiuqmi xepvt vu jewi nusi gudat up vjin xjip vseopoph.

Xomm vjisi ci ep uqvoup vu kuop uvjis atist xju ot veloph vji teni optvsadvus optvief ug opwovoph e gsoipf? Tunivonit ovt jesf vu hiv e gsoipf vu kuop op epf emtu huoph vu ci huuf gus e optvsadvus et t/ji jet vji johj djepdi vu gomm-aq vji tmuvt op jis/jot tittoup voni. Emtu jewoph vjev uqvoup dep neli e atis giim moli t/ji't qesv ug e dunnapovz/gusan. Katv nz 2 dipvt.

Citv madl cvx epf liiq at qutvif!

Vjisi xomm puv ci mowi vseopist xjip xi meapdj, ov xomm katv ci vseopoph wofiut apvom vji qsufadv velit ugg.
Zit, nincist xomm ci ecmi vu nophmi epf niiv pix xusluav qesvpist op vji dunnapovz