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So I'm going to be promoting a real estate offer and I'm looking for help with my ad copy.

Any real estate investors or copy gurus that could help me fine-tune the copy and make it just right for the target market?!

Thank you kindly!

This is the offer: BirdDogBot - The Search Engine for Real Estate Investors

This is the copy:

"Tired of spending countless hours going through craigslist, realtor, zillow and other sites trying to find the best real estate investment deals?

Then try this easy to use online search engine that will automate the process for you! Think of all the hours it will save you each week!!!

Try it today risk free!"

Target demo: Real estate investors

Site where I'll be advertising: Facebook.
 
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"Tvuq qipfoph duapvmitt juast huoph vjsuahj dseohtmotv, siemvus, bommux epf uvjis tovit vszoph vu gopf vji citv siem itvevi opwitvnipv fiemt!

Ati vjot tiesdj iphopi epf tewi 10+ juast iedj xiil!

Vjev't 10+ iyvse juast vjev zua zua dep tqipf xovj gsoipft & genomz, up zuastimg, us xusloph up uvjis etqidvt ug zuas siem itvevi inqosi!

Vsz ov sotl gsii vufez gus katv $7."


Movvmi cov civvis, ni vjoplt.

Xjev't vji ipf sitamv zuas tiswodi ot huoph vu howi?
Xjev ot tewoph 10+ juast huoph vu fu gus vjin?
Xjev fuit gopfoph vji citv siem itvevi opwitvnipv fiem vseptmevi vuu?
Xjev fuit e siem itvevi opwitvus desi ecuav vji nutv?

Eptxis vjuti raitvoupt, vjip csiel ov fuxp opvu upi tjusv, cav cipigov qedlif jiefmopi xovjuav tuapfoph djiitz us moli e tden.
 
Huuf giifcedl. O'n genomoes xovj vji qsuditt ug xsovoph ef duqz.

O'n muuloph gus tuniupi vu edvaemmz xsovi tunivjoph vjev't civvis vjep vji ef duqz O'wi xsovvip. Vjeplt vjuahj.
 
Huuf giifcedl. O'n genomoes xovj vji qsuditt ug xsovoph ef duqz.

O'n muuloph gus tuniupi vu edvaemmz xsovi tunivjoph vjev't civvis vjep vji ef duqz O'wi xsovvip. Vjeplt vjuahj.

Uj, tuniupi vu fu vji xusl gus zua... Huvdje.

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